The intro is awesome, Great use of Ambient sounds in a (A)minor key. Very compressed so it takes a little away from the dynamics. A beautiful song though. I love when the piano comes in around 1:05. This could be a nice intro into a more massive tune. Enjoyed that
Cru
There is a lot to like about this mix. Have you experimented with expanding the pan a little bit and using a lighter Dynamic compression. For example when the "do you wanna dance" kicks on it's great, stereo panned and in your face. But that synth stab comes in and it's just kind of in the center and has no energy compared to that phrasing. (and that's the phrase you want to make you feel the energy of the track. Try splitting the stab and hard panning both channels. On one channel add just a small slight touch of distortion. You will be then emulating a hardware unit we used (back in the day)called an audio exciter. For some reason doing this would brighten the sound and make it more interesting. You made a very nice comment on my latest track "You always know how to maximize the minimal sound"
To create that minimal sound I use a hell of a lot of subtle harmonics and sub sounds and barely audible phrasings and percussions that just push the main theme or melody along.
I do like how you build the percussion in this one. But when you use a synth phrase try using multiple phrasing to create something bigger. Even take that synth stab and raise it a third or a fifth (chord structure) and pan it right lower in the mix and you will hear something interesting.
Anyhoo, love where you're going with this.
Cru
Thanks for your advice. You definetly know how to mixdown a track and can learn from you a lot. I will definetly try out your advice and put it in my track. I am still a beginner when it comes to mixing and your remarks really help me out.
Loved this. Prince was a huge influence in my songwriting, as well as the whole Minneapolis scene. I can hear that influence in this work. Nice Rhodes piano. Also I like the way you incorporate the electronic with the organic. Is that your guitar playing cos it's awesome. Reminds me a bit of a more bluesy Stuart Matthewman (Cottonbelly). Great job
Cru
I was thinking. if we have the blues, but we sound like Prince, do we have the Purples?
Purples - why not hey!Great to have the loops synth wizard enjoying the track.Thanks for the compliment on my guitar playing on this one,i never use samples except for drums.I will check out Cottonbelly.Take care.
These old Bose 2.5's from 1985 are sparkling tonight listening to this tune. Good luck with the contest. I want to hear vocals on this one as it would be amazing. I dub your genre of music New Americana. Sort of Country, sort of rock, but it expresses the American songbook of the youth as it applies to NOW.
Love how it builds in intensity, love the dynamics and mixing. This is a nice piece of music jamid. The percussion is great especially with the stereo reverb slap backs. gives you a sense of urban space.
Cru
Hello Cru,
Thank you very much mate.
I am really glad you like it, such words coming from a master of the industry is an honour.
Thanks for the feedback mate.
Jamid
So I like the minimal drone dance track underneath you bringing in the in your face techno sounds. This is a Berliner Techno tune and not a house tune. Think Tresor 1998 like Cosmic Baby. I love at 3:05 you bring in some drums and a jazz flair and then take it away from us like a giant tease. It's unique for how you presented this to us. You obviously like the fact I bring elements in and out in my songs but you have done it in a way that is different and creative. I get it and love it. The chopping of Joe's vox is also brilliant. fav'd Alex.
pure mad genius material.
Steve
hello Steve
Thanks for nice words. I can always grab house loops and make more and more proper house track, no problem with that.
It is 128 BPM but who cares. Everything is mixed inside Joe's vocal and I created that disco-type bassline on Microbrute myself.
I can not remember 1998.
Loved this. My only(very Minor) complaint as it might be just a eeny tiny bit overcompressed, but the bass is phenomenal as well as the atmosphere of this one. Percussion is awesome. This belongs on a dance floor somewhere. And that sax is sublime. Love the breakdown dj ending. Great job. Fav'd
Cru
Ah that would probably be the final limiter, your right i did push it a little and forgot id did some cut and boost in the low end which will be causing that over do, that mate ;) im doing an extended more complicated version (with sax etc) so will smooth the eq off a little to bring down that over compression :)
I must say I am not a fan of midi instruments for there fake quality, but as a composition you did great, totally captured the jazz age. Now if you can get some more realistic instruments you will have a winner.
Cru
Completely agree with. DJSLTUK on this one. It's not disco is almost a Hard house electro hybrid. And it has some cool elements to it. It needs some variation and I think in the percussion is where I would play around with this one a bit. Do that and you may have an anthem for the dance floor.
Cru
Hah, That song was from the Canadian band LEN, circa 1999. You chopped it well as I could barely hear it in there as it's sickly sweet sticky buns melody made it the summer number one in both the US and Canada.
Instead you chooped it into a raw sinister industrial sound which I liked as well.
good on you.
Cru
Thanks Steve! I attempted to make it a little more dark than the original track, as it was for rap. I can actually hear the industrial sound you mention.
