This was a difficult challenge and you stepped up to the task, the mix sounds great! The bass comes through and the instruments all seem to have some space. Even freqs all around, well done!
This is a really heartfelt song you have written. It is delicate and emotional. Very nice lyrics and they are well delivered. The piano is always great to hear, even if only with just the vocals. Listened on my headphones, mix is ok, could use a little eq work, monsterage had a good idea by watching the sibilance, maybe add some de-esser to the vocals. Do you use a pop filter in front of your mic when you sing? If not I recommend buying or even making one.
I really need to start studying up on EQ and the like. I have very little experience/training when it comes to that kind of stuff. As far as the pop filter, I need to get a new one for sure. Thanks for your comments!
Ahhh... a nice soothing, mediterranean, relaxing song. I have a cd full of acid jazz tracks that are just like this track and I love it. Ferryterry is an awesome guitarist and can play and set the right mood. Reminds me of "Girl from Ipanema" or some Stan Getz track in general. Mix sounds cool, nice piano track and horn track as well.
Well done, I live at the ocean and you've created a perfect song for the beach. Sounds like the ending, the last few seconds gets clipped off, no biggie, just letting you know.
hi, nice that you mentioned 'Girl from Ipanema' song - I like
this version with Astrud Gilberto singing and Getz on sax. a lot! And yes a summery athmosphere is something I was trying to bring here... Glad you enjoyed it.
Nice day,
Alex.
PS. Actaully I looped some guitar phrease to end the song like this... :)
You should continue making music, you are too great to stop. We need to hear the beautiful talent you both have. Wonderful song, beautiful composition, nice live recording as well. Your playing is very skillful my friend!
Nice chord structure and a nice modulation in chords at the end about 3:05. I love acoustic music, this is fantastic. Fav and download, thanks for sharing!
my friend ,first please forgive me for latency as usual for the reasons U know...
Wayne , I'm so gratefull of your attention & time to comment ..obviously your feedback - as a throughbred accoustic player & composer - is so valuable & I'm rerally gratefull .
I also appreciate your kindness & friendship for encouragermenting us to start music again .
well thios may sound a bit sick , but personally i don't like music & the world of music any more .. but I think every thing is different about Corina & I do believe she'll back to music soon ..
but any way , days will pass by & I will remember all your kindness & our worth friendship beyonbd physical world of seen humans.
take the best care to yourself man ..merci..
___B
Very funky, well played and nicely recorded. Great bass lines, cool whawha guitar and fills and some keys that tie it all together. Great track, mix sounds great on my headphone, a pleasure to listen to!
Nice chilled out track, nice atmosphere and feel to this. Cool EZ drums, love their kits. Very well constructed fusion track, lots of elements to this track making it a very interesting listen. All the samples you used fit nicely and some nice keys and percussion used as well. Well done, nice mix!
Sorry George but I am not familiar with the original as I don't listen to much electronic/dance music(except on the loop) so I can't give you any comparisons to the original. Maybe that's a good thing as I can give you more objective comments.
I see it's a wip but is this the actual length of the song? I thought house tracks were usually much longer? I do actually love songs at around 2:30, I feel you can pack in the right amount of goodness in that time. I gave this a bunch of listens and must say the mix is excellent on my headphones. Like the delay on the main rhythm synth, fills the space and doesn't overwhelm the singing. The vocal track is nicely mixed and you applied some great effects on them.
The song has a cool vibe, great beat, driving simple bass, I like that too. I agree, it IS sounding pretty damn awesome so far!!
You're right,.. house tracks are usually much longer. I've now finished 95% of it and re-uploaded/updated this track if you wanted to take another listen to the full thing!
That's one of the reasons why I like uploading remixes on looperman, not everyone's heard the original so allows for objectivity :)
Cool track, very funky, I agree with putting it in the funk genre but there is a bit of an acid jazz feel to it as well. Loved the keys you used they all seemed to mesh well with each other and they changed as the track evolved. Well done, enjoyed the track!
