thanks for the kind words Ian, and yeah Robin has come with so great tracks recently and for me now feeling more comfortable vocally, to be able to provide a vocal to my oldest friends on the loop is more satisfying to me to be honest, its always good to here from you mate

i try real hard to write lyrics that have a meaning or some form of substance and i use the expierences from my own life as a template, whether it be a good or bad expierience to make it believeable. i also have the added bonus of fx to make my vocal sound better than it actually is. dry it would also drown out just as many cats :))
thanks for the stop off listen and comment its always appreciated dean as we've discussed before, it makes it more worthwhile although i do music for me first and foremost as i enjoy story telling. its still nice to recieve feedback.
im also sure your voice would'nt be bad, you Welsh are renowned for your voices, give it a go im sure you'd be fine, and you got all the fx too if not, and like me the first time i sung and listened back i just wanted to throw up.

thanks for the stop off and kind comment my friend, i really connected with this one

thanks Joe appreciate the listen and comment bro

thanks Wayne, putting the world to rights is me all over. i aint got a bad life tbf roof over my head, good health close family tight friends, Robin' return invigorated me and got me writing outside the rapping box. thanks for the stop off and comment mate

thankyou bro, its nice to see you around, hope your well too. yeah Robin' had a good return, i jumped on a couple of his similar theme about the struggles of life and the politics involved

thanks Manu, i agree there is too much backing, im just passionate about my verses. i really liked this track and you know i have a lot to say :))
my main vocal is central with no panning but the two backing tracks are panned left and right but to close together so all feels like its panned to much. i also have delay on the backing just a few millisecs i will make the changes and give some breathing space like you said, dont ever feel overwhelmed, just tell me all the time what you think, im still learning remember and your feedback is vital as you no far more than me about singing and of course i will take your advice forward its not that it hasn't been said before, check it later, and yes fathers day is celebrated here but its the 16th of June thanks again for checking it out

Robin it was a great track, i was singing feel held back say we on the right path immediately on listening and had it wrote in half hour. i was a little worried it was to vocal heavy, i tend to write too much tbf, my son has said it before he says you give them too much, Manuela has pointed that out above too, so will take some backing out to give the listener a breather, so check back later, i love this music so will make the changes as ive been advised, its always a good idea to listen to your listeners especially if you sort of agree too

i like your comment a lot levas thankyou :)