Tags : | Rock | 8.21 MB

Description : Here is a new rock track that I recently wrote. I sang and played all the instruments. Drums are from EZ Drummer, everything else was played live. If you like the track feel free to download it. Thanks Kyle!

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  1. vigwig
    vigwig on Tue 24th Sep 2019 - 3 weeks ago

    @ImprovewithError, I like your loops and have used them many times. This is the first time I've come across one of your tracks and it is a fine track. I enjoyed my listen except these heirloom ears had a little trouble picking out your vocals (which were worth picking out, I might add). As many genres as there are on here I, too, find it hard to select one that describes it besides "weird" which only diehards wanna check out.
    vigwig (vic)

  2. Kargalar
    Kargalar on Tue 8th Jan 2019 - 9 months ago

    great ambience and vibe Kyle , a nice pause in this big list of banging tracks. Love the sound f the toms, they sound very compact and with lots of presence !
    Also, the fact you sing, it's always a plus and i give respect to that.
    Keep em coming big guy !

  3. damonb
    damonb on Sat 29th Dec 2018 - 9 months ago

    best way too hit a rock genre song is live when you go too a pop concert or hiphop ect its either pre recorded or lipsinging ect or dosnt sound any thing like track but when you go to a rock show sounds like dose on radio why because its raw like live

    Reply by ImproveWithError

    Thanks for the first comment, its not really a pop genre, not really rock per say, but I am limited on my choices. The rest of your comments are a bit strange.

  4. damonb
    damonb on Sat 29th Dec 2018 - 9 months ago

    rock is the bad boy in town rock links too many sub genres all are about breaking every rule in the industry and still pulling it off

  5. damonb
    damonb on Sat 29th Dec 2018 - 9 months ago

    the main thing about rock is breaking the rules your not at all here

  6. damonb
    damonb on Sat 29th Dec 2018 - 9 months ago

    first well done every things good next maby its me but this isn't real rock its pop

  7. RBphantomX
    RBphantomX on Thu 14th Jun 2018 - 1 year ago

    ok SO I did make a melodic remix with background stuff! Please if you have the time, will you go check it out! comment what you think of the other music as well

    I really liked it, I hope you don't mind me using it though!

  8. JoeFunktastic
    JoeFunktastic on Wed 16th May 2018 - 1 year ago

    Unbelievable quality and showmanship man. Vocals, instruments, and drums are beautifully done. Time to take your show to the next level Kyle. The arrangement and lyrics do standout as a testament to your excellent songwriting skills. Nice fxs on the guitars, the distortion levels on the guitars are perfect. Well done Kyle!


    Reply by ImproveWithError

    Joe, I appreciate the feedback and thank you for the compliments. I have really been trying to get my tracks to sound better. Thanks for the listen and comment!!!


  9. Arloph09
    Arloph09 on Wed 16th May 2018 - 1 year ago

    first off....the tracks needs more high end...and adjust the volume for the vocal..it's too upfront ...with better mixing and mastering...the track will bang mate

    Reply by ImproveWithError

    Hey thanks for the tips and the listen, I appreciate it.

  10. VicaMOOR
    VicaMOOR on Thu 19th Apr 2018 - 1 year ago

    Great vocals. The track itself has commercial potential, just needs better mixing and mastering to bring out the brightness imo.

  11. BradoSanz
    BradoSanz on Mon 16th Apr 2018 - 1 year ago

    You should send me the stems! Id love to try and mix it :) You can keep the effects! I like your voice, it's nice to hear it again haha


  12. Ludwigbroo
    Ludwigbroo on Mon 16th Apr 2018 - 1 year ago

    Good melodies and very emotional. Need better mastering

  13. Neomorpheus
    Neomorpheus on Sun 15th Apr 2018 - 1 year ago

    Nice one Kyle! Great all around effort here. I like the minimal aspect of the track and how you build on it. All instruments are clean and well played. But your vocals are the main ingredient and are what really delivers the knockout punch. This is one of those tracks that grabs your heart and squeezes the emotion out of you. That's the power of vocals and the difference they can make. I did notice a bit of background noise that I think could be improved with some EQ adjustment. There at the very end when the music cuts you can really hear it. That's prevalent throughout and muddying the track up. If you could fix that I think you would notice some improved clarity. Irrespective, I think you knocked this one out of the park man. Really diggin it !

    Reply by ImproveWithError

    Hey thanks for listening to the track, I appreciate your compliments. I couldn't quite get the EQ just right on this one, seemed like the more I tried to fix it the worse that it got. I will probably give it another try in the future after I have taken a long break from hearing the track. Anyway, thanks again.


  14. Sunbeats
    Sunbeats on Wed 11th Apr 2018 - 1 year ago

    Nice concept. But you need to improve on your mixing and mastering skills.

    Reply by ImproveWithError


  15. mildperil
    mildperil on Tue 10th Apr 2018 - 1 year ago

    A huge step up from the last time I heard you.

    Really good song. Well written, well performed and just overall more rounded.

    Well played, quite literally. And thanks for sharing :)

    Reply by ImproveWithError

    Hey thanks for checking out the track, I appreciate your comments.


  16. crucethus
    crucethus on Tue 10th Apr 2018 - 1 year ago

    Wow Kyle, The improvement is amazing. you are getting better and better each track you produce. I like the chorus and your vocals on this one. A dramatic yet clear song that I am still playing back in my head after listening to it which is a really good sign of a hit.

    Reply by ImproveWithError

    Hey Steve, thanks I appreciate your compliments. I have been really trying get my songs to sound better by spending more time on them and giving them time to sit before I upload them that way I can get a fresh ear on them. Thanks again!!


  17. traz75
    traz75 on Mon 9th Apr 2018 - 1 year ago


    Nice track! Cool guitarplay as ever and man, you have nice vocal! Wonder how it sounds when you release a bit more (more roar, less technique :D).

    Regards, traz

    Reply by ImproveWithError

    Hey traz, thanks for the compliments.


  18. Alien
    Alien on Mon 9th Apr 2018 - 1 year ago

    Well well well, that's very nice, nice chords, nice progression, I like your singing too. Mixing and mastering is on point. Great ending.
    Keep it up!


    Reply by ImproveWithError

    Hey thanks Alien for giving the track a listen and a comment, I appreciate it. Thanks for the kind words.


  19. danke
    danke on Mon 9th Apr 2018 - 1 year ago


    Holy Gold God!

    This is outstanding...truly but really, one of the best rock track here...the mood is incredible the voice and the melodies are ethereal...the groovy is sweeping...
    In the first 2 minutes I was speechless, I just sat with my mouth and wondered, what the hell is happening?
    True music inside those hip hop and rap avalanches...

    thanx for the upload, fav, dl, hats off, Danke

    Reply by ImproveWithError

    Danke thanks for the compliments I really appreciate them. I have been trying to push myself to make better music and create songs that I would really like to listen to. Anyway thanks for the listen, fav, comment, and download, its always nice to hear from you.


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