A New Dawn - Preview - AngelDragon5359

18th Jan 2015 20:29 - 11 years ago
Description : Here is a preview of what i am working on i am kinda lost on how to continue this ( i am sure it will hit me in the head sooner then later) however i would like your thoughts on how it sounds, i don't have a clear line on what it should sound like ( this is why i am lost LOL) so i am hoping The people of looperman can help me out :) thanks and enjoy the preview

Comments (9)

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TheSavage
TheSavage 20th Jan 2015 13:21 - 11 years ago
This is a beautiful track with some real gems for melodies. You mentioned where to go from here...I think it's all there but perhaps just clustered to close together there are some phrases you could really blossom out especially at 44 seconds and 1:11. Run with some of those enchanting melodies and just use you gut instinct, make it as long as it remains interesting as I say.
AngelDragon5359
AngelDragon5359 replied 20th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
WEll savage haha im shocked you found the preview but u missed the finished the version XD( heres the link to it http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/163503 ) Thanks for dropping by and have a good daY :). Take care and have a good day

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Darkreine
Darkreine 19th Jan 2015 07:18 - 11 years ago
This is a great piece of work AD. I love the darkness the horns bring to the piece at the beginning. My approach to doing a cinematic piece like this (and believe me I'm not an expert at all!) is to have a storyline in mind. This will give you a guide and a goal for the overall feel of the piece. I hope you can find some inspiration, because this is excellent!
AngelDragon5359
AngelDragon5359 replied 19th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
The funny part about your comment is that Before i even start making any of my Cinematic works I listen to the loops over and over again to build a story into my head so i know where the track is going XD it's just i been out of it for 2 years that i lost my head for a bit. BUT do not worry my fearless tiger, cheetah? (cant tell haha) i can ensure you that the final is Good and ready to show :) { 24 hour waiting period :(} Thanks for taking a listen and Dropping a comment really appreciate it

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StaticNomad
StaticNomad 19th Jan 2015 06:28 - 11 years ago
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crucethus
crucethus 19th Jan 2015 05:54 - 11 years ago
Nice Clarinet on the beginning very nice, :38-41 nicks the String progression from Judas Priest's Nostradamus album, Specifically "Sands of Time-Pestilence and Plague"
you Should Listen too it.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j1572ozk-qY&html5=1
Cru
AngelDragon5359
AngelDragon5359 replied 19th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Thanks for the Link Cru and hope you Listen to the Final Version when i release it and i will Check out the Song you Linked me :) thanks for dropping by and taking a listen. Take care and have a good day

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15ludwicke
15ludwicke 19th Jan 2015 04:33 - 11 years ago
Love how epic this song is! Really powerful in all aspects: instrument choice, composition, and mix. Great work, really reminds me of something I would hear in Oblivion in the Elder Scrolls Series!

Rico L.
AngelDragon5359
AngelDragon5359 replied 19th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
LOL i just visited your tack as well HAHA Thanks for dropping by i finished this track and will release it tomorrow to make up for me missing the NEW Years on this site rofl. Fun aside i hope you enjoy this track when it gets uploaded tomorrow :D take care

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Livingsoulsdie
Livingsoulsdie 19th Jan 2015 03:47 - 11 years ago
This is very nicely put together. It shouldn't be very hard to figure out where to go from here. The question really is what kind of overall theme are you going for. Like tumbleweed said, put it away for a day or so and come back to it with a fresh perspective. The creativity will come.
AngelDragon5359
AngelDragon5359 replied 19th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Thanks Livingsoulsdie however i already finished the track keep a eye out for it tomorrow when i release it. It will be my NEW YEAR track since i am 18 days late Rofl. Took a long time to put this together so i am hoping you guys enjoy it when you hear it :) take care and have a good day

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Tumbleweed
Tumbleweed 19th Jan 2015 02:29 - 11 years ago
You rae off to a great start AngelDragon...big fat mix...nice and clean with all instruments right in place...I think one of the reasons why it could raise a question about 'Now what?" is that there are just so many options...Any of the individual instruments in the mix has the potention to pick up a transitional melody line & take it in whatever direction...a big sweeping angelic (but sparse) verse with just the basic orchestral instruments...violins & cellos?..stepping down to a wave of calm in contrast to the dramitic 1st section...or even take that little guitar line and make it an ambient transition....Just my off-the-top reaction...but, the main thing....keep it going...May be worth putting it away for a day or two & then revisiting....(I try to do that...but it keeps me awake at nights some times..Haha....).....It will get to the place it is supposed to be.......Ed
AngelDragon5359
AngelDragon5359 replied 19th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Thanks ED However i finished the track :3 only took 5 hours but i cleaned it up nicely and added a whole lot to it from what i posted now ( it still follows what i posted now but it sounds different) also i cleaned the track so that the bass is not overpowering the instruments nor does it have forced sound feeling also i didn't go for a BIG action piece that i usually try to go for it more like it happens but in a small time frame also i ended it is a way that kinda to me feels kinda off but works cant wait to post it tomorrow for you guys to hear its kinda my New Year track HAHA XD
FreeRadical
FreeRadical 18th Jan 2015 21:12 - 11 years ago
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Danke
Danke 18th Jan 2015 21:01 - 11 years ago
Holy God man!

This is brilliant...so many ways to continue cause this is a superb fusioned artwork...I'm coming from the analog rock line so what I've heard around 0.47 is the continuing point for me...that brilliant guitarish toned 10 seconds...you can use that 'riff' again and build around a groovy drum to go to the prog rock way...but on the other hand there are some electro choices or finish it with an ambientish, chillish pad calmness after the vibrations before...

Maaan, this track is a growing seed...use it, do it!!!

Respect and shake hands, Danke
AngelDragon5359
AngelDragon5359 replied 18th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Would gladly shake your hand Danke * shake hands * as for the riff again I shall see if i can work that into the piece again or use that to build into the action that i am trying to build up to :) thanks for dropping by and taking a listen your words helped me out thanks. Take care and have a good day

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