Beginning has a foreboding feel, then the pads kick in and I feel a Floyd vibe kicking in. Some where between Meddle and Dark side this would fit. I also am channelling a bit Pete Bardens as well. The Mix spatially is fantastic my friend. 4:00 the long slow phased pitch bent solo sound is cool. The subtle piano is not to be overlooked as well.
What eighteen said about the wineglass, I think he meant when you rub your fingers around the lip of the glass you get that deep hollow square wave flute sound which is like a pad in some ways and you have a similar sound in there as well. You sir have without a shadow of a doubt upgraded your game with this one. I look forward to hearing your creative output over the next few weeks.
Cru
Pete Bardens, believe it or not, doesn't ring a bell at the moment. Which now is even more incentive to look him up.
Thanks for clearing up the wineglass thing. Once you said that, it made sense. He's probably talking about the higher chime-like sound.
"You sir have without a shadow of a doubt upgraded your game with this one."
Which is a good thing, except now I have to work harder to top it. I guess I'll put out a few "sketchbook" tracks until I find the next one that steps it up.
Thanks for stoppin' by, mister. As always, I enjoy your visits.
Nice Clarinet on the beginning very nice, :38-41 nicks the String progression from Judas Priest's Nostradamus album, Specifically "Sands of Time-Pestilence and Plague"
you Should Listen too it. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j1572ozk-qY&html5=1
Cru
Thanks for the Link Cru and hope you Listen to the Final Version when i release it and i will Check out the Song you Linked me :) thanks for dropping by and taking a listen. Take care and have a good day
Nice work, I like the change of pace for you that this one brings. I like how you added in some of your dance floor circa 1990's vibe to this as well. great work
cru
is/was BOSS a roland brand? glad you liked it anyway. I was using the module years ago with an EWI (electronic wind instrument). never used it for recording.
I love how this builds, the percussion stabs and crashes are perfectly executed. The chord progression is very clever as well. Nice fade into bad boy and suddenly I'm back in 1991 on the dance floor at the Oak Beach Inn...how did that
happen??? Ahh a modulated DX7 sound...nice.
great nostalgic work as always my friend
Cru
The opening salvo is magnificent, then a break, Then 150 builds nicely in a progressively spooky way with great guitars and then eerie vox that are dissonant. Ah a metal Choir shuffle, then a skiffle, 5:00 on nice solo work but I am equally impressed with the pounding drums. 6:00 has some cool bass synths waving and wobbling with some cool stereo guitar scratches in the background. Talk about abrupt endings.
Val D should be pleased with this as I see in his comments he is.
Peace
crunuts
I consider the first heavy section, till 1:17, a short masterpiece and would be happy to have it as a standalone track. Take note of there being no guitar before 0:40. That's all just synth bass and bass guitar through distortion. So, the squeals you hear eg 0:08 are synth bass.
To hear the same squeal undistorted, go to 1:25. 1:17-1:36 is the same 40 secs of bass and guitar though I also add in some slap bass notes (second is heavily delayed) and then the synth basses arrive. I'm very pleased at using the same weird, cutup synth bass and bass g bassline both heavy and clean.
Yes, I expected you to like the choir voices and appreciate some of their dissonance. Lots of beauty there too.
"then a skiffle"
No idea what that is. Surely not like the musical genre known as skiffle.
"I am equally impressed with the pounding drums"
Indeed. Fully valve driven with multiple huge pistons pumping at a furious rate. Large machinery with even larger balls. Testicle factory.
5:50 is my bass synth riff. Cam up with it on guitar but laid it down first on keys. Proper dark, menacing metal riff.
"cool stereo guitar scratches in the background"
No, no guitar in the background. From 6:16 for a while you can hear a heavily effected version of any earlier choir vocal brought back in. I struggled to get the choir ladies to return in the heavy sections so there are only small touches. The 6:16 fading in one builds things nicely before we get the big riff kick in on 6:28.
Note the build of the drums in that breakdown section - really pleased with that movement.
I've now uploaded a slightly lengthened and improved version so check that out.
Yes, fairly abrupt ending (improved slightly now). Had loads of ideas for endings but they didn't really work and I didn't want to make this too much longer so abrupt it is, with menacing decay from the cymbals as they fade out.
When will you make a track dedicated to me? Maybe call it The Electric Crumad. StaticCru? You can put in one reverse cymbal but no more.
Thanks bud! Had fun trying the synth out on this one! Been sitting there ever since pretty much, as I've been "tuning" my modular and circuit bending lately. It will get used again though. Glad you could stand the annoying sounds! Appreciate the comment and listen!
