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Description : Slightly pitched and remastered - is it more in tune now??? Thanks for all the advice so far!!
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Just a very rough beginning, would like to know if it's any idea to continue working on this and what to add?
Amazing Pella from Katie Bregman (kkb0):
https://www.looperman.com/acapellas/detail/4666
Drums by Boogieman, thanks for sharing!

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  1. RampatheSwift
    RampatheSwift on Wed 28th Aug 2013 - 10 years ago

    Took me a moment to get into but we got there well before the end! i love Katie's vocals there top quality. Vocals fit well. You have done a great job with this one. Thanks for the refreshing sounds =)

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Great to hear - thanks for listening!

  2. lipeowen
    lipeowen on Sun 25th Aug 2013 - 10 years ago

    cool =D

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Thanks! =)

  3. InverSound
    InverSound on Tue 30th Jul 2013 - 10 years ago

    Youre right im being an idiot, I have bipolar disorder sorry,

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Oh, then I'm sorry too. Having that disorder isn't easy. The good side to it is that people with it very often also are brilliantly gifted in artistic and creative fields. As yourself.
    Just remember to eat properly, sleep regularly and take care of yourself and you'll often be fine most of the time.

    /mom over and out ;)

  4. Tumbleweed
    Tumbleweed on Mon 29th Jul 2013 - 10 years ago

    Yeah.....now you`re cooking SJ....sounds good....clear as a bell.....way to go....Ed

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Great! Thanks Ed. =)

  5. doudei
    doudei on Sun 28th Jul 2013 - 10 years ago

    a lot of character in this one, sounds pretty in tune too to me! you should definitely continue with that, maybe work on the vocal integration some more but also don't over it. lovely piano. i think keeping it simple and minimalistic is a good way to go here to gradually sculpt the character this track holds.

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Thanks for listening and for the advice, doudei!
    I'll continue working on it.

  6. Planetjazzbass
    Planetjazzbass on Sun 28th Jul 2013 - 10 years ago

    Hey SJ....this is great!..love the huge sound stage present throughout,piano and vocals work so well together....with a track like this where space is at a premium it would be very easy to add lots of extra elements,which I might add could overwhelm the ambience you've already created....however if viewed as an audio drawing where the primary consideration is keeping things in perspective,adding things like electronic transients,strings,percussives etc can be incorporated successfully as long as they remain behind the reverb model you've created and move in conjunction with subtle volume changes...less is more here like a ballet stag...excellent work so far! cheers Dave

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Wow, one of Loopermans finest musicians listening and actually liking! May I kiss your feet? Hey don't run away!
    Well, I also thought about that adding stuff maybe would ruin the hole song...at least the plane piano-voice-flute part. Maybe it's fine as it is? Less IS more. Often.

    Besides, I still really dont know what to add. It would be great with some real instrumentals, a guitar or what ever...which I don't have or play.
    Need to take a break from this and come back later.

    Thanks for the advice, Dave!

  7. crucethus
    crucethus on Sun 28th Jul 2013 - 10 years ago

    Lagom!

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Vad bra, tack Steve! =D

  8. Darkreine
    Darkreine on Sat 27th Jul 2013 - 10 years ago

    This is really amazing work SJ, you are progressing at lightning speed, Great job.

    K;)

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Thanks Kenny!
    I have some excellent supervisors here, including you.

  9. VickyDan
    VickyDan on Sat 27th Jul 2013 - 10 years ago

    Hello ....

    A subtle and clever musical montage, .... A beautiful melody but also surprising.
    The piano brings here a mysterious side that I like ....
    I agree here, with leading commentators, concerning the voice and reverb.
    This does not detract from the originality of the concept .... and I hi here your talent of creator .....

    Dan

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Hi Dan and thank you!
    Yes, I will listen to the advice and remaster this. Was going to do that today but something else came up (some laundry and a thunder storm...lol)

    Take care!

  10. drigney
    drigney on Sat 27th Jul 2013 - 10 years ago

    I am really loving this track. It's melody is soothing and awesome. Please keep up the good work.

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    I'm very pleased to hear that, thank you!

    And very welcome to the Loop!
    =)

  11. crucethus
    crucethus on Sat 27th Jul 2013 - 10 years ago

    Ok , now were in tune, and the piano sounds great down tuned. Now my other suggestion is I agree with Ed in that you should back down a bit on the reverb on her voice. Then it will sound much better with the piano, but it is becoming a spectacular start.! Keep doing!

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Great!!
    Thanks for pointing out these things to me, Steve. (But really - my beloved reverb!!? OK, I'll cut it down a bit.)

    Now I noticed that I forgot to fix the piano on the drumside of the track - darn thing...to be continued.
    =)

  12. Tumbleweed
    Tumbleweed on Fri 26th Jul 2013 - 10 years ago

    well...I think you`re off to a fine start SJ...I love piano (even though I sometimes claim to be an ol guitar guy)..perhaps reduce the volume very slightly and maybe try inserting a mid-side processor to widen the piano and leave a vocal spot in the middle (there are some decent free ones...check Brainworx Music for their BXSolo)..I don`t mind quite a bit of reverb..although I might reduce it a touch (its a personal taste think I think)...also..on your reverb setting...set the pre-delay quite long (50ms or so) and that will allow the initial vocal phrases to sound clearer before the reverb kicks in...The disonance isn`t overly concerning but you could check the key relationship between the piano & vocal & perhaps get them closer.......will have to check back & hear how you make out....Keep it rolling...and a well done to you....Ed

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    What a great guy you are, Ed!! Thank you for taking your time to listen and giving lots of very good advice. Especially that about the BXSolo - I'm checking in to that and the rest of it first thing tomorrow.

    Right now I've just used FL's stereo enhanger to widen the piano a bit and looked over the pitching part.

  13. Mosestone
    Mosestone on Fri 26th Jul 2013 - 10 years ago

    Piano is too loud, chocking the track. need to keep an eye on your output spectrum so the do not peek red if you no what I mean. Put the piano stereo wide and bass no more at at 10 o'clock possittion and keep it very suttle. that is all i can say for know, beautiful track you is working on and would love to hear how you will get on with this. good job :)

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Great to get all the advice - thanks!!
    I've remastered a bit just now but there is more to be done.
    Thanks for Everything and take care!

  14. ScottFranco
    ScottFranco on Fri 26th Jul 2013 - 10 years ago

    Nothing wrong with voice and piano. I like it the way it is, but if you decide to go further with it, I'll check it out, too and probably like it.

    Cheers,
    Scott

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    OK, thanks for the listen, Scott!
    =)

  15. crucethus
    crucethus on Fri 26th Jul 2013 - 10 years ago

    I was just checking on the piano, your piano song starts in the key of C#, the original accapella is in the key of B or 2 steps down. The vox just seems out of tune to my ears. did you tune the pitch of the pella at all?

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    No, didn't pitch at all. There is a dissonance in there wich I sort of liked, but of course it's not supposed to be totally out of tune!
    Thanks Steve! I'll pitch the vocals and check what happens with the song that way.

    The "piano" needs a lot of refining.

  16. Spivkurl
    Spivkurl on Fri 26th Jul 2013 - 10 years ago

    Sounds kind of like a live performance! Pretty cool! These are nice vocals! Good work!

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    I love that pella - It's just amazing! But I have to get better at imitating pianoplaying in FL. Thank you for listening - really pleased over you liking it!

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