Tags : | Pop | 6.95 MB | Colab Request

Description : This has been in my Pop Folder for a while now so I thought I would get some feedback.
Drums are EZ Drummer. The rest is me on guitar, bass, keyboards...and unfortunately vocals. :)

So far 8 users have left a comment on this track.
If this is your track why not return the love and check out their tracks too.

  1. LankFrampard
    LankFrampard on Sun 5th Jun 2016 - 4 years ago

    sounds like something from a guy richie movie

    your profile pic gives me nightmares

    (LF)

    topvega
    Reply by topvega

    Thanks and yeah I can see that about my profile pic. It's one of the reasons I like it. :-)

    Thanks for the listen and feedback.

    tv

  2. crucethus
    crucethus on Sun 5th Jun 2016 - 4 years ago

    Good verse, needs a chord change for the chorus. maybe Eb to Abmin to eb to Bb. Just an idea.
    Cru

    topvega
    Reply by topvega

    Thanks, Cru...I will see what I can do. Definitely needs a change or two to mix it up.

    Thanks for the feedback. Much appreciated.

    tv

  3. theHumps
    theHumps on Tue 31st May 2016 - 4 years ago

    Cool track, reminded me of early Ministry and INXS mixed together. I like the git work along side the keys, nice job so far with that. What EZ kit are you using?

    I feel your vocals could be louder or more centered, they seem very wide to me in the mix. I actually decrease the width of my vocals to about 90%. This way they are centered and more narrow in my mix. By doing this it helps to keep it from messing with my featured instruments' freqs which I pan wide. Then I use a short delay and a bit of reverb to give me the additional width in the mix while keeping the vocals centered and narrow. Hopefully that makes some sense, he.

    Wayne

    topvega
    Reply by topvega

    Yeah, I can hear the INXS thing. Was never a Ministry person but I will take your word on it. I will have to look and see what Kit I am using here. I took your advice and centered the vocals more and bumped them up in the mix. I went with a more Trippy delay on them to add to the Vibe. Still not sure if it works. Drums and Vocals are my weakest spots. I have worked hard to try and be able to do okay vocals. Never really happy with them, though. Thanks for the feedback. I truly appreciate it.

    tv

  4. Spivkurl
    Spivkurl on Mon 30th May 2016 - 4 years ago

    Hey this is sweet! Really remind me of a combination of fusion and blues jam bands around the eighties or nineties. I can totally get into that vibe, though I'm not a festival-goer. The vocals and guitar jams sound especially pristine, and I enjoy that. The bass is very groovy and deep! I'd say that the only thing that gets old is the EZ Drummer... it's really mostly personal preference though. People tend to get defensive when I talk to much about that sort of thing. Everything else including composition, performance, and lyrics is GREAT!

    topvega
    Reply by topvega

    Hey my friend, thanks for the feedback. I agree with the EZ Drummer. Besides Vocals, it is my biggest weakness. I really need to spend some time working on getting a good drum sound. This was the result of needing to do something other than Rock. A pallet cleanser if you will. :)

    Thanks for giving it a listen and for the feedback. Much appreciated.

    tv

  5. GregVincey
    GregVincey on Mon 30th May 2016 - 4 years ago

    This sounds similar to what the band MGMT would compose. I love those guys ^-^

    topvega
    Reply by topvega

    Well, thanks because I like MGMT a lot. I dig their sound.
    I appreciate you giving it a listen and a comment.

    tv

  6. Dennel
    Dennel on Mon 30th May 2016 - 4 years ago

    (Ooops hit the send button by accident lol) Hey Topvega I made this track my fav because I can see the potential of this really being a great tune with some minor alterations. Plus I really enjoyed "The Liveliness" of the song. Great rhythm guitar playing and I liked the "panning of the guitar" on the track. The drum track gave the song a nice lively feel.

    My only advice would be, 1. Come up with a solid hook, 2.write another verse in which you can alternate from and 3. Add at least one musical change to the song.(since this is a pop song it becomes a bit redundant without a change of some sort...just my opinion). Other than that I think you have a great tune on your hands.

    Best Regards

    D

    topvega
    Reply by topvega

    Yeah I have had that happen before. :-)
    I am working on another verse as well as a change or two to break up the monotony. Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it.

    tv

  7. Dennel
    Dennel on Mon 30th May 2016 - 4 years ago

    Hey TV

    topvega
    Reply by topvega

    What up Dennel. Just saw this comment. Wanted to holler back at ya.

    tv

  8. slnicholas4710
    slnicholas4710 on Mon 30th May 2016 - 4 years ago

    Good song, not quite there yet, but keep at it you got a little something here.

    topvega
    Reply by topvega

    Thanks. I will continue working on it. Thanks for giving it a listen and for leaving some feedback.

    tv

 ! You need to Log In or Register to post here.

 


 

You might also like these tracks


Tags : | Pop | 7.39 MB

Description : Here's a song I created for you guys! Felt a spark of creativity last night and stayed up a bit to make this into a basic song. I provided the loops for the song if you'd like to restructure it! Real acoustic, percussion, claps and voices. No vocals but already structured for singing. Feel free to download and add vocals for non-commercial use :) Enjoy!

