theHumps

I like it! It has a Renaissance atmosphere, very classical feel to it. It's a nice little piece of music, well done to both of you!

Wayne

What's up Richie! Been a while, hope all is well!

Wow, what a great track, recording sounds pretty sweet, nice and even. Pauline has a great voice. I went to your website and watched a few vids. Echo Beach? YES!! Haven't heard that song in so long, lol! Well done on the cover!

Wayne

Fantastic track Behnam. I thought my coffee was wearing off when things slowed down, lol. Very beautiful track, peaceful and happy feeling. Cool effects on the instruments and the slow change in the middle was unexpected. I always enjoy percussion in tracks, it really brightens up a song and makes it so much more interesting to listen to. Enjoyed this very much!!

Wayne

I love pop music, good pop music like this though. Nice vocal track. Catchy beat, I like when the guitars come in, they really fatten the song up. Cool piano, really carries the song imho. I like all kinds of music whether it's live instruments or electronic. Sounds good!

Wayne

Damn, wasn't expecting that! Pretty cool track dude, lots of intensity, I had to give this a couple of listens. Very professional sound, mix is spot on. Excellent track!!

Wayne

Impressive piece of music, big sounding and a bit delicate at the same time. Feels a bit cinematic to me. I like it, good job!

Wayne

Very nice song. Great use of the loops, all seem to enhance the song in some way. You have a lovely voice and you did a great job on the singing, in both languages. Very sweet track! Seems to cut off right at the end

Wayne

Now that was a nice dreamy waltz!! Some cool rock sounds here, not too bad sounding for electric instruments. Great musical idea, driving beats and ripping guitars, that always works!

Wayne

That's a pretty crazy sound you got there! I would have no idea how to create such sounds unless they were presets, I'm impressed. I don't listen to much dubstep(just here) and I notice so many different takes on the genre. Pretty upbeat and some interesting musical ideas, nice job!

Wayne

I think the song works well all the way through. The piano sounds nice and it's a nice melody line that works well with the vocals, which are outstanding! Cool track, like it! I read crucethus' comment about George Michael's song, haha, I can see his point but that's a good compliment in my opinion!!

Cheers!

Wayne

This is cool, a little rnb, hh, dubstep and all creatively packaged together. Nice track, mixed well and I think it has lots of potential. Glad to see ya back!

Wayne

Damn, this rocks man! You definitely paid homage to Deep Purple here, loved the keys tracks especially. Big drum sound as well. Well done on the mix!

Wayne

Nice collab fellas! Cool groove and a great jam, especially that heavy breathing by Zappo!! My friends in a band back in the 80's wrote a song about mr. Holmes but it was a fast rock tune, lol, he was a legend and worthy of songs!!

Nicely put together, nice funky sound, love it Dave!

Wayne

This is pretty nice. Relaxing and invigorating at the same time. Going great with my coffee, thanks for sharing!

Wayne

Since we have been discussing waveforms in the forums, might as well take a look at this one. : ) In my opinion, it looks a bit over compressed and sounds a bit flat. If you cut back on the compression you will start to hear the kick drum and snare start to pop out a bit more and the acoustic will sit better and well, everything else will stand out more. There isn't much dynamics here and it almost sound distorted. Now I'm just giving you some constructive criticism, don't hate me, lol!!

Cool track, it has everything in a track I love, acoustic guitars, cool lead fills, great singing and catchy beat. And it's a great collab as well so congrats on that too. I think you could get a smoother sounding mix, that's all!

Wayne

Damn, it's been a while! Good to hear things are right where you left off, liking the feel and vibe of this one, laid back and chillin' music. Don't be such a stranger to these parts. Take care!

Wayne

The music and vocals work so good here and I really enjoyed listening to this. You did a nice job with Kyle's vocals, great collab!

Wayne

I agree with Kenny about how nice your voice sounds and about being a little flat in a few spots but it was still a very nice track to listen to. I think with a little more practice you will figure it out and then the sky's the limit!!

I noticed some hiss at the beginning that fades out in a few seconds. I used a plugin called "adaptive noise reduction" in Audition 3, that when applied would do the same thing. It aggravated me to hear that hiss so what I used to do was reverse the track and as long as I left a few seconds of silence at the end of the track, the noise reduction would do that fading out thing during the silence. Then you reverse the track back to normal and chop off the hiss fade off the end of the track, leaving you with no hiss anywhere during the music. Not sure if that's whats happening here but it sounds like you can fix that minor issue.

Well I liked the track a lot, nice job!

Wayne

Great collab guys! Great singing and powerful music combine into some kind of musical cosmic sauce of delight, lol!! Sweet guitar tones and a great mix, excellent!!

Wayne

What a lovely track, the piano intro was stirring enough but when the orchestration and pad/fx started I was blown away. This could work in so many genres of movies as a cinematic piece it is so well constructed. Once again, I'm impressed with your talent!

Cheers Behnam!

Wayne

I agree with Bear, this has a Neil Young feel to it, which is a big compliment. Loved the way you ended my guitar loop, that was cool. Big effects on the acoustic, sounds good. I'm switching over to Ableton 9 as my main daw and I'm playing a lot with the eq's, reverbs and compressors trying to get a bigger acoustic sound. This is very well put together and a great mix. Nice use of electronic sounds that add to the feel of the song so much. You seem to have a good feel for what works in that regard.

Enjoyed the listen!

Wayne

Pretty awesome!! Love the instruments you chose, the composition is lovely and stirring, simply awesome!! Such a free flowing song with no bounds. You are a very talented song writer. I will be downloading and fav'ing this so thanks for sharing!

I will stop by your page and will be listening to much more of your music especially to your track with my loop in it, thanks for letting me know you used it.

Wayne

This is great! I don't listen to much of this music but the intensity and madness here is just great! Your vocals were pretty impressive, I don't see how people can do that without blowing out their vocal chords but you seem to be able to do it. Creative track, very well put together, great guitar, a sick drum track, cool ending and fun, great job!

Any song about beer has to be a good song, right? lol!! I am going to download this so I want to say thanks for sharing, cheers!

Wayne

Nice, totally enjoyed it. Loved the vocals and lyrics. You are quite talented and look forward to hearing more! Gonna dl this so just wanna say thanks for sharing!

Wayne

Really nice track, production is great. Great vocals, reminds me a bit of Sting. Liked the effects on the vocals, gives them a nice depth in the mix. Well done!!

Wayne