Immortals - Zachvenus

9th May 2016 09:37 - 10 years ago
Description : Hey this is a song about the grind and hard times that make us reflect on how we got to where we are and the changes we inevitably make in life. Dedicated to my late mother and everyone struggling to stop struggling. REALLY NEED FEEDBACK please help or tell me what you do like. If you leave a comment i will gladly return the favor on one of your tracks

Comments (13)

If you have time take a listen and give zachvenus some feedback.

TaniaNicole
TaniaNicole 26th Mar 2017 14:37 - 9 years ago
Thank You so much Zac. I will definitely send you this link once filming is completed. If all goes well, it will be around the end of the year. Keep creating fantastic music. Xoxoxo
TaniaNicole
TaniaNicole 25th Mar 2017 02:27 - 9 years ago
OMG Zachvenus!!! I love this track and the vocals. Would you be interested in allowing me to use it in a web series that I am writing? Keep up the great work!
zachvenus
zachvenus replied 25th Mar 2017 - 9 years ago
well thank you so much, and yes for sure use it, just please drop a link in a comment for me so i can see it, super pumped.
STILLMINe
STILLMINe 5th Jun 2016 17:15 - 10 years ago
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zacvoos
zacvoos 13th May 2016 20:29 - 10 years ago
Hey Zac. I'll be honest I only found your profile cause your name is Zac too lmao. Anyway. This is definitely not my kind of music but it does remind me a little bit of The Secret Handshake. Though not as "disco sounding" as his stuff. But this is still great. Kinda hitting my feels right now. Fave and a download from me.
zachvenus
zachvenus replied 14th May 2016 - 10 years ago
thanks for listening your material is pretty rad in itself. Hopefully soon we can get on a big tour and party non stop. btw looked into the secret handshake and it isn't bad but I'm def trying to evoke more soul vocally.
Filaofsoul
Filaofsoul 13th May 2016 18:22 - 10 years ago
Man this is great production on all fronts. Breaks are spot on. Good to hear song with lyrics. Like the way you ended the song but I was ready for some more so was a 3 peat. Enjoyed!

Filãofsoul
delfina49
delfina49 11th May 2016 20:13 - 10 years ago
great job good luck
zachvenus
zachvenus replied 11th May 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks much! Keep listening :)
dyldonomus
dyldonomus 11th May 2016 05:50 - 10 years ago
good track bro waiting for your next one!
crucethus
crucethus 11th May 2016 05:35 - 10 years ago
It is an awesome sound. It's like a merger of R&B and emo in some dark ways. Your voice is low in the key register. I am wondering can you sing an octave higher(in the chorus), because that's what you need to do to make this one over the top. (and not just with a falsetto embellished with autotune) Otherwise no one is going to pay attention to this one sadly I must say because it is a good tune.
crudatruth
zachvenus
zachvenus replied 11th May 2016 - 10 years ago
wow thank you so much for taking the time to check it out and I will definitely put some work into the chorus as you said to ensure this track is as great as possible. Thanks again and I hope you understand how crucial specific input such as yours is to a solo artist with no one to turn to :)
TayaliJeffrey
TayaliJeffrey 10th May 2016 23:44 - 10 years ago
beautiful approach to the tracks love the adlids to the hook awesomely well done nice melody to the track
keep up the good work
zachvenus
zachvenus replied 11th May 2016 - 10 years ago
thanks again for the feedback, Your music is moving as well!
fric
fric 10th May 2016 18:24 - 10 years ago
cccccool thankssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ZeeHipHop
ZeeHipHop 10th May 2016 16:47 - 10 years ago
Very tight track. I did struggle with hearing the main lead vocals at the beginning. Maybe they could be louder and the guitars a tad lower for that intro bit (that could just be me, ofcourse). I'd basically raise your voice a bit more esp for the first verse. It seems to correct itself after that. Just my 2c.
Other than that, you have a wonderful track right here.Keep them coming.
zachvenus
zachvenus replied 10th May 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks for the honest feedback, It will go miles :)
Dennel
Dennel 9th May 2016 22:16 - 10 years ago
"Great Production, Great Subject Matter = Great Track!" Hey Zac, great job man. I enjoyed this song from start to finish, I hear the R&B flavor there but also "Pop". Very nice vocals and arrangment; and because of your accent (which I'm unsure of) it gives the tune it's own distinct sound. A clean professional sound and overall great feel, very well done.

I'm sure you much like myself must find it very frustrating when other artist listen to your track and do not leave a comment. To me I take that as a personal sign of "disrespect" to the artist who took the time to create the work. Even if you do not like the work, you can still post a comment and give constructive criticism. I have always made it a point to post a comment after listening to a artists work because it's just the right thing to do.

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zachvenus
zachvenus replied 10th May 2016 - 10 years ago
thank you so much seems you know your way around some euphoric tunage yourself Dennel. Glad i found you and your art on here
MaxBonsi
MaxBonsi 9th May 2016 20:47 - 10 years ago
Oh man! This one is for sure one of the best tracks I heard here on looperman till now
Good vocal, arrangements and mix also
What else should I say
My very congrats to u!

Max
zachvenus
zachvenus replied 10th May 2016 - 10 years ago
thank you so much, thanks for taking the time to give it a once over :)

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