This Needs Vocals - StephenPotter

I would love to hear this with good vocals. Contact me when you get them on. I want to hear it. Fav.

Excellent track, you should press play on a stage and freak out, or show pieces of art.

Excellent track. Dangerous!

nice track ....i like it with out vocals

Stephen nice work,don't think it really needs vocals it brilliant as is!

Excellent, it worked fine today. That was a fun ride. Great sounds, transitions and production. Mostly I like its upbeat feel. Not a lot of songs get me groovin in my chair, but this one did.

Super Job, My Friend, Faved

John

this track ended for me at 1min18secs, is that what it's supposed to be?

Anyways, what I got to listen to was sweet. I did hear some clipping, but that is easy to fix.

Great work, my friend, keep it up

All The Best For The New Year

John

btw, if you have the time, I have a new track up, The Trickster, I'd like to know what you think

SO YOUR THINKING OF A NEW NAME HOW ABOUT DJ NEW TRACK LOL

JK

HOPE UR DOING WELL PEACE MENTAL AND PHYSICHALLY(GOT NEW MUSIC AS WELL)

Is it me or does this seem rather loud in places to where it kinda clips.

Yeah this sounds rather boomy so its dance material.

I don't know how many times I would replay this.

More subtle automation?

You can do WONDERFUL things with automation as drum and bass has taught me.. I try and think of it all like a LIVE experience?
You know?
My music
your music
Don't be confined by bars.
FU4cK that.

We live in that fraction of a second reality.
I say try bump them drums.
I want to "ooomph"
My kicks.
I want to be punched by my snares.
Just saying.
The eq Solo was awesome like apple sauce on pork chops.
You could possibly find some multiple eq's to "provoke" a vocal?
It can work on the bass and your cymbal EQ region?
just saying.

Just look deeper into your mixes. Save many times and go off on tangents.. Look for symbols within archaic structures of melody.
You rocked it on this.
Focus on the rump of the track not the sparkle, you definitely have that covered. This is awesome.
Faved.
Downloaded.
TEACH ME!!!

hey stephen i just wanted to give u some advice if ur still stuck with ur music tracks,tryin thinking outside box in a sense where ur thoughts and style of music are ignored and just let the sounds come to u and also try hear the melody voice and let it make itself along with ur other sounds(thats what i do when i get stuck LOL)

hope it helps.

hey what the hell one mroe review can't hurt lol.. love the use of effects in here ste.. showing your skills in this one, nice work in all would love to hear this with vocals

Hey mate, this track is pretty fine as it is. I think you got a good melody and it all fits well. I can listen to this all day, you got the right sounds and all well put together.

I am still learning FLS i not used it before, but everyone tell me to use it cause i will have even better tracks. Hmm i must be the only person not using FLS, it's a learning curve, still getting my head around it.

Nice job.

Peace...

Look, I`m gonna say what the others wouldn`t because I`m trying to be a real friend here. I will tell you what you have to do to this track to make it better and you may not like it.

Are you ready

Leave it alone. It is a sweet track just as is. Needs nothing.

All The Best :-)

John

Hey Stephen...sorry I havent heard one of tracks for a while, but glad I found this one! Nice synths and the intro was well delivered....there is a vox sample on here called "dance with me" by elina milan that would fit
added to favourites
Trax

hey trance maker i made a track that blows the BPM meter off the scale,check it out if ur trance heart can take it LOL

Wow, lots of reviews on this one! I really enjoyed the bounciness of this track, definitely lives up to the dance genre. Great bass line! Those sound effects are quite cool too! You really know what you're doing! I'd love to hear this with some killer vocals too, but it's top notch as it is. Nice work!

there are some nice ideas here for me that drum tracks needs to be thicker.. that kick should do exactly that KICK...it should be BOOM >>BOOM>>BOOM it's needed to drive the track along.. the other sounds work great and all seem to have their own separate spaces... don't get me wrong I enjoyed the listen it just lacked that depth that you would expect from a dance track... keep 'em coming brother

hey have you thought about adding piano instead of vocals?

Well, im into dance and techno stuff and this track is pretty good, i don't think it needs much vocals as such, if u want it to really stand out, i think a little change in the middle and a work up to the main part will do it. Ya the wobbly bounce is good.

Good one.

Peace...

HOW THE HELL DO YOU GET TO 30 REVIEWS MAN!???

anyway, I really like it comes in with those fx at 0:30
(I hope you that faxing berlin is originally from deadmau5?)
One thing that (i think) you should change is the synth kinda sounds in the very beginning of the track. they should be mastered better or something cuz they sound kinda distorted..

and I think lyrics could make the track better, yes.
but lyrics could also maybe ruin the track.
be careful with you decisions ste! ;)

not really my style of music but i like the bouncy pad throughout the intro and rest of the song. i get bored easily and i made it through the whole track so thats good :) great job.

