I felt like reviewing a new track of yours ste!
but I already reviewed your 2 newest tracks so I now choose this one...
Like KoolKyle said, this is a classic trance track that's nice!
But I can also hear a nice dembow type pattern in it (which I'm kinda getting addicted to...)
One piece of advice:
I can hear at the beginning that you used the Fruit Kick, which is nice, but there's also still a tiny bit of 'click' in it..
I THINK it would be better if you put that clicky, snappy bit all the way off....
this is cool, isnt like those crazy tearoutyoureardrums dubstep tunes ive heard sometimes. most of the DS tunes i like are kinda like this, slow and heavy, not too insane, just chillin, kinda like a secret agent. and with that bass, i always kill myself to get an only amazing sounding bass, but youve shown me a different way to use the basslines, so thanks for that.
and yes... WAY TOO SHORT! add a break and then bring it on home is my suggestion
Add a break and bring it on home... or maybe make a new track completely seems like a better idea to me. But I'm glad you liked the track, still need time to practise Dubstep, but once I get better I'll post another.. if I get better, that is. This might be as good as my dubstep gets.. I hope not though, not too happy with this track, but its good enough to stay on for now.
hey man not be mean but i neeed some new musci form u man,u good artist and thats the reason im reviewing this plus never heard it before,very trancey of course,but i listen to it becasue i like style and progression.
its like kind learn how to make better music when listenning to good stuff and your music in general is pretty good.
A lot of the stuff I've been making isn't fully finished, and I want to make a full track for once rather than demos or short tracks, but I'm remaking a bunch of my older tracks, so hopefully I can do something with them.
I'm learning and getting better, but no-ones going to see it for now.
This was a very fun track to listen to! There are some awesome sounds in there! The timing of your glitches was perfect! The drums are sweet! I like the amount of reverb that you used, it's good for this style. Really nice work!
Wow, lots of reviews on this one! I really enjoyed the bounciness of this track, definitely lives up to the dance genre. Great bass line! Those sound effects are quite cool too! You really know what you're doing! I'd love to hear this with some killer vocals too, but it's top notch as it is. Nice work!
Sorry for all the late replies, I've been REALLY busy recently. I think I may have mentioned already that I lost half the sounds in this track, but I'm not too fussed because now I can make the track sound better, a remake is on its way.. don't know how long it will take.
Had to check out this babe, saw something about in a thread that you were doing a Hip Hop, mate have done a very good job on this for your first attempt, maybe you might have the knack for this genre, as you do with the others that you put your hand too, great beat, wicked bassline my friend, great synths, love everything about it, excellent Ste, very impressive for first go...fav'd...Keep em coming my friend...Peace n Respect Ste...Estefano....
Sorry for the long wait for the reply, but I've been really busy. I know I normally reply quickly to reviews like this, but I've had to prioritise other things over this.
Anyways, I'm really glad that you liked the track, I'm still producing tracks, some of which are hiphop, I'm just not able to post much bieng as I want to post a FULL track as opposed to another demo.
there are some nice ideas here for me that drum tracks needs to be thicker.. that kick should do exactly that KICK...it should be BOOM >>BOOM>>BOOM it's needed to drive the track along.. the other sounds work great and all seem to have their own separate spaces... don't get me wrong I enjoyed the listen it just lacked that depth that you would expect from a dance track... keep 'em coming brother
Ok. I think its sade to say with this many reviews, something has to be done with this track. I think I probably need to retry this now I've got better at making certain parts stand out, and believe me I'm going to do something to this now, a complete remake I think.
Thanks for the review, expect a remake soon, and I'll send my demos to you soon as well once I get them all finished.
another libra, i keep clicking on my fellow brothers today at random. like your style a lot my friend keep up the great work. great for a days work. would love to here the results if you spent another day or to with it too, i think this one could be squeezed for its magic {all things in good time:everything in its right place} tho. but if it calls back to you some time in the future to work on id say listen to your gut and go 4 it. mature work 4 a young lad, dont stop making tunes keep em coming........i have stuff at LD120 profile at looperman too if you drop past 4 a listen anytime........!1X1!.....
I'm just going to warn you that having multiple profiles can get you banned. I'm not going to do anything about it because I cant, but I think that you might need to delete one of your accounts before one of the mods or the admins delete them both.
