This was good, I like the atmosphere you created and the solemness of the piano. Reminded me a little bit of some of the Interlude work from the Judas Priest Album Nostradamus.
Cru
So to me you have made an amazing intro and a nice outtro. Now you need to beef up the middle. To evade writers block here is a little trick. Listen too what you have and write down a description of what you see in your mind, or feel when you listen too this song. Par Example I feel I am sitting on a harbour looking out on the ocean and watching the boats coming in when I hear this one. Then suddenly I remember a real cool time I had with friends. So make the middle about that. Write "cool time with friends" or whatever instinct this makes you feel and you-ll be able to overcome the block. Usually a block is your trying to hard to force something out. you gotta let go sometimes and take on a different direction. The Best example of a song block is this famous musical songwriting duo and one of there famous tracks. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LfOeXT_257w&html5=1
Cru
cru
Hey Cru!
Thanks for the comment,I had some great artists contributing to this track.
This is one of those tracks that you get so wrapped up in playing and mixing that you truly don't appreciate and enjoy until way after the song is finished,it was such a pleasure to play on this one.
It was so easy to add guitar to but I remember hours of mixing,even all night and still questioning myself.I mixed and played through cheap headphones and when I heard it through a big system for the first time I thought it was all wrong but it was finished so I let it be but now the more my ear changes with slightly better phones my perception is a little better and comments like yours confirms it and I appreciate your review so much.
Hey,did I mention that all guitar parts were played guitar through a cheap Zoom FX pedal and all parts were mixed through a Tascam 8 track..lol,even the sax was sent dry and I added only the built in reverb in the recorder..I only used my old windowsxp computer to convert the wave to mp3 with Audacity...primitive but it worked.Like I said before,it helps a lot when all the collaborators do their part,they knew they could only depend on me for guitar and ears lol!
Beautiful Organ sounds and re-verb on it for the intro. Then the MG bass comes in with a nice line. Then some sort of electronic harmonica sound and then your luscious pads. This sounds like it was made with a Korg MS2000 in some parts? Retro late eighties early nineties feel. Awesome work my friend.
Steve
Nice opening. Cool Pipelike pads. Over compressed drums take away from the glory of those pads and vocals. fix the bass and drums and you have an amazing song. The ideas are grande. The bass cuts into those sounds take away from the enjoyment of this. There Are points I feel I am in a vacuum.
Cru
Cool Work.
Very familiar style in the sense that this is a retro sound from the eighties using modern soft synths. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d5XJ2GiR6Bo&html5=1
is a great example of this.
Thanks for the trip!
"could you make a follow up and call it "the Knob of Despair" Or the "Prick of contempt", Or the Peninsula of disatisfaction" You could make a whole album of idioms.
On the music, the drums are cool and give you a sense of guarded anticipation. The melody is almost like an orchestral arrangement. I really enjoyed listening to this one. It feels there was a true purpose in your writing this. I could see this as background music to an action-packed movie based on the building of the rail-road out west by Chinese labourers.
ood Work
Cruniversely appealing
After much deliberation, the follow-up will be the ladies version, called "The Distraught Twat".
It'll be the kind of track you listen to for about 3 seconds, then tune out the rest when you realize there will be no substance at all for it's duration.
Glad you liked the track. Thanks for the listen and the kind words.
2:13 love the breakdown to that Pad. There was a tune that Sly & Robbie did back in 99 called "zen Concrete" This song reminds me a small bit of that ethos. Which also when I mix this tune with that tune works quite well together. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1yhVyw75Alg&html5=1
Cru
E minor is an interesting key to write in. But I liked the build up. What I would love to see with this piece is some interesting wild solo's as it has potential to incorporate that in the songs matrix, but overall a nice piece of work.
Cru
sweet sweet reverb. I loved this one Domenico. it's spacey, jazzy, Carlos Alomarish guitar sounding in parts. Beautifully panned. A real Gem. The groove had me bobbin in the studio today. And the keys were cool. There was this low tone buzz sound that was stereo spaced that was quite cool as well. I loved that. Then the chords got all dissonant but in a very mathematical way. Super fine song, great sounds and well thought out and that ending into darkness was brilliant.
One hand hitting the other is the sound you should receive for such a great tune my friend.
Steve
Hi Cru,
Thanks for the comment: I have to admit that I don't know who Carlos Alomar is ... I just googled for it and of course I have heard his guitar: Young Americans and Station from Station are two of my all time favorites (actually everything from Bowie... really everything... I know I am a desperate case: I even liked the Thin Machine).
So, thanks again for the kind words!
Ciao, Domenico
Scott Ian made the observation that Megadeth were just a bunch of jazz musicians who happened to be playing ,metal. So Why not Metal-Jazz.
