I Breathe - ImproveWithError

9th Apr 2018 14:41 - 8 years ago
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Description : Here is a new rock track that I recently wrote. I sang and played all the instruments. Drums are from EZ Drummer, everything else was played live. If you like the track feel free to download it. Thanks Kyle!

Comments (14)

If you have time take a listen and give ImproveWithError some feedback.

T576
T576 7th Sep 2023 01:52 - 3 years ago
Nice rock player. Very creative production. What you doing lately? PEACE. T576 OUT.
vigwig
vigwig 24th Sep 2019 06:10 - 7 years ago
@ImprovewithError, I like your loops and have used them many times. This is the first time I've come across one of your tracks and it is a fine track. I enjoyed my listen except these heirloom ears had a little trouble picking out your vocals (which were worth picking out, I might add). As many genres as there are on here I, too, find it hard to select one that describes it besides "weird" which only diehards wanna check out.
vigwig (vic)
Kargalar
Kargalar 8th Jan 2019 06:12 - 7 years ago
great ambience and vibe Kyle , a nice pause in this big list of banging tracks. Love the sound f the toms, they sound very compact and with lots of presence !
Also, the fact you sing, it's always a plus and i give respect to that.
Keep em coming big guy !
RBphantomX
RBphantomX 14th Jun 2018 10:33 - 8 years ago
ok SO I did make a melodic remix with background stuff! Please if you have the time, will you go check it out! comment what you think of the other music as well
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VahPYfZPrkY&feature=youtu.be

I really liked it, I hope you don't mind me using it though!
JCJMusic
JCJMusic 16th May 2018 16:45 - 8 years ago
first off....the tracks needs more high end...and adjust the volume for the vocal..it's too upfront ...with better mixing and mastering...the track will bang mate
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 16th May 2018 - 8 years ago
Hey thanks for the tips and the listen, I appreciate it.
VicaMOOR
VicaMOOR 19th Apr 2018 19:07 - 8 years ago
Great vocals. The track itself has commercial potential, just needs better mixing and mastering to bring out the brightness imo.
BradoSanz
BradoSanz 16th Apr 2018 23:43 - 8 years ago
You should send me the stems! Id love to try and mix it :) You can keep the effects! I like your voice, it's nice to hear it again haha

Brado
Ludwigbroo
Ludwigbroo 16th Apr 2018 23:05 - 8 years ago
Good melodies and very emotional. Need better mastering
Neomorpheus
Neomorpheus 15th Apr 2018 15:43 - 8 years ago
Nice one Kyle! Great all around effort here. I like the minimal aspect of the track and how you build on it. All instruments are clean and well played. But your vocals are the main ingredient and are what really delivers the knockout punch. This is one of those tracks that grabs your heart and squeezes the emotion out of you. That's the power of vocals and the difference they can make. I did notice a bit of background noise that I think could be improved with some EQ adjustment. There at the very end when the music cuts you can really hear it. That's prevalent throughout and muddying the track up. If you could fix that I think you would notice some improved clarity. Irrespective, I think you knocked this one out of the park man. Really diggin it !
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 15th Apr 2018 - 8 years ago
Hey thanks for listening to the track, I appreciate your compliments. I couldn't quite get the EQ just right on this one, seemed like the more I tried to fix it the worse that it got. I will probably give it another try in the future after I have taken a long break from hearing the track. Anyway, thanks again.

Kyle
Sunbeats
Sunbeats 11th Apr 2018 01:04 - 8 years ago
Nice concept. But you need to improve on your mixing and mastering skills.
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 11th Apr 2018 - 8 years ago
Right..same
T0mmyy
T0mmyy 10th Apr 2018 10:39 - 8 years ago
A huge step up from the last time I heard you.

Really good song. Well written, well performed and just overall more rounded.

Well played, quite literally. And thanks for sharing :)
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 11th Apr 2018 - 8 years ago
Hey thanks for checking out the track, I appreciate your comments.

Kyle
crucethus
crucethus 10th Apr 2018 03:17 - 8 years ago
Wow Kyle, The improvement is amazing. you are getting better and better each track you produce. I like the chorus and your vocals on this one. A dramatic yet clear song that I am still playing back in my head after listening to it which is a really good sign of a hit.
Steve
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 11th Apr 2018 - 8 years ago
Hey Steve, thanks I appreciate your compliments. I have been really trying get my songs to sound better by spending more time on them and giving them time to sit before I upload them that way I can get a fresh ear on them. Thanks again!!

Kyle
traz75
traz75 9th Apr 2018 20:15 - 8 years ago
Hi!

Nice track! Cool guitarplay as ever and man, you have nice vocal! Wonder how it sounds when you release a bit more (more roar, less technique :D).

Regards, traz
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 10th Apr 2018 - 8 years ago
Hey traz, thanks for the compliments.

Kyle
Danke
Danke 9th Apr 2018 15:44 - 8 years ago
Kyle!

Holy Gold God!

This is outstanding...truly but really, one of the best rock track here...the mood is incredible the voice and the melodies are ethereal...the groovy is sweeping...
In the first 2 minutes I was speechless, I just sat with my mouth and wondered, what the hell is happening?
True music inside those hip hop and rap avalanches...

thanx for the upload, fav, dl, hats off, Danke
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 9th Apr 2018 - 8 years ago
Danke thanks for the compliments I really appreciate them. I have been trying to push myself to make better music and create songs that I would really like to listen to. Anyway thanks for the listen, fav, comment, and download, its always nice to hear from you.

Kyle

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