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23rd Jul 2015 03:30 - 9 years ago
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Description : Hey guys! I'd like to see or hear what you'd suggest to be added or replaced on the song. This is where I'll put most of my effort on. I downloaded some more plugins, and some more sound packs. Your feedbacks are highly welcome!

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If you have time take a listen and give bitronix some feedback.

donnorris
donnorris 27th Jul 2015 20:40 - 9 years ago
like it
ReonN
ReonN 27th Jul 2015 14:39 - 9 years ago
nice track.. one suggestion, can you change your kick drums because I think you used a wrong one and it sounds a bit different. anyways, this track of yours still "stands" out for me than any track because of the chords you used.

ReonN
skwishfish
skwishfish 26th Jul 2015 00:31 - 9 years ago
Hey man! Great job!

Just a couple suggestions from my end. I would first add more punch and bass to the kick as well as raising the level of the snare. This will add a little more to both the low and mid frequency levels.

Also, while the chord structure for the verse is IMMACULATE, it seems to go unvaried for a little too long and my ears got slightly bored. I would suggest at least changing a couple notes in the structure of the melody to give it a little twist to keep listeners hooked!

Other than those things, awesome track mate! :)

Take a listen to my stuff too if you can! It would be very appreciated :)

Best Regards,
Skwish Fish
bitronix
bitronix replied 27th Jul 2015 - 9 years ago
Sorry Late Reply
Thanks for the suggestion! I would put some sidechain to the kicks and the snares or maybe make it more "hearable" when I get some time. I will see what I can do to the change of chord structure since it's a bit hard to make another tune with the same background realted to the first tune, but I'll see what I can do. Anyways, thanks! I'll try listening to your tracks!
ShurelyTemper
ShurelyTemper 23rd Jul 2015 20:19 - 9 years ago
Hi there, just a little passing note, too many high frequencies. You need to divide the sound into layers. Bass Mid and High. For a track to sound full its usual to have 2-3 times more bass and mid frequencies than high ones. Otherwise it sounds hollow. Also shift the notes to quantize them into a more natural 'non perfect' feel. It's a nice track but lacks structure.
bitronix
bitronix replied 24th Jul 2015 - 9 years ago
Yes, I can notice that high freq on the chorus part haha thanks btw for letting me know I'm not the only one noticing it. I'm also asking a close friend about this song. And btw, what do you mean by a "non-perfect" feel? Is it that it should not be overdose in effects? Anyways, thanks for stopping by and suggesting! Appreciated it!

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