Those vocals sound familiar, lol. Thanks for sending me here, I like this, it is different. I like how you used the vocals here, sparingly but effective. Music is cool, bouncy and catchy, nice job with the remix. Mix sounds great, well done!
This is a nice eye opener! The song is composed really well, nice breaks and lots to keep me interested. Liked the way you ended to with the beat coming back in. Soothing, uplifting, peaceful and calming, nice one!
Love the stand up bass, sounds great. Nice mix of instruments, cool keys, piano. My first track of the day, great way to get it started. Liked how you finished with the piano with some great jazzy notes in there!
I've never heard the original either, sorry. I must say the lyrics are great, lol. Vocal performance great, piano could use some punch like some compression but it's well played.
Your singing talent is right there ready to be heard, you are certainly powerful. Like others have said and if you can afford to do so, look to improve your vocal recording setup. A digital interface, condenser mic, pop filter and you will get some great quality recordings and gain control of those pipes. :)
it's getting harder and harder for me to put how i feel into words to sing. I guess you could say i'm keeping a lot of things inside.
One day i will finish this and maybe than i will be a bit happier.
Thanks so much for taking the time to comment, it helps out so much.
What a great collection of sounds, a pleasure for my ears! I like what beerling1970 said about "tubular bells", I can hear that reference once I read that. Is that my mando loop in there? cool.
It is a nice recording as well. There are a lot of instruments with similar frequencies but you managed to keep them all separated in the mix very well. Listened on my headphones, sounds great!
Wow, nice track! The whole track sounds well mixed and well constructed. The vocal pad/sample is nice, gives the song a human feel. Cool relaxed but upbeat and positive vibe.
Sorry I missed this one and the late comment. I must say the bass really has a big part in this track and being a bass player I can certainly dig that. It seems a little more subdued than some of your more recent releases but it's still a cool, interesting track with lots to keep me listening.
It's good you can keep your music fresh and not stagnant, you always seem to change things up but stay within your own realm.
Hey friend, no need to apologize regarding timing of a review. Not like I'm in a hurry to replace the song or anything. After releasing the album I'm mostly in sound design and instrument building mode now, so don't have much for new songs yet. Subdued, yes I would agree... it was a very sad and angry time, and I allowed myself to just do a pure expression sort of work. I think it was helpful for me. I've had my stagnant moments as well, but it's worth fighting against it on a daily basis. Thank you very much for the listen and comment!
The mix sounds great, clear. The vocals work great with the music. I like acoustic guitar mixed with any style of music. It is upbeat, a bit mainstream but a little bit more Indie Folk/Pop to me. Nice job!
Well done Richie and Pauline! I am not familiar with the original so I have no expectations going into this. Wow! This is such a great pop track. There is a nice vibe here, you have created a peaceful easy feeling. Beautiful lyrics, the strings give it a classic pop feel. Excellent!!
Always good to hear your comments - so positive. Thank you. The original is worth a listen if only to hear the quality of the production (you can actually hear some tape hiss!) and it makes you realise how powerful DAWs have become in recent years. The vibe is quite close to the original too but Pauline's vocal is all her own. She is a great talent and wonderful to work with. Thanks again for stopping by and taking the time to post comments.
I live at the beach and this is exactly what I like to hear during the hot summer, cool vibes. Mix sounds great, love the horns and the bongos and other percussion. Cool track!
The change at 1:55 was a bit unexpected but I really liked the direction you took it. The intro was very cool as well. This song really kicks ass! Well done.
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on Simple Song ft Oceanically with ferryterry by promenade2239
Ok with the ending.
wayne
on Persephone by AxelStPatience
I like it, it is a really nice ballad!
Wayne
on Simple Song ft Oceanically with ferryterry by promenade2239
Well done, I live at the ocean and you've created a perfect song for the beach. Sounds like the ending, the last few seconds gets clipped off, no biggie, just letting you know.
Wayne
this version with Astrud Gilberto singing and Getz on sax. a lot! And yes a summery athmosphere is something I was trying to bring here... Glad you enjoyed it.
