You've put together a mix of influences that all gel together and seem to works pretty good together but it is certainly different sounding. At first it had an alternative rock feel to me but at the same time the music was more geared towards the electronic side of music making. Music in the early/mid 80's was taking on this feel but this is still different from that. Maybe it has a more futuristic sound than a retro one though, technology shining through and helping out to shape the sound.
Dear Wayne, I like how you put it and I think you're right. This, as probably all my music, comes out of a soup of influences that's really just the stuff I grew up listening to, which goes back across the last 5 or 6 decades. Different to me is a good word. I long ago accepted the fact that I'm strange, weird, and odd. That this piece is maybe a bit baffling musically I'm ok with. In the end we just make stuff we like to listen to, pretty much, and this is one I would crank up on the road to Vegas.
Oh yeah, this rocks! I would call this rock. 2 shredding guitars is always a good thing, imo. :) This is Friday afternoon, driving home from work music. Def will pump up the blood pressure.
Thanks, Wayne. I appreciate the kind words and the listen and feedback. I, unfortunately, lost the Master to this and a bunch of other tracks in a computer crash. I have been debating about going in and trying to re-record them again.
Love the guitar you have going on, sits in the mix big and has a cool tone and effects. The two parts are working great together. Catchy number, rock a billy, early rock n roll feel with a bit of a modern upgrade as well.
Vocals sound good to me, maybe a touch more reverb. I like your version, the drum change before the 2 minute point added an interesting change and took it to a cool place, kind of a surf beat.
Cool jazz/funk/fusion... track! A gel of influences make me think of early to mid 70's stylized music. The guitar playing has a nice tone and effects on it and the keys and horn work well with it. I think the percussion is sufficient for a beat, hi hats being phased in and out is interesting. Nice mix too!
This has a summertime feel to it, sippin' suds at the beach! The vocals in general sound good, recorded and mixed well, imo. Cool effects on some of the vox, gives the song something a little different in those parts. Like I said, sounds like summer, sun beating down, beats setting the pace and living the good life!
Very well put together composition. Emotional, inspirational, a bit darker and foreboding near the beginning and really has a silver lining as the song completes. It tells a story.
I like the idea a lot, reminds me of late 80's electronic alt rock. Amy Mann(Till Tuesday) would sound great vocalizing on this track. The electric guitar has a big spacial sound to it, gives the song lift and a very cool change within what you have so far. I'm a bass player but there are very capable guitar players here, hope it all works out and you can get the arrangement you are looking for!
What's not too like about this? Fantastic arrangement, instrument choices are perfect. The singing is well delivered and sits great in the mix, lyrics are well written. The piano is strong, really enjoyed that, they work well with the vocals.
Thank you, Wayne. I only wish I knew how to get songs on the radio. That would be nice. But until then, all the songs I recorded with Sunny War are at thesunnysessions.com, if you ever care to check them out.
I feel this is a very modern cinematic track, very sad and emotionally heavy. Pieces of music this length can be so filled with a story and emotion and passion, I find that great about music. If this was 3 minutes longer I'm not sure that it wouldn't have had a different effect on me. I liked it!
Thanks Wayne i struggled with this to make it work sometimes less is more so i have cut it down lots to make it fit thanks for the comment best regards.
Damn man, this is good! I really like the overall mix especially. Very cool composition, driving beat with some neat accompaniment. Has a mainstream, pop NIN sound to it. I'm not big into long intros but there is a cool element as it builds towards the main part of the song.
A very big sounding track, grand! A well put together composition, cinematic with good dynamics. I liked the piano track! There is a lot going on in the mix, it all fits together nicely. Well done!
Pretty tumultuous times we are living through in America these days. I last saw this mayhem when the Watergate scandal was going on, even though I was young I can remember watching the news and being shocked. It's amazing the similarities to what's going on today but this is even worse. Where has the civility gone in our society?
I'm glad to hear protest music in something other than folk music. Punk always has seemed to have protest music. Good to hear more electronic based protest music being made. The electric git adds a nice touch to accent the vocals, they have a cool tone and the two tracks playing opposite each other works good. I like the effects on the vocals, big reverb, haunting. With the descending piano in certain parts sets a darker feel. Lyrics are good too. Drums have a Trent Reznor feel to them in my opinion.:)
55 songs in multiple sessions over 5-1/2 months, not just one session...
