THE PUNK ROCK PROJECT - Beggar

Very Nice!

this is so good!

nice work!

Wow Thats Great Work

Phenomenal!

this is a brilliant song takes me back!

i really love it, thanks for this!

i love this

This song is amazing, especially for being your first go in this genre, and without the intention of creating a full song. Keep up the great work!

Dope as hell!

clasno

LOVE THIS!!!

F F F F F PAY F

hey man. awesome song. I did a remix using your vocals and would love to hear what you think

Realy nice track

yo i'm incredibly late to this but this is insanely good. a lot of clipping but what else do you expect from this genre?

Brado, I ran across this track a while back and planned to comment but got sidetracked and then it completely slipped my mind. But today I thought of it, "what was that awesome track I heard and who did it? As soon as I scrolled down the list and saw your name it came back to me. Man what a super job you've done with this. The guitar track is killer man, very polished stuff and so much reminiscent of Vitto Brada of White Lion. The vocal track is solid also. Very top level production wise. Could very well have been a hit song during this era. I think it still has potential to possibly make the pop charts with the right backing and marketing. I would definitely say it qualifys for the Looperman top 100 with very high rank. Maybe top 10 in fact. Major props on your efforts bro. Great track.

Sehr geiler Song!

ABSOLUTELY... LOvE iT. The song has so much energy and the lyrics are great.

really good track, bands like greenday can be jealous :)

nice work
bleep

A cut above all the rest. This is so polished, so professional, high energy. Love it!

Well done, great sound, congrats !!!

Sounds great!!

Dang, not sure why I haven't heard this yet but reminds me of the early 2000s in all the best ways. Love it!

Great!

Awesome. Vocals are great as well as the music and mix.

Solid job all around.

Cheers.

tv

Outstanding track bro!!!
Riff is super dope.
Catchy and well written.
Best track I've heard on LM.
These are songs I buy and one of my favorite genres.

Home run in my park.
Would be out of the park if the voice manipulation was tamed a bit in places. (Auto tune ECT.)

Good Job man. Tracks like this inspire artists.
Keep it up!

Thx for sharing.

T2

Wow! Realy nice track

Wow!
This is an incredibly well made Pop-Punk song.
If we need to look for things which can be improved (but bear in mind, we are nitpicking on an outstanding production here):
- drums (already mentioned, I won't spend much words here) ... even if they're midi, they sound too "polished" for the genre. A minor thing: you did a very good job in programming fills and different rhythms. It works VERY WELL.
- vocal track. In some points we can hear some artifacts (auto tune? phase issues? not sure)... e.g at 0:56

Again: WONDERFUL SONG!
My personal highlight: the guitar, sound and riff are 100% "pro" (if this means anything). Superb. Could not get any better than this.

Thanks for sharing!
Ciao, Domenico

Very nice .... please excuse me when I get like that .... tired.
Sounds fantastic to me this.
Wish I could stand and deliver live like this.
All my efforts have to computerized and booglarized and .... have effects.
Who was that weird little man?
I could drive down my favourite road with this blaring .... if only I could download it.
Powerful.

I had to think a moment when reading "My first attempt at a new style of music" as well, and then I settled on the assumption that it was new to you. Like Danke, I found it to be a fairly common style around here, which even the cover bands are doing. This is not to take away from what you've done here, as it is a great example of the style!

I found the tone on the guitars to be a nice edge to the song, and the performances were also awesome! I am curious how they were recorded... it sounds like you used amps and microphones. Were their effects pedals involved, or were any effects added to the guitars in the DAW?

The vocals sounded just right for this style of music, at least to my ears. It's not a genre I listen to by choice much, but at the same time I have been hearing it regularly for about twenty years. It seems like this was especially popular in 1996-97, when I spent a year in Boulder, Colorado. All over the radio it was, and I'm sure it had something to do with the state party college there. I also tend to hear this sort of style incorporated into television shows which I watch and re-watch, such as "Workaholics" and "Parks and Recreation."

I think you did an excellent job here. Joseph already mentioned the clipping, so I won't harp on that. I would love to hear the song with live drumming instead, but that is simply one of my frustrations with many modern rock influenced styles... they all seem to use those drum romplers any more. I always found drums to be hugely important in rock, punk, and metal styles. Even so, you composed them well! Probably backing of the mastering would bring out the dynamics of the drum part a little more.

Thanks for sharing the cool song!

I'll save all the blah blah blah and get straight to the point...
Right on! Good work and catchy song!
Loved it!
Thanks for sharing.

Man this is a great track..you guy's rocked this for real...

This is the evolution of Power Pop, I knew some guys from the Rosenbergs (look em up). But to tackle this genre the cream de la cream is the the band the Struts.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tK6C9B-bN3U.
this is a good song keep working it. I am happy you are branching out trying new sounds. Thats the best way to improve and keep climbing the stairs of artistic semblance.
Also Centralsdev, never makes any sense when he trys to engage you about effects, and compression, your best bet is too just to nod nicely and move along without poking the sleeping bear.
keep on keeping my friend, always good to hear your evolution. us older folks are counting on you so we get some backstage passes some day! ;-)
Cru

Brado, awesome as usual everything sounds like a radio ready style pop-rock song. Now, you asked for opinions and so here is my opinions which you may not agree with and that's fine Brado.

The song as is naturally on loud side and that ain't necessarily a bad thing because it's not a ballard or a love song, ha ha ha. But......your make up gain on the compressor or the master gain control is kind of on the high side. As a result, you are getting that bad distortion (clipping) which is smashing some of the upper frequencies resulting into unatural noise. Your drums are getting bruised up and lost in the clipping just a bit. Even your Waveform illustrates this very high output very visually.

Clipping is bad, and is not to be confused with warm (good) distortion from your rig, I understand that, that's fine. Your drums sound almost mono and centered focused, I'd also make the drums a bit wider sounding with a spread at the top for a better and clearer drum presence and work on the hats just a bit. Try also reducing the Threshold on the Master Comp Bus a little. As far as the vocals go, if you got Nectar, well it does amazing things with vocals.

Brado, I am referring to just a few simple mastering corrections that you can easily fix. You are an awesome talent, keep up the great music!

All in all, a truly amazing peace of music!
Joe

Nailed the pop-punk genre. Really solid piece.

Brado? Is this you?

Wow, I thought I was listening to Blink 182 or Good Charlotte. Good job.
I like the swagger. I can see the girls screaming in the audience for you and your brother. This is a definite fav.

so you dont know what a effect is?

there could be a sound effect on each loops/samples as well on the vocal. even your sound could be made with effects.

what a track Brado

the same, brilliant production on every level...but correct me if i'm not on the good way but this is a nowadays very popular american radio rock style...new style for you you mean?
anyway, who cares about this nuance?

congrats and handshake, Danke

really nice track just a shame you have used that much effect.