06 Spatium - Eighteen

Dude this is good! Reminds if the stuff I used to do ages agO!

Still loving it, thanks for this track!

muhaha this is awesome good track nice and groovy !!

Hello there.

The vocal in this really stands out to me.

Vocaloid sounds like pretty cool software. I've just had a look at the relevant website.

Far out, trippy, dreamy intro with that fluttering synth. Something a bit 70s prog rock about it but more modern and electro. Also kind of dirty cool, slightly vocally bassline.

0:35 cool noise in that drum fill.

Then into a very sparse and simple drum groove and those magical vocals. The panning stands out. Maybe it's a little odd or maybe it's just different. One voice in the left ear, another in the right but not panned as far to the right.

Again: very distinctive vocals. I wonder if most Vocaloid stuff sounds like this. I'm sure I could make good use of such software so will have a think about getting it.

You keep your instrument lineup pretty much the same throughout the track but they're good sounds. Maybe you could add some reverb to the drums to make things go a bit bigger in the second half?

Congrats on an unusual track.

Cool track...Still needs a little somum,somum to take out of
that single dimension, never the less it has lots of potential...
Maybe some other voices, on a different time groove not to far
off the wall but harmonically tight...Got a good mix there...
At this point it's something little that will bump it up...

Peace...TG.

Love this track. The flow is like a oceanwave. The synths are supporting your nice vocals in a great way. Congrs!

Something really good going on here.
Brings to my mind Laurie Anderson and Eno.
I can't give any in depth technical advice other than listen to promenade2239.
I wish you all the best with your album.

Eighteen
Hello
It is a great track; it has lots of potential.
To me it is very balanced.
Well done
Jamid

fantastic unique sound. great ideas. really digging this. that bass sound has a neat scraggly tail. those alien girls are hot! brilliant concept and really fun to listen to! congrats!

hi again and thanks a lot for the reply! really good to hear the updates. I love what you did!

also I checked the vocaloid and this is some cool software. I was using a lot of Ivona 'text to speech' synth but never ever expected that vocaloid singing thing sounded that good. you have used it very well, I really like the little counter-melody work at places.

there are still some elements in the background (for instance: synth at 1:05) that in my opinion will require a little bit of work, maybe simply by adding straight chord progressions. to me all tracks of your song are actually playing very similar rhythm pattern... so it is a 'minimal approach' in a way and that's fine - I like your vision.

as for a 'proper song' thought: I need to hear much more powerful instrumental section that might balance somehow the long repetitive vocal passages here. your tune sounds to me like it is not that enough 'structured' so far but of course it is just the way of how I picture the eventual further development of it... will you be reworking this again by chance? if so I can always try to help you by adding something to this project...

hi. I really like your vision but somehow I find the vocals not present and articulated enough. maybe it's only because I am listening on headphones now... I can't understand the words, can you post the lyrics sometime? I noticed many people on here do not even bother to do that. I think you might even consider introducing other layers on the second section of the track, it can help breaking the 'repetitivity'. repetitive music is powerful as well but I say that because your production sounds more like a proper 'song' to me.

overall this is a very cool one. nice work!

When do you expect your album to be released? Would be interesting to hear it....I liked this one too..:)

Compliments____Orlando

Groovy! I really like it!