Nice sinister opening. Percussion is restrained and appropriate for this opening. Kind of a spooky sound in the begining (Which is awesome). Groove is phenomenal. first 2:30 felt like 30 seconds.
3 mins on I may have weed myself a bit.( remind me from now on to wear diapers when listening to your music) dark and bitter and groovy and spooky are the only words I can think of.
Ahh 3:52 here comes the warm metal jets. Ooh nice bringdown to the bass only and back to the metal shuffle.
The metal is intense now and really awesome. It think Val-d should like this.
5:52 is an awesome jazz-like breakdown. you have really out done yourself my friend.
7:30 is a nice silent moment.
class and perfection throughout.
love the ending
Congratulations on a great piece of artwork my friend.
Too Cool to be Cru
And finally the Cru-Deity passes comment on this jazz-metal monster. And some urine. Nice to know.
One of my favourite Evisma comments was on my track Valvedriven regarding some badass riffage: "Anus devastated through shit speed". So perhaps you got off lightly here.
The evils synth horn around 2:55 has some anal harmonics added after I smuggled proprietary software out of Guantanamo Bay and modified it. It was intended for "enhanced interrogation procedures" but didn't quite work as they hadn't hit on the jazz-metal formula. I guess they're DOD scientists, not musicians.
I thought you'd appreciate the opening single spooky synth note and then restrained swing cymbally stuff before the groove gets going properly. Good to hear first couple of mins flew by.
"dark and bitter and groovy and spooky"
Yes, all of those except for bitter. More joyously evil than bitter.
"warm metal jets" is a term I like. Not thought of that before.
4:12 down to the bass and it sounds really ominous and dark there. A Rhodes chord and we're back into face being smeared into concrete. That's a Valvedriver phrase and he should indeed like this. Gotta be dark enough (in places) for him.
5:52 just simplish return to smooth groove jazz. I had more of it so it had to return. Mostly because I wanted to get the metal in earlier on rather than all jazz for 5 mins and then into metal for a couple.
7:30 one of my Nomad breakdown tricks there. I sometimes really struggle to join sections together. Many times I've eventually made it work but sometimes I just decide to have a short pause, let the delay ring out and then go back into a fat beat. Also helps break up my beat heavy tracks a little, giving the listener a brief rest.
I hope you noticed that Rhodes is distorted in this at various points. Not sure I've heard Rhodes metal before. Piano metal, yes.
7:31 back to big emphasis on the tritone. This end section could have crushing guitar but I left it out to allow Rhodes and bass guitar to do most of the work. Chillout dark jazz-metal there, all topped off by a massive metal fill at 8:16. New snare too.
This is definitely jazz-metal, not metal-jazz but now you've encouraged me to do the latter so will have to do a metal track lurching into jazz. Kind of the opposite of this one.
You should form a gang/band - The Cru Crew. Or maybe the Too Cru Crew.
Thanks for the words, as always, and glad you enjoyed the jazetal.
wow, based on the opening choir and cool chord progression the rest of the song was like a harsh slap in the face, (not in a bad way)(and not in a 50 shades of grey way), but just like a jolt into something very different. I enjoyed this one.
I loved this track. It's elegant. sweet, saucy . tasteful and just absolutely executed perfectly.
I'll be honest. I started to listen with no expectations and form the first 4 bars I literally stood up in my studio seat and stood that way for all the 4 mins of this tune.
If I were a kid again and I heard this tune, I would get into music for what I just heard.
I don't give props like this lightly.
Some of my "Main" influences were Jimmy Jam and Terry Lewis, Prince, The Human League, Roxy Music , Sly & Robbie. This Song Has the Ethos of "Jam" & Lewis and the minimalism of Prince from the sign of the times era.
That synth you use which is a chorused square wave thang that is modulated perfectly is brilliant. You should be very proud of what you did here. Then the Piano is so Sublime. Then the percussion is placed with precision.
Congratulations you touched a very jaded musician this evening with a brilliant song.
Cru
well this comments a nice start to my day :)
possibly one of the nicest comments ive ever had haha
You mention that i 'touched a very jaded musician' and i guess that the goal, right? to get some sort of reaction out of people with any song you make and for you to be standing up and enjoying my song it truly means alot to me.
"If I were a kid again and I heard this tune, I would get into music for what I just heard. "
- Are you saying you would get into chill out if you heard this as a kid? haha
Well... its never too late :)
"That synth you use..."
- Yeah i wanted a main synth that was airy and sort of flowing if you know what i mean, and after some major tweaks i think this done the trick :D
"Then the Piano is so Sublime"
- yeah? man im glad, honestly i have looperman to thank for that. I didnt even know what chords were till i started making loops for here haha
"the percussion is placed with precision."
- yeah percussion is something i really neglect in a lot of my songs haha but not this one :)
Thanks for this comment Cru,
it means alot that you enjoyed and took the time to share your thoughts about it.
