Sorry for not getting to this earlier. Pretty busy arrangement with a lot going on but in some way it all falls in place. I gave this a handful of listens to absorb it all. Sounds like a wrong piano not at the :19 and :23 sec mark that repeats throughout the song. Sounds a bit detuned almost like an effect but it sounds off to me. Nothing major.
Ambitious track for sure so I'll tip my hat in parting.
A bit weird, i must admit, but i especially like it in this weird track too. :)
I just feels similar like you, the track is somehow almost falls in the first half - but then in the 2nd half somehow simply... everything moves to his place.
Sorry for the late reply too, were inactive recently...
Regards, traz
Totally unexpected to hear this from you. It's almost a funk jazz fusion type song. The flute is fantastic to say the least. Nice job creating space within the song. The arrangement is solid and there are nice accents, dynamics and a variety of sounds to keep it fresh. I didn't hear the earlier version sorry, I can't compare it and make any comparisons.
The drums are snappy and funky, thought the bass could be a bit louder, I am a bass player so I usually tend to think that. :) I keep focusing on that flute, some tasty goodness there.
Well done mate, must say your trip into funk was a success. Off to check out your other new one!
Thank you for the review mate, pleased you enjoyed this one my friend, fairly happy with this one, yes considering first attempt at the genre, will try this genre a little later on, hopefully will be even better then this one...Thanks for fav too...Mate the other version of this one Is up on profile, called Let The Funk Begin 4 on The Floor...Decided to leave both versions of this track up, I like both, different but the same in some way, guessing why I like both, if had to choose would maybe put this one ahead...Peace n much Respect dear friend, so no email yet, will have tomorrow mate...Mosaic...
How that style of singing doesn't blow your throat out amazes me. Quite a performance. Hearing this music always reminds me of the song Institutionalized by Suicidal Tendencies. The elements of a screaming vocal and a more subdued talking/singing vocal seems to work to build tension and can really bring a ton of expression to a vocal performance, obviously.
Don't let life get you down man. We all have issues, getting past them makes us the people we become. Stay positive and def get back into making music, it can be a real the catalyst to some better times. Good luck, look forward to the new ones!
Well, there always is the risk when it comes to this sort of singing, my throat has just gotten used to most of it haha. Thanks for stopping by and your kind words. Glad you liked it. And I'm definetly getting back in to it, nothing will stop me completely from making music, so stay tuned for new ones! :)
Thanks Wayne, She enjoyed it but my stepdad loved it even more lmao I thought about having my sister do the singing for me since my voice was so raspy, but I decided I'd rather take full responsibility for it haha
I think cinematic is a good choice. To me it sounds like tv theme music for a show or perhaps music to into/outro a scene. It sounds a bit dated, like SN said maybe the '70's. I can almost picture Bob Newhart jumping into bed with Susan Pleshette... and Mary Tyler Moore, lol.
It's certainly easy on the ears, relaxing and the mix sounds even. Nowadays, we have these daws with thousands of sounds and effects, might as well use them and see what they do. Nothing abrasive or poorly done, they seem to add a certain feel and atmosphere to the song.
Many hanks for the review Wayne. I think I have too many miles on the clock to sound contemporary. Still I've managed to get to the 70s with this one. Maybe I can get to the 80s next time. :)
This is a very cool pop song Scott. The vocals are great, who is singing? The horns and strings at 3:30 is a nice dynamic change. Drums sound nice. You always seem to have even mixes, everything in it's place.
Thanks allot, Wayne. Glad you like it. The vocals were some samples I found on the net somewhere awhile back. Glad you like the orchestration. I have a great passion for orchestral music, having played in a few in my younger days. I love it when bands opt to have an orchestra back them.
There's a lot to like about this track. I do like the guitars in this track. Are you using a sustain pedal? I dig the long sustained distorted notes. The guitar fills after the 2:00 were cool, maybe could be a bit louder.
The bass is simple but does the trick. It's catchy, a bit of a reggae feel to it. I usually don't like long intros but the build up was worth it. Minimal by design but has all the elements needed to be a great song.
Well done! Thanks for sharing, going to dl this one.
This song has great advantages such as emotions, simplicity and good sounds
The guitar hung by the effect pedal "memory toy of ehx" this sounds like a sustain pedal I would put them louder yes no problem
I would develop much more
Made me want to put my speedo on and sit on Ipinema Beach. Cool track,nice composition, great musicianship, what a combination. Guitars blast right through. I liked the the synth on the right with the echo/delay on it. Nice dynamics as well.
