yes sir my friend you have a good ear upon creating the track it needed that feel good element and that sample fit the bill thanks for checking out my track one love fam
Grüezi:
So Louis CK does a great bit on the pronunciation of Vagina in Boston as Vaginer.. about 6 min in. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=obaljnK6Qnk&html5=1
My grandmother spoke with a massive Brooklyn accent. She used to call a toilet a terlet, and Oil earl. Myself I love the Tidewater accent, which is two isolated islands off the Virginia coast whose speakers sometimes drift into the only form of Elizabethan (maybe, maybe not) English known to exist. This is the Accent the founding fathers of the U.S. most likely spoke. A weird construct of Southern Dialect and Midlands English. https://vimeo.com/4037124
Peace.
Crunalinguist
Louis CK is funny as hell. Jizzanthipuss is probably my favorite from him. Never thought of the word "Vagina" being a verb, but I guess "Dick" is, so why not? I've heard "Dick this bitch up" several times.
Archie Bunker was great with the accent, though I believe his character was living in Queens.
The Tidewater accent is nearly the Arkansas accent when combined with whiskey and the already prevalent inbreeding and rapid tooth loss.
nice pads. Then the beat comes in, but perfect for the chill lounge, I think if you filtered out the pads, but bring them back up with the arpeggios you will have a winner. Very clever tune you have made. I like it a lot. Maybe from 4:39 on a cool synth solo. Just some ideas. Great work!
Cru
nice pads. Then the beat comes in, but perfect for the chill lounge, I think if you filtered out the pads, but bring them back up with the arpeggios you will have a winner. Very clever tune you have made. I like it a lot. Maybe from 4:39 on a cool synth solo. Just some ideas. Great work!
Cru
Yeah im working on filter on the pads, see if i can get it sounding cool.
A synth solo could be a good idea, was looking to get an another melody in here somewhere and that would be a good way to do it, so yeah ill prob do that :)
Yep that's, classic deep house circa 2000 NYC Tenaglia or Calderone would be spinning that. Could have even ended up on Twisted records. You nailed the essence of it with that remix, great Job.
Cru
Cheers Cru,
Real happy you like it ,and great praise to say it could be on twisted !
ime quite new on here an ive a few more you should like . watch this space
Regreetings:
Billy and Jimmy had a mutual admiration for each other at that time. Hendrix took him out on tour because of that, I'm sure a bit of each of them rubbed off.
"Comanche" is from the Ute name for them, kɨmantsi (enemy) They broke from the Shoshone after acquiring horses from the Pueblo.
How do you get a drummer off your porch?
Pay him for the pizza. (Ouch)
First Time I heard ZZ Top. Glad U asked....I was young and my parents had a cable box with a dial on it. I found if I manoeuvred the dial ever so carefully between the channels I would evade the scrambling resistor and I could watch the playboy channel. They had some video with some playmates to the awesome tune of cheap sunglasses, ahh the innocence of youth.
Thanks for the re-greet Cru.
I happen to have a lil relative story of my own that I've decided to lay on you...
Several years ago I worked for a company here in Dallas called Showco, that designed and built sound stage set ups for concerts. Later I also worked on the development of an off-shoot venture of theirs that spawned Vari-Lite, which revolutionized stage lighting. One of the first bands to take interest in Vari-Lite was ZZ Top. My boss at the time, lets call him "Happy", grew up in Houston and went to school with Billy. "Hap" had a few acres of land south of big D, and well...had him a nice bumper crop of home grown. One day Billy and Frank showed up at the facility to approve the lighting designs for their upcoming "Eliminator" tour. Billy came in wearing this flamboyant baby blue satin jumpsuit with a white cowboy hat and brand new Tony Lama ostrich skin cowboy boots. Long story short, Hap jumped in a limo with the boys and retreated to his south 40 for a brief respite. When they returned, in walks Billy with his boots covered in red Texas mud and the whole ass end of his pants ripped out. "WTF happened !", we all asked. Billy just said "A little mishap with security down at Rancho Texacano". Translation: His muddy boots lost their grip while crossing the barbed wire fence that bordered a special portion of Haps property. We all laughed till we cried, and was glad he was sporting underwear! They later named one of their best-of albums after Hap's Hacienda. Lots of craziness and fun times back then. Maybe I will recount a few more when the time is right - only here on Looperman.
