UK RnB Track V8 - EricMilligan

this may be coming from left field, but your vox lend a bayou feel to this standout tune that sets it apart from the pack to these ears. this is distinctive and personal sounding.

I think this is my favourite piece of yours.

The intro is probably the best throughout all of your pieces too.

The combination of the bass and the piano parts was amazing. They simply sound great together.

2:35 was the highlight for sure, the modulation was great.
The outro organ? sound was excellent as well.

The vocals aren't as bad as you might think. Of course, they can be better, but your voice still managed to capture what I thought was the essence of the piece.

Perhaps you should revisit this piece. It's way better than I think you give it credit.

good composition , welldone man .

It sounds very good. Keep up the good work!

Tell you what, the intro is so dope,it raises your expectation for the rest of the track.But you already know the vocals mess it up a bit.

the piano riff is so catchy! but the vocals in the back are kind of weird and way to quiet

I can picture a strong bluesy female singer on this one. Nice falsetto BTW. yeah this is a good template. it needs some more percussive fun to enhance it´s beauty. Your voice reminds me slightly of Rik Ockasiek´s from the Cars. keep at this one ehh! fellow outaouain.
Cru

Really good , just need some mix ...

Love it. I want to hear more.

Or maybe you can upload it as a competition to see who can mix it the best or something! That would be fun!

Brado

You should let me mix this!! Your voice could sound awesome with proper mixing and compression! Your voice is DEFINITELY distinct! PLEASE. All I need is the raw stems of each track in the session without ANY effects. I'd love to try my hand.

Brado

Hi Eric,

I think you should do the vocals.
Your voice has a unique quality about it. It's distinctive, and that's half the battle when singing. In addition, you've got range, and while many singers struggle to go into a falsetto, you appear to slide into yours fairly well. I can also hear emotion in this, something that always helps when singing.

Don't sell yourself short. Having a voice that's different than what's out there can be a blessing. Humility can also be a good thing, but you DO have a decent voice, you just have to keep on singing.

I like the song, and can tell what you're trying to do. When I listen to a song, I tend to isolate everything. I like your initial vocal melody, and I can hear the chorus or hook forming. I agree with the poster igorsamanski, "who cares if you're not Adelle? The beat and the melody are great."

You've got an interesting foundation started here. Now all you have to do it build on it. I hope once you get the lyrics, that you'll update this. My best to you.

I'm not an accomplished singer I can tell you that I do put scratch vocal tracks down to rough out melody lines, similar to what you did here. The track you put down has some cool parts and ideas. Although it's a little low in the mix, you seem to be hitting the right notes and I think if you write some simple words and sing them within a range you are comfortable with I do believe you could sing this track.

Singing comes down to confidence, attitude and effort. My brother came in to sing his christmas song and he had never sang into a mic before. After the first take I told him to relax and to sing it like he meant every word with passion and to put on a performance in front of the mic. Basically I told him to grow a set and just go for it, he could sing the notes but I wanted to hear him belt it out with feeling. We did 3 more takes, each time was better and I could see him getting into it more and more.

From what I hear and I know it's just a scratch track, I think if you wrote some basic lyrics that you could pull the vocal part off.

Btw, cool track, wide open for those vocals. I do like the piano and the interesting bits set back in the mix, effects and sounds.

Wayne

Wait a minute, you're from Canada, I thought you were British, I understand what you are trying to do, like you said in the description you're looking for a singer, but also just make your own version with you singing on it, it sounds kinda cool like retro or British or Mick Jaggerish or something, but put some equalizer on the vocals I can barely hear you, are you saying in the chorus "I'm gonna sleep all daaaayyy" is that what you're saying? maybe not, I'm listening without headphones with my laptop speakers, make you're own version dude, who cares if you're nor Adelle? the beat and melody are great,