silverman

Very nice.
I'll stick my neck out here and say .... I don't know if you have a side in this horror but my side is ... I try my best to avoid buying any product from Zionists.
Not from Jews but from Zionists .... theres a huge difference.
Very nice track.
Jews against Israel ..... https://www.google.co.uk/search?q=jews+against+israel&biw=1268&bih=577&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ei=dyOTVea2D4OtU5vqgPAB&sqi=2&ved=0CAYQ_AUoAQ

Don't know how I missed this one!
Clubbing and Factory records come to mind Manchester England 1979.
Bands like Joy Division, New Order, Slaughter and the Dogs Iggy Pop and something that feels like Van Der Graff Generator in there.
Thoroughly enjoyed.
Took me to the Hacienda club Manchester ... all music drugs and guns ... very tense very high.
All in the past.

Ballroom dancing too at the Blackpool Tower Ballrooms in the North of England..
I'm sure you have no idea what I'm talking about but that's understandable.
Just listened again and it sounds nothing like a cinema Wurlitzer but ... it still paints that picture ... still creates that mood which is a million times better than actually sounding like one.creates that mood and moment.

For me to enjoy music I have to feel something experience something.
Doesn't matter what it is ... sorrow joy wonder desire fear the urge to dance ... I have to feel something.
One of the reasons I can't get my head around a lot of pop music ... pop music of all kinds from all ages ... some is fantastic most is bland and doesn't do anything for me.
This piece for some reason took me back to the black and white films of my fathers time in the nineteen forties and fifties ... how weird is that?
I have an inking why.
Up to the 1.30 mark there is a kind of Wurlizter swirl reminiscent of the old cinema organs.
Before the film started in many cinemas an organist would appear as if by magic through the stage floor playing music while you waited for the film to start.
I saw this in it's last days as a small boy in the 50's and this is where your music has taken me!
At 1.30 the spell is broken unfortunately as it goes all modern and I'm back in the now.
But thank you for my little journey back to the black and white days.

I must be going mad!
I don't like this kind of stuff.
I'm way to old to like this kind of stuff.
I just really enjoyed that.
Really really enjoyed it!
Enjoyed it that much it's gone in my favourites!
I must be going mad ......
I'll be looking back in here to see what kind of comments you're going to get from some very talented people on this site.
Be very interesting to see if any of them can actually give you any advice because this simply sounds so perfectly professional and so radio ready that me personally well I can't find any fault with it at all.
To me this sounds ot just perfect but a sheer pleasure to listen to.
I feel privileged ... thank you.

Second time round and it's gone in the faves.

The ending at 4.31 does not sound like it belongs to this great little number.
Great sound.
I wouldn't dream of upping the tempo as has been suggested.
This is moody at this pace which I think you'd lose speeding it up.
Great job.

Fantastic piece.
When that guitar first came in I thought it was a woman!
A woman wailing ... just for maybe one second it caught me out.
This is so well put together.
So pro sounding.
In the faves it goes.

Wow rock on!
Love it.
At 3.07 there is what sounds to me like white noise through a wha wha peddle.
Doesn't sound like it belongs there but ... I've nackered my speakers and am listening to this at the moment on two small pc speakers with one of those centre bass units which isn't bad for playing pool on Miniclip but for music .... well I'm off out to get me some new speakers and headphones shortly.
Love it though.

I can't fault it.
Sounds fantastic.
Will it be better with vocals?
Impossible to say without comparing it with and without really but the vocalist will have to be bloody good.

Straight in my favourites.
Absolutely beautiful.
Stunning.
Wow.

6.42 is a bit shabby too after another listen.
But I love this track and what you've done.

This predates house by many years as far as I'm concerned and takes me back to the very best of late seventies and the likes of Jean Michel Jarre.
That is meant as a compliment of the highest order.
Love the way it comes rolling in on a beautiful deep piled carpet of smoothness.
It's not perfect there are a couple of glitches here and there where things change and lose that super smooth feel but then the smoothness picks up again.
It has a luxurious feel to it as well as a very pro one.
3.04 is an example of what to me sounds like a bd changeover a bad join and then you're up and running again.
Gotta go in my faves.

Perfect.
I can think of nothing else to say.
Perfect.

Scoobydoooooo!
My grandkids used to play a Scoobydoooo pc game this would go great on that!

Thanks EIGHTEEN!!!!!

Thanks INFLOW for commwnting on my pop music track.
I though about what you said about the base so edited it a little.
But I didn't realise the original track would be deleted and I'd have to post again so if you look in please don't think I'm beng rude deleting your comment ... that wasn't supposed to happen.
I considered you advice to be good and screwed up!
It's back now so thanks.

What the hell was that?
What is it?
It's big it's colourful it's incredibly powerful and highly charged but what the hell is it?
It's original is what it is.
It's all yours.
Great listening.
Fun mad sound.
More please.

Something really good going on here.
Brings to my mind Laurie Anderson and Eno.
I can't give any in depth technical advice other than listen to promenade2239.
I wish you all the best with your album.

Not my kind of stuff.
Don't really like this kind of stuff.
That held my attention all the way through.
Loved it.

Truly wonderful.

Brilliant as always Joe.
Love your voice.
It's a very saleable one I'm thinking.

Very nicely put together.
I'd like to hear some deep voice vocals on that.

Fantastic and instantly reminded me of The Alan Parsons Project.
Doesn't particularly sound like him but same kind of vibe same kind of story telling.
If you haven't heard of him he was one of the main producers and engineers of Dark Side of the Moon WITH THE Floyd..
If you aint heard of him he's done quite a few albumbs get a listen to this track ... I ROBOT.
i THINK YOU'LL LIKE THIS GUY ....

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ixjnq_noOQ8