Good tense intro. nice analogue drum kit (superb compression on it) with some good production values overall on this. I could hear rapping or a beautiful female voice over this one which would work equally well. Normally I don't click on forum links but I'm glad I did on this one. My Musical meddling mind wants to hear a wicked solo over this as well, so musically it has some good potential. Maybe I would add a chorus that is slightly different than the verse line with some strong pads or a piano.
great job
Cru
Such a cool weird tune . The guitar is ripped right out of the New Romantics Playbook (Duran Duran, Spandau Ballet). The Dub is eclectic and the beat is hypnotic. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aZx9G0AA2Zg&html5=1
I feel it needs some spoken word lyrics on this one, like describing an acid trip or a very weird day sort of like Robbie Roberston's "somewhere don the crazy river". I just had espresso so why creative thoughts are racing this Sunday. The synth work is very tasteful BTW, I wished it continued longer.
Cru
Hello fellow espresso bro! Thank you for the link to the DD track, as it was surprisingly one I had never heard, and it's good! (though they didn't do much that wasn't good) I've gotten out of the habit of listening to DD, as my wife pretty much hates them with a passion, heh. I actually couldn't name a Robbie Robertson song, though I have heard of him. I agree that some spoken word would be good, but I only finished the song because of the loop challenge I guess. Maybe I'll take it further, who knows? Thank you for the kind comment!
That could be due to the drums coming from DR-550-samples that are more or less edited... which simply has this kind of sound (that I also happen to love... must be due to being born in the 90s and having a mother loving 80s synthpop and wave XD)
anyways, thanks^^
Congrats on the new Guitar. I like this piece when 1:22 kicks in as the moving bass-line is phenomenal. I like the percussion choices on this, agree slightly with static about the tone of the drums and percussion. I would also mix the guitar slightly (like a hair) further back in the mix, the excitement of getting a new toy always makes us mix it to forward cos we want to hear it. This is such a solid tune though I'm glad I listened and I'm glad U made it. Now I want to to hear a kick ass solo over these beautiful arpeggios you have created.
Oh and thanks for the nice words on the forum about your favourite artists on looperman. I'm glad my charming personality brings something to the table here. ;-
Cru
Happy New Year Mark.
I like the song (song writing). The Midi like instruments feel just a bit static too me in this mix, almost too precise. If you can add a more organic element to this song it would be utterly brilliant as the Ideas you have for arranging are spot on. And it's not that I don't like the instrument choices, it just feels stiff too me musically, and that can be worked out.
cheers
Steve
Hi Steve, happy new year to you to and a massive thank you for your very constructive comments and I do agree. My first uploads came from me and the way I wanted them to sound, with this one I was too focussed on everything being right. I am going to adjust some of the sounds and add some vocals for a final mix sometime in early 2015, that said I still love this track because it is about me and the last year! really glad to see your music is still gracing looperman. my very beast wishes and take care Steve...thanks again.
Mark
Clearly has an industrial vibe to it. Very trippy then comes a very dissonant funk sound. your choice of chords structure is most interesting. I liked this one.
Cru
i am really glad you had a chance to check out the track, cru. it is about as deep as I have gone so far with the percs. the "industrial" genre designation was pretty much after the fact as i still have no clue about genres, let alone control over writing in them. thanks VERY much for the positive review.
Thanks. I think I need to adjust some of the levels in the second part but other than that I was pretty pleased with how this turned out.
Thanks as always for your support.
FR
Love the phased synth sounds with the vocals. You have come such a long way from when you first started. I think you have more eclectic tendencies in you then I do now...and it does you well. This is Brilliant. its futuristic and retro at the same time. It is Lagom.
Awesome work. I hope you win the challenge.
Steve
After my first listen it reminded me so much of a really retro synth sound that was pioneered in the 70's. Almost like Ultravox! (with John Foxx) not (Midge Ure) But with a psychedelic twist like the band mushroom performs.
links will follow. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TMkPtOw_r90&html5=1 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gOlWwd6Rl48&html5=1
Very different and creative.
I enjoyed it a lot.
Steve
Hi Steve,thanks about this comments and those links.I always love to discover few elements of my track are already on some great professional songs like Ultravox or the band mushroom performs. That means for me im in the right road to be better than I am at this moment.
Intro Blends into the main theme extraordinarily well my friend. This is just an awesome collaboration. I had a DVD from a few years ago called True North, and it was spectacular scenes of the north wilderness with amazing new-age music in the background. This track my friend would belong on that DVD no problem whatsoever.
Great work my friend.
Steve
on Red On The White by ValveDriver
What eighteen said about the wineglass, I think he meant when you rub your fingers around the lip of the glass you get that deep hollow square wave flute sound which is like a pad in some ways and you have a similar sound in there as well. You sir have without a shadow of a doubt upgraded your game with this one. I look forward to hearing your creative output over the next few weeks.
Cru
Pete Bardens, believe it or not, doesn't ring a bell at the moment. Which now is even more incentive to look him up.
Thanks for clearing up the wineglass thing. Once you said that, it made sense. He's probably talking about the higher chime-like sound.
"You sir have without a shadow of a doubt upgraded your game with this one."
Which is a good thing, except now I have to work harder to top it. I guess I'll put out a few "sketchbook" tracks until I find the next one that steps it up.
Thanks for stoppin' by, mister. As always, I enjoy your visits.
Take care.