I listened and immediately threw down my cheaters. This one's got the goods! You didn't send us on a trip for biscuits. A copacetic song I could get zozzled too. Hep hep hurrah!
There is a very retro-futuristic sound you convey here. I get Depeche Mode in the Verse. But your voice is distinct gruff and very good for this song. This is just good pop. great job.
congrats on your work.
cru
Thank you so much, really appreciate it! Not my usual sound, glad it's translating! And now that you say it I can definitely hear some Depeche Mode in there
I like that particular album too. Basically all the instruments are virtual ones (there are live-recorded real guitars on 2 tracqks though) - a very impressive and effective programming work. Also I like the conceptual vision of the album as a whole thing, each single composition is very carefully designed. I checked DEVO refference and you are right - Toax's music is just that kind of pastiche I guess.
Thanks again for nice comments!
The "A" game has been brought to the table. Beautiful Minimalism with hints of atonality and dissonance. Spooky vocals. Pure genius. A koto as well. 4:56 has a nice percussion and jazz sensibility. Then some nice clavs. And a cool movable bass and then the vocal ghosts. And a minimal arpeggiated ending.
congrats you nailed this one Alex.
Fav'd and downloaded (thanks)
Thank you Steve!
We did intense online collab before ('Toax' as other virtual persona as he had few different musical projects) but this is definitely the best one. I asked him for original midi files of 'Neberwirkungen' and layered them using virtual epiano, guitar and a little bit of 'ghost' drumming in the background. I transformed some sequences applying a 'groove delay' plugin to get the interesting rhytmic movement too. All the rest is simply a Roland JunoDi synth. I created 0:00 - 4:00 section first - he added vocal and funky bassline. Then I developed this final version. He stretched the vocal which I processed even more afterwards - the idea was to get a kind of 'afterlife' vibe (because he is obviously speaking to us 'from there'). I really liked that idea.
Funky bassline created by Toax on virtual bass guitar.
I made everything directly on Roland. Drums around 5:00, for example, are from Roland's 'Jazz Brush' drumset and it is actually a random linear pattern I recorded. It is layered with the other pattern with snare accenting 'four'. Epiano and clavinet are also Roland sounds - those are just few riffs I managed to record in a short time and mix along the given funky bassline. I didn't use arpeggiator for that sequence at the end - it is a 'Tri Sine Lead' Roland patch played in a real time with huge reverb and a delay by using the pitch bend wheel.
So this is basically a result of working with given sounds and sequences. Very much experimental and it is a colorful soundscape basically but has more dynamic sections too. Surely the most complex composition I ever made considering the amount of elements used.
I am glad you liked few jazzy flavours I introduced. Thank you for all good words and your support!
Alex
Smooth and creamy pads flowing through my ears. I feel like I am flying in the cradle of Vishnu's many arms circumnavigating the nepalese highlands onto the Himalayas. http://giphy.com/gifs/everest-c86i7RoMvC7M4
Play this song with that GIF and it's absolutely haunting and beautiful.
Congrats on an outstanding song.
Steve
I'm truly glad to read about your feelings on this track !
Your feedback is really positive and generous and ofcourse thank you for the gif link...It really has something to go with!:) And of course I must not forget to say big thank you for the 'fav'...means alot!:)
So this is a hybrid of Disco (4 to the floor beat for the most part) and the occasional wakka guitar and a moving bassline, but the Robbie Robertson like vocal approach the guitar soloing (phenomenal) and the bluesy edge make me feel this is a less of a true "Disco" song so we will create a new Blues-Disco hybrid we will call Blissco from now on? See if that catches hold. Otherwise a magnificient listen and production was awesome. Fav'd for sure
Cru
LOL, his last name could be Dover, 'but that's all I know about him!'
Yeah, sometimes it's hard to select a genre with the limited selections here on LM. It's usually moot, anyway, because different people hear different things. When someone notices something, like you noticing the Robbie Robertson approach, I say, "yeah, it does sound like that." Midiman suggested Charlie Daniels, and it does sound a bit like him. I hadn't noticed either of these till it was mentioned. Funny how that works.
Anyway, thanks for your kind words; always appreciated.
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Cru
on Discover by AviatOfficial
Cru
Glad you liked it :)
Regards.
on Losing you by Rhodesy
Thanks :)
on The Chosen by mudhoen
To create that minimal sound I use a hell of a lot of subtle harmonics and sub sounds and barely audible phrasings and percussions that just push the main theme or melody along.
I do like how you build the percussion in this one. But when you use a synth phrase try using multiple phrasing to create something bigger. Even take that synth stab and raise it a third or a fifth (chord structure) and pan it right lower in the mix and you will hear something interesting.
Anyhoo, love where you're going with this.