LOOPS FOUND HERE ------------- ACOUSTIC: https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/92444/run-right-past-you-acoustic-130-key-a-by-bradosanz-free-130bpm-rock-acoustic-guitar-loop ACOUSTIC BRIDGE: https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/92454/run-right-past-you-acoustic-bridge-130-key-a-by-bradosanz-free-130bpm-rock-acoustic-guitar-loop BASS MAIN: https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/92445/run-right-past-you-bass-main-130-key-a-by-bradosanz-free-130bpm-rock-bass-guitar-loop ELECTRIC MAIN: https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/92446/run-right-past-you-electric-main-130-key-a-by-bradosanz-free-130bpm-rock-electric-guitar-loop BASS BRIDGE: https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/92457/run-right-past-you-bass-bridge-130-key-a-by-bradosanz-free-130bpm-rock-bass-guitar-loop ELECTRIC MAIN LAYER TWO: https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/92447/run-right-past-you-electric-main-layer-two-130-key-a-by-bradosanz-free-130bpm-rock-electric-guitar-loop HIGH FILLER: https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/92448/run-right-past-you-high-fill-130-key-a-by-bradosanz-free-130bpm-rock-harpsichord-loop DRUMS: https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/92449/run-right-past-you-drums-130-key-a-by-bradosanz-free-130bpm-rock-drum-loop CLAPS (authentic :P): https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/92450/run-right-past-you-claps-130-by-bradosanz-free-130bpm-rock-percussion-loop TAMBOURINE (authentic :P): https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/92452/run-right-past-you-tambourine-130-by-bradosanz-free-130bpm-rock-percussion-loop VOX Filler (sung by yours truly): https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/92462/run-right-past-you-vox-fill-130-key-a-by-bradosanz-free-130bpm-rock-vocal-loop

Tags : | Pop | 3.94 MB

Description : I LOVE IT I WANTED IT TO SOUND NUTS, I HOPE IT WORKS, PLEASE ENJOY, AND AGAIN SHOUT OUT TO LEO VALENTINE!!!

Tags : | Pop | 5.30 MB

Description : Stayed up late last night and burned some inspiration for a few hours recording this one for you guys; it came together surprisingly quick. Hope you can you use it to fuel some of your own ideas! - Brado LOOPS FOUND HERE: https://www.looperman.com/forum/thread/185160

Tags : | Pop | 5.80 MB | Has Lyrics | Reason

Description : Spacey and Dancey and Synthwavey and Dreamy
Please leave your opinion if you have one
:)
This song is available to download, however, if you intend to use it for anything other than personal listening, you must contact me.

Be sure to check out Jenna Evans
Username: JennaEvans
Profile#: 2108940

Tags : | Pop | 5.97 MB

Description : Was trying out my new Fender electric guitar that was so generously given to me as a Christmas present from my oldest brother, and instantly fell in love with the tone! So much so that it inspired an entire night's worth of music. Instruments at work: Drums, Bass Guitar, Electric Guitar (x3), Acoustic Guitar, Pad, Tambourine. The bass is real this time (played by yours truly, pardon my amateur bass skills)!I hope you enjoy!

Tags : | Pop | 3.33 MB | Logic Pro

Description : recorded a second verse. the song is available to download but anything other than personal listening contact me

Tags : | Pop | 5.74 MB

Description : messed around on my piano, came up with a good idea, and put it in fl studio. I think it turned out pretty great. It would be awsome to get some vocals to this. if you do, feel free to change up the title or whatever. tempo is at 105 if ya need to know. review it and enjoy.

-Cufool

Tags : | Pop | 5.98 MB | FL Studio

Description : Sometimes i forget that i'm not a pro-musician, not involved in some market logic. Sometimes i forget that my job is foundry worker. But i never forget that i got a soul,i am human. As human, i need to bring out my feelings, and that is easier for me when I make music. Something in lyrics and Baby's performance touched me deeply. Just turn your lighter on, wave it and enjoy.

Tags : | Pop | 7.73 MB | Ableton Live

Description : Thank you all for the 1000+ listens, this is my first song making it that far!

This is the first track of my W.I.P. Vocaloid album called: Acerbus 3.

The acapella is now available at the Acapella section, both WET and DRY.

Many thanks to Ashesndreams (@Ashesndreams looperman.com) for specially singing on this track!

Tags : | Pop | 4.62 MB | FL Studio

Description : Love You Till The End Of Days ft Sergi Yaro

Tags : | Pop | 8.66 MB

Description : This was my entry into a remix contest by Anna Yvette for her song "Stars and Moon." I don't enter a lot of remix contests and this song will give you an idea why, hahaha. A huge thanks to Anna Yvette for allowing people like me to really mess up her work. This one was a bit of a challenge due to the vocals already being mixed. Unfortunately, downloads are restricted on this one per her request. Thanks for listening.

Tags : | Pop | 7.90 MB | Has Lyrics

Description : I found this terrific pella by Stepa K and just had to try to do something with it. I'll post a link to the pella and his profile in the forum since I can't do that in the track description. As always, your critical feedback is greatly appreciated. I hope all is well.
Bear

Description : the person who posted "jai guru" on you tube (lauren anne hoff) is asked to remove the song as soon as possible! (prod.daGeo or GeoVibes) Our compositions are for the Looperman community under no circumstances for Youtube, spotify etc ... thank you in advance!
Michael

Tags : | Pop | 6.64 MB | FL Studio

Description : Prod. by Louie Jun and Marbs Music. Diamond Star is the singer. It's on YouTube and SoundCloud. Check out my social media @diamondstarsy.

From The Forums