Estrofas Erroneas - Vicen

6th Dec 2011 08:20 - 14 years ago
Description : A love song about summer that evaporated in the cold winter.
Lyrics in English in lyrics section

Comments (5)

If you have time take a listen and give Vicen some feedback.

ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 8th Dec 2011 16:41 - 14 years ago
Vicen, great pop song here. Your voice is a perfect match for the music. Thanks for posting the translation as well. While it is nice to know what you are singing, your music is universal in its appeal.

A very nice job and an enjoyable listen.

Bear
Vicen
Vicen replied 8th Dec 2011 - 14 years ago
Thank you very much. I appreciate your words. It's always nice to know that like a song.
SpellJammer
SpellJammer 7th Dec 2011 17:51 - 14 years ago
Powerful emotions in this Vicen. You have such a cool raspy voice man. Big fav on this one mate. Nice pianos as well.
Vicen
Vicen replied 7th Dec 2011 - 14 years ago
I'm glad you liked it. I thank you for your words and your taking time to listen to the song.
MStokes
MStokes 6th Dec 2011 22:04 - 14 years ago
i can't find the lyrics page!
this has such a character i need to understand, he sounds like a broken-hearted man becoming a grump - the turn in the weather, the turn in events = the frost inside - a fragile one creating a hard surface - the story i imagine listening
Vicen
Vicen replied 7th Dec 2011 - 14 years ago
I do not find them. But if you do not need the lyrics ... You've come to the Diana, in the heart. Anyway to see the subtleties:
Stanzas wrong, a lack of love.
She never came back.
Fallen Stars of a blue sky.
Night that never returned.

Remember to turn in the room
It's raining in your heart.
The sun shining, saying goodbye,
that summer never came back.

Raging wind, falling leaves.
Days will be lost.
Your eyes lost in a song,
that the time never erased.

And still raining in your heart,
tears into a song.
The lights on: more than two o'clock.
Insomnia in your room.

Flowers that grow around you.
The time of the sun returned.
Looking up your eyes in a song,
the wind takes you.

And still raining in your heart,
tears into a song.
The lights on: are more than two.
Insomnia in your room.
Remember to turn, avoiding the sun.
She never came back.
theHumps
theHumps 6th Dec 2011 21:01 - 14 years ago
Hey Vicen, nice pop song. Your vocals sound right out front and are nice and clear, great job recording them. Maybe a bit more reverb to set them in the mix a bit more. I liked the instruments you chose for this, it has a positive upbeat feel but it is simply stated as far as the music goes. To me that is a very good combination, the right instruments in the right amount. I really liked this, great job!

Wayne
Vicen
Vicen replied 6th Dec 2011 - 14 years ago
The voice mixing with the rest of the music is really my ear has not yet mastered (every time I do it differently). I'm glad you liked it. It was a simple melody, but I liked from the first moment and I would not add anything more. I'm glad you liked it.
Silvestre
Silvestre 6th Dec 2011 17:05 - 14 years ago
Una mas mi amigo esta me recuerda mis tiempos de la escuela cuando me escapava de ves encuando por ahi .

La verdad en cada una de tus canciones se aprecia la originalidad de cada una y esta no es la esepcion cada ves ves que te escucho siempre surge esa particularidad de tu personalidad grandioso tesoro que tienes muy unico

buena cancion amigo
Sly
Vicen
Vicen replied 6th Dec 2011 - 14 years ago
Gracias amigo, por todas tus palabras. No sabes cuanto te lo agradezco.

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