The mood you set right away is perfect with the strings. The build up is great and the song really develops nicely as it goes. What is that effect on her vocals in the middle, sounds like it is used on a guitar track also. Is it a fast tremolo or something along those lines?
Mix is great and the ending is very cool as well. Simple guitar parts like the picking at around 4:05 I just love. Reminds me of the guitar lick in "Get Off of My Cloud" by the Stones that continually plays through the song.
Rock, pop...whatever, it's good, plain and simple!
This is virtually awesome, it's amazing what you can do online! I'd pay to go see you guys. The arrangement is great, the playing ability is professional, all the individual tracks were recorded well and the mix is fantastic. Plus, I can hear that cowbell ringing proudly!
Thanks for sharing folks, I will be dl'ing a copy for future enjoyment!
Nice job, straight forward rock with some pretty intense and trippy parts. Unpredictable for sure but it keeps the listener's attention. Guitars sound meaty and the drums rock! That was fun to listen to, you rock!
Having lived in Florida now for a few years it was pretty cool to hear this, made me smile listening to all the Bean Town references. Every time I open my mouth here people say, "are you from Boston?" I say no, "TitleTown"!!
I must say this is beautiful. I sounds as if you guys are standing in the same room. Carole's vocals are beautiful and the bed of music you set it in is perfect. Sounds like a movie soundtrack, very commercial sound!
If you are going to know a heavier rock band, Sabbath was a good choice. I had never seen Orange amps till I saw them in a film clip using them.
The beginning was a bit deceiving, wasn't expecting all that happens after that! What do you have for effects on the rhythm guitar around 1:28. It is interesting for sure. The choir pad was different. :) Drums are clean and punchy and the guitars sound great. Tons of energy just like Sabbath had.
What a pleasant song! Short sweet and to the point. It really conveys your intention. Nice choice of instruments as well.
It's actually at a good volume I think, allows me to turn up my volume knob a bit. A rare thing these days with the misuse of limiters and compressors.
Thanks a tons for your kind words Wayne! Glad to know you enjoyed:)
And it really feels great when your emotions are successfully conveyed to your listeners. And about the volume, somewhere i feel the beginning is really not audible, hence, it needs some boost there. Will level it nicely once i take up this track.
Can't find much wrong with this wonderful track Alex! I just came inside from working on my suntan, I'm pretty relaxed at this point and this song hit the spot perfectly. Great percussion, sweet vibes and a peaceful, easy feeling. Nice job putting this together!
I saw drum and bass but heard quite a bit more. I was impressed with vocals and how you mixed them. It has a jazzy feel and drums aren't overpowering but move along at a nice clip. Piano lines are tasty, bass holds it's own and moves around a lot. Overall the mix sounds pretty darn good!
I love this kind of music, it is timeless. You deliver a wonderful passionate performance. It sounds like a classic song from the 50's with some cool guitars. Great job by both of you.
I'm not familiar with the original but I must say this version is pretty awesome. Nicely recorded guitar and vocals and the mix sounds great. Nice performance by both of you.
How ya digging the new axe? Sounds like you are putting it to good use.After hearing the intro I thought it was going to be a reggae track, sorta hints at that for a few secs.
Some cool harmonics in the middle part. I mean this constructively but I felt the middle part was a bit lengthy without anything happening really. The part that comes in at the end rocks like hell but the middle part didn't build any tension or opposing force that lead me to anticipate the ending. The snare lacked some punch over the course of that time and was hoping the drums would have built up a bit more or changed in some way. Maybe, to me, that part could have been shorter. Just my opinion, don't take it personally. I like the idea of the breakdown in general though.
The last part was very energetic and some very cool bass playing and I liked the ending. Almost like a Bo Diddly style chugging bass.
Always feel welcome to give your opinion. I'll never take it personally. I want your honesty, and I'll give you mine. Kissing each others asses will never help our music.
"I felt the middle part was a bit lengthy without anything happening really.....the middle part didn't build any tension or opposing force that lead me to anticipate the ending"
I mostly agree, though I really liked how things went together with the layers. I'll need to add something else there and change the drums, like you said, and probably shorten in by eight measures.
The ending is where my hang-up has been with this track. Several times I've thought to just cut it off and end it with the slow middle part. But the way the bass comes in and the way it sounded reversed with it made me want to keep it in. I probably need to rerecord the guitars there because the tone is a bit odd to my ears. A bit "wongkey".
Thanks for the listen and the feedback. it is appreciated.
