Truth be told, this is extremely innovative. such a mix of percussion that has not been heard before in such a way. I love what you are doing. You sir are progressing music further with works like this and I salute you for it. I imagine this with vocals and I think you have a new genre.
Cru
First of all in the "This Sound Bad On Tv" you know he used few of the sounds from my track so " I don't like the synths (orchestral melody)" I let you imagine my feelings
Second of all, thanks for this feedback For some reason I do not find the word to continue so i will stop this reply right now.
hi cru - that's true about genre. changed it. stretched this one out a bit since you last heard it. so you know this myth apparently! very cool. thanks for stopping by. need you right now at the site. peace.
I can see this expanding to either a Hip Hop or R & B song. Whats missing is a killer bass line and nice percusssion. Keep at this one I like the mood your evoking.
Cru
This was good, I like the atmosphere you created and the solemness of the piano. Reminded me a little bit of some of the Interlude work from the Judas Priest Album Nostradamus.
Cru
So to me you have made an amazing intro and a nice outtro. Now you need to beef up the middle. To evade writers block here is a little trick. Listen too what you have and write down a description of what you see in your mind, or feel when you listen too this song. Par Example I feel I am sitting on a harbour looking out on the ocean and watching the boats coming in when I hear this one. Then suddenly I remember a real cool time I had with friends. So make the middle about that. Write "cool time with friends" or whatever instinct this makes you feel and you-ll be able to overcome the block. Usually a block is your trying to hard to force something out. you gotta let go sometimes and take on a different direction. The Best example of a song block is this famous musical songwriting duo and one of there famous tracks. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LfOeXT_257w&html5=1
Cru
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Hey Cru!
Thanks for the comment,I had some great artists contributing to this track.
This is one of those tracks that you get so wrapped up in playing and mixing that you truly don't appreciate and enjoy until way after the song is finished,it was such a pleasure to play on this one.
It was so easy to add guitar to but I remember hours of mixing,even all night and still questioning myself.I mixed and played through cheap headphones and when I heard it through a big system for the first time I thought it was all wrong but it was finished so I let it be but now the more my ear changes with slightly better phones my perception is a little better and comments like yours confirms it and I appreciate your review so much.
Hey,did I mention that all guitar parts were played guitar through a cheap Zoom FX pedal and all parts were mixed through a Tascam 8 track..lol,even the sax was sent dry and I added only the built in reverb in the recorder..I only used my old windowsxp computer to convert the wave to mp3 with Audacity...primitive but it worked.Like I said before,it helps a lot when all the collaborators do their part,they knew they could only depend on me for guitar and ears lol!
Beautiful Organ sounds and re-verb on it for the intro. Then the MG bass comes in with a nice line. Then some sort of electronic harmonica sound and then your luscious pads. This sounds like it was made with a Korg MS2000 in some parts? Retro late eighties early nineties feel. Awesome work my friend.
Steve
Nice opening. Cool Pipelike pads. Over compressed drums take away from the glory of those pads and vocals. fix the bass and drums and you have an amazing song. The ideas are grande. The bass cuts into those sounds take away from the enjoyment of this. There Are points I feel I am in a vacuum.
Cru
Cool Work.
Very familiar style in the sense that this is a retro sound from the eighties using modern soft synths. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d5XJ2GiR6Bo&html5=1
is a great example of this.
Thanks for the trip!
"could you make a follow up and call it "the Knob of Despair" Or the "Prick of contempt", Or the Peninsula of disatisfaction" You could make a whole album of idioms.
On the music, the drums are cool and give you a sense of guarded anticipation. The melody is almost like an orchestral arrangement. I really enjoyed listening to this one. It feels there was a true purpose in your writing this. I could see this as background music to an action-packed movie based on the building of the rail-road out west by Chinese labourers.
ood Work
Cruniversely appealing
After much deliberation, the follow-up will be the ladies version, called "The Distraught Twat".
It'll be the kind of track you listen to for about 3 seconds, then tune out the rest when you realize there will be no substance at all for it's duration.
Glad you liked the track. Thanks for the listen and the kind words.
2:13 love the breakdown to that Pad. There was a tune that Sly & Robbie did back in 99 called "zen Concrete" This song reminds me a small bit of that ethos. Which also when I mix this tune with that tune works quite well together. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1yhVyw75Alg&html5=1
Cru
E minor is an interesting key to write in. But I liked the build up. What I would love to see with this piece is some interesting wild solo's as it has potential to incorporate that in the songs matrix, but overall a nice piece of work.
Cru
sweet sweet reverb. I loved this one Domenico. it's spacey, jazzy, Carlos Alomarish guitar sounding in parts. Beautifully panned. A real Gem. The groove had me bobbin in the studio today. And the keys were cool. There was this low tone buzz sound that was stereo spaced that was quite cool as well. I loved that. Then the chords got all dissonant but in a very mathematical way. Super fine song, great sounds and well thought out and that ending into darkness was brilliant.
