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30th May 2016 06:48 -  8 years ago
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Description : This has been in my Pop Folder for a while now so I thought I would get some feedback.
Drums are EZ Drummer. The rest is me on guitar, bass, keyboards...and unfortunately vocals. :)

Comments (8)

If you have time take a listen and give topvega some feedback.

imakebeatsLF
imakebeatsLF 5th Jun 2016 16:40 -  8 years ago
sounds like something from a guy richie movie

your profile pic gives me nightmares

(LF)
topvega
topvega replied 11th Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
Thanks and yeah I can see that about my profile pic. It's one of the reasons I like it. :-)

Thanks for the listen and feedback.

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crucethus
crucethus 5th Jun 2016 03:51 -  8 years ago
Good verse, needs a chord change for the chorus. maybe Eb to Abmin to eb to Bb. Just an idea.
Cru
topvega
topvega replied 11th Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
Thanks, Cru...I will see what I can do. Definitely needs a change or two to mix it up.

Thanks for the feedback. Much appreciated.

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theHumps
theHumps 31st May 2016 13:20 -  8 years ago
Cool track, reminded me of early Ministry and INXS mixed together. I like the git work along side the keys, nice job so far with that. What EZ kit are you using?

I feel your vocals could be louder or more centered, they seem very wide to me in the mix. I actually decrease the width of my vocals to about 90%. This way they are centered and more narrow in my mix. By doing this it helps to keep it from messing with my featured instruments' freqs which I pan wide. Then I use a short delay and a bit of reverb to give me the additional width in the mix while keeping the vocals centered and narrow. Hopefully that makes some sense, he.

Wayne
topvega
topvega replied 11th Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
Yeah, I can hear the INXS thing. Was never a Ministry person but I will take your word on it. I will have to look and see what Kit I am using here. I took your advice and centered the vocals more and bumped them up in the mix. I went with a more Trippy delay on them to add to the Vibe. Still not sure if it works. Drums and Vocals are my weakest spots. I have worked hard to try and be able to do okay vocals. Never really happy with them, though. Thanks for the feedback. I truly appreciate it.

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Spivkurl
Spivkurl 30th May 2016 22:47 -  8 years ago
Hey this is sweet! Really remind me of a combination of fusion and blues jam bands around the eighties or nineties. I can totally get into that vibe, though I'm not a festival-goer. The vocals and guitar jams sound especially pristine, and I enjoy that. The bass is very groovy and deep! I'd say that the only thing that gets old is the EZ Drummer... it's really mostly personal preference though. People tend to get defensive when I talk to much about that sort of thing. Everything else including composition, performance, and lyrics is GREAT!
topvega
topvega replied 11th Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
Hey my friend, thanks for the feedback. I agree with the EZ Drummer. Besides Vocals, it is my biggest weakness. I really need to spend some time working on getting a good drum sound. This was the result of needing to do something other than Rock. A pallet cleanser if you will. :)

Thanks for giving it a listen and for the feedback. Much appreciated.

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GregVincey
GregVincey 30th May 2016 22:17 -  8 years ago
This sounds similar to what the band MGMT would compose. I love those guys ^-^
topvega
topvega replied 11th Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
Well, thanks because I like MGMT a lot. I dig their sound.
I appreciate you giving it a listen and a comment.

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Dennel
Dennel 30th May 2016 21:28 -  8 years ago
(Ooops hit the send button by accident lol) Hey Topvega I made this track my fav because I can see the potential of this really being a great tune with some minor alterations. Plus I really enjoyed "The Liveliness" of the song. Great rhythm guitar playing and I liked the "panning of the guitar" on the track. The drum track gave the song a nice lively feel.

My only advice would be, 1. Come up with a solid hook, 2.write another verse in which you can alternate from and 3. Add at least one musical change to the song.(since this is a pop song it becomes a bit redundant without a change of some sort...just my opinion). Other than that I think you have a great tune on your hands.

Best Regards

D
topvega
topvega replied 11th Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
Yeah I have had that happen before. :-)
I am working on another verse as well as a change or two to break up the monotony. Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it.

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Dennel
Dennel 30th May 2016 20:57 -  8 years ago
Hey TV
topvega
topvega replied 2nd Nov 2018 - 5 years ago
What up Dennel. Just saw this comment. Wanted to holler back at ya.

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slnicholas4710
slnicholas4710 30th May 2016 20:37 -  8 years ago
Good song, not quite there yet, but keep at it you got a little something here.
topvega
topvega replied 11th Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
Thanks. I will continue working on it. Thanks for giving it a listen and for leaving some feedback.

tv

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