Aaron
on A new Dawn - Preview by AngelDragon5359
you Should Listen too it.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j1572ozk-qY&html5=1
Cru
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on Mr Funk by FreeRadical
cru
FR
on Amazing Love by BradoSanz
good Work
cru
on Return of the n word by ZankFrappa
on luminous sunset by DanGoldstein
Cru
on Asteroids plus bonus track Bad boy bass by FreeRadical
happen??? Ahh a modulated DX7 sound...nice.
great nostalgic work as always my friend
Cru
on Valvedriven by StaticNomad
Val D should be pleased with this as I see in his comments he is.
Peace
crunuts
Yes, The Valve seems happy with this one.
I consider the first heavy section, till 1:17, a short masterpiece and would be happy to have it as a standalone track. Take note of there being no guitar before 0:40. That's all just synth bass and bass guitar through distortion. So, the squeals you hear eg 0:08 are synth bass.
To hear the same squeal undistorted, go to 1:25. 1:17-1:36 is the same 40 secs of bass and guitar though I also add in some slap bass notes (second is heavily delayed) and then the synth basses arrive. I'm very pleased at using the same weird, cutup synth bass and bass g bassline both heavy and clean.
Yes, I expected you to like the choir voices and appreciate some of their dissonance. Lots of beauty there too.
"then a skiffle"
No idea what that is. Surely not like the musical genre known as skiffle.
"I am equally impressed with the pounding drums"
Indeed. Fully valve driven with multiple huge pistons pumping at a furious rate. Large machinery with even larger balls. Testicle factory.
5:50 is my bass synth riff. Cam up with it on guitar but laid it down first on keys. Proper dark, menacing metal riff.
"cool stereo guitar scratches in the background"
No, no guitar in the background. From 6:16 for a while you can hear a heavily effected version of any earlier choir vocal brought back in. I struggled to get the choir ladies to return in the heavy sections so there are only small touches. The 6:16 fading in one builds things nicely before we get the big riff kick in on 6:28.
Note the build of the drums in that breakdown section - really pleased with that movement.
I've now uploaded a slightly lengthened and improved version so check that out.
Yes, fairly abrupt ending (improved slightly now). Had loads of ideas for endings but they didn't really work and I didn't want to make this too much longer so abrupt it is, with menacing decay from the cymbals as they fade out.
When will you make a track dedicated to me? Maybe call it The Electric Crumad. StaticCru? You can put in one reverse cymbal but no more.
on Taking Two by Spivkurl
cru
on Slow Jam 2 by AngelDelarosaJr
great job
Cru
on Coffee at Angeliques by DrvanLansberg
Cru
on Breaking Blue L00P CHALLENGE by Spivkurl
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aZx9G0AA2Zg&html5=1
I feel it needs some spoken word lyrics on this one, like describing an acid trip or a very weird day sort of like Robbie Roberston's "somewhere don the crazy river". I just had espresso so why creative thoughts are racing this Sunday. The synth work is very tasteful BTW, I wished it continued longer.
Cru
on Inverted Labyrinth by Ishimizu
Cru
anyways, thanks^^
on Stiff-Arming Stars by Evisma
Oh and thanks for the nice words on the forum about your favourite artists on looperman. I'm glad my charming personality brings something to the table here. ;-
Cru
on Brass Tacks and Cat Naps by flonut7
Cru
on New Years Eve - The 2014 Version by aelmen
Gott Nytt År
Steve
Gott Nytt år!
/Anders
on back into the light by larrywiggles1
I like the song (song writing). The Midi like instruments feel just a bit static too me in this mix, almost too precise. If you can add a more organic element to this song it would be utterly brilliant as the Ideas you have for arranging are spot on. And it's not that I don't like the instrument choices, it just feels stiff too me musically, and that can be worked out.
cheers
Steve
Mark
on When You Fall In Love by Musicante
Cru
I do notice a somewhat C. Mayfield vibe, now that you mention it.
Ciao,
M.
on industrial sleigh ride by DanGoldstein
Cru
on Nu Jack Acid by FreeRadical
Great job
Cru
Thanks as always for your support.
FR
on Falling Ft Chaucie aka BoleteSoup by SeriouslyJoking
Awesome work. I hope you win the challenge.
Steve
on WHATS RIGHT by OPENMINDSDB
Tim Roe, and DJ Hell had the best ones.
here are the links.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gOlWwd6Rl48&html5=1
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wwLISR7Kh1E&html5=1
Nice work my friend.
Cru
on Stringor by Byleth
links will follow.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TMkPtOw_r90&html5=1
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gOlWwd6Rl48&html5=1
Very different and creative.
I enjoyed it a lot.
Steve
Just for fun there are the link of Stringer:
https://soundcloud.com/anthony-grenier-5/stringer
please take note im way better now XD. Hope you undersant why I do not uploaded this on looperman (could ruin my popularity if I have one).
on Ghosts Of Glencloy by Orlando51
Great work my friend.
Steve
With appreciation_____Orlando
on In Light Mint by PDMuzak
Cru