Crucify Me With Partial Vocals - Topvega

11th Oct 2015 22:45 - 10 years ago
Description : 11-8-15 Added Vocals still needs more Vocals for the Middle Verse.
Been trying to get a couple projects ready for play in between life's curve balls. This one is pretty much done music wise. I have a working vocal line that needs more lyrics but I am trying to polish it enough to release so I can get feed back on it. I ##### at singing so it will never be great. :)

Drums are Addictive Drums. All guitars and bass are myself.

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Comments (7)

If you have time take a listen and give topvega some feedback.

Burtsbluesboxes
Burtsbluesboxes 9th Nov 2015 20:52 - 10 years ago
Your vocals are fine :p The Vocalist for My Dying Bride said in an interview he's a vocalist not a singer because he understands he can't hit the notes like a singer. You sound just as good , even better than some, ;) professional rock bands out there. I like the addition. Ever heard Brittany Spears sing without pitch correction? It's AWEFUL!!!
Orlando51
Orlando51 20th Oct 2015 17:47 - 10 years ago
I surely won't crucify you for that my friend...I can only give you compliments for yet another rough old style rock number! Vocals or not...I'm already pleased with what I hear!:) Faved!

All the best____Orlando
topvega
topvega replied 24th Oct 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks Orlando for the words of support and for giving it a listen. Still finishing up the vocals.

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DanGoldstein
DanGoldstein 20th Oct 2015 12:21 - 10 years ago
awesome hard hitting groove. love the effects on the lead. good luck with more development. should be a winner! regards - Dan
topvega
topvega replied 24th Oct 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks Dan...appreciate the kind words of encouragement.

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Burtsbluesboxes
Burtsbluesboxes 12th Oct 2015 17:24 - 10 years ago
Wish granted, now where's my hammer and nails ;) I've heard plenty of artist that can't sing but that doesn't stop them!! People love it raw :D Love it when the bass is doing it's own thing and not playing exactly what the guitar is doing. \m/
topvega
topvega replied 18th Oct 2015 - 10 years ago
I think it is mostly a subconscious thing on my part. I hear great singing voices in my head but struggle to get anything close to that and become super critical. I am going to just say ##### it and do the vocals the best I can and see what others think. I also love when the bass and guitars do contrasting parts, it's just tough to get that to work and following the rhythm is what I wind up settling with. I need to challenge myself a bit more.
Thanks for giving it a listen. I should have vocals added in a week to ten days.

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Danke
Danke 12th Oct 2015 07:48 - 10 years ago
Again those dirty, crunchy, cool, catchy guitar riffs and melodies...tune is animal...part from 0.47 and later is awesome...Evisma tells the truth about the lead...or you wanted with sliding?

Anyways, great track, Danke
topvega
topvega replied 18th Oct 2015 - 10 years ago
Yeah I was going for an odd lead that would start out a bit off and catch up but without the vocals in the mix it does sound a little F'd. :) Thanks for taking the time to give it a listen.

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Evisma
Evisma 12th Oct 2015 04:17 - 10 years ago
Sounds like goddamn Clutch again! Uncanny.

1:07 lead's timing sounds off. Sounds like you're going for an odd rhythm there. The wild flanging effect is pretty cool. I hear it mostly on the right.

Bassline sounds more advanced than the main guitar, but the rhythm guitar is quite solid.

Yes, vocals. ALL of your stuff deserves vocals. Always solid riffery.

Evan
topvega
topvega replied 18th Oct 2015 - 10 years ago
Hey Evan thanks for checking it out and for the feedback. The lead does sound a bit off in timing at the start. I was trying to go for an odd "catch up" Lead and it sounds better with the vocals I had present in the track. I Muted them when rendering because they were far from done. I will see if I can't move them a slight bit to sit better. Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it.

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PatrickFox
PatrickFox 11th Oct 2015 23:17 - 10 years ago
That sounds badass if you pardon the language. Awesome dude... Cannot wait to hear some vocals on it... Well done.
topvega
topvega replied 18th Oct 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks PF...always nice to get some positive feedback.

In the process of finishing up the vocals now.

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