Musically it's a nice modern hymn. good sound and mixing no complaints from the production standpoint.
Lyrically I challenge you this as you so eloquently stated to Static Nomad "I understand that there are many different viewpoints in this world and I'm just sharing mine"
Fair enough. Lyrically I would just question an Omniscient and omnipresent god who created "everything" would take away evil and unjustness when that very God created all of that in the first place. Seems a bit weird logically from a lyrical standpoint? But these are the questions that keep me up at night ;-)
Cru
"Omniscient and omnipresent god who created "everything" would take away evil and unjustness when that very God created all of that in the first place."
It is believed in Christian tradition that evil first entered creation when Satan, once known as Lucifer (the greatest of all angels) decided he would rebel against God and His plan for the human race.
Maybe it would have been more concise to say God created "all things good" since God, being perfect cannot create evil. We through our own decisions can do evil(just like the angels), but that's a whole other story.
What this song is saying is that God will one day return to eliminate all the dischord caused by us and Satan.
I'll try and explain more later! Off to Nashville!
Hey Alex.
Sublimely awesome this track is.
Ferry Terry is such a talented musician with his loops and you have mixed his guitar work in masterfully. the keyboards are so soft and subtle but perfect as you showcase the awesome guitar work. It almost sounds like a live recording.
Awesome work my friend
Steve
thank you so much for your kind words. you can't imagine how much time and energy I put to reach out some excellent musicians from the site personally these last months. this one is simply a result of the work I am doing with ferryterry for quite a long time now. Indeed I started with only mixing his loops few months ago but this one is an entirely new and original project. I gave him backing track and he made great guitar recordings so I could produce this track. I am really happy you liked my keyboard work (I played bass guitar from the keys as well), drums are EZdrummer performances.
I played the first line and I immediately thought of Ultravox!, and then I read your description...wow... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tp_2ClC4eME
and a the album mix..https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T5EEqpkgES4
Back when John Foxx was the Lead singer. Even a little Hiroshima mon amour like as well. Most people don't know this version of Ultravox!, they only know the Ultravox Midge Ure years. But you also captured those years as well by a melodic homage too Reap the Wild Wind. very cool and love this composition.
so I will keep listening and shut up now. great job
Cru
You're absolutely right...for most people Ultravox is Midge Ure and the lads who were in the band at that time. I first heard of them when they released Vienna, but I was soon aware of the earlier lineup cause I took some interest in them. Great band they were in all of their incarnations...I'm really curious how many people on Looperman are familiar with them...I'm glad you're one of them:)
well stick me with a "Carnegiea gigantea".
I agree with Val-d first thing I thought of when listening to this is how far you have come and how diverse your song-writing is becoming.
Crutaegus.
Never heard that botanical name. Missouri has zero cacti, besides the prickley pear. We have a lot of Yucca, but they don't really earn their keep.
"how far you have come and how diverse your song-writing is becoming"
I started here a few months before getting my own DAW, and only then was I able to do stuff myself. My friend Jeff had Cubase, and then Garageband, wanted to play music and record, but our styles didn't really mesh well. I was more dark/melodic, he was more bouncy/bluesy. He is good at what he does, we just weren't the right mix, so when I could, I broke off. Turns out I was doing nearly all of the writing, and he was adding guitar. There is an unfinished project that he started a long time ago called "Smokestack Hero" that is still sitting in Dropbox, waiting for him to do some kind of update.
Anyway, I wish I had found a way, back in the day, to record myself. I would probably be quite a ways ahead of where I am now. Looperman has been a part of every bit of it. There are some tracks still on here from when I was playing with Jeff. You can tell I wrote them, for the most part.
Thanks for the listen, it means so much to have people like what I make. I'm pretty alone at nights, and the music is what gets me through each one. Your kindness means a lot.
I think based on the intro that this would also work well with a Dub reggae beat as the synth sounds like a steel drum. Nice work though, I enjoyed!
Cru
This is Doobielicious. Nice minimalistic approach to the work, but the bass line fits perfectly. I like the chord progression. In this one I think you have strived for the sound and the composition too be perfect and not to solo out one instrument or too showcase your talented bass playing. the seemless mix makes this one special indeed.
I see you gravitating towards better compositional in your last few releases. I really enjoyed this one complicated and simple all in one tune.
Keep it coming.
