listening through the mixing issues there lies the beat of a really creative song that has a really strong message. I also love the vocals and they need to stand out more. This is like a raw demo of a Kate Bush cloudbusting era tune from a male perspective! Keep working at this one.
Cru
Thanks for listening Crucethus. I've only recently started listening to Kate Bush. Although I remember seeing the video for Experiment IV as a kid and having nightmares for weeks. Anyways, I love how every song she makes has it's own unique signature. They're always engaging, but never sound like Pop from a can :P
I think I may put this track aside for a while and re-evaluate it at a later date. Otherwise I may end up making it worse and I'll lose it anyway. Thanks again.
Gloomy and melancholic but in almost a afterparty kind of way. Hypnotic and psychedelic in like a quaaluded version of Roxy Music. I had to fav it. I just was compelled to fav.
Cru
Oh, thanks a lot Cru. I ##### that Burt will be same happy then me to read this nice and friendly comment.
Good to hear that this little track compelled you to give us the favor of a fav.
And you are right, in a way it IS a afterparty song :)
I am truly a fan of Waldorf now.
So this is the first attempt at a deep house tune using those stems you sent (Merci). https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/175338
I won't lie, it's weird and very dark but makes sense to me.
Steve
Hello Steve. I listened many times to the track and I think there is nothing really that 'weird' about this version. I buy it entirely and I love it!
Some of your other works were much more fragmented or eclectic in my opinion being kind of sound-collages of electronic dance music elements, so to speak. This one is incredibly coherent to me and it is morphing very very gently. Especially it the middle area of the track with it's dancing power. Extremly pleasant music to listen to me.
I was inspired by electronic works of german artist Pete Namlook and Blofeld is a perfect synth to make music like this. I will be exploring further the synthesis and posting more tracks in the future. Hope we can make something together again.
Thank you for making such a nice tune! Alex
Hey Alex. Fooking Brilliant Lad, if I were a euro soccer fanatic, but I am not, so I want to add the proper drums to what should be known as a deep house tune. If you will humbly allow me. It would be my homage back to you for (I Wish I could Fly). This has such incredible potential as a deep house tune, that's just missing the percussive elements. but the synths ahhh there gorgeous. and the atmosphere is incredible.
I want a shot at this.
Steve
hello Steve
I am really glad you liked my current synthesizer explorations! Not a fan of a soccer myself either (I am not quite sure what you mean - is that maybe something language-related regarding certain expressions(?). It will be great if you can take it and turn it into something more proper house-sounding. Thanks for that! I know you can make some really progressive music. I have stems ready to go to you and am just about to write you a pm.
Thanks again for your nice comments and the idea of developing the track.
Till then, Alex
Guitar sound in the intro had an "Edge" U2 quality about it. Good sound. I love the guitar solo, reminds me ever so slightly of Tom Cochrane (Lunatic Fringe,circ Red Ryder)
Die Antwoord would be a nice compliment but I'm not sure the (vox) delivery and intensity follows that mode, you have your own style. But I now know you are very thankful, and that's nice, we don't get enough manners these days from people so that's (tongue in cheek) appreciated!
Very nice listen
Cru
Thanks mate, appreciate your comments. U2/the Edge - absolutely, that's the sound I wanted for this song.
Got to admit that I did not know the other names you mentioned, but I will check them out.
Regarding the vocals, it's not me that is singing, it's HEMANIFEZT - but same as you said, I too appreciate his sentiment and his manners. So thanks again for listening! TG
I really like the intro. Almost gives you this Queasy vertigo feeling leading up to the track core. Builds really nicely with the drums and percussion layers and yet keeps a nice groove. 1:19 we get a change with the same synths but now some staccato percussion, I like this. 1:56 a break and then some obligitory 90s snares. And then it goes on for a bit and ends. I like the build it shows great promise, but I wanted to hear more diversity or a new change as the song progressed. you were doing that in the beginning but I think by the mid point we needed some harder sounds and more arrangement to drive home this d & B song. But all in all for 6 mos out your are doing a fine job and keep at it, you have some really cool ideas in the beginning of this track! I will be paying attention
Cru
This is just awesome my friend. Such a great fusion of sound. I like the vocals as well. Is that Janis(carole)? the dissonance of it works well. Soundhound has not trained his ears to hear that yet me thinks! The chill that this song evokes is breathtaking. And the cold ending with two chime like sounds is great as well. Thoroughly enjoyed searching out your work this evening. I was listening to what you remixed with " I wish I could fly" and each time I listen to it I love it more and more.
