Most interesting chord structures in the first 45 seconds, then I agree with Danke the tune lifts off at the :45 mark. love the bass and the chords and the vox here. With your permission I might want to tinker with this one as I have an idea for a drum sound that will kick this tune even higher, what is the B.P.M.?
Steve
Hi Steve - please do!
The bpm is 84 (but I originally went down from 130bpm somehow...nothing really worked and this is what was left of it.)
I can do a version without drums also if it helps.
It's interesting, and you are right the vocals do fit, I would like to see a kick-ass beat (maybe syncopated?) over the jangly synths and piano stabs. Keep at it your on to something here.
Steve
Finally a comment!! Thank you Steve! =D
The drums are always really tricky for me, I almost never manage to make my own drums, it just doesn't work. So I'm going to seek some other drumloops to fit in then.
Maybe some changes in the melody also, it gets really boring after a short listen...
(Or then I'll leave this as it is - it's just one of those failures. Nobody is commenting which means it's probably no good. Ha ha ...moving on...)
Thank YOU for listening and commenting!
You know, I Instead of listening to this as an analytical musician, I just let the right side of my brain let the sounds just wash over me and enjoy the ride. great work!
Very good Spiv, you know the more I listen to your vocal delivery style, in some ways it reminds me of John Fox who fronted Ultravox! before Midge Ure, then he did this amazing solo album called Metamatic. you should definitely check it out. He is Gary Numans Inspiration. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v78Jmrb1hPY&html5=1
Hey, after listening to that video I'm honoured at the comparison! Never this before. Gary Numan is very cool, and I see the similarities. Thanks for taking a listen! I dropped a new mix of this song today, with some subtle adjustments.
The idea was something like liquid dubstep, so you used liquid and the sub could remind you of dubstep. So overall i think i succeed at some point haha. Thanks for you time, listen and comment!
Great work, awesome use of dissonance and glitch and chain filtering. The tribal vocals were spot on and the main theme kept you balanced throughout the track when you deviated with a new idea. great job!
Very good song, I get that the intro is a movement in itself leading to the 2nd movement. what I would love to hear is a better separation of instruments in the mix (larger stereo field) That would make it a bit more interesting. But it's a brilliant piece of music. well done!
Thank you much. Mixing is an issue for me, and that is most of the criticism I get from what I've put on here. The honest feedback is what I want, so when something #####, I'll know. Thanks again for the listen and the feedback.
Very nice tune, I love the beat and the vibe and the instrumentation. I think you need to watch your dynamic compression just small a bit. I can hear in the small passages the gain exchange is drastic to the ear and when the beat is full on if muffles the sound a bit. I have had some trouble with that in the past myself. But overall a great tune!
Dude this is awesome. reminds me so much of Green Velvet also Miss Kitten and the hacker! Your vox makes this tune, and that you mixed it amazingly well. Faved, and downloaded. done deal, awesome job!
Thanks so much my friend! Had to look up Green Velvet, and I see what you mean. I appreciate your compliment on the vocals! The mixing to some effort, and 37 mixer tracks! Thanks for the fave and DL!
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The bpm is 84 (but I originally went down from 130bpm somehow...nothing really worked and this is what was left of it.)
I can do a version without drums also if it helps.
Thanks!
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Steve
The drums are always really tricky for me, I almost never manage to make my own drums, it just doesn't work. So I'm going to seek some other drumloops to fit in then.
Maybe some changes in the melody also, it gets really boring after a short listen...
(Or then I'll leave this as it is - it's just one of those failures. Nobody is commenting which means it's probably no good. Ha ha ...moving on...)
Thank YOU for listening and commenting!
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