Hey Jamid, I don't hear the distortion AsidRN is hearing. I am listening in the studio on a pair of Bose 2.4's from 1986, which reproduce natural sounds awesome. Overall though very nice work, I like the bass lines on this one.
Cru
Cru
Hello mate,
How you doing, thanks for your feedback mate.
Yes, he had me doubting my hearing.
I could not detect any distortion at all.
Thanks again
Jamid
Hi Cruce, thank you for giving your valuable feedback on this track! Totally prepared to admit a fondness for New Order... in fact their records and tapes are some of my prized possessions. Been listening to my "Brotherhood" tape since 1990. I have mixed feeling about their very early stuff, when still in mourning from Ian Curtis's death... it seemed like they were still trying to be Joy Division, and it's a bit sad... but then you could say the same thing about me. Even more frustrating is that Hook has left the band now... The other groups you mentioned, I only have a fleeting impression of their work, and do not own any of it. I think I do realize the capturing of an era you speak of, but I'm trying to take it in a different direction... Such as the musical results of performer who was meant to die in their 20's, but somehow arose from all the risky situations alive still. Borrowed time, borrowed money, freedom to do what shouldn't have been possible. I think you get it. Thank you again!
Wow that takes me back, those drums were so late eighties early nineties. And that DX7 Mod wheel sound. I remember playing in a High School band playing the keys for Jody Watleys "looking for a New Love". Also The Latin Rascals Remixes used these drum styles heavily. Great Guitar sound and solo. Awesome job guys!
Cru
Thanks for the positive feedback. It really means a lot when we here people like our tunes. I wish I could take all the credit on this but My03 was the originator on this. I just did the guitar since he is a master on keyboards.
I stopped by your lopperman link I like your tunes you play keys well.
Pleasant tune you made there my friend. I like the softness of it. our voice treatments are very seventies sounding (folk groups) which is perfect. I like the synth melody after the verses. Nice structuring. I would pull it out of Drum and bass and put it in folk music. yes the drums are a little D&B like but the overall feel of the song belongs in folk.
Good job
Steve
I had the same in my mind - folk - thats why i wrote "Drum and Chill Folk" but i believed that the first comment would be a - this isn´t folk, it has a d&b drumset - :)
"our voice treatments are very seventies sounding"
this is realy cool, ´cause you know that i am normaly more a 80´s child.
Nice to know that you like the song and this little synth melody.
So the first listen and eview will be about the emotional feeling this track evokes and not the technical terms which will come later. I think what makes your music so interesting is that the bass is always moving , the drums are not overpowering or underwhelming but like goldilocks said to the third of everything.."it's just right". That being said golidlocks is a bitch sometimes for just taking other peoples stuff. You don't really take other peoples stuff, you invent your own sounds that are very unique to you. And thats hats off to yah for that, though I don't wear hats, if I had one...you know what I mean. tHis song starts out in Cminor. I just came up with a Pad sound that I added distortion too that actually fits so well with this tune. I should Share. Ahh I just entered the key change to D minor. very subtle actually. You may not have the years of musical training behind you but your musical instinct is in the genius level. Nice Fuzzy guitar solo BTW. End on that last note, the extra quiet sounds are not needed.
Always a fun listen my friend.
cruiserweights
I'll be honest and say that I kind of re-featured it as you hadn't commented and I wondered what you made of it. No new tracks from me currently as I'm struggling over a few (and going through a very fallow musical period) so thought this was a good one to re-feature.
"the bass is always moving"
Note all the lead bass g in this (hence the Evisma dedication) though there's always synth bass underneath as that lead bass is way too thin so bottom end is needed to beef this up.
"I don't wear hats"
I do (one at a time) so I'm taking mine off right now and doffing it towards myself to save you the bother.