Thanks for the comment and feedback!
Yeah, these are ridiculous times. When Watergate was going on, which I remember well, we had just come out of the turbulent '60s, the protests, the Civil Rights movement, the riots, the assassinations, Walter Cronkite on the CBS Evening News with the nightly body counts, the Kent State killings, etc. Nixon had just kicked off the unconstitutional and illegal "War on Drugs" in order to target first Vietnam protesters and then blacks, and here we are, 46 years later, still waging that suicidal mission against ourselves. Having been alive for a long sweep of history, I look back and it's pretty clear that that's where the slippery slope really started which has landed us at this low point of moral degeneracy and sheer insanity as a country. I can't even begin to process the scope of our degradation and lack of understanding of the most basic, basic aspects of democracy, freedom, and decency - not to mention the ability to differentiate good from evil. It's no surprise that the stunning violence of Americans on Americans is growing every day. As hopeless as it is, all I can do is make songs as my witness to the insanity and my criticism of the bullshit. Otherwise I'd go crazy. Thanks for listening and for your thoughtful comment, I really appreciate it!
I agree with Ed about the eq differences between the instruments, seem to make them stand out and pop in the mix. Could hear this with an action vid like skateboarding or surfing or some kind of extreme sport.
I don't listen to much drum and bass except for here but this seems to me to be a little more laid back and less aggressive than most dnb songs I hear. I like it because it is different, maybe more "pop" sounding or "mainstream", not to be taken in a negative way but more towards where a folk/rock guy like myself can appreciate more than the hardcore dnb fans would... if that makes any sense, lol.
Good to see old faces around, so few left it seems.
Thanks Wayne. I appreciate that you hear the meticulous EQ-ing, haha. Also glad that you think this is an accessible piece of music, I really try to harness pop sensibility without sacrificing artistic integrity.
Hell yeah! Fantastic! I know you told me before but what mic do you use? My friend Jim just picked up an AKG C214 after some nudging by me and can't wait to hear what that mic brings. There is a nice presence to the tracks I want to capture.
You have a voice we all wish we could have, even the ladies! ;)
This is all recorded with a C214! Great microphone. It's a good choice for vocals and acoustic instruments. But of course, a lot of the soul comes from compression and EQ too!
Pretty cool chilled out track, nice composition overall, enjoyed it! There are some cool dynamics in the song, building it up and bringing it back down adds depth and dimension to it. I really like the change around 2:25, some cool changes in that section towards the end.
Good to see you adding some live electric guitar, too. Keep doing that man!!
Well, that "live" word is not really true - played on guitar, but what you hear is a looped and edited thing. I play it dozen times then get the most acceptable one and upgraded it to get a few loops. You don't want to hear the worst tries, i sweat blood with the editing of the best ones too and the result is still crap if you hear it standalone. :D
I can definitely hear the Clash influence in this very cool track! I love the Clash, this sounds like something off of Sandinista then it kicks up notch when the change happens, cool dynamics. It has that reggae element that they loved to incorporate in their music. The vocals have that Joe Strummer attack and feel. Good use of the electronic elements that the Clash featured in so many of their track.
The guitar riffage is cool and catchy and I like the idea. If you know a guitarist to play the guitar parts I believe it would take the track to a higher level.
I hope you re post this after some adjustments to the reverb, would like to hear this in it's entirety fixed up sweet! I like the idea, chilled out, birds chirping, choral backups and some laid back music all work together nicely. The lead vocals sound good with their backups. I needed a song like this to relax me a bit, thanks!
Hey, you're a Manchester lad, aren't you? Certainly hope everything is ok with you and yours during the tough time your city is going through right now.
Music aside, (cool and interesting,btw) Best Wishes!
Yeah, I had a few friends steward the gig, thankfully none were harmed.
I'm still in shock by it, where it happened used to be a haven to the "alt" kids from all across Greater Manchester, a place to escape the daily hostility & violence of scallies (chavs) and come together. I kissed my first girl there, first time getting pissed, wrecked, met my best friends, went to my first gig at the MEN and countless adventures.
