Two Riddles - RedDragon

Yeah, this sounds like ya needta go back and rework some of the levels just a tad, because some of the stuff came out playin a bit too crisply (like they were on the verge of clipping) and they also kinda drowned out the other stuff that was goin on too. Though I dug the Hiphop-esque vibe ya had on the intro. Then it kinda morphs into rockish breaks. Interesting mix mate. Lates!

hey man these guys have a point it is a little disorganized and needs mastering but so did everyones first work. youve got great sounds to work with u just need a more clearly defined structure, .. intro --> dropn'verse --> interlude etc. personaly i think it would sound good if u jacked the tempo up to around 175 - 180bpm. again you could produce something pretty decent with what uv got here but ull need to do some more work on the mastering/eqing. it can be tricky but it is something that is necessary on every track.
keep it up tho, it sounds like u know what u like to hear and it only gets easier
hope 2 c u back on here soon bro

sketch

I tend to agree with Gsusfrk, and also think the distortion is a bit OTT. Are you producing through small monitor speakers or headphones? If so try running you tune through a big stereo or car system with sub before you upload so you can get a better idea of levels. More breaks than D&B but i like it for a first attempt. Keep going dude

a little disorganized, sound like you got excited with the other loops and started putting them in as soon as you heard them. Nice loops i must say, but this aint drum n bass its like breakbeat...