When U Laugh - DeciBel

Name: when U laugh
Duration: 152 s
Channel: deciBel
Description: when she was laughing in facT ....composed @ nov 2012 ...,the first & last time I played mandolin in a trial of mine .

When U Laugh

deciBel

16th May 2014 17:47 - 12 years ago

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when U laugh - Cinematic track by deciBel

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16th May 2014 17:47 - 12 years ago

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Description : when she was laughing in facT ....composed @ nov 2012 ...,the first & last time I played mandolin in a trial of mine .

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promenade2239 25th Aug 2014 05:40 - 12 years ago

hi,
nice cinematic music. Really well done with the strings and piano. I like your mandolin playing - it's very nice merged into this composition along the violin section. I would like to hear a bit more of the introduction: you start with slow strings but you could extend the beginning for sure. And add maybe some nice ending or just fade it out so you could have a 3-4 min.
Quite short track but really nice and pleasant to listen and enjoy.
A.

TinyFinger 23rd Aug 2014 00:14 - 12 years ago

Hi! Nice song for the ear. ;))

deciBel replied 23rd Aug 2014 - 12 years ago

many tnx TinyFinger for the attention & the shared ppint of view as commenT. ___Behnam

MisterBloodworth 19th Aug 2014 02:24 - 12 years ago

This was very well produced. Indeed very soothing and easy to listen to. The beat is very unique which perfectly goes with the soundtrack. Beautiful work, my friend.

~Ookami

deciBel replied 20th Aug 2014 - 12 years ago

Hi Ookami . many thnx for attention & the shared point of view as comment my friend .I'm gratefull..
best wishes.___Behnam

EazyBeatz 19th Aug 2014 00:10 - 12 years ago

wow those plucks are just so soothing. wonderful job here . this track here is definitely worth the time.

deciBel replied 20th Aug 2014 - 12 years ago

thank U very much for attention & the shared point of view as comment EazyBeatz. best wishes.___Behnam

monsterage 18th Aug 2014 22:38 - 12 years ago

love it man, this thing with vocals would go perfectly :D very well mix as well

deciBel replied 20th Aug 2014 - 12 years ago

many thnx for attention & the shared point of view monsterage.best wishes.___Behnam

brillbilly 17th Aug 2014 23:51 - 12 years ago

Hi Dear benham!

This is a real nice piece of music!

beautiful feel good music,that gives me feelings of warm sun and calm sea's.!

It a very very nice chilled piece of music!

Beautiful strings,beats n guitar.!

Great to know your still making music is such worrying times.!

kind regards dear behnam!

***chris***

deciBel replied 20th Aug 2014 - 12 years ago

Hello Chris , dear . many thnx for attention & the kind words. just my friend as U can see in description this trial was composed @nov 2012 & I'm not making music anymore ..
best wishes.___Behnam

Samina 6th Jul 2014 22:03 - 12 years ago

Dear Behnam
This adorable music reminds me of the poem "Your laughter" by Pablo Neruda.
I read it again and again while listening to your music and remembered all laughters which I miss very much now miles away from all my loved ones.

Thanks dear Behnam for the moments your music created and appreciate sharing.

Bests
Mina

Take bread away from me, if you wish,
take air away, but
do not take from me your laughter.

Do not take away the rose,
the lance flower that you pluck,
the water that suddenly
bursts forth in joy,
the sudden wave
of silver born in you.

My struggle is harsh and I come back
with eyes tired
at times from having seen
the unchanging earth,
but when your laughter enters
it rises to the sky seeking me
and it opens for me all
the doors of life.

My love, in the darkest
hour your laughter
opens, and if suddenly
you see my blood staining
the stones of the street,
laugh, because your laughter
will be for my hands
like a fresh sword.
.
.
.
deny me bread, air,
light, spring,
but never your laughter
for I would die.

deciBel replied 9th Aug 2014 - 12 years ago

merci Mina for attention & nice shared feedback with me & us.
mamnunam az keifiate commenthaye mokhtalefe to va arezuhaye khub dara m baraye har2ye shoma 2ta. movazebe ham bashid .
mamnun again .___

RiceChrisB 30th Jun 2014 16:13 - 12 years ago

beautiful

deciBel replied 9th Aug 2014 - 12 years ago

merci for shared idea as comment.

