Catchy track, by the end I was all in! Cool effects on the vocals. Classic sounding keys. Plenty of space in the track, nothing is cluttered and everything shines through. Well done Bleep!
thanks for your comment, i'm glad to read your positive feeling!
I'm french and sometimes i don't catch the meaning of ideas. Here, i don't understand "plenty of space"... like silences?
Very cool track, totally dig the horn, sounds like a real horn. Reminded me a bit of the Specials. My only criticism would be the snare, to me there is not enough snap and clarity to it. Like mindheist said, it a fun upbeat track that makes you want to move your feet.
thank you TheHumps for your positive comment! i already started to modify some details in my track! of course you're right about the snare, i'm going to see how to perform it.
i appreciate this kind of criticism which permite me to upgrade my work :)
and Very good reference by quoting "the specials"
First off, it's very generous to post the stems for mixing practice. Thanks! Cool track, rock is such an awesomely diverse genre that a cool slower paced song can still have balls.
The song doesn't sound over processed or too loud, I'm impressed for sure. Interesting how you processed the vocals. I use only stock compressors in Ableton and I notice how my songs compare to more professional mixes by not having more quality compressors. Or it could be mixing with my old ears, lol.
I'll check out the tut for sure. Appreciate you posting them as they help put new ideas in my head.
The choice of compressors is irrelevant..as I've said many times the emulations just provide a certain vibe and allow me to get results faster as I already know what they deliver so it's easy to just reach for a certain vibe. You can pretty much get the same results with stock plugins, it's all a matter of getting to properly use attack, release and threshold controls on any given compressor.
For example to replicate this particular scenario you could ride the level of the vocals going into your stock compressor which would have a 3:1 or 2:1 ratio a slow attack and pretty fast release, while the second compressor would have a 4:1 ratio with a medium attack and a fast release and the third would be something like 2:1 for ratio and slow attack and medium release. Again you would have to listen in context and see how the compressors react from word to word and how they muffle or brighten the sound, it's all in the ears honestly.
I've always said it...it's not the gear that mixes the song...it's the engineer.
Dig the title! Piano and acoustic guitar always works so I must say the intro really was a cool way to start the track. The song transitions nicely into the harder more loud part of the song. I do like the timing changes as the song progresses.
I read your response to Steve about the vocal/percussive part you did and it's pretty effective and interesting. Curious as to how you tune normally if not in standard tuning?
I appreciate the kind words. As for tuning, I'm usually Drop C sharp. Everything down a half step, then my low E string down another whole step, so the E goes down 3 frets, everything else, 1. I have to use heavier Guage strings and aggressive truss bar adjustment.
Nice composition, interesting as it builds throughout the song. I'm not a big fan of long songs but this cinematic piece had my attention all the way. I wish it had some compression put on it as it would bring out more intensity and power as it builds but the idea is there and it's a good one.
Thank you Wayne. I usually keep them in the under 5 min range, this one just begged me to keep going. On the compression, I have not used it before. I will add some on the first part. not sure how to use compression so I will play with it. advice always welcome and take in. thank you.
Cool groove! I like the Barry White reference Mykael mentioned as it feels like rnb to me. Lisa Stansfield also comes to mind when listening. Funky sounding bass line as well that I like. Always love me some percussion so I dig the bongos a lot. Well done all round, mix sounds great!
Cool, dark, brooding style of rock. Sets an ominous tone right from the beginning with southern/swamp blues style guitars. The lyrics fit the music well and tell a great story, well done Joe!
Hey Wayne,
thanks a lot for your nice comment.
Good to know that you like what i have done on the musicaly side. Working with and on Burts CBG's is always something cool to do. Also nice to know that you enjoyed the lyrics.
You guys always seem to have the formula to make great music when you work together. The piano is perfect for the piece, like a singing melody line it takes the listener deeper into the song. Nice and easy on the ears, peaceful and intimate, soulful and uplifting! Always a pleasure!