Crunodes
Steve
I appreciate the kind words. I've been trying to spend more time with each track and not be too repetitive. More parts and layers.
I'm slowly learning how to integrate the six-string into what I do, along with the virtual instruments. I've been creating about 95 percent of the drum patterns lately, with only maybe one loop or midi pattern used in each track.
"complicated and simple all in one tune."
Yes, each line is simple, but it's finding several lead lines that work together that is tough. I'm not 'chords' guy, nor a rhythm guitarist. A "leadist" I be.
Brilliant cinematic composition, great mix. I am a fan of Die Antwoord's creativity and so for you to name-check Chappie intrigued me enough to listen. I am glad I did.
Cru
Hey Fletch are you eastern European? I have noticed that since 2007 this style of house has been coming out of east central Europe, esp Bulgaria . Crisp bass lines and mix, minimalist but some nice synth riffs...almost a trance-house hybrid but very cool to listen and dance too. nice work.
Cru
super cool my friend. Loved the solo's. Perfect playing of the keys. The subtle jazz chords allow you to go crazy on the keys. It's nice to show off now & then how well you play the keys to all the others who just mix loops. Very Mystical journey and a lesson in soloing using scales. I like the underwater feeling at the end. great job Alex!
Steve
Thank you a lot Steve! I truly appreciate the nice words.
I want to be able to play keys in a more organized way some day - lot of work ahead! The new synth is very easy to play but there's also still so much of new regions to explore for me regading to synths and electronic synthesis in general. The 'underwater feel' at the end was achieved by manipulating the cutoff/resonance filtering on the main synth lead.
Thank you for some great inspiration on synths!
Alex
Beautiful, Your voice has the distinct quality of a Neville brother. Lyrically this is also compelling, the drums are tasteful and add a nice accompaniment to the main piano chords. I was just thinking at 2:22 if you added a subtle gospel choir to 2:40 that this would take it over the top.
Awesome work!
Steve
THANK YOU, Steve! I'm very happy to know you enjoyed the track. Your suggestion to add a "subtle gospel choir" is interesting. I'll bounce the idea off my co-conspirator. Thanks again!
Love the intro and up-scaling arpeggios. Then it gets really cool in it's chord progression. Awesome work. the folk version of Phillip Glass. (that's a high serious music compliment), That plant in your avatar, that's a special hybrid of wheat...ehh? ;-)
Cru
The Jigg is up!! I concur with the comments below. (it does seem to come together better towards the end. I like the beat from FT, his drumming is always awesome. Percussion wise it needs some more high hats in a syncopated style.
Here is a funk tune I did for Joe's funk Contest that he never judged yet!!. https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/163779#comments
I it I de-construct funk in a minimalist way in 6/8 time signature. You can hear the high hats in the middle of the tune that I was describing. Keep at this one it's coming along nicely.
Steve
Mate thank you for reviewing this version, pleased you like the changes so far, will check out your link shortly, and try to see what you are saying about this one that would help...Don't know if I will do anymore just yet mate, have a tendency to screw up tracks lately when going back to change them, which I don't want to happen here, but will do more to it for sure, suppose helps when your head is in a good place, which mine hasn't been of late, so will definitely look again soon...Peace n much Respect friend...Mos...
Everyone has been focusing on the sounds, the mixing but there missing the best part of this. Your usage of counterpoint is awesome. in this. diverging melody lines that work so well in this one. The bridge is a classic uplifting chordal structure, but then you give us sort of an electronic bass and guitar fugue. It was over too soon for me. Great work Evan.
Steve
I have trouble with chords and open, anchoring notes, so I wind up doing layered melodies and try to find interesting things that are different, but rub each other right.
Thank you for the kind words. They are appreciated.
@ ;40 subtly is some old ATB pitch bend effected synths...nice. The Strings have a nice melody. I like the contrast with organic instruments and soft synths with the Pitch bend effects. Nicely done.
Cru
I much appreciate your comment on this one! Yes, in a sense it's quite experimental track but I experimented only with that slight reverb addition - I had to use it because I think that basically all very common ambient/surrounding daily sounds definitely appear as quite boring to the 'average listener' (but in fact they are far too underrated - they always stay moment by moment unnoticed and constantly ignored by average audience). Therefore I love them even more!
I believe that John Cage was somehow a very spititual guy, like Tarkovsky. His epic highway scene https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rswYl7RLRNE was a main inspiration for creating this recording.