I hope I don't come off looking like someone who complains all the time, in fact I'm just trying to help you out here. I'm glad that you liked the track, this song has been revisited several times, this is the only version I really like, but I have got some plans to revisit older songs.
Thanks for the review, sorry about complaining, I will take a listen, but I'm just telling you before the mods do. I will take a listen though to the tracks on the profile you mentioned.
Yeah ste, I meant to drop you a review yesterday when I heard this. This is dope for your first hip hop track. I like what you did with the loop yesh sent you. I like it when you dropped down the tempo almost like a rewind. Then beat drops back in again. NIce bass melody too. Good first tester and hopefully many more to come...
Since I lost REFX Nexus a few months back, I haven't thought of doing anything to this track as a lot of the sounds used I don't actually have any more. But a piano would have been a good idea.
Thanks for the suggestion, but its unlikely that I'll ever get anything for this track.
Hey man you've been reviewing my stuff and answering my posts and etc, and i thought "Holy crap i havent even listened to one of his songs!" So, Ste, my turn. This track is fantastic, and i agree it could use some lyrics but its still excellent as is. I think i might try to implement some lyrics that are here on looperman for this song for ya and email it to ya! Anyways the sound is excellent, i love how the volume will sortof lower and get more bassy and then build back up it sounds really good. hope ya come out with some more music gold soon! -Gabe
Did I review? I'm uncertain if I actually had. I'll review anyway (man I owe a lot of reviews :P) I'm glad that you liked the track, sadly I don't have many of the sounds used in it any more thanks to my terrible laptop messing up Nexus. But if I was to do anything then I'd remake this track.
Yeah I know, I'm sorry. Thats why I called it a demo, to say that the tracks still a work in progress, and still not finished. I really want to finish this one but I don't want to ruin the track.
damn that bass is solid. i like the bounce it has. i agree the open hats are a little outta place, but i would suggest switchin the sound of em to a 808 or 909 ride hit with a little bit of auto pan. good first hip hop track man, hope you had fun makin it and you gonna make more.
This is really, really good. Love this sound here. This is the first time I get to hear a track of yours(I usually roam the featured track box lol), so didn't know what to expect. Blown away. I've kinda gotten used to seeing the electronic tag and hearing really loud synths and dirty sounding 4 on the floor beats. Not that theres anything wrong with some grit, but dynamic is something to cherish also. I consider this a pleasure. When this gets finished(hopefully), its easily gonna be a great track. Already is in my book. Cheers :D
Thanks, I'm really glad that you liked the track, thank you for the fav! I'll check out your "dead" track soon, but I'm really glad I bought this one back, because I think its one of my better songs up on the site now.
Nice track Stephen! Glad you ressurected this one, it has a great positive upbeat feel to it, look forward to hearing it progress. I love the effects on the guitars, was that the Edge from U2 playing? haha! Nice job, keep us posted in the thread when you finish it!
The effects on the guitar were Fl9's hardcore VST, Fruity Delay 2, EQUO, Para EQ and Para EQ2. It made the guitar sound a whole lot better, and I'm really proud of myself for getting the sound I wanted out of it.
I will post when this gets finished, thats if I ever manage to think past what I've got so far :)
not really dnb for me but I won't hark on because you've heard that from the others.. it is a great track with the edge of a dnb knife dipped into it... thanks I enjoyed the listen.. keep 'em coming brother
100% right there numberjack. I like my newer unrelased stuff more, and it won't be unrealeased for long. This one is chillout on speed, I'm actually working on a drum and bass track :P
Well, im into dance and techno stuff and this track is pretty good, i don't think it needs much vocals as such, if u want it to really stand out, i think a little change in the middle and a work up to the main part will do it. Ya the wobbly bounce is good.
nice track, great track , special intro man very nice uplifting track like it
A it 2 FAV man keep up the great whork
o and a shame it a demo vertion
greetz DJ RV-Tex
on What I think (Second Version) by StephenPotter
this is some trippy stuff when you have headphones on.
" I am so ready to download this "
Ste :D
on Airborne by StephenPotter
but I already reviewed your 2 newest tracks so I now choose this one...
Like KoolKyle said, this is a classic trance track that's nice!
But I can also hear a nice dembow type pattern in it (which I'm kinda getting addicted to...)