Spent many nights being silly teenagers in that station.
Might sound a bit silly but that area is very sentimental to a lot of people.
I still can't believe it, I didn't think this kind of thing would affect me so badly, I pray it doesn't happen again.
Thanks for stopping by man, I've got a new tune in the works fueled by the whatever it is I'm feeling right now.
Sounds great, cool mix and balls to the wall! The vocal parts were an addition that would be missed if taken out. They add a lot even though they aren't a full vocal track, interesting bits at good times throughout the song and not overdone.
Certainly could see this being a crowd pleasure at a club! 2 thumbs up emoji!
Quite an emotional ballad you produced here, there is a nice rise after a "verse" parts that builds the song nicely. Loved the piano/strings combo. Simple arrangement, that's all you need to put together a sweet track like this. This is just missing a killer vocal track, hope you can add one at some point.
What bass player wouldn't want a bass intro to every song, right? You have that punchy bass tone we all come to expect, totally dig it. The differences between the first half and second is a good thing, dynamics get overlooked often but this one has a calm before the storm. Good job on modeling the guitar's sounds, there is good separation of the tracks using different settings and effects. Love the delay!
More music box!!!!! Such an overlooked instrument in the world of rock.
Cool track, well put together! Mix sounds real good. The intro vocals have some cool effects on them and the stringed slide goes great with it. Speaking of that, I couldn't help but love the stringed slide instrument you used. The keys are a classic sound and work well with the overall feel to the track. Yeah, this is well done!
I want to clear up that I am actually not a hump as some people might want to believe. lol
This is pretty freeking cool man! There is so much to like about this track. Was digging the repeating, sorta mono-toned low end matched with the cool drums you used in conjunction with the sweet guitar/synth instruments panned wide. I was easily sold on the track and then the keys came in, sad to hear it stop.
Nothing too complicated and over produced, just a solid beat matched with the right instruments playing some cool parts. Sounds like a band jamming.
I agree with teamrufeless that some proper vocals on this would be the cherry on the icing. Great work!
on I WANT YOU TO KNOW by CitizenMofo
It's different.
Wayne
on As Freedom Dies by topvega
You could always replace the drums? No worries.
Wayne
Thanks again. Always nice to get feedback.
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on Rock Cover by Ben1972
Vocals sound good to me, maybe a touch more reverb. I like your version, the drum change before the 2 minute point added an interesting change and took it to a cool place, kind of a surf beat.
Cheers!
Wayne
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Wayne
on Reefalootionz feat Deli Dale and Hyfethemadman by thephilosofist
Wayne
on spirit within by mindhiest
Enjoyed!
Wayne
on The ending by BLEEP
Wayne
i'm a bass player too and of course i want to believe i'll find someone for a collab!
i didn't know Amy Mann, i will see on youtube for videos ;)
thanks :)
Bleep
on THE RIVER by CitizenMofo
Ready for the radio, I'd say!
Wayne
on Brigittes Song by Nodog
Wayne
on Mirage by Orlando51
Beautiful, haunting, mesmerizing! What's not to like here?
Sorry I'm a few days late to the party and not commenting sooner, my loss really.
Cheers!
Wayne
and liking our work !
With much appreciation_____Leon
on Medicinal Use Only by silverman
Now to get back to my medicine! ;)
Wayne
I've got a thing about building rhythms at the moment.
Thanks for your time mate.
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Wayne
on BURNING BURNING by CitizenMofo
I'm glad to hear protest music in something other than folk music. Punk always has seemed to have protest music. Good to hear more electronic based protest music being made. The electric git adds a nice touch to accent the vocals, they have a cool tone and the two tracks playing opposite each other works good. I like the effects on the vocals, big reverb, haunting. With the descending piano in certain parts sets a darker feel. Lyrics are good too. Drums have a Trent Reznor feel to them in my opinion.:)
55 songs in a session? Wow!
Wayne
Thanks for the comment and feedback!