I really like your current green avatar by the way. I had a green version of mine's as well (but sadly lost it). Everything is really turning green now (in a good sense) haha.
Thank you again and all the best greetings to you,
Truth be told, this is extremely innovative. such a mix of percussion that has not been heard before in such a way. I love what you are doing. You sir are progressing music further with works like this and I salute you for it. I imagine this with vocals and I think you have a new genre.
Cru
First of all in the "This Sound Bad On Tv" you know he used few of the sounds from my track so " I don't like the synths (orchestral melody)" I let you imagine my feelings
Second of all, thanks for this feedback For some reason I do not find the word to continue so i will stop this reply right now.
hi cru - that's true about genre. changed it. stretched this one out a bit since you last heard it. so you know this myth apparently! very cool. thanks for stopping by. need you right now at the site. peace.
I can see this expanding to either a Hip Hop or R & B song. Whats missing is a killer bass line and nice percusssion. Keep at this one I like the mood your evoking.
Cru
on God Shall Rule by BradoSanz
Lyrically I challenge you this as you so eloquently stated to Static Nomad "I understand that there are many different viewpoints in this world and I'm just sharing mine"
Fair enough. Lyrically I would just question an Omniscient and omnipresent god who created "everything" would take away evil and unjustness when that very God created all of that in the first place. Seems a bit weird logically from a lyrical standpoint? But these are the questions that keep me up at night ;-)
Cru
It is believed in Christian tradition that evil first entered creation when Satan, once known as Lucifer (the greatest of all angels) decided he would rebel against God and His plan for the human race.
Maybe it would have been more concise to say God created "all things good" since God, being perfect cannot create evil. We through our own decisions can do evil(just like the angels), but that's a whole other story.
What this song is saying is that God will one day return to eliminate all the dischord caused by us and Satan.
I'll try and explain more later! Off to Nashville!
ER
on You can call it freedom feat ferryterry by promenade2239
Sublimely awesome this track is.
Ferry Terry is such a talented musician with his loops and you have mixed his guitar work in masterfully. the keyboards are so soft and subtle but perfect as you showcase the awesome guitar work. It almost sounds like a live recording.
Awesome work my friend
Steve
thank you so much for your kind words. you can't imagine how much time and energy I put to reach out some excellent musicians from the site personally these last months. this one is simply a result of the work I am doing with ferryterry for quite a long time now. Indeed I started with only mixing his loops few months ago but this one is an entirely new and original project. I gave him backing track and he made great guitar recordings so I could produce this track. I am really happy you liked my keyboard work (I played bass guitar from the keys as well), drums are EZdrummer performances.
Thank you again for such a nice review.
All the best, Alex
on Pax Europea by Orlando51
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tp_2ClC4eME
and a the album mix..https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T5EEqpkgES4
Back when John Foxx was the Lead singer. Even a little Hiroshima mon amour like as well. Most people don't know this version of Ultravox!, they only know the Ultravox Midge Ure years. But you also captured those years as well by a melodic homage too Reap the Wild Wind. very cool and love this composition.
so I will keep listening and shut up now. great job
Cru
Thanks alot for this lovely feedback!
With much appreciation_____Orlando
on Xyilent - Nyan by XyIlent
Cru
:)
on A Quercus Among Acers by Evisma
I agree with Val-d first thing I thought of when listening to this is how far you have come and how diverse your song-writing is becoming.
Crutaegus.
Never heard that botanical name. Missouri has zero cacti, besides the prickley pear. We have a lot of Yucca, but they don't really earn their keep.
"how far you have come and how diverse your song-writing is becoming"
I started here a few months before getting my own DAW, and only then was I able to do stuff myself. My friend Jeff had Cubase, and then Garageband, wanted to play music and record, but our styles didn't really mesh well. I was more dark/melodic, he was more bouncy/bluesy. He is good at what he does, we just weren't the right mix, so when I could, I broke off. Turns out I was doing nearly all of the writing, and he was adding guitar. There is an unfinished project that he started a long time ago called "Smokestack Hero" that is still sitting in Dropbox, waiting for him to do some kind of update.
Anyway, I wish I had found a way, back in the day, to record myself. I would probably be quite a ways ahead of where I am now. Looperman has been a part of every bit of it. There are some tracks still on here from when I was playing with Jeff. You can tell I wrote them, for the most part.
