Listen To On This Day Rock Song By ImproveWithError At Looperman.com

Wow, I like this one a lot. Your voice is definitely better suited for the lower register as cru mentioned. Nothing wrong with your other works, since this is a hobby for you, its not that important that you train since I would think its more of an outlet for you than anything. Seriously, your mixing has improved so much. Sounds super wide and professional. The vocal could been bigger in my opinion, even though it still cuts through the mix nicely. All the instruments and recording are flawless, I have no critiques there. Good stuff, buddy. Your music is constantly improving and I'm very happy to witness that. All the best,

Brado

Hey Kyle, this has a big sound to it, almost like a U2 song(Rattle and Hum period) with the keys/pad rolling in the background as the drums pound away and the singer wails! All the elements are there.

I know what you mean about uploading because you are tired of mixing it, lol!! We must listen to bits and pieces of songs hundreds of times, at least. I usually try to have 3 or 4 songs going at once so I don't get too bored with one project.

Take care!

Wayne

Probably one of your better tracks. Mostly because you stay in the lower ranges of your vocal stratus. When you go higher you get very "Pitchy" Flat, which is in most of your songs that you sing in in a higher plateau. That being said, you have some fundamentals of singing. Why not invest in a vocal coach. Listen; it takes balls to sing on any track, and share it with the whole wide world (I give you a million credits for doing it) . Believe me I am my worst critic of my own voice which is why you don't hear me very often sing. But you have to solve those pitch issues if your gonna demo your songs or else no one will bite when it could be an amazing song underneath. Find a vocal coach and practice..you will get better at it. I believe in you.
Cru

Hi. Good track. Simpl. ;))