Jeden Tag - Version 2017 - Joecramer

26th Sep 2017 19:15 - 9 years ago
Description : What can i say? Maybe, I like it. Not complete yet but on a good way. A kind of minimalistic electronic trance chilly stuff. Do you think you could play some bass to it or some e-guitare or some synth? I would enjoy if you do so and share it with me. Hope you enjoy the listen.

Comments (17)

If you have time take a listen and give joecramer some feedback.

BlancFroid
BlancFroid 4th Oct 2017 02:55 - 8 years ago
Great track, great feel - much enjoyed!
joecramer
joecramer replied 5th Oct 2017 - 8 years ago
Good to know that you enjoyed your stay.
Thanks a lot for your friendly words BlancFroid.

stay tuned
joe
neuromancer56
neuromancer56 3rd Oct 2017 04:00 - 9 years ago
Love the chill vibe with the thumping kick. Nice funky groove.
joecramer
joecramer replied 5th Oct 2017 - 8 years ago
Nice to read that you enjoyed the listen.
Thanks for your time and this friendly comment.

stay tuned
joe
crucethus
crucethus 2nd Oct 2017 23:06 - 9 years ago
I love this song. I would add some pads when you start singing. and then it needs a strong piano just playing ne note at a time. when i have the time, I would love to add to this one Joe. A great piece of work and very catchy as I keep thinking of it in my mind.
Cru
joecramer
joecramer replied 5th Oct 2017 - 8 years ago
Thanks a lot for your gentle comment Steve.
Really good to know that you like what i have done.
I would be honored if you would take the time to compose something for this song.
Since I intend at least to resume the choral part, it would be nice if you, whatever you produce, send it me as separate steem file, so I can mix it again properly.
If you want i can send you the steems to work on/with

stay tuned
joe
Spivkurl
Spivkurl 1st Oct 2017 23:09 - 9 years ago
Very deep and interesting feeling to this song! The rhythmic elements are obviously very prominent and also quite good, but your vocals as usual steal the show and make this a song rather than just a "track."

It was interesting hearing someone reference PJ Harvey, as I can definitely hear what they mean. I would say that it is more well represented in her deeper tracks. Love and I used to listen to her various albums fairly obsessively, and very loud. It is simply a great comment to receive, from my point of view.

I hear things like this, and see the request for assistance, and I always want to get involved... then later I realize how many things I am already involved in, and I become timid. So I probably should not even bother at this time in life. I fail too often, and I don't want people to hate me (much).

I enjoyed the song a lot, and it's recorded oh so well! Fave!
joecramer
joecramer replied 5th Oct 2017 - 8 years ago
Don't worry, I will never hate you. I often have the problem that I want to help and do more as I can sometimes afford.
I have not had much to do with PJ Harvey so far, but after reading the comment, I listened to a lot of them. Really good things which I like very much. And I can understand the connection between them and me well. Although there is actually no connection at all.
I am really happy to hear that you could enjoy the listen to this "song". And also that you think that the vocals work well.

If you change your mind and/or find some time anywhere, i can send you the steems from this one.

Thanks a lot for the really nice and friendly comment.

stay tuned Spivkurl
joe
DubSmockers
DubSmockers 1st Oct 2017 13:08 - 9 years ago
wrong title, i was talking about "Is There Anybody Out There?" and "nobody home" from the wall

Bleep
joecramer
joecramer replied 1st Oct 2017 - 9 years ago
Don't worry, cause I did a listen to "Is There Anybody Out There?" and "nobody home" also to "comfortably Numb" and a few others, cause all are great songs.

stay tuned
joe
DubSmockers
DubSmockers 1st Oct 2017 13:02 - 9 years ago
thanks Joe,
i read in many comments that your track was in a kraftwerk spirit, i agree with that but it was not my own feeling when i listened to it... your voice remembered me some intonations from the wall, Pink floyd. Particularly in the tittle "comfortably Numb". Don't ask me to explain why, it's just a feeling. I listened to your track several times, and each time, i said myself: "there's something from pink floyd in this one"

be sure i will listen to it again and again, it's really a good track!

Respect
Bleep
joecramer
joecramer replied 1st Oct 2017 - 9 years ago
Hey Bleep,
mostly i got the connections to other music stuff much later then the listeners. Often i can't understand there feelings but i always go to youtube and do a listen to the suggestions. So i found sometimes something i never heard before and/or i listen to some (mostly) good stuff i already know and like. Same comes with this Pink Floyd feeling. I am in love with the The Wall album almost 37 years now and i am happy that you send me to youtube cause i had some nice listen. But for me Kraftwerk, Pink Floyd, PJ Harvey and so on are a number to big to be named in a row with me. For my understanding and or feeling i always just do another little Joe Cramer track.
I am delighted that you like this song so well that you have heard it several times already. So i want to say thank you for all the nice words and the feedback and time you invested.