Nice day,
Alex.
PS. Actaully I looped some guitar phrease to end the song like this... :)
on Noi doi - Behnam Zandi featuring Corina Ruxandra by deciBel
Nice chord structure and a nice modulation in chords at the end about 3:05. I love acoustic music, this is fantastic. Fav and download, thanks for sharing!
Please do start making music again!!
Wayne
Wayne , I'm so gratefull of your attention & time to comment ..obviously your feedback - as a throughbred accoustic player & composer - is so valuable & I'm rerally gratefull .
I also appreciate your kindness & friendship for encouragermenting us to start music again .
well thios may sound a bit sick , but personally i don't like music & the world of music any more .. but I think every thing is different about Corina & I do believe she'll back to music soon ..
but any way , days will pass by & I will remember all your kindness & our worth friendship beyonbd physical world of seen humans.
take the best care to yourself man ..merci..
___B
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Wayne
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wayne
nice day to you,
Alex.
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I see it's a wip but is this the actual length of the song? I thought house tracks were usually much longer? I do actually love songs at around 2:30, I feel you can pack in the right amount of goodness in that time. I gave this a bunch of listens and must say the mix is excellent on my headphones. Like the delay on the main rhythm synth, fills the space and doesn't overwhelm the singing. The vocal track is nicely mixed and you applied some great effects on them.
The song has a cool vibe, great beat, driving simple bass, I like that too. I agree, it IS sounding pretty damn awesome so far!!
Wayne
You're right,.. house tracks are usually much longer. I've now finished 95% of it and re-uploaded/updated this track if you wanted to take another listen to the full thing!
That's one of the reasons why I like uploading remixes on looperman, not everyone's heard the original so allows for objectivity :)
Thanks a lot dude!
George
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on I know you - Purple Squares ft Minette Fourie by promenade2239
Wayne
nice to hear you enjoyed it! I think it is because I've used different chords in arranging the song.
Greetings,
A
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Well done, great track!
Wayne
Glad you enjoyed the music and nice to hear you liked also
the keyboards as well as bass:)
Nice day to you,
A.
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Your singing talent is right there ready to be heard, you are certainly powerful. Like others have said and if you can afford to do so, look to improve your vocal recording setup. A digital interface, condenser mic, pop filter and you will get some great quality recordings and gain control of those pipes. :)
Cool cover, made me smile. Welcome to the loop!
Wayne
on IamLess - Shapes In The Sky -rough preview- by IamLess
I see that this is a work in progress, still it sounds great, live and some great playing and singing. Hope you finish it up, like it so far.
Wayne
One day i will finish this and maybe than i will be a bit happier.
Thanks so much for taking the time to comment, it helps out so much.
-iAmLess
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It is a nice recording as well. There are a lot of instruments with similar frequencies but you managed to keep them all separated in the mix very well. Listened on my headphones, sounds great!
Wayne
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Wayne
cool you like,nice review :)thanks again for turn in and comment, always appereciated and welcome,DRO
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It's good you can keep your music fresh and not stagnant, you always seem to change things up but stay within your own realm.
Great as always!
Wayne
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JACQUES
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And I do dig that last note!!
Wayne
Always good to hear your comments - so positive. Thank you. The original is worth a listen if only to hear the quality of the production (you can actually hear some tape hiss!) and it makes you realise how powerful DAWs have become in recent years. The vibe is quite close to the original too but Pauline's vocal is all her own. She is a great talent and wonderful to work with. Thanks again for stopping by and taking the time to post comments.
Best
Richie
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Wayne
Thanks for listen
Cheers
Paulo
on Song Of A Girl Once Known by ScottB55
Great production, as usual, and a nice composition. I love this kind of music, really brings you back to a simpler time. Excellent job!
Wayne
I have another oldie in the works that's a real toughie. It's 'Fantasy' by Earth, Wind & Fire. I have over 20 tracks, so far and plan to add more.
Cheers,
Scott