Cru
hello Cru
Thank you so much for playing my music and writing such a nice comments! I have to go through some hard times at the moment and your words really helped me to stay sane today. Not sure when I will return with something new regarding my music-making - for now I keep uploading some loops on this site only.
Vocal is by TaraToxic http://www.looperman.com/acapellas?mid=TaraToxic Those are 2 tunes I made with a german guy who skilfully programmed that guitar solo. The drumming is a midi performance of EZdrummer with some single additions of mine. I was aware of the 'different key' thing of the vocal part and I am glad you liked my vision - it surely might appear as something obviously unusual for some other people. I much appreciate your opinions and am happy that you like that special airy musical style I am doing.
Mentioning 'I wish I could fly' brings some nice memories - I really liked some of your older tunes I came across the moment when joining this site - especially 'Bedroom Games'. I think I might be able to make some better 're-orchestrations' as I progress with my arranging work (still learning a lot) in the future. Some themes from your songs are great - your synth work was really inspiring to me as well.
Truly I am doing all this stuff only because of this site - in 'a real life' I sometimes take a chance to play and record church organs (as it is a part of my work by actually restoring them). The music became a hobby to me but I plan to do something more with it at some point. We will see...
Thank you once again for your support and very nice comment. I much appreciate that.
Best to you, Alex
I would love the stems if you would be so kind.
I will send a private message with my e-mail.
I am really impressed with your loops.
Quality!. I made a tune a bit back using some of your loops in it called Catatonia. https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/174110
Right now you might be one of my favourite loopmasters on the site at the moment.
Cru
"I think you're saying you want it to be longer. Yes - there's loads of music in this genre that goes on and on, seemingly forever. I guess the idea is you get really stoned and headnod along for ages."
No not at all what I meant. What I was saying was I wanna hear you build the track to the point of no return. You tease us with a massive buildup, then you back it down which "lengthens" your song. I'm saying throw caution to the wind and just keep making it chaotic and mayhem and massive walls of sound and energy as far as you can go. That would be a fun experiment to hear from you. I believe there is a certain restraint button you have deep in you that prevents you from doing that. Wouldn't it be fun to explore that side of you you have not expressed yet?
Crueactious period!
It took me quite a while to work out what I think you might be suggesting.
So, instead of me making the track longer by adding in lots of extended craziness, you want me to not return to the chill stuff on 2:36 but instead extend the heavy middle madness.
But I like the return to the chill!
"keep making it chaotic and mayhem and massive walls of sound and energy as far as you can go"
I could fairly easily do that but I've done it loads of times before eg in
The obvious thing to do here would be to also take the drums double time in the heavy middle and then see if I can manage some fast kind of widdling leads. Shredding, as some might say.
2:17 I do quite a nice, simple bluesy mostly two note short solo but I could probably manage more of that.
Overall, I quite like the track this length and structure and enjoy the ambient chill mixed with the balls out heaviness. Thanks anyway for the suggestion. I will bear it in mind, as I do with all (sensible) suggestions.
"I believe there is a certain restraint button you have deep in you that prevents you from doing that"
Yes and no. Of course you should always exercise restraint in music making otherwise things will get too extreme and ridiculous and lack finesse and skill. I have to use the restraint control to not make things too ridiculously long, heavy, layered, bizarre and so on.
Production is great, lyrics are consonantly spot on, but what else is going to happen in this tune, a chorus?, it will just blend in with the rest of the Hip Hop magma unless you have something special hidden.
Cru
Awesome! Love the drops, love the very modern EDM sound. You understand it very well. The only thing is how do we make this over the top so people go crazy for a memorable melody.
cru
First question above and beyond the music. How is your Pop doing. Is he OK now? What a great thing you have shared together...the creation of music. The Bonds of Art shared. This tune brought a tear to my eye this evening. Thanks for sharing this one and don't change a thing about this one. The rawness makes it more powerful. That being said and removing myself from the emotion for a minute to talk music.
The only thing I would do different is maybe clean up the individual tracks with eq and compression and panning and maybe end with an acoustic guitar coda from the beginning opening bars so we don't have such an abrupt ending shouting "hold on". that coda will give the listener a moment to reflect on the emotion of the piece and add some hope instead of hanging on fear and desperation.
