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Description : (UPDATED FILE)..Need some help! Please share your opinion on this sample of Line. I'm thinking about maybe getting some lyrics going but I'm currently struggling as far as the lead melody/instrument goes. Any help and feedback is much appreciated! :)

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  1. DJRapidBass
    DJRapidBass on Wed 13th May 2020 - 1 year ago

    you could go for a speak saw melody or you could have a singer sign the melody for the chorus, but other than that its a great start

  2. yeti09
    yeti09 on Tue 12th May 2020 - 1 year ago

    Very nice :0)

    Jalnsvrs
    Reply by Jalnsvrs

    Thank you! :)

  3. toddlove
    toddlove on Tue 12th May 2020 - 1 year ago

    This seems like a super solid start! Intro is really sweet. I would be curious to hear how a bigger swell leading up to the drop would sound. Even maybe trying at 52 seconds letting the first note of the piano on the one stay and then dropping out those bells (or whatever they are) until the drop. It could have a nice dramatic pause with a bigger "pay off". Just an idea. Anyway, great piece and I think it deserves some rock solid vocals on top. Will be interested to see where you wind up....after you get over your beat block! :)

  4. toddlove
    toddlove on Tue 12th May 2020 - 1 year ago

    This seems like a super solid start! Intro is really sweet. I would be curious to hear how a bigger swell leading up to the drop would sound. Even maybe trying at 52 seconds letting the first note of the piano on the one stay and then dropping out those bells (or whatever they are) until the drop. It could have a nice dramatic pause with a bigger "pay off". Just an idea. Anyway, great piece and I think it deserves some rock solid vocals on top. Will be interested to see where you wind up....after you get over your beat block! :)

    Jalnsvrs
    Reply by Jalnsvrs

    I'll give it a try. It might not fit this style but I will definitely try! Thanks for the feedback! :) I hope it ends soon, too. I contacted some vocalists and left a forum post so we'll see what happens. I'm having a tough time finding someone but It's only been a day. Although I'd assume my post will get lost the longer it's alive.

  5. MagneticRecords
    MagneticRecords on Mon 11th May 2020 - 1 year ago

    Nice. But too short.

    Jalnsvrs
    Reply by Jalnsvrs

    Glad you liked it. Short because I haven't finished it yet.

  6. ShortBusMusic
    ShortBusMusic on Mon 11th May 2020 - 1 year ago

    So you have a terrific beginning to a really, really good song. Intro, and first verse are done, now you need to work on a chorus (hook) section, a bridge, and then your outro - then glue it all together and try to keep it under 4 minutes, haha. I would also advise you to look on Looperman for one of the many vocalists on here and if you find one you really like, ask them to lay some vocals over it. I can envision a Sam Smith type voice, or a female with the chops to carry this. With the piano being the anchor on it, you could also find someone similar to a lead singer like Train's Patrick Monahan, or Imagine Dragons Dan Reynolds. One thing is for sure, keep working on it as it has serious potential. Best of luck with it. I hope all is well.

    Bear

    Jalnsvrs
    Reply by Jalnsvrs

    Thank you for taking the time to comment. I'll try my best to work at what you suggested. We'll see what works out.

  7. CINCOCENT
    CINCOCENT on Mon 11th May 2020 - 1 year ago

    Overall intro is brilliant! The Beat kicks in with guitar, wow I say where is the rest? I think it's going to be a spectacular creation! I'll be back for sure to check on results

    Jalnsvrs
    Reply by Jalnsvrs

    Thank you! I'm working at it so hopefully soon. I've hit a creative block for now but we'll see.

  8. HeathAlexander
    HeathAlexander on Mon 11th May 2020 - 1 year ago

    A lightly distorted saw pad with delay might sound pretty cool. Maybe even a frequency filter for the wahwah sound. Something a bit gritty to cut through the lighter backing music. If you wanted to keep it lighter, then developing the piano would be a good start. A slow arpeggiation in the higher register could sound nice. It sounds great so far. It'll be nice to hear the full version.

    Jalnsvrs
    Reply by Jalnsvrs

    Thanks a lot for all the feedback and suggestions. I'll certainly work on that as soon as I feel musical, lol. Thanks again!

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