Hey Alex, so to follow up on the panning thing. If Lech's vox is a pella then it's really easy. Take a wave editor and make the mix (of the pella) mono (usually under the edit function. Then split it into right and left tracks. Add a small bit of stereo delay and voilĂ your in the middle again. If your adding onto one of his songs then it's a bit more tricky.
Steve
Thanks a lot! Actually I won't be removing excellent Lech's panning because it is excellent as it is. This morning my FedEx delivered me my new headphones and after listening to lech's vocals for hours I feel in love with them. Thanks so much for the message but I can't do that! Alex
Everything is right with this song, except my only gripe ever with Lech's vox is that it's always panned to the right, could you center him in the mix!. Otherwise a lovely cocktail song (Campari & Soda with a clementine slice...yum)
Steve
Thank you Steve. So basically I am here only to make corresponding sounds and stick to the original as much as possible lol. Everything is right with me, no worries. Thank you again for the friendly comment!
I greet you from my world, Alex
ps you can always adjust the cables to get the different panning. I never listen on headphones, it sounds abstract to me. So you ultimately buy this one, or not ? I do not believe in panning because I already transgressed it.
on A Soldiers Discovery by BradoSanz
Cru
on Surreal Reality by Mephod
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LfOeXT_257w&html5=1
Cru
cru
on When You Leave - SpellJammer ft Slap Johnson by AllenV
Cru
Thanks for the comment,I had some great artists contributing to this track.
This is one of those tracks that you get so wrapped up in playing and mixing that you truly don't appreciate and enjoy until way after the song is finished,it was such a pleasure to play on this one.
It was so easy to add guitar to but I remember hours of mixing,even all night and still questioning myself.I mixed and played through cheap headphones and when I heard it through a big system for the first time I thought it was all wrong but it was finished so I let it be but now the more my ear changes with slightly better phones my perception is a little better and comments like yours confirms it and I appreciate your review so much.
Hey,did I mention that all guitar parts were played guitar through a cheap Zoom FX pedal and all parts were mixed through a Tascam 8 track..lol,even the sax was sent dry and I added only the built in reverb in the recorder..I only used my old windowsxp computer to convert the wave to mp3 with Audacity...primitive but it worked.Like I said before,it helps a lot when all the collaborators do their part,they knew they could only depend on me for guitar and ears lol!
Thanks again for your comment.
Allen
on Atlantic drifts by Danke
Steve
Great words from a great composer and key player...it means a lot for me, knowing that keys are playing with me...:-)
Much respect, Danke
on -Vox Chop- old demo by Darklighter
Cru
on Tripcore - Royal Hardcore by Tripcore
cru
on Waiting for the Sun by Darkreine
loved it
Steve
on Happy Beat by Joshuamaybe
Very familiar style in the sense that this is a retro sound from the eighties using modern soft synths.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d5XJ2GiR6Bo&html5=1
is a great example of this.
Thanks for the trip!
on Land Of Peace by Ohropack
Cru
on The Wang Of Disdain by Evisma
On the music, the drums are cool and give you a sense of guarded anticipation. The melody is almost like an orchestral arrangement. I really enjoyed listening to this one. It feels there was a true purpose in your writing this. I could see this as background music to an action-packed movie based on the building of the rail-road out west by Chinese labourers.
ood Work
Cruniversely appealing
It'll be the kind of track you listen to for about 3 seconds, then tune out the rest when you realize there will be no substance at all for it's duration.
Glad you liked the track. Thanks for the listen and the kind words.
Take care.
Evan
on The festival of Two Moons by mpoppitt
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1yhVyw75Alg&html5=1
Cru
on Burned with Desire (TranzOverMix) by TranzOver
Cru
on Clubbing ft PDMuzak by mrwolf14
One hand hitting the other is the sound you should receive for such a great tune my friend.
Steve
Thanks for the comment: I have to admit that I don't know who Carlos Alomar is ... I just googled for it and of course I have heard his guitar: Young Americans and Station from Station are two of my all time favorites (actually everything from Bowie... really everything... I know I am a desperate case: I even liked the Thin Machine).
So, thanks again for the kind words!
Ciao, Domenico
on Xodus by Killumineye
on Waltzing Matilda - Deep House mix by KBone147
cru
on Emperor Tritone by StaticNomad
Nice sinister opening. Percussion is restrained and appropriate for this opening. Kind of a spooky sound in the begining (Which is awesome). Groove is phenomenal. first 2:30 felt like 30 seconds.
3 mins on I may have weed myself a bit.( remind me from now on to wear diapers when listening to your music) dark and bitter and groovy and spooky are the only words I can think of.
Ahh 3:52 here comes the warm metal jets. Ooh nice bringdown to the bass only and back to the metal shuffle.
