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8th May 2016 02:20 - 8 years ago
Description : A collab with nicetones101 ! This has been awhile in the making, real life caught up with me and i had to take a little musical break. I looked over my past comments i received and i tried to put all the constructive criticism to work ! I turned the vocals up a bit , I also cut down on the effects and left a clean vocal track. I did want the chaos and the noise to still be a player in certain parts though. I tried to create two distinct atmospheres, an uneasy calm and a manic episode. I prefer headphones with this track as there is a lot going on at certain times.

Comments (12)

If you have time take a listen and give FatalDecline some feedback.

ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine 14th Feb 2017 14:46 - 7 years ago
I'm a metal fan and this track was a pleasure to listen to .

the lyrics is a good point in it .
MOONLYTE
MOONLYTE 13th Feb 2017 04:38 - 7 years ago
Very atmospheric, i dig it
nicetones101
nicetones101 12th Feb 2017 19:33 - 7 years ago
Hey FATAL!Just popped by for another listen.
theHumps
theHumps 17th Sep 2016 14:09 - 8 years ago
Cool man, you don't hear enough of this style of rock here. Lots of effects on the vocals but it works to fill up space and help create a dark creepy vocal track. You did a great job matching the vocals to the music. The music kicks ass, thick guitars and hard hitting drums always a good combination.

Attitude adjusted, thanks!

Wayne
Bindanox
Bindanox 11th Sep 2016 19:19 - 8 years ago
Great metal riffs.
Really well produced in my opinion.
Your vocals suit really well this genre.
Have tried some Doom metal?
Evisma
Evisma 17th Aug 2016 04:15 - 8 years ago
Beginning music reminds me a bit of early Coal Chamber, just need that marching snare.

Verses are 8th note chunkiness, with more sedated vocals than I expected. Better than a lot of screaming. Not bad.

I enjoyed this. I like the heavier stuff.

Evan
FatalDecline
FatalDecline replied 30th Aug 2016 - 8 years ago
Thanks for listening ! I love coal chambers early stuff, and I am honored with the comparison \m/

I have never been to much of a screamer lol

Rock on brother \m/
Tinka0
Tinka0 22nd Jun 2016 06:15 - 8 years ago
I don't see enough heavy metal here.. Lets see what we have here :D

Excited already.... Yessss... @1:16 that switch up takes me back to my teen years... It has a similar vibe to Slipknot's Mate. Feed. Kill. Repeat... I fucking loved that album... Oww it ended.. I genuinely loved that.. Well done guys..

I think a little more tweaking on the vocals may be needed, perhaps bring down the frequencies somewhere between the low -mid.. I could be wrong, try it :)
Neomorpheus
Neomorpheus 11th Jun 2016 19:07 - 8 years ago
Hey Fatal, dope track bro.
Your gonna laugh but this reminds me a lot of some 60's Psychedelic rock with respect to the vocals. Ever heard Donovan's "Hurdy Gurdy Man"? Anyhow, yeah Nice really riffs it up too with some brutal downtuned stoner groove-ige! I'm digging the collab for sure.
FatalDecline
FatalDecline replied 14th Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
Thanks for listening ! I am stoked you got a psychedelic rock vibe, cause i am really pushing for a stoner rock kinda thing :) yes i have heard "hurdy gurdy man" I like the song too !
I am trying to take a lot of inspiration from the vocalists and poets of the 60's and 70's .
thanks once again for listening and the kind words. YOU ROCK !
StaticNomad
StaticNomad 6th Jun 2016 10:49 - 8 years ago
Yo.

You sure do have some low end heavily detuned riffage going on here. Is that a 7-string guitar?

I quite like the vocal style as it's unexpected (not obvious metal vocals). Perhaps might be too much reverb on the vocal but that's OK. Might be a little bit like some of the Deftones' stuff.

A well made track.

Not spectacular but solid.

Congrats.
FatalDecline
FatalDecline replied 7th Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
Thanks for the listen ! I am slowly trying to use less effects on my vocals, I tend to layer too much i think ;p

I am happy you like the vocal style, I am a HUGE Deftones fan so the influence is most definitely there.

As for the guitar questions, that was all nicetones101 , I know he plays a 7 string, but not sure if he did on this track, it has been in the works for awhile, but i can get back to you with the info !

Thank you for the kind words, you rock !
Dennel
Dennel 5th Jun 2016 22:32 - 8 years ago
Hey Fatal great job on this track! Dig your vocal style / approach, I really liked the big delay on the hook of the song
though I couldn't quite make out the last word. Correct me but it sounds like you were saying "You are Nothing?" Tried pulling up the lyrics but couldn't get into that section for some reason. With that low metal groove, this is a around great track for this genre. Great Job

D
FatalDecline
FatalDecline replied 7th Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
Thanks for listening ! I don't have the vocal cords for the constant screams that metal has these days, so i took a more Sabbath/katatonic sort of approach.
You are absolutely correct "you are nothing" is what i was saying! I think you have to be signed into the site to pull up the lyrics:).
Thanks for the compliment and the kind words, you rock !
nicetones101
nicetones101 22nd May 2016 01:11 - 8 years ago
Hey fatal!!!!!!!How have you been mate?Man real life caught up with me too and i tried to run but it still caught me!The fast bastard!hahaha...Mate i love this track!I actually forgot about this track...Awesome vocals and i love the vocal line as the song ended.Very dark atmosphere.Awesome man!
Danke
Danke 8th May 2016 14:10 - 8 years ago
Real good combination of the lower tuned groovy metal and the atmospherical voice...bit like Katatonia...great work...

Handshake, Danke
FatalDecline
FatalDecline replied 10th May 2016 - 8 years ago
thanks for the compliment , and thanks for listening !

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