crucethus

This is really nice work. The vocals fit in the mix perfectly. Production is spot on. It's perfectly tuned for the radio. Not to experimental but has just the right bit of edge. great job
Cru

Awesome work. Sounds very Trap-like and the production is amazing. Weird to hear those old analogue drum kits being twisted like that, but that’s creativity at it's best.
all the best
Cru

Hey Poppe, my 2 cents. It's ok to put not fully released material on this site, because you are looking for feedback, so don't worry about that (Prom). I'm ok with the synth at :14 being not in key because it creates a sinister dissonance. I write sometimes with dissonance in mind and even a-tonally, so if it fits in your creative vision please keep it. (Epic). You probably won't get most of us to come over to the soundcloud site for 2 reasons. 1. were lazy, and 2 were incredibly loyal to what Shan has created on this site. So if you do have the whole version (unless your like static and have a 22minute version that won't fit here), please post it all here as well.
Cru

Loved the intro, as modex said, the timing is a bit of an issue. Tighten that up and this is a killer song.
Cru

Joe, this is so sinister that I love it. Great great work. Minimalist. Kraftwerk like precision with your Teutonic vox makes this just so so good. I love how it builds with a cool stereo pan mix and then that bass. I like yourself am not a fatalist and believe in all that apocalyptic BS, but if there were an end, I would believe that this tune would capture the zeitgeist with the utmost accuracy my friend.
Cru

The talent on this site just gets better and better each passing day. This is a perfect metal song. My only and I say only Critique is that at the end I would love to hear your voice go up an octave and maybe scream at us in an old school progressive metal operatic way for just a few bars. But that is my only complaint, the solo is spot on , the mix is sublime. great job overall. Even though I don't make metal music on this site, it is a Huge influence in my musical catalogue of songs and I appreciate when it's done right.
Cru

Best Cure for writers block is Brian Eno's Oblique Strategies.
http://www.rtqe.net/ObliqueStrategies/
Completely will open you up as an artist.
Cru

You did an awesome job on Dankes loop. good wrok
Cru

Killer rock track and very radio friendly indeed. Only thing missing is a killer guitar solo (Showing my age) Bon chance.

Cru

Ahh I enjoyed this one for the fun it brought. I agree with Spiv in that it's more trip-hop or garage than chill, but still doesn't take away from my enjoyment.
Steve

I loved the intro, and then it got ...well very "trapped" nice short excerpt.
Cru

"Ardcore, you know the score" haven’t heard that phrase in a bit, but you captured the intensity of that period, nice work.
cru

I really like this 3rd version. great work on it and I love how it ends on the singular piano note.
ood work Alex.
Steve

Funkourette's

I love the glass bowed effect, I have worked with ambient sounds like this before and it makes the best dissonant effects. This is a great effort my friend and i tthoroughly enjoyed it.
Cru

Very nice composition Doug. Opening Piano Remined me slightly of Judas Priest "eulogy" off of the angel of retribution album. but this morphs into cinematic splendor. I love the strings chord progressions.
good work, fav'd
cru

The guitar and bass lines make this for me.. love the production. good Work my friend.
Cru

Ok here is my take on this. There is a little bit of clipping I hear, lower your headroom before compressing. Your musical taste is much more eclectic than I gave you credit for my dear. I really like this though. My thoughts on effects are this....when you first get a hold of a new toy you want to try everything and you want to hear the effect slapping you across the face. But as you go on you learn when to hold back and when to use it effectively, and that just takes time and practice. So keep doing these segues as they will help you grow. I have about 26(90 min) old cassette tapes of material (from back in the day) that will never see the light of day because most of them were practice songs. For me listening to Bryan Ferry and Roxy Music, and Also Brian Eno was a master class in how to arrange sounds subtly and effectively. Some musicians used to complain that no one can hear themselves on a Bryan Ferry track which could have up to 30 musicians on it, but the whole sound together is what made it lush and vibrant...tasteful. so keep on keeping on.
Cru

cool Alex, this is a nice interpretation. That's almost like I was switching an FM radio and all the stations were Jazz Funk.
Cru

Never give it up man. Music is awesome whether you sing it or play it.
great job
cru

Teutonic mastery.. sort of trance and electronica. very smartly put together and mastered in a pantheon of panning.
nice work
cru

you actually made it a-tonal. this might be the most avant garde work I have ever heard. You just invented scream-funk. I actually love this Antonious...it's bizarre and freaking original...Joe.. This kid should win this contest.....Joe..I think I may have to revive him...
Cru