Hey man, this one's a little different and less psychedelic than your usual tracks. I gave this a few listens and I would consider this a blues track more than jazz. The chords and structure and even the instruments remind me of classic old blues songs. You've gone and added you style and jewelry to the track but imho it reeks of the blues in a personal and unique way though. I hear some jazz stylizing in there but it's done in a blues context. I don't get too hung up on genres so you can heave my opinion in the trash if you like. I just like it when people break the rules and do something different and you do and you are.:)
Even though I thought the slower parts were pretty good I thought the parts that were built up really stood out. The first transition around 2:55 was cool, was that where the electric cello gets it's mojo on? The theremin sounding instrument was scary, a different texture to mix it up. The chugging guitars were about right for the track, that def worked.
Good length and a definite ending, which we don't hear all the time from you. I liked it. A good change of direction musically and an overall cooool track. Mix top notch!
Yeah, I guess a bit less psychedelic - perhaps just a different type of psych vibe rather than my more usual beautiful, funky psych stuff. Darker and weirder this time though I never like to go too weird. Gotta keep it melodic and groovy.
I was really planning to disagree with you about the blues thing but I've listened more since your comment and thought hard about it and now partly agree. There is some cool blues playing from guitar (comes naturally to me) but I still hear the Rhodes as being much more jazzy. I have no idea how to play jazz or any other style as I'm a self-taught feel player who doesn't read music or really know any music theory. Give me a good swing groove and I can play in a jazzy way, otherwise I won't/can't.
I like the "jewelry" term. I guess my use of effects and stuff is a bit like jewelry. Hopefully effective and not just pretty adornments with no susbstance underneath.
" I just like it when people break the rules"
That's pretty much my aim with every track. I'm only really interested in creating something new that I can't hear anywhere else. Even if it's not brilliant, I can still be proud of its ambition and intent to do something different.
2:55 is where the big, evil synth horn sound comes in. I think that's what inspired the metal in this as that is a big, badass sound and just screamed "metal" to me. Well, that and the emphasis on the tritone (flattened fifth) in many parts of the track. See - I do know a tiny bit of music theory ie a few note names (oh, and major and minor scales, that's it).
No cello at 2:55. See my reply to Evisma about that so that I don't have to type it again. The new instrument is not gong too well, which is a shame (most expensive instrument I've ever bought but it does look nice) but hopefully it'll come alive when I get a bow. Only subtle cello in this track and it sounds more like double bass (as it's plucked).
" theremin sounding instrument" is a string part plus filtering and delays. Pretty evil and just playing the main horn theme. Haunting stuff. Also returns in the penultimate track section though Evisma didn't like it.
" definite ending, which we don't hear all the time from you."
Hey, you know that my tracks have definite endings. I still haven't done a fadeout. They don't have endings at all on Looperman when they're over 11 mins. But I almost always put a link up to the full thing elsewhere.
Yes, I think the mix on this pretty good. A rather beautiful-looking waveform (and you can clearly see where the metal is). I'm not quite sure why it looks like that but there seems to be some real balance in sounds or something. People who know more about the technicalities of audio might be able to explain it to me.
Nice finishing track to an album. I've always thought the order of tracks was important to the flow and listeners experience while listening to an entire album. Very pretty song, nice singing, well played bedrock of sound to support the vocals. Nice touches with some great guitar fills. Mix sounds nice as well.
Sounds like you spent a great deal of time on the tracks, it shows, nice job!
Hi Wayne,
Good to read your words.
I also believe that the track sequence in a record is very important: I usually listen to music in "albums"
And for me the songs are "chained" together to form the whole picture.
So this was my humble attempt to realize something along these lines.
Take care,
Domenico
on Book of the sagittarius by traz75
Ambitious track for sure so I'll tip my hat in parting.
Wayne
Thank you!
I think i know about witch is the mentioned piano loop. Anchor's http://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/1988/hungarian-piano-01-by-anchor-free-100bpm-acoustic-piano-loop
A bit weird, i must admit, but i especially like it in this weird track too. :)
I just feels similar like you, the track is somehow almost falls in the first half - but then in the 2nd half somehow simply... everything moves to his place.
Sorry for the late reply too, were inactive recently...
Regards, traz
on The Funk by Mosaic
The drums are snappy and funky, thought the bass could be a bit louder, I am a bass player so I usually tend to think that. :) I keep focusing on that flute, some tasty goodness there.
Well done mate, must say your trip into funk was a success. Off to check out your other new one!
