Lets Forget About My Inconvincible Father - ElenaSatine

6th Mar 2014 15:46 - 12 years ago
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Description : this is to my boyfriend who will check out site from out ...
come on :)
let's forget about my dady...

and I do not want this to be sung .
i just want it to be evocative .
and i'm looking for someon who can add beat to this .
please drop your words in my box.
thank you much much guys :)

Comments (31)

If you have time take a listen and give ElenaSatine some feedback.

MahanMahan
MahanMahan 14th Nov 2018 11:59 - 7 years ago
Hi,

So I'm not quite convinced that the track is at 120 BPM. To me, it sounds more like 78 / 156 BPM. Regardless, I accepted your drum challenge and here is:

https://soundcloud.com/mahan-mahan/lady-in-red-aud-normalize1542142674861-online-audio-convertercom

Hope you approve, or in the least are amused by it.

Mahan
crucethus
crucethus 14th May 2016 04:10 - 10 years ago
Ohh this needs a breakbeat sound for sure for sure. I could do something massively powerful with this one.
Cru
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 14th Feb 2017 - 9 years ago
Hi Steve .
thanks and I'm really sorry about late reply .
I'll be really glad to see what you may do with this one .
feel free to contact me , if you need anything .
thank you very much again .

Elena :)
BradoSanz
BradoSanz 14th May 2016 03:16 - 10 years ago
Hey I remember this one! Nice to see it pop up again. Whats the BPM of the track?

Brado
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 14th Feb 2017 - 9 years ago
thank you very much .
it's on 120bmp .
sorry for late responce .
thanks again .
:)
jemzax
jemzax 25th Jan 2016 04:15 - 10 years ago
Love the intro and the track!!!!
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 14th Feb 2017 - 9 years ago
thank you very much .
:)
Spivkurl
Spivkurl 5th May 2015 02:28 - 11 years ago
Hey, this is just excellent rock music! You know it has to be good, as it can stand on it's own without drums very easily. The riffs are used creatively, and you've got some cool panning tricks in this one. I guess my main request would be making the gain a little more gentle, either in mixing or mastering. Really it's so cool this way though! Did you ever find anyone to do some drums? Faved!
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 14th Feb 2017 - 9 years ago
Hello Patrick
sorry for such a late reply , I was absent for a long time .

yes someone has commented me about doing some drum line
for it , but I prefer you .
feel free to contact me about this matter .

thank you very much for comment and kind words .

Elena :)
BradoSanz
BradoSanz 30th Jan 2015 19:54 - 11 years ago
I might be able to get you a drum track for this one :P I'll see what I can do!
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 14th Feb 2017 - 9 years ago
thanks again .
another friend of mine will help me about drum line .
but thank you very much for suggestion .

Elena :)
BradoSanz
BradoSanz 30th Jan 2015 19:46 - 11 years ago
It sounds good, but its a little overdriven. I'm getting clipping on my end on some of the louder parts. Lowering the volume will fix this.
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 14th Feb 2017 - 9 years ago
thank you very much and sorry for late responce .
Prelude
Prelude 2nd Jan 2015 02:44 - 11 years ago
! WOW !

I'm surprised !

it's a superb rock Elena !
Congrats !

:) Cindy
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 14th Feb 2017 - 9 years ago
hey Cindy sorry I was late .
thank you very much my friend :)

Elena :)
Cepho
Cepho 23rd Dec 2014 23:19 - 11 years ago
GOOD INTRO FOR MY HOME VIDEO THANK YOU
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 14th Feb 2017 - 9 years ago
thank you very much .
:)
razor63
razor63 18th Dec 2014 11:12 - 11 years ago
well that woke me up
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 23rd Dec 2014 - 11 years ago
:)
cheers!
RichieWinn
RichieWinn 22nd Jun 2014 21:57 - 12 years ago
Hi LadyinRed

Well if you haven't yet found someone to put beats on this track then let me offer my services! It's great. I like the changing mood of the track and how "wanders" in all kinds of directions. Please contact me through my profile if you would like some help with this track.

Richie
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 12th Nov 2014 - 11 years ago
heii YEEEEEPP !! :)
Holla Richie :)
thank you much much for accepting my collab request .
i'm going to send you a loopermanian message through your profile .
can't wait to see what you gonna do with it !
:)
Elena
Tumbleweed
Tumbleweed 29th Apr 2014 18:08 - 12 years ago
I am way late in catching up with this one Elena...but glad I finally did...this is good rocking stuff...reminds me just a little of a group I used to listen to a long time ago (Steppenwolf) who did many of my fav rock songs...good straignt forward arrangement..those little drops/breaks work well...You should finish this one...some banging drums would be great and maybe a couple of short screaming lead parts...well done ladyinred......Ed
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 6th May 2014 - 12 years ago
:) Ed I'm proud of your kind words .
about drum i wish someone can help me ...
i'm not really good abiut beats ...
and regarding screaming lead i wished someone like Behnam or you was kind enough to do that !
cause i can't play lead guitar.
Ed thank you much much for the words.
i appreciate your time and comment .
:) Elena
Gioia
Gioia 26th Apr 2014 19:48 - 12 years ago
hello. at the beginning of your track the mix of your loops is not so cunning and that is "heardable"(while playing the song with my headphone). in the right ear the sound is too loud, in my opinion. 0.22 second is disturbing. the second bridge is very beautiful.
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 26th Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
Hello
you might be right !
generally i don't know and don't care about mix and mastering too much !
currently my focus is on my composing skill and
electric guitar playing , but i should learn mix later ..
i respect and appreciate your comment .
:)
thank you much much for listening and for you dropped
these words in my box .
deciBel
deciBel 25th Apr 2014 13:46 - 12 years ago
Elena our tallented mentalitY & musical skill has improved & this is sensible buT this is 4th track of yours I remember in A & E & tempo about 140bmp ...
best wishes..__B
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 26th Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
yes Behnam you are absolutely right !
it's wonderfull how you recognize scales!
good point and worth considering .
i shuould try on the other scales and tempo too .
i appreciate you much much Behnam .
very usefull comment as usual of yours.
take care my friend. :)
Elena
FreeRadical
FreeRadical 25th Apr 2014 06:52 - 12 years ago
It's an expression that gets over used in my opinion, but this really does ROCK!!!
It's heavy, grungy and a little bit folky at the same time.
You say you want a beat added to it. Why not just go to the loop section and look for some drum loops? There's literally hundreds of them.
Failing that i guess i could have a go but it sounds like a pretty challenging piece and it could take a while.
Great work here, i'm pleased i listened to this.
FR
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 25th Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
i know how should i find drum loops but i haven't
used drum because i know nothing about drum and my beats
never satisfies me ..
you're wellcome to gonna do something about drum
i appreciate your kind words and time to comment.
thank you much much.
:)
RioMare
RioMare 9th Apr 2014 07:49 - 12 years ago
Great great great!
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 25th Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
:)
thank you thank you thank you !
:)
beerling1970
beerling1970 8th Apr 2014 20:22 - 12 years ago
OMG how cool this is :)faved and dowmnloaded

