crucethus

Damn Girl, you is getting better & better every day! (and more eclectic) I may just re-master this one.
Steve

It's about time you explore your own compositions... don't worry about the simplicity in chord structures of this piece, your arrangement is sublime. you have the (natural talent) ear for arranging music. I hope you learn as much as you can. My early compositions were simple chord structures. ( I just put one on looperman) I was fortunate to study in (college) music theory and to be exposed to many forms of music. But I will always remember that obsession I had with making music when I was 16. the same obsession you have, and don't worry about professionals and music theory majors in school, just follow your heart's desire of music when you can and enjoy what you create.
Steve

Very nice cover work!

Love the aggression in this. I am a U.S. Citizen even though I live in Canada now and am very close to dual citizenship. Just know that this is the 17th time the gov't has shutdown. this is nothing new.n But I tell you I love the progression and aggression of these riffs.! you have a great sound going on definitely complete this with a vocalist!

I liked this, I downloaded and may do something with it as well!
Steve

Nice Tune, for some reason early on the bass-line reminded me of Lil' Louis "French kiss".

Funking awesome !

I like when you add industrial elements to your music. adds a great depth. Chord progression of Neil Young's Like a Hurricane (verse). Good job with this my friend.

Nicely done!

Great concept, musically you have it down, it's just in the mixing and dynamics that a little more work is needed. Bring up the percussion, lower the effected piano a bit (nice effect btw) But keep at it your almost there!

Ohh yeah we could make this work...thanks for the name-drop. this has potential!

very cinematic, and very thoughtful composition, I enjoyed listening to it. Great Work

Just an impressive tune, wow it's like 5 in a row tonight. I am so glad to hear such amazing talent on this site lately. This tune is an amazing use of minimalism. I could hear vocals as diverse as Robbie Robertson or even a Macklemore style or even an operatic voice. Great job ( I think you could add a guitar like Tumbleweeds style to this tune to make it soar)
Steve

Wow, the talent is out in full force tonight, brilliant creative track you have made. I love this completely.!
Fav'd for sure,
Steve

Nice gong sound, good clear mix as well and very creative use of sound in general. liked it!

I like how this builds and then de-constructs at the end.

Beautiful Piece. Love the chord structure with the piano. Great Work
Steve

Most interesting, dark and light and fluffy at the same time

awesome percussion sounds with a killer verb. music is soothing and nice!

It has great production values and interesting lead ins, but to me sounds like 2 completely different songs being mixed in and out One melodic, and one a killer bass, electro-deep house sound with dissonant scales. If you are using this as an intro song it won't stun the floor as it goes back and forth and people will take that as a perfect time to go get a drink. maybe remix this with the awesome intro build with the dissonant bass sounds, build to a climax,then the breakdown is the beginning of the melodic sound which you build back up and then add to it more bass and effects. Otherwise great potential

I love the sounds you have created and the spacial mixing is awesome, I do agree the intro is a bit long. This is clearly a futuristic jazz vision. great work

Awesome riff!

Much much better. I love the drums. Even the piano was made to be softer in the mix, bravo. nice use of phase effects at the end, also much more compressed sound.

Ahhh! Where was this song when I was stuck in Montreal traffic today!!!! I could've used this!!!!!!!!
Interesting breaks. awesome progression of chords, nice work!

Mucho Caliente! Gran trabajo en esta canción
Steve