Description : When everything around me crumbles, I can always count on music to pull me through. This is a collab with Nicetones101 . Comments and constructive criticism always welcomed ! Keep rocking \m/

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  1. nicetones101
    nicetones101 on Tue 9th Jan 2018 - 1 year ago

    man just revisiting our works.Cool track man....I wanna redo or make up something using these ideas!!!!

    Reply by FatalDecline

    I am always willing to work with you brother, if you ever need anything send me a message ! I still have a couple tracks of yours that i am working some vocals into \m/

  2. scottdennis
    scottdennis on Sat 11th Nov 2017 - 1 year ago

    nice dude im gettin more into the 8 strings now had my seven esp for a while now

  3. silverman
    silverman on Fri 28th Apr 2017 - 2 years ago

    Very basic growl.
    But it works.
    That is not a heavy metal voice.
    But it works.
    In fact the whole thing works pretty good.
    Does need a bit of work doing on it.
    I actually think the voice is quite wonderful against the growl.
    There's a deathly pale hovering over this.
    The grim reaper maybe.
    The voice makes a refreshing change from the same old same old that metal seems to have fallen into.
    Keep on keepin on.

  4. BoltArmy
    BoltArmy on Fri 14th Apr 2017 - 2 years ago

    You are absolutely correct how music will always be there for you. Keep at the grind my friend. Best of luck to ya, nice work.

  5. Metabolic
    Metabolic on Mon 10th Apr 2017 - 2 years ago

    Crowbar and Fear Factory had a baby..


    Needs work dude, it's not as bad as Judah says (listen to his most recent track, he can fuck right off).

    The work is needed most in the mix and a few tweaks to the transitions, metal is difficult to mix and have it sound great, very difficult, I would be willing to try my hand at mixing it and maybe even add some accompanying vocals and tweaks.

    If that interests you, send me a PM with the stems uploaded somewhere, preferably with as little effects on the tracks as possible.

    I'm very interested in seeing your skills evolve.

    Reply by FatalDecline

    Thanks for the positive vibe brother ! if you want to dip your fingers in , I will dig up the stems and send them your way soon. I am looking forward to working on this with you and learning some new stuff in the process. Thanks for your time and keep rocking \m/

  6. Judah76
    Judah76 on Sun 9th Apr 2017 - 2 years ago

    Sir, this is awful. There was no cadence to the music (even metal has harmony. Screamo: blow that crap up with a nuke). The entire track basically exceeded 0db. Could not understand the lyrics until I put on headphones. Sorry, but there isn't a single decent point about this song. Edit: lower the gain, throw in a bass drop, a solo guitar, and amp the lyrics. I guarantee it will be a better version.

    Reply by FatalDecline

    Thank you for taking the time to listen.
    "Sorry, but there isn't a single decent point about this song."
    It is a shame you feel this way, I will take some of your points into consideration.

  7. nicetones101
    nicetones101 on Thu 30th Mar 2017 - 2 years ago

    Hey Fatal!How you been mate?Man pretty awesome track,Well done on the vocals mate:)

  8. briandodson
    briandodson on Sun 19th Mar 2017 - 2 years ago

    Like the track !! Got a nice flow to it. Vocals are kool and the djenty guitar sound. Using an 7 or an 8 string?

  9. ValveDriver
    ValveDriver on Wed 15th Mar 2017 - 2 years ago

    Hey, man. What's up?

    "I am still such a novice at mix downs it is almost embarrassing, I have a lot of trouble with my end results being "muddy" if that makes any sense? maybe it is just the equipment i use, but most likely it is my lack of EQ knowledge"

    I get it, bro. I totally fucking get it. So does every other member here. It's absolutely nothing to be embarrased about. We all started at the bottom. Without formal training, it's an enigma that seems impossible to grasp. But, I'll tell you what, man, this site is a goldmine of knowledge, information, and advice. 99% of what I've learned about mixing, (or just music in general), I learned here. Not only in the forums, but by reading every comment on each track I listen to, and sometimes, just straight up asking.
    I see you've been here for a couple years, so I'm probably telling you nothing new.