Steve
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 25th Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
:) Hi Steve
you made my day ! thank you much much for dropping these words in my box.
i really appreciate your time and point of view.
:)
srbrown7
srbrown7 8th Apr 2014 12:01 - 12 years ago
Great riffs and sounds!...Whats the tempo?
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 25th Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
:)
thank you much much for the feedback.
tempo is 138bmp .
it could be nice to work with you .
Elena
brujiliana
brujiliana 7th Apr 2014 22:50 - 12 years ago
Really cool!
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 25th Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
:)
thank you very much.
locatednowhere
locatednowhere 29th Mar 2014 20:36 - 12 years ago
This track is SCREAMING for drums
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 25th Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
hihihi yes !
thank you much much for this cute feedback.
clindsay
clindsay 29th Mar 2014 11:52 - 12 years ago
Like the energy - the drop starting at about 1:09 could be longer - it has interesting riffs. Like the balls to the wall aspect of this one - could be sick with a collab.
-clindsay
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 25th Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
thank you clindsay .
:)
guillermoducca
guillermoducca 29th Mar 2014 11:40 - 12 years ago
VERY NICE....
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 25th Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
:)
thank you!
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 28th Mar 2014 16:19 - 12 years ago
That was fun!
You have some of my favorite music ingredients in here!
The guitar around 1:05 is really "darkish" ... and the final part is intricate ... I like it!
Looking forward to hear it with a beat...
Ciao, Domenico
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 25th Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
Hello Domenico :)
you are very kind my friend
much much appreciations.
Elena :)
topvega
topvega 16th Mar 2014 01:56 - 12 years ago
Pretty interesting stuff....gets a little monotonous at points but it has it's moments. Overall nice job though.

tv
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 28th Mar 2014 - 12 years ago
thank you much much for your taken time and comment.
i apreciate your words.
:)
Leverett
Leverett 11th Mar 2014 11:09 - 12 years ago
very powerful and elegant at the same time... it's not easy to add beat to a full track, though, you should upload stems.
Nice work, however.
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 28th Mar 2014 - 12 years ago
:)
thank you much much for stopping by .
yes i know that's not very easy to add beat to this built track but i will send all needed materials
to collaborator .
thank you again :)
sasan
sasan 11th Mar 2014 10:55 - 12 years ago
its very good very perfect
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 28th Mar 2014 - 12 years ago
thank you much much .
:)
Orlando51
Orlando51 8th Mar 2014 19:07 - 12 years ago
This is exceptionaly cool!!

Congrats____Orlando
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 10th Mar 2014 - 12 years ago
:)
thank you much much for dropping these words.
i appreciatr your comment.
onivertja1
onivertja1 7th Mar 2014 01:43 - 12 years ago
Hi ladyinred! Love the sound and style, would definitely like to play with some drum parts
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 10th Mar 2014 - 12 years ago
:)
that is okay .
just please give credit to me by collaboration
and feat in title of track when you done and
it's uploading turn for you.
i love to hear what you gonna do with it.
can't wait for that.
thank you much much .:)
StrawHatDJ
StrawHatDJ 6th Mar 2014 18:22 - 12 years ago
This track is now added to my group of 'One of the ones'
Loud and Proud, oh yeeeeaahhh !
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 10th Mar 2014 - 12 years ago
thank you for dropping these words.
i appreciate your time and comment.
:)
Candelaria
Candelaria 6th Mar 2014 17:08 - 12 years ago
lol !
cool title !
wink .
i've had that time..like you now .
fathers will never convince if you wait for them
to allow !
live your free life girl !
:)
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 10th Mar 2014 - 12 years ago
:)
so you have had these days..?
i'm really curious to know then what happened ?
lol!
thank you much much Candelaria .
yes i will live my free life.
:)
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking 6th Mar 2014 16:31 - 12 years ago
I'm looping this track, especially that part from 0:55 and forward.

Superb!!!
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 10th Mar 2014 - 12 years ago
:)
that's a loop of acid pro i've used.
but please don't say this to the others !
lol!
wink.
:)
it's really good to see you here.

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