Thanks for the listen, it means so much to have people like what I make. I'm pretty alone at nights, and the music is what gets me through each one. Your kindness means a lot.
Evan
on Demonic Teemo 3001 by Byleth
Cru
on Sicily Farewell 1906 by Orlando51
Steve
Cheers_____Orlando
on Doobie Juice by Evisma
This is Doobielicious. Nice minimalistic approach to the work, but the bass line fits perfectly. I like the chord progression. In this one I think you have strived for the sound and the composition too be perfect and not to solo out one instrument or too showcase your talented bass playing. the seemless mix makes this one special indeed.
I see you gravitating towards better compositional in your last few releases. I really enjoyed this one complicated and simple all in one tune.
Keep it coming.
Crunodes
Steve
I appreciate the kind words. I've been trying to spend more time with each track and not be too repetitive. More parts and layers.
I'm slowly learning how to integrate the six-string into what I do, along with the virtual instruments. I've been creating about 95 percent of the drum patterns lately, with only maybe one loop or midi pattern used in each track.
"complicated and simple all in one tune."
Yes, each line is simple, but it's finding several lead lines that work together that is tough. I'm not 'chords' guy, nor a rhythm guitarist. A "leadist" I be.
I hope all is well up north!
Evan
on I am alive I want to live 0inspired by chappie0 by SoundbenchCreative
Cru
on Yellow Flowers On The Sky by DFletcher
Cru
on Prelude II by promenade2239
Steve
I want to be able to play keys in a more organized way some day - lot of work ahead! The new synth is very easy to play but there's also still so much of new regions to explore for me regading to synths and electronic synthesis in general. The 'underwater feel' at the end was achieved by manipulating the cutoff/resonance filtering on the main synth lead.
Thank you for some great inspiration on synths!
Alex
on OVER YOU by Mykael
Awesome work!
Steve
Love & Light,
Mykael
on I N V U by 520
Cru
on The Funk by Mosaic
Here is a funk tune I did for Joe's funk Contest that he never judged yet!!.
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/163779#comments
I it I de-construct funk in a minimalist way in 6/8 time signature. You can hear the high hats in the middle of the tune that I was describing. Keep at this one it's coming along nicely.
Steve
Mate thank you for reviewing this version, pleased you like the changes so far, will check out your link shortly, and try to see what you are saying about this one that would help...Don't know if I will do anymore just yet mate, have a tendency to screw up tracks lately when going back to change them, which I don't want to happen here, but will do more to it for sure, suppose helps when your head is in a good place, which mine hasn't been of late, so will definitely look again soon...Peace n much Respect friend...Mos...
on Haunted Sunshine by Evisma
Steve
Thank you for the kind words. They are appreciated.
Evan
on Midnight by 15ludwicke
Cru
on One Step by beerling1970
Steve
Steve
on Observable by promenade2239
Steve
I much appreciate your comment on this one! Yes, in a sense it's quite experimental track but I experimented only with that slight reverb addition - I had to use it because I think that basically all very common ambient/surrounding daily sounds definitely appear as quite boring to the 'average listener' (but in fact they are far too underrated - they always stay moment by moment unnoticed and constantly ignored by average audience). Therefore I love them even more!
I believe that John Cage was somehow a very spititual guy, like Tarkovsky. His epic highway scene https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rswYl7RLRNE was a main inspiration for creating this recording.
I really like your current green avatar by the way. I had a green version of mine's as well (but sadly lost it). Everything is really turning green now (in a good sense) haha.
Thank you again and all the best greetings to you,
Aleksander
on Life Is A Test--Re Mix Rough by soundhound
out of 4 pickups is not bad at all...A keeper for sure...
Glad you enjoyed it...
Peace...TG.
on Violent Machine by D3RELICT
Cru
on Violin Bow Factory by Byleth
Cru
First of all in the "This Sound Bad On Tv" you know he used few of the sounds from my track so " I don't like the synths (orchestral melody)" I let you imagine my feelings
Second of all, thanks for this feedback For some reason I do not find the word to continue so i will stop this reply right now.
Peace
on Romulus and Remus ft Stohgs and Phatkatz by DanGoldstein
Cru
on Oh Yeah by JoyfulWAVE
on Something New Instrumental by Venuslove
Cru
on More Than a Day Snippet by oliverzookamoo
Lets see you experiment a bit!
Cru