One piece of advice:
I can hear at the beginning that you used the Fruit Kick, which is nice, but there's also still a tiny bit of 'click' in it..
I THINK it would be better if you put that clicky, snappy bit all the way off....
peace ste!
-Weazel
I got a new track up as well, check it out plz!
In fact.. what I might do, is remake a load of older tracks and mix them all together..
But thanks for the review!
Ste :)
on Taxidermied homosapiens by StephenPotter
and yes... WAY TOO SHORT! add a break and then bring it on home is my suggestion
Thanks for the review!
Ste :)
on Across the sky by StephenPotter
its like kind learn how to make better music when listenning to good stuff and your music in general is pretty good.
come back strong i'll be waiting
SCREENPLAY
I'm learning and getting better, but no-ones going to see it for now.
Thanks for the review!
Ste :)
on Pneumatic Screwdriver UPDATED by StephenPotter
Thanks for the review, will get back to reviewing your tracks soon!
Ste :)
on This needs vocals by StephenPotter
Thanks for the review!
Ste :)
on Hip Hop test 1 by StephenPotter
Had to check out this babe, saw something about in a thread that you were doing a Hip Hop, mate have done a very good job on this for your first attempt, maybe you might have the knack for this genre, as you do with the others that you put your hand too, great beat, wicked bassline my friend, great synths, love everything about it, excellent Ste, very impressive for first go...fav'd...Keep em coming my friend...Peace n Respect Ste...Estefano....
Anyways, I'm really glad that you liked the track, I'm still producing tracks, some of which are hiphop, I'm just not able to post much bieng as I want to post a FULL track as opposed to another demo.
Thanks for the review and the fav!
Ste :)
on This needs vocals by StephenPotter
Thanks for the review, expect a remake soon, and I'll send my demos to you soon as well once I get them all finished.
Ste :P
on This moonlit night by StephenPotter
I hope I don't come off looking like someone who complains all the time, in fact I'm just trying to help you out here. I'm glad that you liked the track, this song has been revisited several times, this is the only version I really like, but I have got some plans to revisit older songs.
Thanks for the review, sorry about complaining, I will take a listen, but I'm just telling you before the mods do. I will take a listen though to the tracks on the profile you mentioned.
Ste :)
on The speed of a thought (DEMO) by StephenPotter
Greez DJ-DOUBLE
Ste :)
on Hip Hop test 1 by StephenPotter
Blume:)
Thanks for the review Blume!
Ste :)
on This needs vocals by StephenPotter
Thanks for the suggestion, but its unlikely that I'll ever get anything for this track.
Ste :)
on Hip Hop test 1 by StephenPotter
Ste :)
on This needs vocals by StephenPotter
Peace Love Jesus!
Thanks for the review though!
Ste :)
on The speed of a thought (DEMO) by StephenPotter
it has nice elements yet its no where near complete.
Thanks for the review though!
Ste :)
on Hip Hop test 1 by StephenPotter
Thanks for the review, and I really want to make more but I got other things stopping me at the moment..
Ste :)
on Hip Hop test 1 by StephenPotter
u know what.. i'd love to remix this.
i really like it... just a few things i'd change... bro, freakin top effort!
d-_-b
Thanks for the review!
Ste :)
on Hip Hop test 1 by StephenPotter
Awesome.. Glitch and dubstep referrences
But you and cyber both see dubstep in this track which I dont which kinda confuses me...
But thanks for the review!
Ste :)
on Please take me home UPDATED by StephenPotter
So thanks for the review and the fav!
Ste :)
on Please take me home UPDATED by StephenPotter
Wayne
I will post when this gets finished, thats if I ever manage to think past what I've got so far :)
Thanks for the review!
Ste :D
on What I think (Second Version) by StephenPotter
Thanks for the review!
Ste :)
on This moonlit night by StephenPotter
Thanks for the review!
Ste :)
on This moonlit night by StephenPotter
But thanks for the review, will check out your track soon.
Ste :)
on This needs vocals by StephenPotter
Good one.
Peace...
Ste :)
on The speed of a thought (DEMO) by StephenPotter
A it 2 FAV man keep up the great whork
o and a shame it a demo vertion
greetz DJ RV-Tex
I do wanna get stuff done with this track, but its awkward.
Ste :D