Description : Rap.Hip Hop.This is my Sister(juicy)(She wrote this track) and a friend (Vakdemone)who mixed the track together. My sister got the beat from a guy she knows from school, he(the beat maker) was only like 16 then and she was like 17 or 18years old when she recorded this track. Tell me what u guys think. The guy with the producing equip moved away so I would like to learn and produce for her. I did ask her permission to upload the track and she want's to hear your comments

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  1. SteelCityRed
    SteelCityRed on Sat 31st May 2014 - 9 years ago

    Yo! Player Shout To You & The Work You Putting In, Keep Grinding. When Your Sis Rap Tell Her To Relax & Groove With The Beat. Perform In The Booth As If She Was On Stage. Flow With The Beat. It Sounds Like She's Reading. Her Words Should Be Seamless, So it Doesn't Sound Like She's Rapping If That Makes Any Sense. No Matter How She Spit It Should Still Flow. But Other Than That She Str8. Her Performing The Song Right Will Make Your Mixing A lot easier.

    rourke
    Reply by rourke

    Thanks for the comment.

    This was only her first trie's.

    I will tell her the feedback.

  2. ZeeHipHop
    ZeeHipHop on Wed 21st May 2014 - 9 years ago

    This time the vox aren't as bad as the other track (in terms of the effects added to them). Personally I try to stay away from using any reverb on verses and only use it on the hook/chorus. But hey, this is some 3-4 year old stuff. Would like to hear how she's sounding now

    rourke
    Reply by rourke

    Well thanks again

    If you know polokwane you know its small and the surroundings are rural like.

    So after this 2 tracks and collabing on his other track somethings happened and he moved away.

    So since then she has not done much.

    If I could help her and learn something new in the process why not

  3. Ozzz
    Ozzz on Wed 21st May 2014 - 9 years ago

    Yeah, that ecco'y thingy sounds bad, it makes her voice float over the music, instead of on it. It's the effect movie makers put on angels and ghosts or something..

    That's right, acapella is just the rap. Don't worry about Vakdemone, the guys gone, he's gone. Soon you'll be making your own. I'll be more than happy to help..

    rourke
    Reply by rourke

    Thanks a lot

    Help will be appreciated especially on the technical stuff to start off with.

  4. Ozzz
    Ozzz on Wed 21st May 2014 - 9 years ago

    Rourke,

    The same thing, your sis is sick, the lyrics are sick, the track is sick but that airy vocal effect is straight out shit. Tell your sis she has it coming. We all love female rap acapella's..

    We're waiting.. ;)

    rourke
    Reply by rourke

    Thanks ozzy

    I will tell her.

    Yeah even back then I thought that the vocals doing that ecco'y thing is not that good.

    Vakdemone also has some tracks but sadly I don't see eye to eye with him so I can't ask him is I can upload his stuff here.

    When u say acapella, u mean she must rap without beats?

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