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Listen To Please Try Spoken Word Song By Biffsteelmeetsjohnnyparty At Looperman.com

20th Sep 2009 01:29 - 16 years ago
Description : the start of a song about my alcoholic mother....lol

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alividlife
alividlife 21st Sep 2009 06:16 - 16 years ago
totally dig the auto-tune work!!

you do it better than most of blatant abuse of auto-tune that has been going on in pop-music today...
the honesty feels kinda sarcastic? I hope you don't take offense!
I am blown away man!
nice!
thanks for the d'l, ima put it on my ipod
biffsteelmeetsjohnnyparty
Hey thanks man! i only have garageband on macbook to record stuff with so when i lay down the singing tracks all i do is turn the advanced tuning all the way up and sync it to the key..lol..i dont even know what that means or what it does my friend just told me to do it and i thought it sounded pretty good! haha... thanks for the compliments man really appreciate them! i just got done recording a little more of this song you should check it out! Thanks man!
OneVizun
OneVizun 21st Sep 2009 04:55 - 16 years ago
...i can relate....100%... But sometimes i just dont know how to put it in words. But you have a very talented voice. And the track took an unexpected turn for me. With the melody and tempo clashing with the title but thats what makes it great. Keep it up.
Spivkurl
Spivkurl 20th Sep 2009 19:00 - 16 years ago
This is a great track, and your voice carries a lot of emotion... it must be due to the subject matter. Really impressive work!
ChrisHall
ChrisHall 20th Sep 2009 12:29 - 16 years ago
woah nice! your voice is awesome man! i love the simplicity of the backing and how much effect your voice has in the song...its a vocoder you use rite? great sounding voice man

Chris
biffsteelmeetsjohnnyparty
thanks man! the only thing i do to my voice is on garageband turn the tuning all the way and limit it to key..whatever that means..haha! also some echo and reverb. but all i have to mess around with is basic garageband....sucks but i have fun with it..
thanks for the compliments man! Glad you enjoyed it!
CONEYISLANDRECORDS
CONEYISLANDRECORDS 20th Sep 2009 06:38 - 16 years ago
Whoa,...I was not expecting this. Man do you get into pop/punk music? Like Taking back Sunday, Saosin, The Almost ect. Man I would love to collab with you on a track like that. I love your vocals! You are exactly what I have been looking for for a long time. I love the way you harmonize and the melodies you apply to your vocals. Excellent track! Wish it was longer.

If you want to collab get in touch with me at:

conan_swanson@yahoo.com
biffsteelmeetsjohnnyparty
Hey thanks man! really appreciate the compliments! I used to play bass in a band for 4 yrs that was like saosin and a day to remember... i would love to get down on some stuff man! hit me up anytime!

jonathon.morales@yahoo.com

really glad you liked them! i always wanted to be the main singer but i had too much fun throwing my bass around! haha, back up vocals wasn't too bad... get with me man lets put something together!

(Jonathon)

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