The metal is intense now and really awesome. It think Val-d should like this.
5:52 is an awesome jazz-like breakdown. you have really out done yourself my friend.
7:30 is a nice silent moment.
class and perfection throughout.
love the ending
Congratulations on a great piece of artwork my friend.
Too Cool to be Cru
One of my favourite Evisma comments was on my track Valvedriven regarding some badass riffage: "Anus devastated through shit speed". So perhaps you got off lightly here.
The evils synth horn around 2:55 has some anal harmonics added after I smuggled proprietary software out of Guantanamo Bay and modified it. It was intended for "enhanced interrogation procedures" but didn't quite work as they hadn't hit on the jazz-metal formula. I guess they're DOD scientists, not musicians.
I thought you'd appreciate the opening single spooky synth note and then restrained swing cymbally stuff before the groove gets going properly. Good to hear first couple of mins flew by.
"dark and bitter and groovy and spooky"
Yes, all of those except for bitter. More joyously evil than bitter.
"warm metal jets" is a term I like. Not thought of that before.
4:12 down to the bass and it sounds really ominous and dark there. A Rhodes chord and we're back into face being smeared into concrete. That's a Valvedriver phrase and he should indeed like this. Gotta be dark enough (in places) for him.
5:52 just simplish return to smooth groove jazz. I had more of it so it had to return. Mostly because I wanted to get the metal in earlier on rather than all jazz for 5 mins and then into metal for a couple.
7:30 one of my Nomad breakdown tricks there. I sometimes really struggle to join sections together. Many times I've eventually made it work but sometimes I just decide to have a short pause, let the delay ring out and then go back into a fat beat. Also helps break up my beat heavy tracks a little, giving the listener a brief rest.
I hope you noticed that Rhodes is distorted in this at various points. Not sure I've heard Rhodes metal before. Piano metal, yes.
7:31 back to big emphasis on the tritone. This end section could have crushing guitar but I left it out to allow Rhodes and bass guitar to do most of the work. Chillout dark jazz-metal there, all topped off by a massive metal fill at 8:16. New snare too.
This is definitely jazz-metal, not metal-jazz but now you've encouraged me to do the latter so will have to do a metal track lurching into jazz. Kind of the opposite of this one.
You should form a gang/band - The Cru Crew. Or maybe the Too Cru Crew.
Thanks for the words, as always, and glad you enjoyed the jazetal.
on Eh Olay by Grunties
Cru
on So You Wanna Funk - The Wilde Bootleg Remix by RenzWilde
cruy
on Return of the King by KingVortex
on Rugmice R Real by glados666
on Xyilent - Dreaming by XyIlent
I loved this track. It's elegant. sweet, saucy . tasteful and just absolutely executed perfectly.
I'll be honest. I started to listen with no expectations and form the first 4 bars I literally stood up in my studio seat and stood that way for all the 4 mins of this tune.
If I were a kid again and I heard this tune, I would get into music for what I just heard.
I don't give props like this lightly.
Some of my "Main" influences were Jimmy Jam and Terry Lewis, Prince, The Human League, Roxy Music , Sly & Robbie. This Song Has the Ethos of "Jam" & Lewis and the minimalism of Prince from the sign of the times era.
That synth you use which is a chorused square wave thang that is modulated perfectly is brilliant. You should be very proud of what you did here. Then the Piano is so Sublime. Then the percussion is placed with precision.
Congratulations you touched a very jaded musician this evening with a brilliant song.
Cru
possibly one of the nicest comments ive ever had haha
You mention that i 'touched a very jaded musician' and i guess that the goal, right? to get some sort of reaction out of people with any song you make and for you to be standing up and enjoying my song it truly means alot to me.
"If I were a kid again and I heard this tune, I would get into music for what I just heard. "
- Are you saying you would get into chill out if you heard this as a kid? haha
Well... its never too late :)
"That synth you use..."
- Yeah i wanted a main synth that was airy and sort of flowing if you know what i mean, and after some major tweaks i think this done the trick :D
"Then the Piano is so Sublime"
- yeah? man im glad, honestly i have looperman to thank for that. I didnt even know what chords were till i started making loops for here haha
"the percussion is placed with precision."
- yeah percussion is something i really neglect in a lot of my songs haha but not this one :)
Thanks for this comment Cru,
it means alot that you enjoyed and took the time to share your thoughts about it.
Respect,
Xyilent :D
on everything is right with my world by promenade2239
Steve
on everything is right with my world by promenade2239
Steve
I greet you from my world, Alex
ps you can always adjust the cables to get the different panning. I never listen on headphones, it sounds abstract to me. So you ultimately buy this one, or not ? I do not believe in panning because I already transgressed it.
on Come As You Are - Acoustic Cover by BradoSanz
Cru
on Poppe and Viperactive - SWAT by Poppe
Cru