StephenPotter

he nice track man like the synth melody's in it

greet z DJ RV-Tex (rsmisch)

Nice synth work,almost ambient in places.Unusual beats for trance and definitely too short,but a cool listen,nice one:)
KtA

I am probably the only human being in the world that hates sidechain. lol
I didn't likey the sidechainy... Dynamics that flow smoothly really get me.
But!!!

Despite that.... For your age, the emotional content and quality is kinda humbling.
You just PWNed the Key of B.
Fantastic work...
I really enjoyed this!
Nice to meet yer music!
:)

Hey Ste

My friend nice track dude, love everything about it, I do have to agree with JW on the comments he made, about levels etc, but mate this has so much going for it, Ste you are coming along so well since you have been here on the loop, it is such an honour to watch you progress and grow, well done my friend...Peace and respect Ste....Estefano....Going to add this to fav's my friend, please let me know when you have the final version up and I will come by again and check it out, have new house up Ste, hope you enjoy...Cheers....

wow ste :)
thats a great tune my friend...really good work...i like it :)
please finish that one...it desreves it...
the mix could be better...the vocals must be a bit more up...
and you need a good master...then its a killer track :)
i really like the vocals...and what you did with the track :)
it is almost finish...just create a good end :)
keep up the good work ste :) i really liked it...
cheers...JW...

hey this was a great selection for the first track of Summer Nights....I really liked the beach fx you used and since downloading the album I am enjoying this the more I play it.
Added to faves
Trax

How intense! Glitch pushed to the very brink? Really love what you did to the vocals - I think it adds a human element (albeit one sliced, diced, and jacked into machine land) that was really necessary to this piece. The voices keep it from straying totally into the synthetic (at least for me.)

You've outdone yourself once again! Very well done.

HOW THE HELL DO YOU GET TO 30 REVIEWS MAN!???

anyway, I really like it comes in with those fx at 0:30
(I hope you that faxing berlin is originally from deadmau5?)
One thing that (i think) you should change is the synth kinda sounds in the very beginning of the track. they should be mastered better or something cuz they sound kinda distorted..

and I think lyrics could make the track better, yes.
but lyrics could also maybe ruin the track.
be careful with you decisions ste! ;)

I SAID TO MYSELF IF I EVER LISTEN TO TRANCE AGAIN I WOULD SHOOT MYSELF IN THE HEAD AS I JUMP OF A SKYCRAPER.

bUT I RESPECT U AS A ARTIST SO I have to say this track is cool very good beach and wave sounds and arp sound really sounds cool

(god this hurts to say)

But yeah im honest person and his track is good man keep it up

too short.. much much too short... kust as i'm about to go dancing around the room it stopped :(

beaoooootiful tune though buddy! great job!

Do i need to say more?! lol.. This track is very good man, love the elements and transitions, not my usual but a very good listen.. great use of effects to keep it up

Hey my friend

Liking this one too, few rough area's in it, but know how good you are you will sort them out when you get back to it,to me this is more Techno then Trance though, some of the synths/percussion maybe little to hard to be trance, good beat mate, very nice synths/pads, like the effects you have used, making a very interesting listen, like I said in forum post eg I suck, Ste seriously mate being so young as you are, you have a bright future ahead of you, so please keep doing your thing okies...Peace and Respect my good friend...Estefano....

Hey Ste

My friend, liking what you have here so fars, agree it is a happy sort of piece, good beat and nice synths, so looking forward to when you get it finished, knowing what you do, it will be even better, please let me know when you get it finish as I would love to come back and check it out again, Peace and Respect my friend...Estefano...

Wow, that was a trip. So thick, so many layers, so many textures. My ears were getting lost and overwhelmed all while enjoying the journey. Great lines, there is lot effort put in here, I can't wait to here the next version.
NOICE WORK!!!!

great track bro would like to hear it finished though i will hold my review back for the finished artical great start though

YO WHAT UP MY MAN STE!

luvin' that progression on the INTRO!

got a slight glitchy sound goin' on with
that hihat pattern in the beginnin'

LUV THAT SYNTH BASS TOO!

and then the beat drops and it
went fast paced and started KNOCKIN'
me head around HARD!

just needs to have an overall higher
track volume in my opinion...
BUT then again i am slightly deaf...
>_>

Love your style & sound you've created, your attention towards the details is growing with eatch project.

With all the melodies you used so far in your tracks, I wander about a track without drums. I'm curious in how you let that evolve without the structure (or borders)that a drumtrack provides.

wow is that the speech generator from FL?
I never manage to get it synced to the beat :S respect bro!
Synths are Chilling, drums are stressful..
I'd say that's a perfect combination xD
Big thumbs up for this track! ;)

Btw: I guess I kinda missed your point in the discription...

what acapella?? and what happened to your vst's ? lol

Hey Ste

Dubstep, nice something that I might try soon, great beat, nice synths again, very nice cool intro, again clarity very nice, did sound like a little distorted in there somewhere, maybe meant to be?? Liked what I am hearing my friend, only downer, ITS TO SHORT, great work dude...Peace and Respect Ste...Estefano...

Very cool and provocative work here. Like jahknow, I'm totally enamored with that arpegiated key running throughout. I find there's kind of a melancholy vibe going on here that really connects to a common human experience that's both powerful and inspiring.

My constructive criticism is this - please consider using this as a proto-draft, or as a inspirational launching point. In other words, consider not revising this one, but using everything you've learned to do another more polished and lengthy piece as I think it'll be a personal masterpiece.

Have to fave it despite myself (it's way too short to be satisfying), as it's really that inspired and that good!

*** Update: any plan to finish this up? Could be quite a track! ***

Like floating on musical clouds! Nice work on this tune, very impressive, love the sweet break at 1:50 followed by well timed bass infusion at 2:04. I can tell you put some thought and energy into this, kudos. I want more!!! (and a DL will be icing on top) - DF/Jerome

Very nice smooth trance track you have here. Its not traditional and I guess that's what I like about it. Its almost a bit too short though for me. Would love to see you extend it and add in some solo breakdowns for some of the sounds and then build back up from there. But overall a class job! Really enjoyed listening :)

This is sick man. Good work on the glitch. I like all the cuts and stretches you did with the drums really aphexy, squarepusher stuff. Good lil glitchy sounds. keep up the good work man...Blume :)

Nice man, I really like the intro for this track you really get a feel when the drums kick in. I'm curios to see where this track goes. Nice atmosphere and cool sounds melodic and ambient. Sounding good bro...Keep me posted when you finish this sucker up...Blume:)

Awesome track! You're right that morphing at the beginning is really cool! This song has a great groove to it! Very cool glitchy piano break, how did you do that? The vocoder sounds awesome! Very good work!