Cru
on Losing you by Rhodesy
Cru
I was thinking. if we have the blues, but we sound like Prince, do we have the Purples?
on Xyilent - Morning Waltz by XyIlent
Cru
thanks! :D
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9h3w7UfDRTw
Cru
Thanks mate, that was truly remarkable.
Jamid
on Xyilent - Atlas by XyIlent
I could see you developing this into an intense song as you build on it.
Cru
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Brado
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Cru
Thank you very much mate.
I am really glad you like it, such words coming from a master of the industry is an honour.
Thanks for the feedback mate.
Jamid
on carbon textures featuring Joe Cramer by promenade2239
pure mad genius material.
Steve
Thanks for nice words. I can always grab house loops and make more and more proper house track, no problem with that.
It is 128 BPM but who cares. Everything is mixed inside Joe's vocal and I created that disco-type bassline on Microbrute myself.
I can not remember 1998.
Glad you liked and faved. LOL
Alex
on Hands Off - Original Mix by kennydjctxmckenzie
Cru
on Klandestyne-Next Step cliP by Klandestyne
Cru
4 the feedback glad ya like the pads steeped in detroit
mucho appreciation
ta 4 the welcome back
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Cru
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Cru
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Cru
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Instead you chooped it into a raw sinister industrial sound which I liked as well.
good on you.
Cru
Thanks for always stopping by, much appreciated.
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20's Cru
on Fall For Me by austinmusic
congrats on your work.
cru
on Nebenwirkungen with Toax by promenade2239
Nice discovery
Thanks again for nice comments!
on Nebenwirkungen with Toax by promenade2239
congrats you nailed this one Alex.
Fav'd and downloaded (thanks)
Steve
We did intense online collab before ('Toax' as other virtual persona as he had few different musical projects) but this is definitely the best one. I asked him for original midi files of 'Neberwirkungen' and layered them using virtual epiano, guitar and a little bit of 'ghost' drumming in the background. I transformed some sequences applying a 'groove delay' plugin to get the interesting rhytmic movement too. All the rest is simply a Roland JunoDi synth. I created 0:00 - 4:00 section first - he added vocal and funky bassline. Then I developed this final version. He stretched the vocal which I processed even more afterwards - the idea was to get a kind of 'afterlife' vibe (because he is obviously speaking to us 'from there'). I really liked that idea.
Funky bassline created by Toax on virtual bass guitar.
I made everything directly on Roland. Drums around 5:00, for example, are from Roland's 'Jazz Brush' drumset and it is actually a random linear pattern I recorded. It is layered with the other pattern with snare accenting 'four'. Epiano and clavinet are also Roland sounds - those are just few riffs I managed to record in a short time and mix along the given funky bassline. I didn't use arpeggiator for that sequence at the end - it is a 'Tri Sine Lead' Roland patch played in a real time with huge reverb and a delay by using the pitch bend wheel.
So this is basically a result of working with given sounds and sequences. Very much experimental and it is a colorful soundscape basically but has more dynamic sections too. Surely the most complex composition I ever made considering the amount of elements used.
I am glad you liked few jazzy flavours I introduced. Thank you for all good words and your support!
Alex
on In The Grip Of Himalaya by Orlando51
Smooth and creamy pads flowing through my ears. I feel like I am flying in the cradle of Vishnu's many arms circumnavigating the nepalese highlands onto the Himalayas.
http://giphy.com/gifs/everest-c86i7RoMvC7M4
Play this song with that GIF and it's absolutely haunting and beautiful.
Congrats on an outstanding song.
Steve
I'm truly glad to read about your feelings on this track !
Your feedback is really positive and generous and ofcourse thank you for the gif link...It really has something to go with!:) And of course I must not forget to say big thank you for the 'fav'...means alot!:)
With much appreciation_____Orlando
on -Ben- by Musicante
So this is a hybrid of Disco (4 to the floor beat for the most part) and the occasional wakka guitar and a moving bassline, but the Robbie Robertson like vocal approach the guitar soloing (phenomenal) and the bluesy edge make me feel this is a less of a true "Disco" song so we will create a new Blues-Disco hybrid we will call Blissco from now on? See if that catches hold. Otherwise a magnificient listen and production was awesome. Fav'd for sure
Cru
LOL, his last name could be Dover, 'but that's all I know about him!'
Yeah, sometimes it's hard to select a genre with the limited selections here on LM. It's usually moot, anyway, because different people hear different things. When someone notices something, like you noticing the Robbie Robertson approach, I say, "yeah, it does sound like that." Midiman suggested Charlie Daniels, and it does sound a bit like him. I hadn't noticed either of these till it was mentioned. Funny how that works.
Anyway, thanks for your kind words; always appreciated.
Ciao,
M.
on Legacy by Billydragon1
Steve
Blessings - B.