One hand hitting the other is the sound you should receive for such a great tune my friend.
Steve
Hi Cru,
Thanks for the comment: I have to admit that I don't know who Carlos Alomar is ... I just googled for it and of course I have heard his guitar: Young Americans and Station from Station are two of my all time favorites (actually everything from Bowie... really everything... I know I am a desperate case: I even liked the Thin Machine).
So, thanks again for the kind words!
Ciao, Domenico
Scott Ian made the observation that Megadeth were just a bunch of jazz musicians who happened to be playing ,metal. So Why not Metal-Jazz.
Nice sinister opening. Percussion is restrained and appropriate for this opening. Kind of a spooky sound in the begining (Which is awesome). Groove is phenomenal. first 2:30 felt like 30 seconds.
3 mins on I may have weed myself a bit.( remind me from now on to wear diapers when listening to your music) dark and bitter and groovy and spooky are the only words I can think of.
Ahh 3:52 here comes the warm metal jets. Ooh nice bringdown to the bass only and back to the metal shuffle.
The metal is intense now and really awesome. It think Val-d should like this.
5:52 is an awesome jazz-like breakdown. you have really out done yourself my friend.
7:30 is a nice silent moment.
class and perfection throughout.
love the ending
Congratulations on a great piece of artwork my friend.
Too Cool to be Cru
And finally the Cru-Deity passes comment on this jazz-metal monster. And some urine. Nice to know.
One of my favourite Evisma comments was on my track Valvedriven regarding some badass riffage: "Anus devastated through shit speed". So perhaps you got off lightly here.
The evils synth horn around 2:55 has some anal harmonics added after I smuggled proprietary software out of Guantanamo Bay and modified it. It was intended for "enhanced interrogation procedures" but didn't quite work as they hadn't hit on the jazz-metal formula. I guess they're DOD scientists, not musicians.
I thought you'd appreciate the opening single spooky synth note and then restrained swing cymbally stuff before the groove gets going properly. Good to hear first couple of mins flew by.
"dark and bitter and groovy and spooky"
Yes, all of those except for bitter. More joyously evil than bitter.
"warm metal jets" is a term I like. Not thought of that before.
4:12 down to the bass and it sounds really ominous and dark there. A Rhodes chord and we're back into face being smeared into concrete. That's a Valvedriver phrase and he should indeed like this. Gotta be dark enough (in places) for him.
5:52 just simplish return to smooth groove jazz. I had more of it so it had to return. Mostly because I wanted to get the metal in earlier on rather than all jazz for 5 mins and then into metal for a couple.
7:30 one of my Nomad breakdown tricks there. I sometimes really struggle to join sections together. Many times I've eventually made it work but sometimes I just decide to have a short pause, let the delay ring out and then go back into a fat beat. Also helps break up my beat heavy tracks a little, giving the listener a brief rest.
I hope you noticed that Rhodes is distorted in this at various points. Not sure I've heard Rhodes metal before. Piano metal, yes.
7:31 back to big emphasis on the tritone. This end section could have crushing guitar but I left it out to allow Rhodes and bass guitar to do most of the work. Chillout dark jazz-metal there, all topped off by a massive metal fill at 8:16. New snare too.
This is definitely jazz-metal, not metal-jazz but now you've encouraged me to do the latter so will have to do a metal track lurching into jazz. Kind of the opposite of this one.
You should form a gang/band - The Cru Crew. Or maybe the Too Cru Crew.
Thanks for the words, as always, and glad you enjoyed the jazetal.
wow, based on the opening choir and cool chord progression the rest of the song was like a harsh slap in the face, (not in a bad way)(and not in a 50 shades of grey way), but just like a jolt into something very different. I enjoyed this one.
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Cru
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First of all in the "This Sound Bad On Tv" you know he used few of the sounds from my track so " I don't like the synths (orchestral melody)" I let you imagine my feelings
Second of all, thanks for this feedback For some reason I do not find the word to continue so i will stop this reply right now.
Peace
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Cru
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Lets see you experiment a bit!
Cru
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cru
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Cru
Thanks for the comment,I had some great artists contributing to this track.
This is one of those tracks that you get so wrapped up in playing and mixing that you truly don't appreciate and enjoy until way after the song is finished,it was such a pleasure to play on this one.
It was so easy to add guitar to but I remember hours of mixing,even all night and still questioning myself.I mixed and played through cheap headphones and when I heard it through a big system for the first time I thought it was all wrong but it was finished so I let it be but now the more my ear changes with slightly better phones my perception is a little better and comments like yours confirms it and I appreciate your review so much.