What can I say after all has bin said. Just wanted you to know it reminds me of early Jam & Spoon work, some made before you landed on this planet

I am really digging the bass in this. It takes awhile to get to that bass, but yeah I'm with you on it needing vocals. Love it though keep it up.

-MrBG

First I just have to apologize for having your tracks on my own back burner for so long. The sheer volume of music on this site gets really daunting for me at times and it sets up procrastination cycles that aren't very cool.

You have a good ear, and a good sense of timing. With what I'm hearing here, it's pretty obvious that if music keeps your interest you're going to have skills in another ten years that'll make us all jealous. Yeah, at 14 ten years sounds like a long time, but that's the nature of relativity. Keep at it - it's worth it.

Really impressive work here. I promise it won't be nearly so long before my next review!

Looks like you have heard it all :P Not much left for me to tell you rather then "GREAT TRACK"!

3:00 sounds cool :D

Fantastic work bro, i see the world likes it! so i had to come be a part of the world and say nice nice work.

yeah this is really nice man...
like the automation builds etc.. and the synth work is tight!

i would recommend hitting up Holy, she has the prefect voice for this lil beat... maybe even play with one of her accaps....

all in all, this is great..
props bro!

Butcha
d-_-b

love it! my typical dance type! love the intro... i mean EVERYTHING! great job!

9.5/10

hey man i just got bakc for work today gonna some time to work on that remix but when my part is finished im gonna e-mail it to u

cheers

Dang dude if you are only 14 this is very impressive stuff... Keep up the good work maybe you will end up being the next Teisto or something :)

This was a freaking toe tapper! loved the whirly bird effect that started the ball rolling ! very cool indeed!
The ending was a little sudden kinda like falling off of a cliff without getting hurt though LOL ! Cool Tune

Johnny Gadget
Gadgetland Music Factory

not bad u sure knowwhat ur doing like the intro as the track gets into a smooth transiton.it also has trancey vibe to it but not much(cant stand trance techno person)the track overall is solid great to listen

Awesome bassline. I really like the synth all throughout the song. really good without the vocals. some nice vocals though man this would be killer.

I will give it a stab at vocalizing your tune.

Sorry, the vocals I got are set for 138 BPM. Won't work / mix well with 128 BPM.

ElecTonicPro,
Dan

Brilliant work Stephen like the little ufo taking off effect,well mastered.You said it's repetitive but thats electronic music for you ,it's the subtle changes and effects which make the difference,one again great work.

Like the build at the 2 min mark. I like the whirly bubbly sounds personally.

Hey Steve

Mate this is good stuff, arrangement and clarity is first class, your one talented dude,Synths everything fitting so well together, great work my friend, mate I can see where you are at about the vocal, but in saying that I do like it as it is, but with vocal would take it to another place, looking forward to hearing version with vocals when you get some, this one is fav'd mate...Peace...Estefano...

This is ace, I like the fading you use, it's like it's getting clean and then dirty again, if you know what I mean. Really good, I think it's great even without vocals but then I like instrumental stuff soooo each to their own. Really enjoying it :)

Hey this track is right up my alley....I sing pretty much everything so it fits lol. I'm gonna hit this up tonight and send at the speed of light soon. This will be fun.

hey stephen whats up man? i saw that you are a new producer so i thought you were worth a listen. nice work on this track bro feeling the groove and its got a nice vibe. i like the whole production. i saw your forum about your studio to lol. mine is such a pos. its just a mac on garageband. i have some old headphones with the speakers nearly blown out and a microphone that is really nice (250 bucks). i really dig this track anyways lol sorry i got sidetracked but nice work sir

Of all the tracks I listened to, I like this one the most, but it is neither classified as drum and bass or trance, so I couldn't really use it in your forum post, but really like all the envelopes and such that you use, really nice to groove on. Check out my remix of Dance With Me sometime.

cool mate. Good bass line, nice and simple, but effective.

Agree some vocals will make it more interesting though.

the growly bass at 1:30 ish is pretty cool too.

I really like it. You should definitely try to get some vocals going like Daft Punk-style or something. That's what it reminds me of. I think if you put vocals in, definitely make them more of an instrument than a voice track. It would add a lot of energy to it if done right.

Cool track i like the fading in the begening and that bubbly noise. Cool job!