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10th Jun 2013 06:54 - 12 years ago
Description : Hey guys please give me honest opinions on whatya think. Still learning so I will value your feedback. If you wanna have a go at doing something with it just send me a msg and I will email the vocals through. Cheers!
Thanks Minor2go for the guitar :)

Comments (2)

If you have time take a listen and give sook73 some feedback.

theHumps
theHumps 10th Jun 2013 11:24 - 12 years ago
I agree with Kenny about how nice your voice sounds and about being a little flat in a few spots but it was still a very nice track to listen to. I think with a little more practice you will figure it out and then the sky's the limit!!

I noticed some hiss at the beginning that fades out in a few seconds. I used a plugin called "adaptive noise reduction" in Audition 3, that when applied would do the same thing. It aggravated me to hear that hiss so what I used to do was reverse the track and as long as I left a few seconds of silence at the end of the track, the noise reduction would do that fading out thing during the silence. Then you reverse the track back to normal and chop off the hiss fade off the end of the track, leaving you with no hiss anywhere during the music. Not sure if that's whats happening here but it sounds like you can fix that minor issue.

Well I liked the track a lot, nice job!

Wayne
sook73
sook73 replied 10th Jun 2013 - 12 years ago
Thank you. I was trying a whole heap of programs trying to get rid of it and they weren't working (I'm not really good with editing lol) but I will try what you suggested. Cheers
Darkreine
Darkreine 10th Jun 2013 07:27 - 12 years ago
You have really great tone to your voice, but you are a little pitchy and out of tune in parts. When I was a kid, my music teacher would make us sit for hours running through scales, you know: do, ray, me etc. I used to think it was real stupid and a waste of time, but I was wrong, because it helped me in so many ways, with timing and pitch etc. All I can say is practice makes perfect and the more you sing the better you will get. And as your song says “Keep on breathing”, because breathing is one of the most important parts in singing.

I am no expert on the subject, I only know what I've picked up over the years, but don't give up, keep on singing, you have a great gift. Are these your lyrics?

Kenny
sook73
sook73 replied 10th Jun 2013 - 12 years ago
Yeah my lyrics. lol was trying to get my voice to go kinda grungy/sweet, was a little worried it would sound a bit off to some people hehe. Thanks

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