Yeah, these are ridiculous times. When Watergate was going on, which I remember well, we had just come out of the turbulent '60s, the protests, the Civil Rights movement, the riots, the assassinations, Walter Cronkite on the CBS Evening News with the nightly body counts, the Kent State killings, etc. Nixon had just kicked off the unconstitutional and illegal "War on Drugs" in order to target first Vietnam protesters and then blacks, and here we are, 46 years later, still waging that suicidal mission against ourselves. Having been alive for a long sweep of history, I look back and it's pretty clear that that's where the slippery slope really started which has landed us at this low point of moral degeneracy and sheer insanity as a country. I can't even begin to process the scope of our degradation and lack of understanding of the most basic, basic aspects of democracy, freedom, and decency - not to mention the ability to differentiate good from evil. It's no surprise that the stunning violence of Americans on Americans is growing every day. As hopeless as it is, all I can do is make songs as my witness to the insanity and my criticism of the bullshit. Otherwise I'd go crazy. Thanks for listening and for your thoughtful comment, I really appreciate it!
on Degenerates Breakfast by thephilosofist
I don't listen to much drum and bass except for here but this seems to me to be a little more laid back and less aggressive than most dnb songs I hear. I like it because it is different, maybe more "pop" sounding or "mainstream", not to be taken in a negative way but more towards where a folk/rock guy like myself can appreciate more than the hardcore dnb fans would... if that makes any sense, lol.
Good to see old faces around, so few left it seems.
Cheers!
Wayne
Glad you enjoyed!
Cheers to you as well
Matt
on Crimson by BradoSanz
You have a voice we all wish we could have, even the ladies! ;)
Wayne
Brado
on Cyberlogic by traz75
Good to see you adding some live electric guitar, too. Keep doing that man!!
Take care!
Wayne
Well, that "live" word is not really true - played on guitar, but what you hear is a looped and edited thing. I play it dozen times then get the most acceptable one and upgraded it to get a few loops. You don't want to hear the worst tries, i sweat blood with the editing of the best ones too and the result is still crap if you hear it standalone. :D
Regards, traz
on slappy by dumarecht
Loved it! Gonna download, thanks for sharing!
Wayne
on UPBEAT ALT ROCK by CoolFontana
Cheers!
Wayne
Plugged the gat straight into my laptop.
Geeze I thought the gat sounded good. lol...
on Another World preview by kingmadi
Wayne
on The Demon and The Piano by Tinka0
Music aside, (cool and interesting,btw) Best Wishes!
Wayne
I'm still in shock by it, where it happened used to be a haven to the "alt" kids from all across Greater Manchester, a place to escape the daily hostility & violence of scallies (chavs) and come together. I kissed my first girl there, first time getting pissed, wrecked, met my best friends, went to my first gig at the MEN and countless adventures.
Spent many nights being silly teenagers in that station.
Might sound a bit silly but that area is very sentimental to a lot of people.
I still can't believe it, I didn't think this kind of thing would affect me so badly, I pray it doesn't happen again.
Thanks for stopping by man, I've got a new tune in the works fueled by the whatever it is I'm feeling right now.
on Everybody now by mudhoen
Certainly could see this being a crowd pleasure at a club! 2 thumbs up emoji!
Wayne
on Once Upon A Time by DivadyAlbum1
Cheers!
Wayne
on Empty Vessels by Evisma
What bass player wouldn't want a bass intro to every song, right? You have that punchy bass tone we all come to expect, totally dig it. The differences between the first half and second is a good thing, dynamics get overlooked often but this one has a calm before the storm. Good job on modeling the guitar's sounds, there is good separation of the tracks using different settings and effects. Love the delay!
More music box!!!!! Such an overlooked instrument in the world of rock.
Take care!
Wayne
on ILP - New Babylon Remix by hashmet
Wayne
thanks a lot , nice to hear that you like it ;-))
on Hot Shoe by silverman
This is pretty freeking cool man! There is so much to like about this track. Was digging the repeating, sorta mono-toned low end matched with the cool drums you used in conjunction with the sweet guitar/synth instruments panned wide. I was easily sold on the track and then the keys came in, sad to hear it stop.
Nothing too complicated and over produced, just a solid beat matched with the right instruments playing some cool parts. Sounds like a band jamming.
I agree with teamrufeless that some proper vocals on this would be the cherry on the icing. Great work!
Shalom!
Wayne
You're not actually of any use for traffic calming after all then!
Thank you mister Hump for the kind and encouraging comments.