    A lot of times, the "muddiness" comes from too many frequencies overlapping in the . essentially, fighting for the same spot. Sometimes, it's as simple as panning and stereo separation. If you separate your guitars to full stereo, not only does it widen up the dynamics of the track, but it creates a hole in the center where the bass guitar can settle right in with no crowding...for example.
    Too many layers of the same frequencies can muddy up the joint, too. If your bass guitar is super low end, the try scooping the lowest frequencies from the kick. If they're too close to the same, it could cause clipping, or that "pumping" sound like in Trance. (But they have a sidechaining process to get that sound.)

    Anyhow, I hope I'm not telling you what you already know, or insulting you with unsolicited advice.

    Take care.

    Reply by FatalDecline

    Hey brother, You gave me a great starting point and my next track i am going to give it a try ! separating the guitars is something that i have never tried ! Thanks for the info! Advice and knowledge are never insulting in my eyes, thanks for taking the time to share something with me brother. You taught me something for sure, ROCK ON \m/

  10. danke
    danke on Tue 14th Mar 2017 - 2 years ago

    that's really cool...your vocs pushed this song to the right place...into the top league...bit depressive but stunning number...hats off for both of you...


    Reply by FatalDecline

    Yes it is quite a Somber track, but over all i am happy with how it turned out. Your compliment about the vocs will make it easier for me to keep pushing in that direction. It catches some people off guard not to hear the screams mostly associated with metal.Thanks for listening, and for the positive comments, Rock on \m/

  11. 3iad
    3iad on Tue 14th Mar 2017 - 2 years ago

    very welldone man .

    Reply by FatalDecline

    TY very much ! you ROCK for listening \m/

  12. ValveDriver
    ValveDriver on Tue 14th Mar 2017 - 2 years ago

    FatalDecline. First of all, that's a great metal handle.

    At first I wasn't too sure about the vocal style against the music style, but after a bit, I got it. It's kind of a Fear Factory meets Korn meets Deftones thing. It's got a nice heavy vibe, even with the more droning vocals.

    I think, though, that the vocals are a little muffled. They could use a bit of a scoop in the mid-low frequencies. Give them a little more transperency.

    I'm on my third listen, and even though it's basically just two parts repeated throughout, I'm still really enjoying this. It works for what it is. Kudos.


    Reply by FatalDecline

    Thanks brother ! My screaming days are over, So i tried a different direction. It does catch most people off guard , I have not decided if that is good or bad yet lol. I listen to def-tones and fear factory quite a bit, so the influence is there for sure!
    I am still such a novice at mix downs it is almost embarrassing, I have a lot of trouble with my end results being "muddy" if that makes any sense? maybe it is just the equipment i use, but most likely it is my lack of EQ knowledge. So thank you for the advice .

    Thanks for taking the time to listen, glad you enjoyed it, Keep rocking \m/

  13. DijamMusic
    DijamMusic on Mon 13th Mar 2017 - 2 years ago

    I think you've done a wonderful job here.
    Well done.

    Reply by FatalDecline

    Thanks for listening ! rock on \m/

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If i hear you
i can find my way home
you keep slipping
but i wont let go
keep on screaming
i can't hear your song
nothing left now
dust and bones

It's her skin that hides the sickness
it's her skin that tells the lies

If i hear you
i can find my way home
you keep slipping
but i wont let go
keep on screaming
i can't hear your soul
nothing left now
dust and bones

her eyes hid secrets
I reached in and took them all

If i hear you
i can find my way home
you keep slipping
but i wont let go
keep on screaming
i can't hear your soul
nothing left now
dust and bones

The stars were dying
the night she lost her name

If i hear you
i can find my way home
you keep slipping
but i wont let go
keep on screaming
i can't hear your soul
nothing left now
dust and bones



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