stay tuned
joe
DanGoldstein
DanGoldstein 30th Sep 2017 19:47 - 9 years ago
Your voice sounds good Joe. And the mixing of the voice is also great. I enjoyed listening to ur song. Regards. Dan
joecramer
joecramer replied 1st Oct 2017 - 9 years ago
Hello Dan,
thanks for your friendly comment.
Good to hear that you think that the vocals sounds good. I used different equipment and it looks like it worked much better.....
Nice that you could enjoy the listen.

stay tuned
joe
Nodog
Nodog 30th Sep 2017 18:57 - 9 years ago
Joe i have uploaded my version of Jeden Tag let me know what you think regards Robbie
joecramer
joecramer replied 30th Sep 2017 - 9 years ago
I answered already under your version on
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/188696

stay tuned
joe
Nodog
Nodog 30th Sep 2017 15:39 - 9 years ago
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Nodog
Nodog 30th Sep 2017 11:24 - 9 years ago
Joe i really enjoyed this track and listened to it more than once its different from the usual tracks here on looperman makes a refreshing change best regards Robbie.
joecramer
joecramer replied 30th Sep 2017 - 9 years ago
Hello Robbie.
Good to read that you enjoyed the listen more then one time.
Being a bit different is always something good.
So thanks a lot for your friendly words

stay tuned
joe
DubSmockers
DubSmockers 29th Sep 2017 19:44 - 9 years ago
really good work here, can you tell me what is the track bpm please?
joecramer
joecramer replied 29th Sep 2017 - 9 years ago
Thanks for the listen and the comment Bleep.
Nice to know that you think i done a good work with this one.
To answer your question, it is on 130 bps.

stay tuned
joe
theHumps
theHumps 29th Sep 2017 09:39 - 9 years ago
PJ Harvey's song "Down By the Water" comes to mind immediately, everything from the music to the vocal parts.

I like it, cool idea, great atmosphere and instrumentation.

Wayne
joecramer
joecramer replied 29th Sep 2017 - 9 years ago
Thanks a lot for your friendly words Wayne.

I just listen to this PJ Harvey's song "Down By the Water". Cool song for sure but i never heard it before.

Good to know that you like what i had done.

stay tuned
joe
NateJMusic
NateJMusic 29th Sep 2017 07:55 - 9 years ago
Yeah, I love the sub. I admit I didn't see the guitar coming. How do you feel about switching it out for something edgier?
joecramer
joecramer replied 29th Sep 2017 - 9 years ago
Thanks for your friendly comment NateJMusic

I am still in work with this one and i will sure switch the guitar to see what happend but in a way i love this little unusual sound for this kind of music.

stay tuned
joe
Orlando51
Orlando51 28th Sep 2017 23:02 - 9 years ago
Hey Joe!

It seems I'm the second one after our friend Silverman who smnells the reminiscences of Kraftwerk, although I'm completely taking in regard your explanation that the similarity wasn't intentional. Great work again Joe and it seems you'll be developing it further and maybe it even emerges on one of your future albums...I'm really holding my fingers cross for you to achieve that goal..:) Fave for this one !:)

Compliments_____Orlando
joecramer
joecramer replied 29th Sep 2017 - 9 years ago
Thanks for your nice comment and the fav Orlando.
May your crossed fingers bring me happiness

Good to know that you could enjoy the listen.
All I tried was to create an unusual mix between lyrics (a socially critical challenge to think) and music (a relaxed offer to dream and chill). And it turned out that it worked well.
Actually, it is not like Kraftwerk but somehow a little as in the spirit of them.

All the best and stay tuned
joe
TrippyHippyCrew
TrippyHippyCrew 28th Sep 2017 20:22 - 9 years ago
you should add some minor piano chords
joecramer
joecramer replied 29th Sep 2017 - 9 years ago
Thanks for your comment and the suggestion. This isn't the final version, so maybe a minor piano works well.

stay tuned
joe
Kargalar
Kargalar 26th Sep 2017 22:02 - 9 years ago
Great work Joe ! a style i cant reach, but surely can appreaciate it , kuddos !!
joecramer
joecramer replied 28th Sep 2017 - 9 years ago
Thanks a lot Kargalar for friendly comment.
Good to know that you could enjoy this track

stay tuned
joe
silverman
silverman 26th Sep 2017 20:44 - 9 years ago
Kraftwerk definitely made the German voice THE voice for electronic music.
This is superb.
My wife came in and said it's years since we listened to Kraftwerk but I don't remember this one!
I really hope you're going to release an album one day Joe I'm sure it would sell well over here.
joecramer
joecramer replied 28th Sep 2017 - 9 years ago
What a gentle comment. I didn't had this Kraftwerk connection in mind but after your comment i listen to the track again and your wife could be right. Maybe i listen to long to too much Kraftwerk music when i was a young boy.
If there is anyone around who wants to make an album with me and try to sell it, in GB or anywhere else, just call me.

Thanks for your friendly words Mr Silverman
I wish you both all the best

stay tuned
joe

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