Truly a great listen this evening. I am glad I clicked on it
Cru
He's doing pretty well right now, thankfully. Constant battle but we're always looking up. And thank you so much! It was a special track to do, for sure. And definitely some things to think about for the next version, I like that idea about the ending. Glad it resonated with you! Thanks again!
So Dave, Welcome to music making. My advice to you is to be more assertive in your descriptive area when presenting this to the public. people feed off of the confidence and will more than likely listen. You could say. I'm new to this and I just made a fun tune that I like I was looking for your feedback from some of the experienced members to let me know what I can more with it.
As for the song, it has some nice chord changes and completely reminds me of this tune. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XvbkMpssrjU
I put on the extended version so you hear how Giorgio Moroder builds this tune in the studio from an arrangers point of view.
Keep making tunes, keep practicing and you will get better and better. This one has a lot of promise.
Cru
Thanks Cru, looking at your and Silverman's comments, I've gotta feeling I'll have to start from scratch and take a new approach like I did with rising nuclear sun. The original version rising nuclear sun was in development hell for months and extending north of 6 minutes long. Will look into LMMS and Audacity a bit more to see if I can add more effects. This is the first time I used both Garageband V6 and V10 together and apologies if the sound is worse than previous due to messing with the equalizers, mp3 bitrate and compressors. Will change the text. I know it looks like the work of an amateur but versions change in quality as new suggestions are applied and new attempts are made. I've been in this game almost two years now. Once again thanks for the suggestions and constructive advice. -Dave
Very Very good. The building of tension is incredible. The minimalism of the arps. I would want to remix this into something bigger and bolder building on your tension idea.
Awesome work.
Cru
Geez, I just listened to this song again after being away for a while and it makes me want to record again :( Alas, patience is a virtue. Loved the song by the way!
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Cru
I think I may put this track aside for a while and re-evaluate it at a later date. Otherwise I may end up making it worse and I'll lose it anyway. Thanks again.
TA
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errr I'll just have the Crunchy frog instead if you don't mind. ;-)
Crobocop
I like the idea of a Crobocop.
Instead of a #####, he bashes criminals with a Crobar.
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Cru
Good to hear that this little track compelled you to give us the favor of a fav.
And you are right, in a way it IS a afterparty song :)
stay tuned
joe
on on that note by promenade2239
So this is the first attempt at a deep house tune using those stems you sent (Merci).
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/175338
I won't lie, it's weird and very dark but makes sense to me.
Steve
Some of your other works were much more fragmented or eclectic in my opinion being kind of sound-collages of electronic dance music elements, so to speak. This one is incredibly coherent to me and it is morphing very very gently. Especially it the middle area of the track with it's dancing power. Extremly pleasant music to listen to me.
I was inspired by electronic works of german artist Pete Namlook and Blofeld is a perfect synth to make music like this. I will be exploring further the synthesis and posting more tracks in the future. Hope we can make something together again.
Thank you for making such a nice tune! Alex
on on that note by promenade2239
I want a shot at this.
Steve
I am really glad you liked my current synthesizer explorations! Not a fan of a soccer myself either (I am not quite sure what you mean - is that maybe something language-related regarding certain expressions(?). It will be great if you can take it and turn it into something more proper house-sounding. Thanks for that! I know you can make some really progressive music. I have stems ready to go to you and am just about to write you a pm.
Thanks again for your nice comments and the idea of developing the track.
Till then, Alex
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on You believed in me Thank You by TeeGee1965
Die Antwoord would be a nice compliment but I'm not sure the (vox) delivery and intensity follows that mode, you have your own style. But I now know you are very thankful, and that's nice, we don't get enough manners these days from people so that's (tongue in cheek) appreciated!
Very nice listen
Cru
Got to admit that I did not know the other names you mentioned, but I will check them out.
Regarding the vocals, it's not me that is singing, it's HEMANIFEZT - but same as you said, I too appreciate his sentiment and his manners. So thanks again for listening! TG
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Cru
on V O Q T A Y Y featuring ZankFrappa by promenade2239
Cru
Thank you so much for playing my music and writing such a nice comments! I have to go through some hard times at the moment and your words really helped me to stay sane today. Not sure when I will return with something new regarding my music-making - for now I keep uploading some loops on this site only.
