crucethus

I feel like doing the Watusi ;-) Great job on this one.

Hey great topic, good song , I totally get the mic thing, it's so hard to record vocals without a good one.
This was my contribution to understanding facts and not "Fiction"
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/143751#476697
It's called Moral Awe and has vox clips of the late great Betrand russel giving us perfectly sound secular advice on how we should conduct our daily lives.
thanks for the nice sounds
Cru

Love that intro, the percussion is amazing especially with the ethereal sound lingering in the background. to those who know this genre you have created an amazing piece of work here. Only thing you need is Spiv's vox over this.
Nice job
Cru

Nice work my friend, very much Lagom.
Cru

Love the ending on this one. nice work.

Loved the intro loved the voice great guitar work the whole package indeed, fav'd
steve

Kind of a pop aceed retro feel, I liked it.

Without a doubt your best vocal work I have heard so far. Fav'd and downloaded. Well done Pat.
Steve

I enjoyed this one. Nice melodies and arrangements but sort of a very light D&B percussion makes this an interesting listen. good work.
Steve

Very Very good sound you have created here. Funky yet refined and tasteful. Then you kick our arses with that synth solo sound via Ultravox! and Pete Bardens. And then there is a nice distorted synth with some awesome pitch-bends. very nice work indeed. You get a fav for an awesome arrangement bridging many styles and sounds together.
Steve

it's nice and U2 like in some ways without Bono's vox..(your own) which are nice. good guitar work. this is a labour of love I think. Well good work my friend.

It's like the Tourettes version (in a positive way). I really like this one..nice creative work my friend. I was bobbing along to this.
all the best
Cru.

You are the old-school master my friend. I am in awe of your mixes and sounds. This was such a pleasant sound in my ears tonight. Mucho props. Fav'd est downloaded.
Cru

Puf Puff give Jason....hey...Jason....c'mon puff puff give Jason...Jason..you SOB...this is a pleasent mix of acoustic, and electronic and your tempered bass work. I really liked this one Evan. But Jason is still a prick..ehhh?
Cru

I recognize and have used some of these loops before. Your voice makes it very nice. almost ethereal.
I love how artists on this site take these loops and make them there own with there interpretation of the sounds. Great work!
Cru

The mic is OK the mix is slightly off. I love your voice and the pan treatment on it. That arpeggio pan needs to be further in the back round of the mix. The Bass just clouds the sounds and the vox. I hate that I don't hear your voice halfway during the mix...because it just becomes "The same Thing" so quick synopsis, I love the beginning and your voice, better mix and you have a cool tune. lose the rappers (not that I dislike rap) there not going to help you as you have a great voice, just make a traditional song.
Cru

It is interesting. Today I was listening to early Atari Teenage Riot with their invented genre digital hardcore. I see some similarities in your music with some of theirs but not quite as biting. I enjoyed this nevertheless as it has an interesting vibe to it
Cru

Fun indeed , I like the spoken word. I hope you expand on this. Clearly an amuse-bouche!
Steve

Please master this one. it is worthy. You have entered Static Nomad zone in terms of funky jam vibes. most appreciated the bass line on this one. Acoustic guitar is very nice as a background element. all-together a well thought out and recorded song. I look forward to hearing the finished product. The chord changes are amazingly progressive. Steve

OMG, just listening to this. And I can hear it in my head what would send this one over the top. You need a strong bassline that plays off of the suspended chords and moves. That would make this genius. (think bass from Sade Adu like songs)
Steve

I like the filtered transition at :48. This feels very eighties to me, and I love me some eighties music. I love 1:40 and the edits on the bassline. It would be interesting if you could add some slap echo on the je t'aime vox. 2:24 is nice and gritty. liking that section. or should I say J'aime cette sector. Nice work overall
Steve

I like the simplicity of this one. I can also hear adding a massive percussion and guitar attack at about 3:02 that would just take this song to the stratosphere. Sort of like Judas Priest with there song Angel.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UtNBKX4Dtwc&html5=1

"Now you are killing me - arrange it more complex? I already outdid my capacity here I think, it was really hard to get it all together with that crazy beat and the vocal behaving very stubbornly...
But I'll try!"
Remember that's what Robert "Mutt" Lange, would say to all his artists. "Just do one more take. do it again". It just pushes us and makes us better and we learn more. look at how far you have come so far. It's a nice tune, but I think you could make it better.
@GramoChopin " I find it a little odd Crucethus wants to hear this more complex. I think it already sounds nicely arranged, the end skipped a bit though"
The reason I think this way is I have already thought of some ways that the sound could be built upon the basic structure. to me it would sound interesting. Sort of how Bach starts out simple and add's layers of complexity in his exercises. Our artist has come a long way and is becoming an excellent looper. I am only there for her as a support and my suggestions may seem harsh, but there not. I have great faith in this one in that she will be even better. @ Steve, we should have a count to see how many Steve's are really on this site, be interesting to know?

Nice, I like the vocal syncing and the stacatto synths. Now I want to hear more complex elements of arrangement build on this one.
Steve

Are you using Roland (BOSS) effects on this one. I like the effect, I agree with vicky dan to tone it down a bit in the mix.