Hey,did I mention that all guitar parts were played guitar through a cheap Zoom FX pedal and all parts were mixed through a Tascam 8 track..lol,even the sax was sent dry and I added only the built in reverb in the recorder..I only used my old windowsxp computer to convert the wave to mp3 with Audacity...primitive but it worked.Like I said before,it helps a lot when all the collaborators do their part,they knew they could only depend on me for guitar and ears lol!
Thanks again for your comment.
Allen
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Steve
Great words from a great composer and key player...it means a lot for me, knowing that keys are playing with me...:-)
Much respect, Danke
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Cru
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loved it
Steve
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Very familiar style in the sense that this is a retro sound from the eighties using modern soft synths.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d5XJ2GiR6Bo&html5=1
is a great example of this.
Thanks for the trip!
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Cru
on The Wang Of Disdain by Evisma
On the music, the drums are cool and give you a sense of guarded anticipation. The melody is almost like an orchestral arrangement. I really enjoyed listening to this one. It feels there was a true purpose in your writing this. I could see this as background music to an action-packed movie based on the building of the rail-road out west by Chinese labourers.
ood Work
Cruniversely appealing
It'll be the kind of track you listen to for about 3 seconds, then tune out the rest when you realize there will be no substance at all for it's duration.
Glad you liked the track. Thanks for the listen and the kind words.
Take care.
Evan
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1yhVyw75Alg&html5=1
Cru
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Cru
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One hand hitting the other is the sound you should receive for such a great tune my friend.
Steve
Thanks for the comment: I have to admit that I don't know who Carlos Alomar is ... I just googled for it and of course I have heard his guitar: Young Americans and Station from Station are two of my all time favorites (actually everything from Bowie... really everything... I know I am a desperate case: I even liked the Thin Machine).
So, thanks again for the kind words!
Ciao, Domenico
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cru
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Nice sinister opening. Percussion is restrained and appropriate for this opening. Kind of a spooky sound in the begining (Which is awesome). Groove is phenomenal. first 2:30 felt like 30 seconds.
3 mins on I may have weed myself a bit.( remind me from now on to wear diapers when listening to your music) dark and bitter and groovy and spooky are the only words I can think of.
Ahh 3:52 here comes the warm metal jets. Ooh nice bringdown to the bass only and back to the metal shuffle.
The metal is intense now and really awesome. It think Val-d should like this.
5:52 is an awesome jazz-like breakdown. you have really out done yourself my friend.
7:30 is a nice silent moment.
class and perfection throughout.
love the ending
Congratulations on a great piece of artwork my friend.
Too Cool to be Cru
One of my favourite Evisma comments was on my track Valvedriven regarding some badass riffage: "Anus devastated through shit speed". So perhaps you got off lightly here.
The evils synth horn around 2:55 has some anal harmonics added after I smuggled proprietary software out of Guantanamo Bay and modified it. It was intended for "enhanced interrogation procedures" but didn't quite work as they hadn't hit on the jazz-metal formula. I guess they're DOD scientists, not musicians.
I thought you'd appreciate the opening single spooky synth note and then restrained swing cymbally stuff before the groove gets going properly. Good to hear first couple of mins flew by.
"dark and bitter and groovy and spooky"
Yes, all of those except for bitter. More joyously evil than bitter.
"warm metal jets" is a term I like. Not thought of that before.
4:12 down to the bass and it sounds really ominous and dark there. A Rhodes chord and we're back into face being smeared into concrete. That's a Valvedriver phrase and he should indeed like this. Gotta be dark enough (in places) for him.
5:52 just simplish return to smooth groove jazz. I had more of it so it had to return. Mostly because I wanted to get the metal in earlier on rather than all jazz for 5 mins and then into metal for a couple.
7:30 one of my Nomad breakdown tricks there. I sometimes really struggle to join sections together. Many times I've eventually made it work but sometimes I just decide to have a short pause, let the delay ring out and then go back into a fat beat. Also helps break up my beat heavy tracks a little, giving the listener a brief rest.
I hope you noticed that Rhodes is distorted in this at various points. Not sure I've heard Rhodes metal before. Piano metal, yes.
7:31 back to big emphasis on the tritone. This end section could have crushing guitar but I left it out to allow Rhodes and bass guitar to do most of the work. Chillout dark jazz-metal there, all topped off by a massive metal fill at 8:16. New snare too.
This is definitely jazz-metal, not metal-jazz but now you've encouraged me to do the latter so will have to do a metal track lurching into jazz. Kind of the opposite of this one.
You should form a gang/band - The Cru Crew. Or maybe the Too Cru Crew.
Thanks for the words, as always, and glad you enjoyed the jazetal.
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