crucethus

OMG, just listening to this. And I can hear it in my head what would send this one over the top. You need a strong bassline that plays off of the suspended chords and moves. That would make this genius. (think bass from Sade Adu like songs)
Steve

I like the filtered transition at :48. This feels very eighties to me, and I love me some eighties music. I love 1:40 and the edits on the bassline. It would be interesting if you could add some slap echo on the je t'aime vox. 2:24 is nice and gritty. liking that section. or should I say J'aime cette sector. Nice work overall
Steve

I like the simplicity of this one. I can also hear adding a massive percussion and guitar attack at about 3:02 that would just take this song to the stratosphere. Sort of like Judas Priest with there song Angel.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UtNBKX4Dtwc&;html5=1

"Now you are killing me - arrange it more complex? I already outdid my capacity here I think, it was really hard to get it all together with that crazy beat and the vocal behaving very stubbornly...
But I'll try!"
Remember that's what Robert "Mutt" Lange, would say to all his artists. "Just do one more take. do it again". It just pushes us and makes us better and we learn more. look at how far you have come so far. It's a nice tune, but I think you could make it better.
@GramoChopin " I find it a little odd Crucethus wants to hear this more complex. I think it already sounds nicely arranged, the end skipped a bit though"
The reason I think this way is I have already thought of some ways that the sound could be built upon the basic structure. to me it would sound interesting. Sort of how Bach starts out simple and add's layers of complexity in his exercises. Our artist has come a long way and is becoming an excellent looper. I am only there for her as a support and my suggestions may seem harsh, but there not. I have great faith in this one in that she will be even better. @ Steve, we should have a count to see how many Steve's are really on this site, be interesting to know?

Nice, I like the vocal syncing and the stacatto synths. Now I want to hear more complex elements of arrangement build on this one.
Steve

Are you using Roland (BOSS) effects on this one. I like the effect, I agree with vicky dan to tone it down a bit in the mix.

Love the bass on this one. the synth effects are nice as well, drunken lyrics add to the haunting sound of this.

reminds me of a TV show intro, but I love the ambient ending.

Ahh! I feel like making a Martini now , nice and smooth...like this song you did. perfect mood changer, thoroughly enjoyed
Steve

Nice funky tune, but your vox is lost in the mix. I wanna hear you dominate this blusey ballsy sound. You need to maximize that in the mix to make this perfection.

As my mum is of an age when she might leave us in the near future. I can really feel this tunes ethos. But I don't hear all sadness. I hear a lot of joy as well. good memories, joyous memories that will stay with you the rest of your life. Music is such a healer and release of emotions, I am so glad you can express that in musical form.
Best wishes
Steve

This is a nice dark foreboding tune, and I like it. I just spent last weekend watching a belly dancing recital for 3.5 hours with very traditional arabic music. this follows some of those modal scales but with a nice electronic twist so well done.

wow, dieses Lied ist schön. Ich mag deine Art von Reggae.

Nice beat. Bass than kicks in. Nice square waves. I wanna hear your vocals over this. nice work

Intro is just amazing (speechless) and "Old is cool" 1:15 is like a gentle slow motion smack in the face, then a dizzying change in percussion thats just perfection. Good build up. You are giving a schoolin! to these youngsters on this era of dance music. I love how the scream is more maniacal than most dance music screams. Nice ring mod (sounds like a Korg Kaos Pad). Then the drums get heavy and we fade things out and make a mix at 3:30. I would love to work with the first part and add some ideas. The sign of a great song for me that stimulates my own creativity. The second part is a good house tune in it's own right. The vocals are sweet mix reminds me of Ratty. Synths are sweet on this one. At this point I have to fav it. Ok now on to sound 3 . Synth bass is funky but I think I would like to hear it louder in the mix. The popping sounds are a bit too much I think. Nice fill. With the vocals, at the end of her phrase you need to counterpoint it with a synth that mimics the melody. Judas Priest is famous for this with there guitars mimic-ing rob Halfords vox in this way. The third song has great potential to be such a dark and foreboding dance tune if you work at the arrangement on it. All in all I loved what you did here and my hat's of to you my good man for so far this is the best of my listening this evening.

I thought I might give an obscure link .
Tina B remixed by the Latin rascals.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EUwFPdysrNY&;list_pxtube=PL3AE176F6367F336F&html5=1
enjoy.
again nice tune

Awesome ! There was a movement for about a year that incorporated a latino sound in dance music in about 1982 and 83, songs like A.E.I.O.U.and later songs like Come go with me, Fascinated, Li'l Louis French Kiss. which led to remix troupes like the latin rascals in the mid late eighties. Great memories and nice work.
Steve

Ok Austin you have a good voice in the soft sounding department, but can you belt it out for the chorus. The song lacks a significant chorus that will blow away the listener. If (as my spidey sense tells me) you have that kind of voice you can make this song into a memorable pop tune.
lets see what happens.

"In this closed and treacherous forest you need to run insanely"

I truly felt that with this piece. Nice work. Perfect for a movie, or just crapping your pants while jogging in the forest with your I-pod.

8 bit has never been so evil...

Mellow sounding tune. It has potential you just need to expand on the melody you set down. The extras, the cool synth effects are awesome on this one. I hear aceed like tones slowly building to the climax , I hear some really good synth sounds. The climax is very interesting and it becomes very acid like this is a good one..keep at this one with some cool pads and you will have an ultimate winner.

Awesome intro. Channelling Heaven 17 and the Norm at the same time. Like you are advancing the sound of Sheffield to modern times. The Pad is brilliant at 1:00 and I love the bass in this one. Vocals at 1:35 are scary effective. This is a solid track man. Suncopation at 2:40 is a nice touch. When you sing or speak your phrases I would suggest you slap echo the last word. I like the way this tune plays out. The vocals remind me a bit of green velvet.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VHXBHjzd910&;html5=1
Fav'd for sure

Really stunning how you have progressed since you joined this community. What I love about this particular tune is the concise tight mix and the fact you have mastered arranging sounds in a very interesting way (to my ears at least). I am so happy to hear you become one of the elite composers on this site. congrats to your talent!
Steve

Really stunning how you have progressed since you joined this community. What I love about this particular tune is the concise tight mix and the fact you have mastered arranging sounds in a very interesting way (to my ears at least). I am so happy to hear you become one of the elite composers on this site. congrats to your talent!
Steve

This is just a fun listening tune for the summer. Nice work. Great talent you have lined up for this one. Catchy hook. Nice vocals. I like the reverse cymbals (Static Nomad most likely won't) You need a nice solo (g-tar or synth for this one. If you send me the stems I might just be able to work on one for you ehh? Nice work mate.
Steve