Hola Wayne...always a pleasure to hear from you. I'm really glad to hear that you find the piano lines on the positive side. It was pretty adventurous to me to rely on piano so much in this piece, yet according to feedbacks it worked somehow and I'm glad for that. Thank you so much for your friendly review and the fav !
Cool track jamid, really liked the delay, i use it quite a bit and and it adds life to a picking track. Nice atmosphere created with the distant sounds accompanying the acoustic, they add a nice sense of depth and interest.
Songs like this are all about what you don't add, you used restraint and put the ideal instruments and levels to create this wonderful piece. Always a pleasure!
Hello Wayne,
How you doing mate?
I’m sorry it has been a while you know how it is?
I do agree with you it is so hard not to add bits
and pieces to the mix when you on the roll.
I am glad you like it mate and thank you
for your wonderful feedback and support.
Thanks again.
I must say the mix stood out immediately, top notch! Catchy as hell, music stands out and i totally got into the beat and the gits. Vocals are both quite awesome, different from each other in style works. Radio ready!!
Hey Spiv! I can certainly appreciate all the effort and fun you had putting this together. It's a lot tighter and cleaner than the original and has your styling added. The mix is quite good, crisp. I am not a fan of the fake hand claps though but that's a personal preference issue more so than anything technical. I've checkout a couple remixes, this one stands out, maybe it's the overall quality of the mix.
Hello Wayne! It's good to hear from you! This is definitely not my usual style, but since it was composed by someone else, I can forgive that... ha ha. You're nice to compliment the mix when compared to the original and other remixes. The claps were in the stems, and I was making an effort to use them all... partly because I had only heard the original once before making this. I thought it might help give more of a nod to the original that way. They do however sound pretty artificial though, I agree. Having the midi files was really helpful, since I could do some hardware sound design with the composition in mind, at least without a bunch of thought and analysis. I appreciate you taking a listen and leaving your words!
Although I admit I don't listen to much dnb and don't claim to know much about it in general, I will say I can listen to a track and say when it's a damn good track. This is a damn good track!
The mix overall is tight and not too overpowering, all the instruments can be heard clearly. Sometimes I hear this genre's dynamics get a little lost due to too much limiting and compression on the master track. It's punchy while still having saved the dynamics. I was able to turn up my monitors and really enjoy the song without it making my ears bleed.
There are a lot of cool, interesting ideas happening throughout. The vocal samples and the effects you used were spot on. I can appreciate the effort you put in.
Pretty slick number you put together. Great beat, jazz from when jazz ruled. I see your twist with the electro styling. This music is so dance-able and upbeat It would seem to translate well in the electronic genres somewhere.
Hey wayne, thanks alot man. Its a relatively new genre, but one i really enjoy. Tons of energy like you say, great to dance to too ! Thanks for stopping by and having a listen, james
I downloaded several tunes by Kevin Macload a few years back and really appreciate his vast understanding of music making. So i knew right away the music would be well done and hearing your emotional singing in other tracks I knew this would be cool to check out. The music is very dramatic and dark, you delivered some fitting vocals for the piece.
Good choice with cinematic, i think this would be awesome in a tremendously sad point of a movie, very emotional and dynamic.
Well done, my first listen of the day, kinda stirring.
Hell Yeah!! I love anything with a latin flare to it. You have a cool idea with the intro. That in itself could be taken as song idea, keep the western idea going. But when it all kicked in I was all in for the ride.
Guitars sound great, nice tone and well played. I really liked the vocal at the end. You consider adding some more like that in the track or just the one shot? Just an idea.
Thanks Wayne, yeah good to know you dig some Latino sounds. I have sprinkled several of my latest tracks with some of it but this one is pretty much straight forward. Haha, so you even like the grito huh? Yes, I took a chance putting that in but it fits and I enjoyed doing it very much. More than one might be over doing it tho. But its after all very popular in mainstream musica Mexicana. Glad you dig it man and again Gracias for the kind words of support.
This is pretty crazy man! Music like this can adjust your attitude on the spot. I just listened to something completely different a few minutes ago and while this was playing my blood pressure went up 40 points, lol!!
