This just put a smile on my face. I just went back and reviewed some of my earlier comments I have left on your tracks. What an amazing job you have done in the last 9 months to grow musically. Ironically you consider me an eclectic artist, but this song is very eclectic and very good. You have managed to capture an interesting sound with your trademark piano staccato style. And Some wild dissonant chords as well which make this so so interesting. It has been a pleasure to listen to your musical maturity over the last 9 months. "keep it going"!
Steve
Hi Steve!
Well, I've told you this before but this journey has been what it is very much thanks to you and a bunch of other guys and girls here on the loop.
Without all the feedback and advice - no progression.
In December last year I hardly even knew there existed such things as DAW's and that almost everybody could learn to create some kind of music on their computer...now I know. =)
I just wish somebody could have told how addictive this music producing was, though!! It's taking over my life...
=D
Take care - I'm off to have a listen to your latest creation now. /SJ
Haunting beginning, reminds me of For your pleasure from Roxy Music. with the delays. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eVCGTsiedEY&html5=1
(Live mix from the early 2000's) Song from 1972
now you know If I am comparing you to Roxy you are doing something creative and cool for my taste. Eb major also a nice fluffy happy tune, less psychedelic and just plain fun. Percussion is awesome as well, good fills, snares and toms. 4:15 mark is really fun. Very good arranging of the instruments on this one. This is a tune I would want to hear live, in fact the way you mixed it makes me feel that this could be live! (we know the truth) You have many musical ideas going on with this one. 6:00 mark, guitars are cool. A little darker transition starting at 7:00, There is a small subtle hint of you wanting to bring it to DM but you just flirt with it while keeping it in Eb, but you change the mode. (the suddenly middle eastern feel) 9:24 has a nice groove to it. Self indulgent indeed but a lot of fun. And right at the end you transition to Eb minor going back and forth on that chord and Bb...sneaky.
good job
Steve
Sorry for my late reply. I struggle to see the link between this track and For Your Pleasure, which I didn't much like (especially Ferry's vocals), though I did listen to the whole thing trying to spot the link. Must be the odd delayed keyboard part that comes in after a couple of minutes.
Yes, I do like the drums in this track. It's my usual multiple acoustic kit affair but I think they sound similar or are well matched so sort of sound like one big kit. Gives the track a real consistency that is maintained throughout the 18 mins though you'll hear the occasional cowbell in the second half.
Yes, 4:15 I find fun and also kind of fluffy and happy. Does all sound a bit like a live band. Shame I don't have one! 6:00 guitars have some good little squeals and 16th note rapid end of bar fills that I like to do (I can generally only play that fast, and in time, in short bursts).
Thought you'd like the dulcimer, banjo and Eastern stuff in this eg from around 6:50 on. That same bass guitar thundering away providing a good anchor. I use it a hell of a lot in this track but hope it doesn't get too boring. I find these end, darker sections very musical, even though I don't really know what I'm doing in terms of changing key. I just know the mode I've made up and hit those new, correct notes and then branch out a bit.
Since uploading this I've improved it a bit in various ways. I strongly considered splitting it in two but don't think that will now happen (would have called the other half Things That Always Were).
This track will be on my nearly finished album called For The Long-Form Lovers. 4 tracks - around 65 mins running time!
Look out for it in all good record stores soon (not really).
Thanks again for checking out my self indulgent noodlings.
Very nice work remixing some fellow Canadians. I was thinking that you could sing the vocals through a vocoder (not an autotune) and that would be appropriate for this mix.
As All of my esteemed colleagues have said already I agree with. Man I love me some priest and this has echoes of that, as well as Warren DiMartini of Ratt, and some of the NWOHM sounds from my youth. Work with this and add some guitar parts to it this has some nice potential. Nice work!
Steve
The Strings sound phased, reminds me a bit of ultravox. With just a sprinkling of Tangerine Dream thrown in (Legend, movie soundrack) I like when the drums come in, really focuses the melody in this, Nicely done.
Steve
Thanks for the comment Steve!! I'll have to give that soundtrack a listen again. I am glad I'm not the only one on here that has listened to tangerine dream. Some of the best early 80's soundtracks ever lol. I'll have to look up ultavox. I've heard of them but not familiar with their music. I am from the early 80's new age movement and one of my favs was night noise. I do love a phased string sound. Thanks again
What a nice treat for the ears! I think you guys are just schooling us when you release something as intricate as this.
One hand quickly touching the other one is the sound I am making for this track!
Steve
Steve my good friend , before everything my appologY for latency in replY , I have not this chance to check my emails even & now I'm online for first time in 2014 in looperman .
& regarding this track , I should apprectiate your kind comment speciallY cause I'm almost sure this is noT your fav music to listen & just a good freind & a good colleague listens & comments for a track that is far from his musical style .about mix & mastering if U check propeties of track too U'll see this description buT here too I should mention that as U can underestand track is recorded in a proffesional studio & so I should appreciate my friend for recording me in studio for free & mix & mastering pf this track too is by their studio otherwise U know I have nothing for mix & mastering even interesT (hahaha).but as usual your carefull attention abouT quality of sounds & mix & mastering is so appreciated by me . in the end an exclusive appology for I haven't had this chance to check my mails in my absence days & having no chance to read your mail if I haven't answered . my best wishes + happy new year 2014 for U Steve .____Behnam
thank you very much .
it is very good to know this from you.
your warm comment gives me a better feeling about this site .
i really appreciate it.
thank you for listening and comment.
