It's a good start. I was thinking that you should harmonize with yourself. Right after you say and we don't stop singing, there should be another voice singing0---A440tuning And (G1) We (E1) Don't (D2) Stop (B1) Sing (A1)ing (G1)--- around :43 seconds in I would do that and have fun with the vocals overlapping. and keep building that beat into doubletime until you can make it into a serious danceable tune, then U have a winner.
Hey this is a good one from you! remember the great DJ and remixer from the sound factory NYC ,Junior Vasquez, never listened to the original song before he remixed a tune (Check out Cher's moonlighting theme) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dEXUllZhm5w&html5=1
Steve
That remix was superb!! I had never even heard of Junior Vasquez, thanks for educating me!
The remix sounded as if it had been done just recently, it hasn't aged at all - a really cool house beat.
It's about time you explore your own compositions... don't worry about the simplicity in chord structures of this piece, your arrangement is sublime. you have the (natural talent) ear for arranging music. I hope you learn as much as you can. My early compositions were simple chord structures. ( I just put one on looperman) I was fortunate to study in (college) music theory and to be exposed to many forms of music. But I will always remember that obsession I had with making music when I was 16. the same obsession you have, and don't worry about professionals and music theory majors in school, just follow your heart's desire of music when you can and enjoy what you create.
Steve
Love the aggression in this. I am a U.S. Citizen even though I live in Canada now and am very close to dual citizenship. Just know that this is the 17th time the gov't has shutdown. this is nothing new.n But I tell you I love the progression and aggression of these riffs.! you have a great sound going on definitely complete this with a vocalist!
glad to see U've liked iT Steve , for sure hearing what U'll
do with iT,would be a pleasure & according to different taste of your wonderfull musiX with my trials , I think your usage would be so interesting & I absolutely like to hear
it . thnx alot my friend for your attenition and presence & comment.best wishes.___Behnam
I like when you add industrial elements to your music. adds a great depth. Chord progression of Neil Young's Like a Hurricane (verse). Good job with this my friend.
Great concept, musically you have it down, it's just in the mixing and dynamics that a little more work is needed. Bring up the percussion, lower the effected piano a bit (nice effect btw) But keep at it your almost there!
Yes! There is a lot to do to bring out some action in there with the mixing and the mastering is also very poor.
I'm hoping for some inspiration to continue with this - thanks for listening and for the advice Steve, and have a great day over there!
Just an impressive tune, wow it's like 5 in a row tonight. I am so glad to hear such amazing talent on this site lately. This tune is an amazing use of minimalism. I could hear vocals as diverse as Robbie Robertson or even a Macklemore style or even an operatic voice. Great job ( I think you could add a guitar like Tumbleweeds style to this tune to make it soar)
Steve
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The remix sounded as if it had been done just recently, it hasn't aged at all - a really cool house beat.
And thanks for feedback!
Take care. =)
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I would be happy if you actually did remaster it!
Have a nice day/night!
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do with iT,would be a pleasure & according to different taste of your wonderfull musiX with my trials , I think your usage would be so interesting & I absolutely like to hear
it . thnx alot my friend for your attenition and presence & comment.best wishes.___Behnam
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I'm hoping for some inspiration to continue with this - thanks for listening and for the advice Steve, and have a great day over there!
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