Great idea overall and excellent execution all around on it's construction and mix!! Totally dig it!!
Not much to complain about here, mix sounds great and all the playing works together. I liked the slowed down break around 3:30 and the build up that followed.
Must say, I like the title and the intro. The title sounds poetic and sarcastic all at the same time, clever man. The pad you chose is great, sets the tone of the song right from the beginning. Slip sliding bassorama!! Bring it on!!
The music box works well with the feel of the track and adds a bit of mystery and suspense.
That is a time-stretched section of guitar that comes in a while later. The synth comes in for the end section, though I do hear why you heard that.
Glad you liked the music box. I really dig those and thumb pianos, but they sometimes give an eerie, demented child feel to a track and I have to use something else. It's mostly here to reinforce the piano, but I brought it back for it's own section at the end.
Hey eshar, long time no see, we miss the likes of you around here! Hope you are well.
Lots of power and punch to this, I like it, gave my monitors a workout. Quite a few different elements or sections of the song with different instruments, very interesting all the way through. The piano track was my fav part.
Hi Wayne,
thanks for the listen. It certainly seems like a long time since I made any regular visits to the site...but I hope to try and change that lol.
Crazy track man! No shortage of intensified chaotic wizardry happening here. I'm not a big listener to dnb but I must say you brought your game to the show. :)
The soft flute at the beginning and the break was totally unexpected and added a little contracst to the picture,lol!!
Totally dig the groove of this one! I think this crosses genre boundaries as well. I think your vocals are spot on with the music and the mood and feel of the track.
on Les Fleurs Du Mal by DubSmockers
Wayne
thanks for your comment, i'm glad to read your positive feeling!
I'm french and sometimes i don't catch the meaning of ideas. Here, i don't understand "plenty of space"... like silences?
Anyway, thank you again :)
friendly
Bleep
on Musi SkA UFO by DubSmockers
Cheers!
Wayne
i appreciate this kind of criticism which permite me to upgrade my work :)
and Very good reference by quoting "the specials"
Friendly
Bleep
on Butterfly Effect - An Ultra Violet Apology by Mahloo13
The song doesn't sound over processed or too loud, I'm impressed for sure. Interesting how you processed the vocals. I use only stock compressors in Ableton and I notice how my songs compare to more professional mixes by not having more quality compressors. Or it could be mixing with my old ears, lol.
I'll check out the tut for sure. Appreciate you posting them as they help put new ideas in my head.
Cheers
The choice of compressors is irrelevant..as I've said many times the emulations just provide a certain vibe and allow me to get results faster as I already know what they deliver so it's easy to just reach for a certain vibe. You can pretty much get the same results with stock plugins, it's all a matter of getting to properly use attack, release and threshold controls on any given compressor.
For example to replicate this particular scenario you could ride the level of the vocals going into your stock compressor which would have a 3:1 or 2:1 ratio a slow attack and pretty fast release, while the second compressor would have a 4:1 ratio with a medium attack and a fast release and the third would be something like 2:1 for ratio and slow attack and medium release. Again you would have to listen in context and see how the compressors react from word to word and how they muffle or brighten the sound, it's all in the ears honestly.
I've always said it...it's not the gear that mixes the song...it's the engineer.
Thank you for the review!
on LITTLE DREAD by Planetjazzbass
on Eyes Run Aground by Evisma
I read your response to Steve about the vocal/percussive part you did and it's pretty effective and interesting. Curious as to how you tune normally if not in standard tuning?
Wayne
I appreciate the kind words. As for tuning, I'm usually Drop C sharp. Everything down a half step, then my low E string down another whole step, so the E goes down 3 frets, everything else, 1. I have to use heavier Guage strings and aggressive truss bar adjustment.
Peas.
Evan
on tormented imagination by mindhiest
Cheers!
Wayne
on Show Me by Jeffiedillard
Wayne
on The stars by smallpaul
Wayne
on Hey hey hey - a meeting with the devil by joecramer
Wayne
thanks a lot for your nice comment.
