24th Mar 2020 19:46 - 4 years ago
Description : found a couple loops by bradosanz and made an indie rock track. let me know what you think in the comments, especially ways i could improve it or if you like it. thanks!

Comments (7)

If you have time take a listen and give BONEZONMARZ some feedback.

Chasmchaser 27th Apr 2020 18:27 - 4 years ago
It's good. Love Indie. I have a problem with drum parts as well. So now I listen more to the drums when I play a song. I purchased a bundle of VST plug-in's from (Air Music Technology). Their products are over the top as I see it. I use their products and also loops to break up different instruments throughout the tracks I make. Keep it up.
Orlando51 26th Mar 2020 04:43 - 4 years ago
Cool track...very enjoyable !

ignome 25th Mar 2020 16:57 - 4 years ago
Very good guitars, i like it.
As it has been said, you could make a break with the drums, and change it a little bit in the second part (it's easy to cut this sort of sample, i think).
Maybe you could add a bass too.
Your voice is good. You could put a little reverb on it.
It's a good track.
Lm29 25th Mar 2020 13:25 - 4 years ago
I like sound of this track. Also prefer to hear instrumental version and yes, you have to make drums more differents, add some crashes.
DijamMusic 25th Mar 2020 03:12 - 4 years ago
This is really good bro.
BONEZONMARZ replied 25th Mar 2020 - 4 years ago
thanks man, i appreciate it!
RichMish 25th Mar 2020 01:57 - 4 years ago
Not a bad track. I especially liked the lyrics. I thought the vocals could use more reverb, something to blend it better. Another thing I noticed was the drum loop stayed exactly the same throughout the entire song. Maybe add a part or 2 where the drums cut out briefly to break it up a little bit so it doesnt tire the listeners ear out. Overall pretty clean track
BONEZONMARZ replied 25th Mar 2020 - 4 years ago
fixed everything you mentioned... have a nother listen
ClickbaitCabaret 24th Mar 2020 23:00 - 4 years ago
This has an open mic night at the coffee house vibe, which is great for indie. Good job.
BONEZONMARZ replied 25th Mar 2020 - 4 years ago
thank you!!

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