"you invent your own sounds that are very unique to you"
Yes and no. I use a shitload of presets (remember: almost all my synth work comes from Reason) and never start with only a basic patch and make it more elaborate. I'm good at controlling a few synth parameters and using them effectively though I'm not at all knowledgeable about synths and their programming.
I guess I also come up with some unique bass, guitar, and banj sounds through my processing of them but would say the main sounds I "invent" are the combination of all of these different sounds into what sometimes sounds like a single, layered sound. Difficult to explain.
Subtle key change to D minor was me realising a key change was required as the track was starting to feel a bit monotonous. D is my main key so very easy to slip back into.
"Nice Fuzzy guitar solo"
I guess that would be the bass guitar with distortion plugin turned on at around 9:24. It's just the same sort of playing as the section before but with added distortion and crashing drums. All part of me extending things more and more but I've made it sound like it's a new part
"your musical instinct is in the genius level"
Hard to know quite what to say to that except thanks. I don't know what I'm doing but I'm able to listen and hear quite deeply within riffs and grooves and then find interesting ways to work off them. So many limitations and failures but with enough time and editing I can come up with things that make me sound better than I really am.
"End on that last note, the extra quiet sounds are not needed"
Sousa like intro melds into a cool ambient dissonant beginning. 1:25 says hello to us with bass delights and then some deviant pads. Piano at 2:20 is a light touch. I love the light percussive elements as well, well thought out. 2:52 has a Floyd like guitar approach. I love the sound of a fret-less bass. I wish more musicians use them on modern music. I have tried to emulate them using synths and a healthy working of the pitch bend but you can't mistake that unique sound. @4:48 we get some synth (g-tar?) sounds that emulate radio waves and whale song, cool. The arrangements are sublime. our music is giving me a nice feeling of Zen this evening. I can discuss the technical issues all night, but to describe how a certain piece effects you emotionally is the real test. 7:09 is a nice feedback sound which you subtly add but at a lesser gain in the next 30 seconds of the piece. And we End with Sousa...like Sousa took acid and saw the future....anyhow hats off to yah, A jar of Vegemite to you Dave, and a Jar of Marmite (Cenovis, Vitam-R) to Detlef.
Great work
Steve
Not a big fan of hardstyle, but your voice sounds good in this. reminds me of. Tony Hadley (Spandau Ballet). Marc et Claude.... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eWWNTCyc1aE&html5=1
Your voice would work with many genres.
Cru
Why your a serious musician now..because when your given constraints..you make something out of it due to your obsession to music. If I had a badge I would give you one.
cru
yeahhhhhhh!!!!! I love ZZtop, But I love the fact Billy Gibbons was influenced by Hendrix. This is a nice Blues Guitar sound you have created, that reminds us of Tejas! But it does need drums......
I liked it though.
Keep on Keepin!
Cru
Not entirely sure if Billy's playing was that influenced by Jimi but anybody playing blues or guitar for that matter at the time would certainly have taken some kind of interest in Hendrix. Billy began playing with the Moving Sidewalks who actually opened for The Jimi Hendrix Experience during their first American tour. Interesting you mention Tejas. It's one of my favorite ZZ Top albums and the song Asleep in the Desert influenced the idea for this track. Nobody digs my drums on this ....(pouting)?
Thanks a bunch for the comment Cru.
"I used to be a necrophiliac till a rotten bitch split on me."
"
Ahhh, Well when I go, I want to go like my Grandfather did........ Died Peacefully in his sleep.......Unlike his passengers who died screaming and crying!!........¯\_(ツ)_/¯
New mix sounds more Cohesive and very professional. Me likey long time would be how I would say my feelings if I was born in ohhh I' don't know say Shanghai and forced to wear a mini skirt and parade out on the street soliciting strangers. Fortunately I speak proper English.........makes the transactions easier , I would gather. (^‿^). Anyhooo Time is Money.
Crustitute
I like how the rhythm and the bass mimic a locamotive. Great sounds, sax equates to the horn, you even make it sound like a steam locomotive. The subtle placement of guitar is awesome as well. The bass line is right out of the seventies (Quiet Sun) . Awesome creative use of minimalism to represent a visual idea using sound, brilliant my friend.