Cestevens1783 30th Jun 2014 01:28 - 12 years ago

Well...this just brings out all the feels...this is a beautiful track. The music speaks for itself. You really know how to bring unique sounds together I think. I love it, truly.

deciBel replied 9th Aug 2014 - 12 years ago

my appology for late reply ms Stevens & many thnx for attention , listening & the time to share your point of view as a comment with me & us . i'm gratefull. best wishes.___B

MWRatridge 30th Jun 2014 01:14 - 12 years ago

Benham,
Good track and nice playing. I enjoyed it.
Keep up the music man; it helps you escape.
Mark.

deciBel replied 9th Aug 2014 - 12 years ago

TY Mark...despite i don't know why i should escape from what to where &...!
take care man.merci again.___B

Billydragon1 29th Jun 2014 22:55 - 12 years ago

What a soothing and gentle track here brother Behnam!
I sense a lot of sentiments with this track. She must have been a very special person! :)

The percussion drums was a good choice as it is not overbearing. The piano itself reflects a special moment in time. The mandolin places you into that moment in time. And the strings in the background holds everything together. And looking back, it is a beautiful memory captured in sound. A soothing track to the soul. Well done. - Billy

deciBel replied 9th Aug 2014 - 12 years ago

Hello Billy , and first appology for my absence & late reply.
many thnx for attention , & time to share your idea as comment with me & us .
the phrase of '' beautifull memory captured in sound '' in your comment is remarkable , memorable & what I'll remember that from U , even beyond looperman . .
a friendly smile & appreciations again.
best wishes.___B

GramoChopin 28th Jun 2014 02:13 - 12 years ago

Yea the guitar is very impressive! Everything sits together so naturally, really love the pace of this as well. A very smooth moody production deciBel. No real complaints. peace

Gramo/Neo

deciBel replied 29th Jun 2014 - 12 years ago

many thnx Gramo/Neo for attention & time to share your idea as commenT . that is Mandolin and this track has been the first time ever I had used mandolin in a trial of mine despite as U may know I'm a guitarist & not a mandolin player.any way no matter what is the name of instruments , I'm gratefull & appreciate your feedback.___Behnam

Oxnitrogen 27th Jun 2014 22:34 - 12 years ago

Really nice,great job my friend

deciBel replied 27th Jun 2014 - 12 years ago

hey how are u man ? many thnx fr attention & shared idea as commenT . appreciations & best wishes.___Behnam

Diese 27th Jun 2014 12:40 - 12 years ago

without demur this is an incredible and intelligence music !
what happens around 1:40 is a very very smart way for showing the laugh moments !!
congrats .

deciBel replied 27th Jun 2014 - 12 years ago

i appreciate your attention & feedback .best wishes.__B

DesignedImpression 15th Jun 2014 16:21 - 12 years ago

Hello Behnam, This trial I believe still is incomplete, not for its abrupt ending but, for it's moment in holding onto the previous thought. I hear the instruments wanted to say something more. I like the sounds you chose to explain the image of how that time seemed like. This is some natural deep thought. The piano allows me to make it personal to a time where she was laughing too but, not there anymore. A respective story. Must continue the ending sentence, will be interesting to hear. Thank you for sharing, is enjoyed and appreciated style from you. Hope things are clearer now. Peace.

deciBel replied 27th Jun 2014 - 12 years ago

Hello DesignedImpression and many thnx for the attention , listening & sharing your critical idea .
I underestand U & I think U'll underestand me to say I prefer people listen my trials 2 times , instead of making a longer version of them .but U've truely felt about instruments cause this is an extracted part of a longer version of this trial which I can send U in email if U're minded cause knowing your idea about that version too will be interesting for me and maybe that's why U've truely felt instruments wanting to say somethings more .
anyway designedImpression , your point of view is worthy of considering for me ,generally too everyone's idea is respectable for me .
and any how , now , U think what can make this better ?
which line , which instrument ( U think ) should be improved & expanded to make the listeners don't feel this is incomplete ? ....looking forward to read your reply & also according to your critical idea U're the only one who can feel free to want to collaborate about this track for any longer version .many thnx again & all the best.___B

Spivkurl 15th Jun 2014 15:41 - 12 years ago

Thank you for your response, and please don't be offended by my review. As usual, I read through all the reviews before I write mine, and I got the impression from your responses that this was still the "prototype version." The only thing about the recording that led me to believe this was the final moment, it is very sudden and abrupt. I am getting the feeling that this was completely intentional, and so I apologize for making an assumption. It's an absolutely beautiful piece, and I'm glad that I came back to listen again this morning. Getting concerned about you my friend within all the turmoil in the world, and I'm happy that we are still connected in some way.

deciBel replied 27th Jun 2014 - 12 years ago

I'm seriously gratefull of your second presence Patrick & please excuse me for a bit latency in responce for the reasons U know .
well according to knowing U , I'm sure U're not someone who cenosors his idea to make the others glad and I'm sure U're such a good friend of mine who'll help me learn more by sharing his positive or negative idea with me ..
...U can underestand me to say , knowing any type of feedback from such a virtuoso musician like U will be so great & absolutely respected worth of considering & appreciated by me..
anyway if U really think this is good enough , I should be glad and I'm seriously gratefull of your attention and shared idea & also especially your time for listening this trial of mine for 2 times & writing 2 times about it.
my friend , no matter when I leave looperman , we(U & me ) will be connected in any type of future & I'll be your friend & hope someday we ( all ) will meet eachother ..
smile & my best wishes for U & your dears all .__Behnam

