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Description : Well, this went well - NOT.
It accidently became two different songs in one. Or is it coherent at all (the beginning and the end)? Not mastered.
The original track:
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/145860
Vocals/Lyrics by Katie Bregman:
https://www.looperman.com/acapellas/detail/4666
Drums by Boogieman and flute by lelandchapman - thank you for sharing! "Piano" made by me in FL.

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  1. facasgrimm
    facasgrimm on Thu 12th Dec 2013 - 10 years ago

    Very nice. Nothing wrong with not following the generic idea that a song must be structured a certain way. This is a very cool piano accompanying a great voice. Keep it up! Peace from AZ, USA.

  2. SikStyle1
    SikStyle1 on Wed 9th Oct 2013 - 10 years ago

    The piano reminds me of my own. You have an amazing beautiful voice i love it!! Keep it up.

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Hi again!
    Well, the voice is beautiful but unfortunately it doesn't belong to me (I don't really sing at all).

    Here you find the woman behind that voice:
    http://www.looperman.com/users/profile/949529

    Thanks for listening! =)

  3. dolbrey
    dolbrey on Sat 21st Sep 2013 - 10 years ago

    You're good, you're good, you're good!!!!!Salute. the piano takes me away

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Hahaha - thanks!!!
    I'm so glad you liked this.

  4. joshweps
    joshweps on Mon 26th Aug 2013 - 10 years ago

    very nice this Katie Bregman has an amazing voice perfect piano for this song

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Glad to hear - thanks for listening!

  5. davesmith1983
    davesmith1983 on Mon 19th Aug 2013 - 10 years ago

    Very nice track, very well arranged and great one to relax to!

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Thanks for listening! Sorry for late replay.

  6. Darkreine
    Darkreine on Fri 2nd Aug 2013 - 10 years ago

    Like the two track effect, it works for me musically, vocally and any other ally you can think of! Try not to get too rapped up in the technicality, you'll lose your spontaneity and the emotional flow of the song. Great job and a fav from me.

    K;)

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Oh, good! Thank you Kenny!
    Sorry for late reply.

  7. mrwolf14
    mrwolf14 on Fri 2nd Aug 2013 - 10 years ago

    I vote for the two parts to stay together.
    Really loved this: good piano, good atmosphere, wonderful voice and a very tasteful mix.
    Ciao, Domenico

    PS: I think Behnam's right, but I am not sure this is a flaw: in the end you have a good sounding track and this is the most important thing.
    My personal approach is always to first analyze and try to fully understand the vocal part I am using: I try to play the vocal part with an instrument myself to get an idea of the intention of the singer.
    But then... your result is so good that I think you may be right and I am wrong: sometimes too much thinking is not good in art.

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Thanks Domenico!
    Well, about understanding the vocal - I'm not that understanding unfortunately! Why can't they just sing the way I want them to sing??!
    No, just kidding - yes I'll try that next time, not sure if I have the musical level of understanding yet though...

    Thanks for listening and sorry for a late reply!

  8. deciBel
    deciBel on Wed 31st Jul 2013 - 10 years ago

    well ,dear S.J althoughT Steve is some how righT about theme buT I think this beautifull piano ( what a good qualitY ) deserved to be heared & I enjoyed iT aloT.this matter occures for us all, & regarding how music effect's on our brain, I suggest U to take a look to this article if U may minded to www.cnn.com/2013/04/15/health/brain-music-research
    also abouT Katie acapella , she sings so good , buT there's 2 matter here , once her pella was in 6.8 measure line( she too had written 3.4 in description )buT your instrumental music was 4.4 (althought it's easilY solvable ) , also my suggestion abouT vocal after that admirable technical part of modulation is using 2 interval line of that acapella as vocal..buT even U could add some cello & add some SaX or other aerophonics even flutes too after modulation & this nice piece reallY deserved for being hear even withouT vocal as a cinematic track too .apology for long comment S.J.best wishes.___B

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    That was an interesting article!
    And thanks for pointing out some of the flaws to me - sadly my theoretical level in music is non-existent but I'm trying to grasp what you are talking about.

    Noted about the instrumental suggestions - I agree.
    Take care!

  9. brillbilly
    brillbilly on Tue 30th Jul 2013 - 10 years ago

    Well i really enjoyed this!

    beautiful piano,beautiful vocals!.

    For me it's not about perfection,it's about enjoyment.!

    The main thing even if just experimenting is to enjoy what you create!.

    Thumbs up from little old me!

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    You will never grow old - so don't even try!
    Thanks Brillbilly!

  10. MStokes
    MStokes on Tue 30th Jul 2013 - 10 years ago

    yr description + the music makes me think of a place called turnagain arm in alaska where when the full tide comes in it slaps back across the continent and meets itself in the middle and the result i've seen is like a wave standing still - it's unearthly but earthly - rare and beautiful

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Well, that was an unearthly beautiful and poetic review! Thank you for bringing the knowledge of the tide wave standing still...had not heard of the phenomenon before. I'm definitely going to use it in my writing.

    Greetings and a kiss to your cat!

  11. theHumps
    theHumps on Tue 30th Jul 2013 - 10 years ago

    I think the song works well all the way through. The piano sounds nice and it's a nice melody line that works well with the vocals, which are outstanding! Cool track, like it! I read crucethus' comment about George Michael's song, haha, I can see his point but that's a good compliment in my opinion!!

    Cheers!

    Wayne

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Noted! Thank you for listening and reviewing!

  12. evilarmy83
    evilarmy83 on Tue 30th Jul 2013 - 10 years ago

    Very peaceful and chill, excellent work!

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Well, thank you!

  13. crucethus
    crucethus on Tue 30th Jul 2013 - 10 years ago

    I like the drums and percussion towards the end. It's coming together nicely. It's definitely a sound-scape that has your style written all over it! I just realized that your piano chord structure in the end section is similar (not the same as) "Father figure" from George Michael, cool!
    Steve

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Finally a comment!! KIITOS.

    You are right! It sounds a little similar to Father Figure! How strange...Im subconsciously copying George Michael. LOL

    I actually loved his music once. Or still, even?
    Thanks for listening! Im not sure if the two parts of the song really belong together but maybe somebody else is willing to also take a listen and give a settling vote.

    Sorry for babbling, really tired...

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