Description : This is the last track of my upcoming EP, and is also for optimization! This is the first time I've used my own vocals and yea, i know, it sucks xD
No rapping now!
I'll be hearing anything else (suggestions and feedbacks) on you guys!
Cheers
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Okay, I am using the word processor this time, so that nothing gets lost!
I can't believe the feeling that finding this song has given me today... It is an unbelievable presence to say the least! I find it hard to be as expressive as I was in the partially lost reply to your comment on my song.
Let me start by saying this... I heard a new Nine Inch Nails song this morning, for the first tine in a couple of years. I had a bland, take it or leave it reponse, even though I've been a fan for over twenty-five years. This song you've created had a much more fulfilling effect on me, and I found it potent and deep.
Please keep writing songs for yourself, and performing them, as you have so much potential as a songwriter/performer! You've created a bed for us to lay down in, and you have changed the sheets first.
I used autotune for years, before swearing off anything artificial, except drugs. It only ever helped my image and acceptance. Just like makeup, it changed people's image of me. Don't worry about using a tool of our trade, as that is what tools are for.
You sound great, and this song is a must fave and DL! I thank you for sharing, and I lament the loss of my complete response to your comment on my song.
Your words are really inspiring xD
I really don't know how to react to this kind of appreciation, but all I can say is a huge thanks! It really motivates me to do more music.
And about your song, I did NOT noticed that PB and Grace was uploaded a year ago, my bad so it's not that much of a problem!
I really like the changes in the song, good dynamics. At the beginning and again at 1:47 I liked the organ that gets louder. Wished the vocals were a bit louder in the mix, they were quite good. Catchy electronic pop song, very radio friendly sound!
Those aren't really organs but thanks! It's a synth I made in Sylenth where I played with the rate and gain knobs with both the pitch bending (vibrato) and the cutoffs.
I would try and re-sing the vocals when I have the time too, so I do hope it gets better.
Well, majority of the people here now suggested that, and thanks for adding to the vote!
I'll maybe try adding some more lyrics there, or do what you have said (unfading the vocals or lessening it)
Hey 2D2R, I really like the start with the piano and love how you changed the vibe of this track to electro in such a short time span. Your vocals sounds great on this and only added to the instrumental that much more. You say your vocals suck, guess they were right when they said we are our own worst critic. I think they really work with this track even with the autotune and that's saying a lot considering I normally hate autotune.
Anyways very nice work and hope to hear your vocals on more tracks in the future.
Thanks man! I would try and re-sing the vocals and get the least autotune (or maybe even none) i can get. I really appreciate your feedback and criticisms!
2d2r I would not screw this song rapping on it you have a super voice fits this song perfectly I simply love this song BRAVO don't doubt your voice you have talent faved. Best regards.
Hello,
your voice permite this track to become an electro pop song! your voice is not so bad, i don't know why you have doubts about it! your work is solid and i'm not sure rap will add something better in this track! i prefer like it
I really like the music.
I'm no judge of vocalists really as I'm a mostly instrumental lover but it doesn't sound that bad apart from vanishing into the distance at some points. The music is fantastic.
Description : Feel free to check out the video on YT as well (Alan McLaren Project - Upside Down) of this 6min journey from electronic to rock with some psychedelic moments...
This is my latest, but also one of my earliest tracks.... any feedback is more than welcome, thanks :)
Description : 'The main point of this song is really about the frustrations of living in the overload of today's World of Tech. The consequences are impaired communication and that if you advance too far you end up diminishing what you had to start with, so you are way worse off.' Enjoy a 60s Rhythm with a modern deep Bass, a Sitar, a Piano from EvilPianist, a lost flute from UniverseHuston and some Oscillators :-)
If you like our work, please find us under kayos2 on Bandcamp
Description : A demo of one of my current projects. The chorus vocal sounds like "Aaaaraashe" to me. The song is in C# minor with a nod to C# pythagorean on the chorus. The beat on the verse was inspired by the Peter Gabriel song Intruder.
Description : This is one of my earliest productions that I did at the start of my recording career. I did not have a keyboard at the time I made this song, so I improvised and used my sister's iPad and a 5 dollar GarageBand application instead, and plugged the headset jack into into my PT6 rig and did my best to turn each individual track (which were mono and there were about 25 tracks or so) into a stereo image. Then recorded vocals over it. My computer was so old and slow that I had to mix my music and then BOUNCE it to a new session - four times. My computer (which had 512 MB RAM and an 80 GB hard drive) couldn't handle more than 8 tracks at a time or it'd stop working because the processor couldn't handle it. Took me FOREVER to do. But I got it done. Had a lot of fun doing it too, even if it isn't my "best" work. I'm still happy with it, considering I didn't have many tools to choose from at the time.
Description : Long time lurker first time poster, pretty new to production n stuff, this is my first track in Ableton Live.
was going for a darkwave/synthwave sound, reminiscent of Justice, Carpenter Brut, Perturbator, ect.
Looking for some feed back, constructive criticisms or even just your thoughts if you liked it or not. This is just a rough cut on this current WIP, just the bones of it if you will.. If you have some cool title suggestions, would love to hear those too.
Thanks for listening.
-B
I can't believe the feeling that finding this song has given me today... It is an unbelievable presence to say the least! I find it hard to be as expressive as I was in the partially lost reply to your comment on my song.
Let me start by saying this... I heard a new Nine Inch Nails song this morning, for the first tine in a couple of years. I had a bland, take it or leave it reponse, even though I've been a fan for over twenty-five years. This song you've created had a much more fulfilling effect on me, and I found it potent and deep.
Please keep writing songs for yourself, and performing them, as you have so much potential as a songwriter/performer! You've created a bed for us to lay down in, and you have changed the sheets first.
I used autotune for years, before swearing off anything artificial, except drugs. It only ever helped my image and acceptance. Just like makeup, it changed people's image of me. Don't worry about using a tool of our trade, as that is what tools are for.
You sound great, and this song is a must fave and DL! I thank you for sharing, and I lament the loss of my complete response to your comment on my song.
I really don't know how to react to this kind of appreciation, but all I can say is a huge thanks! It really motivates me to do more music.
And about your song, I did NOT noticed that PB and Grace was uploaded a year ago, my bad so it's not that much of a problem!
Again, thank you so much Sir Spiv!
Cheers
Wayne
I would try and re-sing the vocals when I have the time too, so I do hope it gets better.
Thanks for the feedbacks tho, cheers!
Really enjoyed it, and thanks for sharing :)
Thanks anyways, cheers!
Love it
Steve
I'll maybe try adding some more lyrics there, or do what you have said (unfading the vocals or lessening it)
Thanks man!
Anyways very nice work and hope to hear your vocals on more tracks in the future.
cheers
This is sounding really good.
Quality stuff.
Well if that's what you guys want, then sure! Can't see anything wrong about that.
Thanks man!
your voice permite this track to become an electro pop song! your voice is not so bad, i don't know why you have doubts about it! your work is solid and i'm not sure rap will add something better in this track! i prefer like it
Bleep
I'm no judge of vocalists really as I'm a mostly instrumental lover but it doesn't sound that bad apart from vanishing into the distance at some points. The music is fantastic.