Cru
Thank you for your kind comments.
I love that slow blowy s̶e̶x̶ sax!
I've got this mad desire to create images.
Lately I've used a clock a heart beat an engine white noise for a breathing pump but only very subtly ... apart from the heartbeat that wasn't subtle.
Having to listen to this stuff over and over and over some more while building it up should come with a health warning.
The heart one I swear I had palpitations.
This one I've stamped some of the plaster off the wall under my desk!
Thank you for your time Cruce.
Thanks...
A few things I'm not sold on yet, I think the bouncing guitar
maybe just a little to bouncy... If you get my drift...
I intend to kick it around a bit more...
This is awesome. I love the minimalism but it directs the listener to the voice and the music is just a background. Which is what you would be aiming for in a remix contest like this. 3 thumbs up (might be one too many?) Great work
Cru
I think you have created a disturbing new genre called Fairy-Tale metal.(FTM) (conte de fée Métal). Nicely done; the bells are disturbingly relevant for what you are doing here. I agree with Danke and Phat Katz in that I want to hear a more distorted guitar. But this is a really creative work you have made my friend, explore this one!
Cru
Dear Cru you know me, I love making original genre.
Hope there will have soon a Fairy-Tale Metal tag on looperman :)
By bells do you means the first instrument ? because a lot of my friends says its bells but in reality its a piano with a lot of fx anyway thanks for the feedback about the "bells"
Again the guitar issue, In fact I was not prepared for my challenge so I used the vsti sytrus (comes with my daw) to make my electric guitar.
If someone who have a real electric guitar I could maybe give him the note so he/she will be able to make real guitar sounds for my song. Im sorry but I think for now its all i can do for the electric guitar (out of my skills).
on BIRTHDAY ANTHEM by njb4music
on Star Forge by Evisma
So Louis CK does a great bit on the pronunciation of Vagina in Boston as Vaginer.. about 6 min in.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=obaljnK6Qnk&html5=1
My grandmother spoke with a massive Brooklyn accent. She used to call a toilet a terlet, and Oil earl. Myself I love the Tidewater accent, which is two isolated islands off the Virginia coast whose speakers sometimes drift into the only form of Elizabethan (maybe, maybe not) English known to exist. This is the Accent the founding fathers of the U.S. most likely spoke. A weird construct of Southern Dialect and Midlands English.
https://vimeo.com/4037124
Peace.
Crunalinguist
Louis CK is funny as hell. Jizzanthipuss is probably my favorite from him. Never thought of the word "Vagina" being a verb, but I guess "Dick" is, so why not? I've heard "Dick this bitch up" several times.
Archie Bunker was great with the accent, though I believe his character was living in Queens.
The Tidewater accent is nearly the Arkansas accent when combined with whiskey and the already prevalent inbreeding and rapid tooth loss.
Evan
on Xyilent - Hours by XyIlent
Cru
on Xyilent - Hours by XyIlent
Cru
A synth solo could be a good idea, was looking to get an another melody in here somewhere and that would be a good way to do it, so yeah ill prob do that :)
Thanks man! :)
on Bosswalk by donnorris
Cru
Real happy you like it ,and great praise to say it could be on twisted !
ime quite new on here an ive a few more you should like . watch this space
on Comanchera by Neomorpheus
Billy and Jimmy had a mutual admiration for each other at that time. Hendrix took him out on tour because of that, I'm sure a bit of each of them rubbed off.
"Comanche" is from the Ute name for them, kɨmantsi (enemy) They broke from the Shoshone after acquiring horses from the Pueblo.
How do you get a drummer off your porch?
Pay him for the pizza. (Ouch)
First Time I heard ZZ Top. Glad U asked....I was young and my parents had a cable box with a dial on it. I found if I manoeuvred the dial ever so carefully between the channels I would evade the scrambling resistor and I could watch the playboy channel. They had some video with some playmates to the awesome tune of cheap sunglasses, ahh the innocence of youth.
I happen to have a lil relative story of my own that I've decided to lay on you...