Wayne
Thank you for the review mate, pleased you enjoyed this one my friend, fairly happy with this one, yes considering first attempt at the genre, will try this genre a little later on, hopefully will be even better then this one...Thanks for fav too...Mate the other version of this one Is up on profile, called Let The Funk Begin 4 on The Floor...Decided to leave both versions of this track up, I like both, different but the same in some way, guessing why I like both, if had to choose would maybe put this one ahead...Peace n much Respect dear friend, so no email yet, will have tomorrow mate...Mosaic...
on Betrayed by MOONLYTE
Don't let life get you down man. We all have issues, getting past them makes us the people we become. Stay positive and def get back into making music, it can be a real the catalyst to some better times. Good luck, look forward to the new ones!
Wayne
on OVER YOU by Mykael
You are certainly taking your talents in a positive direction with what you have done so far. Good luck finishing off this one, so far so good!
Wayne
Love & Light,
Mykael
on Ode To Andrea by AmirGabriel
Wayne
on Dreams of a Clown by bbedford48
It's certainly easy on the ears, relaxing and the mix sounds even. Nowadays, we have these daws with thousands of sounds and effects, might as well use them and see what they do. Nothing abrasive or poorly done, they seem to add a certain feel and atmosphere to the song.
Nice job Bob!
Wayne
on Bring The Sun by ScottB55
Tip of my hat to all involved!
Wayne
Cheers,
Scott
on Riding a donkey by Scyphozoa
The bass is simple but does the trick. It's catchy, a bit of a reggae feel to it. I usually don't like long intros but the build up was worth it. Minimal by design but has all the elements needed to be a great song.
Well done! Thanks for sharing, going to dl this one.
Wayne
The guitar hung by the effect pedal "memory toy of ehx" this sounds like a sustain pedal I would put them louder yes no problem
I would develop much more
thank you for the advice and feedback
musical greetings
on Music Track For Tuie RAJAKAR Blue Hornet by NiloyMorshed
Wayne
on RIO EXPRESS by zappo
Well done fellas!
Wayne
I think there are still a couple good things to come in the future ...
cheers
on The Pleasure Within by ScottB55
Mix is great and the ending is very cool as well. Simple guitar parts like the picking at around 4:05 I just love. Reminds me of the guitar lick in "Get Off of My Cloud" by the Stones that continually plays through the song.
Rock, pop...whatever, it's good, plain and simple!
Wayne
Thanks allot for your comment and kind words. Glad you like my track.
I believe that effect your hearing is a fast delay.
Cheers,
Scott
on Morning Sun collab with ChrisCharles2910 by Gordw
Looking forward to some new tracks?
Hope you are well.
Wayne
on Cappuccino Time by Musicante
Thanks for sharing folks, I will be dl'ing a copy for future enjoyment!
Wayne
I will admit, I am still amazed at what we all can do online and being thousands of mile from each other. 20 years ago this was science fiction.
Yeah, I do love Scott's cowbell performances! Frank Zappa said the cowbell is the symbol of unbridled passion.
Ciao,
M.
on heavy duty me by ElenaSatine
Wayne
on Boston by ChrisMac456
Having lived in Florida now for a few years it was pretty cool to hear this, made me smile listening to all the Bean Town references. Every time I open my mouth here people say, "are you from Boston?" I say no, "TitleTown"!!
Good one Chris MAc!
Wayne
on Unseen ft Janis71 by mrwolf14
Way to go man!
Wayne
Ciao, Domenico
on Rock n Roll Empire by ScottB55
The beginning was a bit deceiving, wasn't expecting all that happens after that! What do you have for effects on the rhythm guitar around 1:28. It is interesting for sure. The choir pad was different. :) Drums are clean and punchy and the guitars sound great. Tons of energy just like Sabbath had.
Very cool Scott and James!
Wayne
To be honest, I can't answer your question on the effects on the guitar. I'm not a guitarist, so don't know.
on Garden by EtherBlu
It's actually at a good volume I think, allows me to turn up my volume knob a bit. A rare thing these days with the misuse of limiters and compressors.
Enjoyed!
Wayne
And it really feels great when your emotions are successfully conveyed to your listeners. And about the volume, somewhere i feel the beginning is really not audible, hence, it needs some boost there. Will level it nicely once i take up this track.
-EB
on everything is right with my world by promenade2239
Wayne
on No sleep tonight ft Bonnie Rabson by smallpaul
Well done!
Wayne
on Ill Do Anything muzic by Baggadub by FullCapicityMuzic
Good to see you around Patricia, we all miss you!
Wayne
on Come As You Are - Acoustic Cover by BradoSanz
Nice work fellas!