Vocal is by TaraToxic http://www.looperman.com/acapellas?mid=TaraToxic Those are 2 tunes I made with a german guy who skilfully programmed that guitar solo. The drumming is a midi performance of EZdrummer with some single additions of mine. I was aware of the 'different key' thing of the vocal part and I am glad you liked my vision - it surely might appear as something obviously unusual for some other people. I much appreciate your opinions and am happy that you like that special airy musical style I am doing.
Mentioning 'I wish I could fly' brings some nice memories - I really liked some of your older tunes I came across the moment when joining this site - especially 'Bedroom Games'. I think I might be able to make some better 're-orchestrations' as I progress with my arranging work (still learning a lot) in the future. Some themes from your songs are great - your synth work was really inspiring to me as well.
Truly I am doing all this stuff only because of this site - in 'a real life' I sometimes take a chance to play and record church organs (as it is a part of my work by actually restoring them). The music became a hobby to me but I plan to do something more with it at some point. We will see...
Thank you once again for your support and very nice comment. I much appreciate that.
Best to you, Alex
on Xyilent - The Pavilion by XyIlent
I will send a private message with my e-mail.
I am really impressed with your loops.
Quality!. I made a tune a bit back using some of your loops in it called Catatonia.
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/174110
Right now you might be one of my favourite loopmasters on the site at the moment.
Cru
"I will send a private message with my e-mail"
awesome, ill send you it over mon-tue ish. working this weekend so wont have a ton of time.
"one of my favourite loopmasters on the site at the moment!
cheers cru :D that means alot to me
on Midnight Sun by StaticNomad
No not at all what I meant. What I was saying was I wanna hear you build the track to the point of no return. You tease us with a massive buildup, then you back it down which "lengthens" your song. I'm saying throw caution to the wind and just keep making it chaotic and mayhem and massive walls of sound and energy as far as you can go. That would be a fun experiment to hear from you. I believe there is a certain restraint button you have deep in you that prevents you from doing that. Wouldn't it be fun to explore that side of you you have not expressed yet?
Crueactious period!
It took me quite a while to work out what I think you might be suggesting.
So, instead of me making the track longer by adding in lots of extended craziness, you want me to not return to the chill stuff on 2:36 but instead extend the heavy middle madness.
But I like the return to the chill!
"keep making it chaotic and mayhem and massive walls of sound and energy as far as you can go"
I could fairly easily do that but I've done it loads of times before eg in
The Bigger The Fatter The Better
http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/155188
The obvious thing to do here would be to also take the drums double time in the heavy middle and then see if I can manage some fast kind of widdling leads. Shredding, as some might say.
2:17 I do quite a nice, simple bluesy mostly two note short solo but I could probably manage more of that.
Overall, I quite like the track this length and structure and enjoy the ambient chill mixed with the balls out heaviness. Thanks anyway for the suggestion. I will bear it in mind, as I do with all (sensible) suggestions.
"I believe there is a certain restraint button you have deep in you that prevents you from doing that"
Yes and no. Of course you should always exercise restraint in music making otherwise things will get too extreme and ridiculous and lack finesse and skill. I have to use the restraint control to not make things too ridiculously long, heavy, layered, bizarre and so on.
"Crueactious period!"
No idea what that means.
Tastefully restrained, Concise Nomad.
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Cru
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Cru
Brado
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Cru
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cru
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The only thing I would do different is maybe clean up the individual tracks with eq and compression and panning and maybe end with an acoustic guitar coda from the beginning opening bars so we don't have such an abrupt ending shouting "hold on". that coda will give the listener a moment to reflect on the emotion of the piece and add some hope instead of hanging on fear and desperation.
Truly a great listen this evening. I am glad I clicked on it
Cru
on Here It Goes- by DaveThorne555
As for the song, it has some nice chord changes and completely reminds me of this tune.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XvbkMpssrjU
I put on the extended version so you hear how Giorgio Moroder builds this tune in the studio from an arrangers point of view.
Keep making tunes, keep practicing and you will get better and better. This one has a lot of promise.
Cru
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Cru
on Xyilent - The Pavilion by XyIlent
Awesome work.
Cru
thanks for listening
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on Run Right Past You - Instrumental - Vocal Ready by BradoSanz
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/174864
Please check it out and comment.
Cru
Brado
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Cru
His song, his rules.
Thanks for listen!
-SxL