Several years ago I worked for a company here in Dallas called Showco, that designed and built sound stage set ups for concerts. Later I also worked on the development of an off-shoot venture of theirs that spawned Vari-Lite, which revolutionized stage lighting. One of the first bands to take interest in Vari-Lite was ZZ Top. My boss at the time, lets call him "Happy", grew up in Houston and went to school with Billy. "Hap" had a few acres of land south of big D, and well...had him a nice bumper crop of home grown. One day Billy and Frank showed up at the facility to approve the lighting designs for their upcoming "Eliminator" tour. Billy came in wearing this flamboyant baby blue satin jumpsuit with a white cowboy hat and brand new Tony Lama ostrich skin cowboy boots. Long story short, Hap jumped in a limo with the boys and retreated to his south 40 for a brief respite. When they returned, in walks Billy with his boots covered in red Texas mud and the whole ass end of his pants ripped out. "WTF happened !", we all asked. Billy just said "A little mishap with security down at Rancho Texacano". Translation: His muddy boots lost their grip while crossing the barbed wire fence that bordered a special portion of Haps property. We all laughed till we cried, and was glad he was sporting underwear! They later named one of their best-of albums after Hap's Hacienda. Lots of craziness and fun times back then. Maybe I will recount a few more when the time is right - only here on Looperman.
on Waiting by DijamMusic
Cru
Hello mate,
How you doing, thanks for your feedback mate.
Yes, he had me doubting my hearing.
I could not detect any distortion at all.
Thanks again
Jamid
on Embers ft Ed Cunningham Tumbleweed by PDMuzak
Great work. Sax is mixed nicely in the background.
good work.
Cru
on Cant Even by Cestevens1783
Good Work.
Cru
on Snake In The Past by Spivkurl
Captured early New Order, Vice Versa, This:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2qV33b9DGlo&html5=1
Miss Kitten and the Hacker. Early Berlin (Sex I'm a)
I was mixing this tune as I was listening to yours:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3PbNrsDUyho&html5=1
Your really capturing an era nicely without I think realizing that. It's almost like your re-inventing the sound again. Great work a fav.
Steve
on My03 - Midiman007 - Stereophonic Sounds 80 and 90 by midiman007
Cru
I stopped by your lopperman link I like your tunes you play keys well.
on Hey Komm doch mit by joecramer
Good job
Steve
Thanks for your listen and your comment.
I had the same in my mind - folk - thats why i wrote "Drum and Chill Folk" but i believed that the first comment would be a - this isn´t folk, it has a d&b drumset - :)
"our voice treatments are very seventies sounding"
this is realy cool, ´cause you know that i am normaly more a 80´s child.
Nice to know that you like the song and this little synth melody.
stay tuned
joe
on 9000 Years Too Young by StaticNomad
Always a fun listen my friend.
cruiserweights
Thanks for Cruising by my little pop tune.
I'll be honest and say that I kind of re-featured it as you hadn't commented and I wondered what you made of it. No new tracks from me currently as I'm struggling over a few (and going through a very fallow musical period) so thought this was a good one to re-feature.
"the bass is always moving"
Note all the lead bass g in this (hence the Evisma dedication) though there's always synth bass underneath as that lead bass is way too thin so bottom end is needed to beef this up.
"I don't wear hats"
I do (one at a time) so I'm taking mine off right now and doffing it towards myself to save you the bother.
"you invent your own sounds that are very unique to you"
Yes and no. I use a shitload of presets (remember: almost all my synth work comes from Reason) and never start with only a basic patch and make it more elaborate. I'm good at controlling a few synth parameters and using them effectively though I'm not at all knowledgeable about synths and their programming.
I guess I also come up with some unique bass, guitar, and banj sounds through my processing of them but would say the main sounds I "invent" are the combination of all of these different sounds into what sometimes sounds like a single, layered sound. Difficult to explain.
Subtle key change to D minor was me realising a key change was required as the track was starting to feel a bit monotonous. D is my main key so very easy to slip back into.
