crucethus

Ed has some great mix advice, otherwise a solid track that is very mellow but engaing. good work
cru

really nice work. I love the chord progressions with this sublime melody. cool work
cru

I really like this one ant, you have some cool mix of sounds in an organized cacophony. Dissonance is the order of the day. Brass sounds sinister, the highly verbed sub pans are very cool in the background. good work. very creative.
Cru

freaking pop magic,.... you got it kid.. go places with your talent and don't look back.
cru

This is cool, keep making these, practice will make you better

Geez, this is an awesome tune Joe, not exactly in the FR style as his head is squarely in the late eighties and nineties style of rave and underground K dance. This is like eighties tribal wave (I just invented that sub genre). The synth you used reminded me of Douglass Adams Hitchhikers guide to the Galaxy for some reason. This is a very cool tune and I am glad u were inspired to make it.
Cru

I love ferry terry's drumming. This is very cool and laid back and nicely mixed Alex. Swoosh effects are awesome.
I think this is my favourite work of yours so far. Fav'd for sure.
Steve

Very good song, a good song is one that stands up with just one instrument and vocals, and this one does. What direction do you see this song going in when you say "rock" and that you want to add guitar bass and drums. (what I guess i'm asking is what artist do you associate this song with the most)
Cru

first of all congratulations on producing or recording your first song on this site and that you chose to share with all of us. It takes courage and of course we all want feedback and encouragement from our fellow artists. So let me begin by saying that this is a nice mellow piano progression that you wrote. I would classify this as more chillout or cinematic music than ambient but that's neither here nor there at this point. I assume by the sound of the piano that you mic'd your self playing it and dubbed over storm and summer ambiance sounds on the work. I would like you to re-record this and work on the rhythm of it, some chords you hesitate and it's obvious in the metering of this work. The chord progression is beautiful though and an excellent piece of writing. Minor keys are always so emotional sounding. If I were to expand this I would think about writing a cello part and adding some strong synth pads that grow as the song builds. (Danke is the master at creating warm inviting pad loops on this site, you should check out his selection). Overall keep working at this one as it has great potential. And welcome.
Cru

I love the bass progression, How you jump up in 5ths is very classic R&B, and yet the sounds are modern in the effects sense. Cool start to this one.
cru

Nasty beat with bass, really hard and good. This is excellent work with the accapella. Great work
Cru

Nice work on this, the bass is speaker shattering on this one. Interesting usage of electronics to give it a modern feel. I like the melding of the two genres. Nice interpretation. But then I always like when someone does something out of the box like you did here.
Cru

I N-Joi'd this retro sound greatly.
you keep taking me back in time.
groove kicks ass.
nice work.
Cru

Mark, this is just fabulous. really nice production, love the ambient intro. Love the instrumentation. Then that sweet vocal. Cascading piano is a nice touch. Then that sax,. Bass is pushing the upper limits of my speaker in the mix, maybe back it down just a smidge.. Stereo shore washing sound is nice as well. Thenb a hint of blues like guitar. The drums are nicely eq'd and compressed. Every instrument sounds so clear and concise though I really like this Mark. The groove had me moving up and down in my chair. Fav'd for sure. great job
Steve

One Mother of a Mover this tune is. the complexities in this are brilliant. I was on the edge of my seat the whole way through and was sad when the fade out began at the end. Definitely Zappaesque. Your playing reminds me a bit of Mark King from Level 42, it's that good.
cru

One Mother of a Mover this tune is. the complexities in this are brilliant. I was on the edge of my seat the whole way through and was sad when the fade out began at the end. Definitely Zappaesque. Your playing reminds me a bit of Mark King from Level 42, it's that good.
cru

Fantastic Kyle, I loved the instruments on this one. Well written song. My dad used to play old time country and this had that feel for me. nice job
cru

I think you just invented stepfunk.
fookin original work mate.
very cool
cru

I think if you get epic to sing on this you will have a massive hit on your hands.
Cru

Beginning has a foreboding feel, then the pads kick in and I feel a Floyd vibe kicking in. Some where between Meddle and Dark side this would fit. I also am channelling a bit Pete Bardens as well. The Mix spatially is fantastic my friend. 4:00 the long slow phased pitch bent solo sound is cool. The subtle piano is not to be overlooked as well.
What eighteen said about the wineglass, I think he meant when you rub your fingers around the lip of the glass you get that deep hollow square wave flute sound which is like a pad in some ways and you have a similar sound in there as well. You sir have without a shadow of a doubt upgraded your game with this one. I look forward to hearing your creative output over the next few weeks.
Cru

Nice Clarinet on the beginning very nice, :38-41 nicks the String progression from Judas Priest's Nostradamus album, Specifically "Sands of Time-Pestilence and Plague"
you Should Listen too it.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j1572ozk-qY&html5=1
Cru

Nice work, I like the change of pace for you that this one brings. I like how you added in some of your dance floor circa 1990's vibe to this as well. great work
cru

Yeah this is very good, and belongs in the POP genre. You have a nice voice and those are very good harmony textures.
good Work
cru

noesis

cool sounds, I love using old equipment. Roland made some good stuff back then.
Cru