Listen To BASSMOMS RETRO ROCK FEAT DJ RAY RAY Breakbeat Song By Bassmom2012 At Looperman.com

this is a blast - echo Spiv and the bass is kickass!

Difference between Constructive criticism and insults: insults do absolutely nothing. You don't need to be an ass whilst reviewing, just give the uploader a hint in the right direction. Here Justing, let me show you how its done:

The pads and drums in the start are pretty good, but the pad is a bit overpowering though. The drums themselves are good, and they work pretty well with the guitar. The drum layering is pretty cool, and has a nice buildup to it. However, the actual part where the melodies come in could usea bit of improving. The first chord is pretty good, but it doesn't really work with the arp melody, although the filtering on the arp does sound pretty cool, it just doesn't fit really. The bass guitar also doesn't fit that well with the arp.

Its a pretty good track, but you need to work on it a bit more, because certain parts feel a bit awkward. What I reccomend is trying to find out which chords work well together.. unfortunatly, I cannot help you there, as I do all my work by ear, and know absolutely no theory.

Nice try.

Ste :)

Im sorry but this song really sucks i dont know what spivkurl
was on about
but i realised this was your first song in here so i guess youve improved

Awesome track! Those beats are great! Very cool bass line! I was surprised when that guitar came in, it's cool! Nice synth work too! Good song!