"Nice Fuzzy guitar solo"
I guess that would be the bass guitar with distortion plugin turned on at around 9:24. It's just the same sort of playing as the section before but with added distortion and crashing drums. All part of me extending things more and more but I've made it sound like it's a new part
"your musical instinct is in the genius level"
Hard to know quite what to say to that except thanks. I don't know what I'm doing but I'm able to listen and hear quite deeply within riffs and grooves and then find interesting ways to work off them. So many limitations and failures but with enough time and editing I can come up with things that make me sound better than I really am.
"End on that last note, the extra quiet sounds are not needed"
I will have a good think about that.
Take care of thyself.
on Future in the Past by Planetjazzbass
Great work
Steve
on DJ Lady Faith Ft Esteban - Break Free EDC Master by BradoSanz
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eWWNTCyc1aE&html5=1
Your voice would work with many genres.
Cru
on When The Fight Starts by MOONLYTE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GXFSK0ogeg4&html5=1
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aSTV99Uy8hk&html5=1
But ultimately this is very good.
Cru
on Needle In The Hay Ft VSlimm and FAnalysis by SeriouslyJoking
cru
I'm proudly accepting the imaginary badge, thank you!
=D
Have a great summer and take care/ SJ =)
on Comanchera by Neomorpheus
I liked it though.
Keep on Keepin!
Cru
Thanks a bunch for the comment Cru.
on Star Forge by Evisma
"
Ahhh, Well when I go, I want to go like my Grandfather did........ Died Peacefully in his sleep.......Unlike his passengers who died screaming and crying!!........¯\_(ツ)_/¯
New mix sounds more Cohesive and very professional. Me likey long time would be how I would say my feelings if I was born in ohhh I' don't know say Shanghai and forced to wear a mini skirt and parade out on the street soliciting strangers. Fortunately I speak proper English.........makes the transactions easier , I would gather. (^‿^). Anyhooo Time is Money.
Crustitute
Hope all is well in Chillville!
"Show me a piece of tropical fruit, and I'll show you a c*ck-s*cker from Guatemala." -- George Carlin
P.S. Where you're born does not dictate whether you can wear a skirt or not. You are free to express yourself, just keep the photos private.
on Through the windows of the night train by silverman
Cru
I love that slow blowy s̶e̶x̶ sax!
I've got this mad desire to create images.
Lately I've used a clock a heart beat an engine white noise for a breathing pump but only very subtly ... apart from the heartbeat that wasn't subtle.
Having to listen to this stuff over and over and over some more while building it up should come with a health warning.
The heart one I swear I had palpitations.
This one I've stamped some of the plaster off the wall under my desk!
Thank you for your time Cruce.
on The Romantic Warrior - RTF Cover by ScottB55
Steve
Really glad to hear from you and checking out your kind words. It's much appreciated.
Cheers,
Scott
on Highway Adventure -ft-GregVincey by soundhound
Keep at it, this is nice.
Cru
A few things I'm not sold on yet, I think the bouncing guitar
maybe just a little to bouncy... If you get my drift...
I intend to kick it around a bit more...
Thanks again for stopping in and commenting...
Peace...TG.
on Eliza Smith- High Gramo Remix by GramoChopin
This is awesome. I love the minimalism but it directs the listener to the voice and the music is just a background. Which is what you would be aiming for in a remix contest like this. 3 thumbs up (might be one too many?) Great work
Cru
on Deth of Silverman girl On A motorcycle by DijamMusic
Cru
Thank you very much for your feedback I appreciated.
I am glad you liked it.
Jamid
on The Grim Reaper by Byleth
Cru
Hope there will have soon a Fairy-Tale Metal tag on looperman :)
By bells do you means the first instrument ? because a lot of my friends says its bells but in reality its a piano with a lot of fx anyway thanks for the feedback about the "bells"
Again the guitar issue, In fact I was not prepared for my challenge so I used the vsti sytrus (comes with my daw) to make my electric guitar.
If someone who have a real electric guitar I could maybe give him the note so he/she will be able to make real guitar sounds for my song. Im sorry but I think for now its all i can do for the electric guitar (out of my skills).
Rest In Peace dear fellow friend