Wayne
on Sun Petals by Evisma
Some cool harmonics in the middle part. I mean this constructively but I felt the middle part was a bit lengthy without anything happening really. The part that comes in at the end rocks like hell but the middle part didn't build any tension or opposing force that lead me to anticipate the ending. The snare lacked some punch over the course of that time and was hoping the drums would have built up a bit more or changed in some way. Maybe, to me, that part could have been shorter. Just my opinion, don't take it personally. I like the idea of the breakdown in general though.
The last part was very energetic and some very cool bass playing and I liked the ending. Almost like a Bo Diddly style chugging bass.
Take care Evan!
Wayne
Always feel welcome to give your opinion. I'll never take it personally. I want your honesty, and I'll give you mine. Kissing each others asses will never help our music.
"I felt the middle part was a bit lengthy without anything happening really.....the middle part didn't build any tension or opposing force that lead me to anticipate the ending"
I mostly agree, though I really liked how things went together with the layers. I'll need to add something else there and change the drums, like you said, and probably shorten in by eight measures.
The ending is where my hang-up has been with this track. Several times I've thought to just cut it off and end it with the slow middle part. But the way the bass comes in and the way it sounded reversed with it made me want to keep it in. I probably need to rerecord the guitars there because the tone is a bit odd to my ears. A bit "wongkey".
Thanks for the listen and the feedback. it is appreciated.
Evan
on Emperor Tritone by StaticNomad
Even though I thought the slower parts were pretty good I thought the parts that were built up really stood out. The first transition around 2:55 was cool, was that where the electric cello gets it's mojo on? The theremin sounding instrument was scary, a different texture to mix it up. The chugging guitars were about right for the track, that def worked.
Good length and a definite ending, which we don't hear all the time from you. I liked it. A good change of direction musically and an overall cooool track. Mix top notch!
Cheers!
Wayne
Yeah, I guess a bit less psychedelic - perhaps just a different type of psych vibe rather than my more usual beautiful, funky psych stuff. Darker and weirder this time though I never like to go too weird. Gotta keep it melodic and groovy.
I was really planning to disagree with you about the blues thing but I've listened more since your comment and thought hard about it and now partly agree. There is some cool blues playing from guitar (comes naturally to me) but I still hear the Rhodes as being much more jazzy. I have no idea how to play jazz or any other style as I'm a self-taught feel player who doesn't read music or really know any music theory. Give me a good swing groove and I can play in a jazzy way, otherwise I won't/can't.
I like the "jewelry" term. I guess my use of effects and stuff is a bit like jewelry. Hopefully effective and not just pretty adornments with no susbstance underneath.
" I just like it when people break the rules"
That's pretty much my aim with every track. I'm only really interested in creating something new that I can't hear anywhere else. Even if it's not brilliant, I can still be proud of its ambition and intent to do something different.
2:55 is where the big, evil synth horn sound comes in. I think that's what inspired the metal in this as that is a big, badass sound and just screamed "metal" to me. Well, that and the emphasis on the tritone (flattened fifth) in many parts of the track. See - I do know a tiny bit of music theory ie a few note names (oh, and major and minor scales, that's it).
No cello at 2:55. See my reply to Evisma about that so that I don't have to type it again. The new instrument is not gong too well, which is a shame (most expensive instrument I've ever bought but it does look nice) but hopefully it'll come alive when I get a bow. Only subtle cello in this track and it sounds more like double bass (as it's plucked).
" theremin sounding instrument" is a string part plus filtering and delays. Pretty evil and just playing the main horn theme. Haunting stuff. Also returns in the penultimate track section though Evisma didn't like it.
" definite ending, which we don't hear all the time from you."
Hey, you know that my tracks have definite endings. I still haven't done a fadeout. They don't have endings at all on Looperman when they're over 11 mins. But I almost always put a link up to the full thing elsewhere.
Yes, I think the mix on this pretty good. A rather beautiful-looking waveform (and you can clearly see where the metal is). I'm not quite sure why it looks like that but there seems to be some real balance in sounds or something. People who know more about the technicalities of audio might be able to explain it to me.
Take care and glad you like the jazetal.
on I Am Here ft Stacy Robinson by mrwolf14
Sounds like you spent a great deal of time on the tracks, it shows, nice job!
Wayne
Good to read your words.
I also believe that the track sequence in a record is very important: I usually listen to music in "albums"
And for me the songs are "chained" together to form the whole picture.
So this was my humble attempt to realize something along these lines.
Take care,
Domenico