For some reason the opening piano counterpoint reminded me so much of Ultravox (Midge Ure era). The jazz guitar work smoothens (New word) out the song. Nice work. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qpkasPwAtrQ&html5=1
Steve
Good work my friend, this borders on Digital Hardcore. Bass line is driving, the vocals are placed perfectly and are disturbing in the right way ;)
Steve
Hey Cruce, good to hear from you! Digital hardcore, I like that! This one is weird because I used an effect as an instrument, which just kind of fell into place. Thanks for the compliment on the vocals! I appreciate you listening!
This I think would go better under the Breakbeat category. That being said, it's a very interesting first loop attempt and a good job. Very creative work. Now we just need to get it mastered properly and it would sound awesome
Yes! And thank you. I wasn't sure about the genre, really. And I'm certainly WIDE OPEN to ideas of HOW to get started mastering it properly, because as you can see, I'm in uncharted territory here. Thanks again.
Of course a big tune to take on, but the project rate you have projected for us is only at 16000, and not 44100. So it sounds pretty blah in my speakers. for shame because I hear some good arranging of midi instruments.
This is some good s**t. I really like this tune, and I am not ordinarily prone to liking hip hop or rap unless it is really really good. and I like this one!
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Steve
Well, I've told you this before but this journey has been what it is very much thanks to you and a bunch of other guys and girls here on the loop.
Without all the feedback and advice - no progression.
In December last year I hardly even knew there existed such things as DAW's and that almost everybody could learn to create some kind of music on their computer...now I know. =)
I just wish somebody could have told how addictive this music producing was, though!! It's taking over my life...
=D
Take care - I'm off to have a listen to your latest creation now. /SJ
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eVCGTsiedEY&html5=1
(Live mix from the early 2000's) Song from 1972
now you know If I am comparing you to Roxy you are doing something creative and cool for my taste. Eb major also a nice fluffy happy tune, less psychedelic and just plain fun. Percussion is awesome as well, good fills, snares and toms. 4:15 mark is really fun. Very good arranging of the instruments on this one. This is a tune I would want to hear live, in fact the way you mixed it makes me feel that this could be live! (we know the truth) You have many musical ideas going on with this one. 6:00 mark, guitars are cool. A little darker transition starting at 7:00, There is a small subtle hint of you wanting to bring it to DM but you just flirt with it while keeping it in Eb, but you change the mode. (the suddenly middle eastern feel) 9:24 has a nice groove to it. Self indulgent indeed but a lot of fun. And right at the end you transition to Eb minor going back and forth on that chord and Bb...sneaky.
good job
Steve
Yes, I do like the drums in this track. It's my usual multiple acoustic kit affair but I think they sound similar or are well matched so sort of sound like one big kit. Gives the track a real consistency that is maintained throughout the 18 mins though you'll hear the occasional cowbell in the second half.
Yes, 4:15 I find fun and also kind of fluffy and happy. Does all sound a bit like a live band. Shame I don't have one! 6:00 guitars have some good little squeals and 16th note rapid end of bar fills that I like to do (I can generally only play that fast, and in time, in short bursts).
Thought you'd like the dulcimer, banjo and Eastern stuff in this eg from around 6:50 on. That same bass guitar thundering away providing a good anchor. I use it a hell of a lot in this track but hope it doesn't get too boring. I find these end, darker sections very musical, even though I don't really know what I'm doing in terms of changing key. I just know the mode I've made up and hit those new, correct notes and then branch out a bit.
Since uploading this I've improved it a bit in various ways. I strongly considered splitting it in two but don't think that will now happen (would have called the other half Things That Always Were).
This track will be on my nearly finished album called For The Long-Form Lovers. 4 tracks - around 65 mins running time!
Look out for it in all good record stores soon (not really).
Thanks again for checking out my self indulgent noodlings.
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Steve
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& regarding this track , I should apprectiate your kind comment speciallY cause I'm almost sure this is noT your fav music to listen & just a good freind & a good colleague listens & comments for a track that is far from his musical style .about mix & mastering if U check propeties of track too U'll see this description buT here too I should mention that as U can underestand track is recorded in a proffesional studio & so I should appreciate my friend for recording me in studio for free & mix & mastering pf this track too is by their studio otherwise U know I have nothing for mix & mastering even interesT (hahaha).but as usual your carefull attention abouT quality of sounds & mix & mastering is so appreciated by me . in the end an exclusive appology for I haven't had this chance to check my mails in my absence days & having no chance to read your mail if I haven't answered . my best wishes + happy new year 2014 for U Steve .____Behnam
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it is very good to know this from you.
your warm comment gives me a better feeling about this site .
i really appreciate it.
thank you for listening and comment.
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