Good to know that you like what i have done on the musicaly side. Working with and on Burts CBG's is always something cool to do. Also nice to know that you enjoyed the lyrics.
stay tuned
joe
on Highland Homecoming by Orlando51
Wayne
With much appreciation_____Orlando
on The Spanish Sun by DijamMusic
Songs like this are all about what you don't add, you used restraint and put the ideal instruments and levels to create this wonderful piece. Always a pleasure!
Wayne
How you doing mate?
I’m sorry it has been a while you know how it is?
I do agree with you it is so hard not to add bits
and pieces to the mix when you on the roll.
I am glad you like it mate and thank you
for your wonderful feedback and support.
Thanks again.
Jamid
on RickMal x Nepaul - 2 Fresh Dudes by nepaul
Wayne
on Midnights Travel Ololiuqui Mix by Spivkurl
Take care!
Wayne
on Fears by swindla007
The mix overall is tight and not too overpowering, all the instruments can be heard clearly. Sometimes I hear this genre's dynamics get a little lost due to too much limiting and compression on the master track. It's punchy while still having saved the dynamics. I was able to turn up my monitors and really enjoy the song without it making my ears bleed.
There are a lot of cool, interesting ideas happening throughout. The vocal samples and the effects you used were spot on. I can appreciate the effort you put in.
Pretty cool track, fun to listen to.
Wayne
on BET ON ME - rock track by Kargalar and Iti Yati by athousandmarias
More!! please
Wayne
on Electro swing club remaster by Jkingz
Nice effort, sounds cool!
Wayne
on Despair and Triumph by Kevin MacLeod ft mildperil by T0mmyy
Good choice with cinematic, i think this would be awesome in a tremendously sad point of a movie, very emotional and dynamic.
Well done, my first listen of the day, kinda stirring.
Cheers!
Wayne
I'm starting to think of my songs as more soundtracks than actual songs, and the feedback that I'm getting suggests that too.
And thanks for stopping by and listening, much appreciated :)
on El Muerto by Neomorpheus
Guitars sound great, nice tone and well played. I really liked the vocal at the end. You consider adding some more like that in the track or just the one shot? Just an idea.
Cool track!!
Wayne
on Marys Black Lamb by Tinka0
Great idea overall and excellent execution all around on it's construction and mix!! Totally dig it!!
Wayne
on The Land Of Ill Gotten Gains by Evisma
Must say, I like the title and the intro. The title sounds poetic and sarcastic all at the same time, clever man. The pad you chose is great, sets the tone of the song right from the beginning. Slip sliding bassorama!! Bring it on!!
The music box works well with the feel of the track and adds a bit of mystery and suspense.
It's a solid track, nice job Evan!
Wayne
"The pad you chose..."
That is a time-stretched section of guitar that comes in a while later. The synth comes in for the end section, though I do hear why you heard that.
Glad you liked the music box. I really dig those and thumb pianos, but they sometimes give an eerie, demented child feel to a track and I have to use something else. It's mostly here to reinforce the piano, but I brought it back for it's own section at the end.
I do hope all is well with you.
Evan
on I Made this Song4U by eshar
Lots of power and punch to this, I like it, gave my monitors a workout. Quite a few different elements or sections of the song with different instruments, very interesting all the way through. The piano track was my fav part.
Wayne
thanks for the listen. It certainly seems like a long time since I made any regular visits to the site...but I hope to try and change that lol.
Thanks Again!
Elaine
on Victorian Waltz by DanGoldstein
on Bloody Mary by SupaFreakshow
The soft flute at the beginning and the break was totally unexpected and added a little contracst to the picture,lol!!
Well done, tons of energy, dig it!
Wayne
Right on Wayne! Thanks!
It was a crazy day!
Mike
on You got to go by Nicooo
Gonna dl and fav, thanks for sharing!
Wayne
on Piano Cuts Vol1 - live rec cuts by AlchemyLoops
I noticed a bit of clipping at about 2:57-3:00, maybe try some compression to give the piece some punch and take care of the clipping.
Wayne
The track is raw...direct mic above the piano, no fx or editing... :P
Again thanks!
an hug