Tags : | Rock | 4.58 MB

Description : A new light rock song that I wrote and recorded, nothing fancy. I played everything but the drums and sang on the track. Could probably still use a little work but I thought I would share it since I am sick of messing with it. If you like it feel free to download it. Thanks, Kyle

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  1. BradoSanz
    BradoSanz on Thu 5th May 2016 - 3 years ago

    Wow, I like this one a lot. Your voice is definitely better suited for the lower register as cru mentioned. Nothing wrong with your other works, since this is a hobby for you, its not that important that you train since I would think its more of an outlet for you than anything. Seriously, your mixing has improved so much. Sounds super wide and professional. The vocal could been bigger in my opinion, even though it still cuts through the mix nicely. All the instruments and recording are flawless, I have no critiques there. Good stuff, buddy. Your music is constantly improving and I'm very happy to witness that. All the best,


  2. theHumps
    theHumps on Thu 5th May 2016 - 3 years ago

    Hey Kyle, this has a big sound to it, almost like a U2 song(Rattle and Hum period) with the keys/pad rolling in the background as the drums pound away and the singer wails! All the elements are there.

    I know what you mean about uploading because you are tired of mixing it, lol!! We must listen to bits and pieces of songs hundreds of times, at least. I usually try to have 3 or 4 songs going at once so I don't get too bored with one project.

    Take care!


    Reply by ImproveWithError

    Hey Wayne thanks for stopping by and listening, its always appreciated. I have been trying to find more time to write and record, still not as much as I would like but at least I can do it a little. I am able to work on about 1 track a month which is good compared to the 3-4 months it was taking. I put in a studio at the school that I teach at so now when I have free time I try to get in there and utilize it. Anyway, thanks again.


  3. crucethus
    crucethus on Thu 5th May 2016 - 3 years ago

    Probably one of your better tracks. Mostly because you stay in the lower ranges of your vocal stratus. When you go higher you get very "Pitchy" Flat, which is in most of your songs that you sing in in a higher plateau. That being said, you have some fundamentals of singing. Why not invest in a vocal coach. Listen; it takes balls to sing on any track, and share it with the whole wide world (I give you a million credits for doing it) . Believe me I am my worst critic of my own voice which is why you don't hear me very often sing. But you have to solve those pitch issues if your gonna demo your songs or else no one will bite when it could be an amazing song underneath. Find a vocal coach and practice..you will get better at it. I believe in you.

    Reply by ImproveWithError

    Hey Cru, thanks for checking out the track. I know what you mean on the vocals, I do this for fun/hobby. I wouldn't mind taking some vocal lessons but I don't really have time. I feel like I am still trying to find my voice, I think I am getting closer, but of course I still need way more practice. I think its harder to record my vocals with my headphones on as well, I get a good mix in my cans but it is still a bit awkward. The good thing at least is that I post on the internet and I can hide behind a fake name to cover up my pitch problems, lol. Thanks again for listening and the comments, always appreciated.


  4. TinyFinger
    TinyFinger on Mon 2nd May 2016 - 3 years ago

    Hi. Good track. Simpl. ;))

    Reply by ImproveWithError

    Hey thanks for stopping by and listening.


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