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11th Jul 2017 23:21 - 8 years ago
Description : This is the last track of my upcoming EP, and is also for optimization! This is the first time I've used my own vocals and yea, i know, it sucks xD

No rapping now!

I'll be hearing anything else (suggestions and feedbacks) on you guys!

Cheers

Comments (12)

If you have time take a listen and give bitronix some feedback.

Spivkurl
Spivkurl 20th Jul 2017 20:48 - 8 years ago
Okay, I am using the word processor this time, so that nothing gets lost!

I can't believe the feeling that finding this song has given me today... It is an unbelievable presence to say the least! I find it hard to be as expressive as I was in the partially lost reply to your comment on my song.

Let me start by saying this... I heard a new Nine Inch Nails song this morning, for the first tine in a couple of years. I had a bland, take it or leave it reponse, even though I've been a fan for over twenty-five years. This song you've created had a much more fulfilling effect on me, and I found it potent and deep.

Please keep writing songs for yourself, and performing them, as you have so much potential as a songwriter/performer! You've created a bed for us to lay down in, and you have changed the sheets first.

I used autotune for years, before swearing off anything artificial, except drugs. It only ever helped my image and acceptance. Just like makeup, it changed people's image of me. Don't worry about using a tool of our trade, as that is what tools are for.

You sound great, and this song is a must fave and DL! I thank you for sharing, and I lament the loss of my complete response to your comment on my song.
bitronix
bitronix replied 26th Jul 2017 - 8 years ago
Your words are really inspiring xD
I really don't know how to react to this kind of appreciation, but all I can say is a huge thanks! It really motivates me to do more music.

And about your song, I did NOT noticed that PB and Grace was uploaded a year ago, my bad so it's not that much of a problem!

Again, thank you so much Sir Spiv!

Cheers
theHumps
theHumps 17th Jul 2017 19:10 - 8 years ago
I really like the changes in the song, good dynamics. At the beginning and again at 1:47 I liked the organ that gets louder. Wished the vocals were a bit louder in the mix, they were quite good. Catchy electronic pop song, very radio friendly sound!

Wayne
bitronix
bitronix replied 17th Jul 2017 - 8 years ago
Those aren't really organs but thanks! It's a synth I made in Sylenth where I played with the rate and gain knobs with both the pitch bending (vibrato) and the cutoffs.
I would try and re-sing the vocals when I have the time too, so I do hope it gets better.

Thanks for the feedbacks tho, cheers!
mildperil
mildperil 17th Jul 2017 14:20 - 8 years ago
Very slick and modern, although I was half expecting you to burst more into 'song', but I guess that would have completely altered the feel.

Really enjoyed it, and thanks for sharing :)
bitronix
bitronix replied 17th Jul 2017 - 8 years ago
I would tryna add more lyrics, but it would take me more time to mix the vocals in.

Thanks anyways, cheers!
beerling1970
beerling1970 16th Jul 2017 16:26 - 8 years ago
This an amazing track and I don't think it needs rapping on just think the vocals need to stop fading and brought forward a little more.

Love it
Steve
bitronix
bitronix replied 17th Jul 2017 - 8 years ago
Well, majority of the people here now suggested that, and thanks for adding to the vote!
I'll maybe try adding some more lyrics there, or do what you have said (unfading the vocals or lessening it)

Thanks man!
hemant37
hemant37 15th Jul 2017 17:49 - 8 years ago
Decent song except the vocals and maybe the sidechain in the drop for the kick to come out could be better.
bitronix
bitronix replied 16th Jul 2017 - 8 years ago
Yea, my voice sucks I know xD And sure, I'll deepen the sidechains more. Thanks!
Modnex
Modnex 15th Jul 2017 15:14 - 8 years ago
Hey 2D2R, I really like the start with the piano and love how you changed the vibe of this track to electro in such a short time span. Your vocals sounds great on this and only added to the instrumental that much more. You say your vocals suck, guess they were right when they said we are our own worst critic. I think they really work with this track even with the autotune and that's saying a lot considering I normally hate autotune.

Anyways very nice work and hope to hear your vocals on more tracks in the future.
bitronix
bitronix replied 16th Jul 2017 - 8 years ago
Thanks man! I would try and re-sing the vocals and get the least autotune (or maybe even none) i can get. I really appreciate your feedback and criticisms!

cheers
Nodog
Nodog 14th Jul 2017 13:30 - 8 years ago
2d2r I would not screw this song rapping on it you have a super voice fits this song perfectly I simply love this song BRAVO don't doubt your voice you have talent faved. Best regards.
bitronix
bitronix replied 14th Jul 2017 - 8 years ago
Thanks for the appreciation man! Yea, I've decided not to put a rap onto the track, however I'll just optimize the whole track.
silverman
silverman 14th Jul 2017 04:58 - 8 years ago
Please don't ruin this fine tune with raps!
This is sounding really good.
Quality stuff.
bitronix
bitronix replied 14th Jul 2017 - 8 years ago
I guess I'm getting a lot of request for no raps xD

Well if that's what you guys want, then sure! Can't see anything wrong about that.

Thanks man!
BLEEP
BLEEP 12th Jul 2017 23:33 - 8 years ago
Hello,
your voice permite this track to become an electro pop song! your voice is not so bad, i don't know why you have doubts about it! your work is solid and i'm not sure rap will add something better in this track! i prefer like it

Bleep
bitronix
bitronix replied 13th Jul 2017 - 8 years ago
Well, I'll not add any raps if there wont be any volunteers. Thanks!
NateJMusic
NateJMusic 12th Jul 2017 23:29 - 8 years ago
So far so good. I can't wait to hear the mixed version.
bitronix
bitronix replied 13th Jul 2017 - 8 years ago
Thanks man!
silverman
silverman 12th Jul 2017 04:37 - 8 years ago
I really like the music.
I'm no judge of vocalists really as I'm a mostly instrumental lover but it doesn't sound that bad apart from vanishing into the distance at some points. The music is fantastic.
bitronix
bitronix replied 12th Jul 2017 - 8 years ago
Thanks silverman! I'm trying to re-record the vocals and try making it more clearer and loud. Thanks for the appreciation!
kingmadi
kingmadi 12th Jul 2017 04:04 - 8 years ago
I really like this actually haha.. I'd rap on it tbh.
bitronix
bitronix replied 12th Jul 2017 - 8 years ago
Thanks! Feel free to try and rap to it

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