Spivkurl 14th Jun 2014 16:03 - 12 years ago

You've done it again my friend, created something precious, and brightened my life in a big way! This gives me images of a travelling bard, going places, and changing lives. I realize this isn't the version you meant to upload, but I love it! You performed all parts with feeling and expression, and they all work together to create life. It's very good to see that you are still around here with us. I am happy to know you.

deciBel replied 14th Jun 2014 - 12 years ago

happiness belongs to me for knowing U my friend & Pat generally I should confess I've been lucky abouT my looperman communications what teached to this isolated grown man so much..regarding this track I'm gratefull of your attention & time , shared review & all your supportive words .
just no Patrick my friend , this is it the same version that I had wanted to upload ...I'm back from mission & U've listened the last seq of that folder of this project in which ending part has not that issues ...
buT your honest words makes me know this hasn't convinced your mind to be recognized as a completed and done track ...
despite I think U've not listened track till the end too...
and so I'm sorry if this hasn'T convinced U as a completed & done trial of mine , and my exclusive appreciation for sharing honest feedback & critical point of view Pat...
would be great to know what do U think We should change in it to can gain to a better output in the end ... ?
anyway thnx & thnx & take care buddy.___B

Sherris 14th Jun 2014 10:22 - 12 years ago

to o ahange asheghaneh !
ajab jaleb asan tavagho nadashtam .ey kalak pas she ee ham boodeh dasteto roo nemikardi pishe ma hamishe tanha tanha invar oonvar boodi .
diako in ahanget kheili zibast .to albate az oonaee kholgho khoot mikhore shoharo pedare khoobi bashi vali be hich vajh fekr nemikardam to ahange asheghaneh injooriam dashteh bashi adame bi ehsas . voooy joone Arsalane man ghor nazan chera farsi minevisam intouri man rahat taram .
be ghole khodet arezoohaye khoob.
:)

deciBel replied 14th Jun 2014 - 12 years ago

mamnoon az inke 100 bar azat khaste am ke inja mano Behnam seda koni va inghadr roayat mikoni .
hamintor merci ke inhame motevajjeh mishi migam be farsi ,turki , kurdi , lori , english ya hich zabune digei inja
dar morede masaele private zendegie adam harf nazan .
& in the end man ghadrdani mikonam az to , az amme Shahinam va az in commente technichal va kamelan herfei !
arezuhaye khoobe bi hosele..va ehteram .

TinyFinger 8th Jun 2014 14:10 - 12 years ago

Hi! Good track, nice work.

deciBel replied 14th Jun 2014 - 12 years ago

many thnx for listening & the shared feedback___Behnam

DanGoldstein 25th May 2014 00:33 - 12 years ago

it's nice how you transition into the mandolin solo. don't hear a solo like that very often. it should not be the last time you put mandolin in a track! regards. Dan

deciBel replied 26th May 2014 - 12 years ago

hey what's up Dan ? nice to meet U after awhile ..
many thnx Dan for attention & kind feedback about my mandolin playing .(ps:Dan I got your message, okay,soon I'll write a short autobiographic presentation for there ..just let me back home from mission...& many many thnx)___B

FreeRadical 24th May 2014 08:07 - 12 years ago

This track has a really nice live vibe to it. The mandolin is great and i dig the percussion. I like the way you did the pitch shift before bringing the piano back in. The violins are nice but i have to say it ended quite abruptly, so perhaps it would benefit from a fade rather than just stopping dead as it does.
All the same i enjoyed this track Behnam and i will for sure be back for more.
FR

deciBel replied 26th May 2014 - 12 years ago

Many many thnx FR for attention & shared idea .
and an exclusive appreciations for true & valuable criticism about ending ! yes , wacky me,haha have uploaded a wrong seq of the folder of this project ,a prototype version in which I hadn't designed ending part(version before the last seq)...! & now while reading your true comment , I'm in mission according to the job(mining engineer) & have no access to no track & no software even to correct this !haha!shame on my wacky mind but no problem this mistake made a cool memory about uploading this trial for me in my mind & I enjoyed!...anyway great appreciations FR for carefull listening & true point about this undone ending...
___Behnam

Tonality 24th May 2014 04:47 - 12 years ago

beautifull indeed. this is just amazing my friend.

deciBel replied 26th May 2014 - 12 years ago

thnx Tonality.

Dakotamoon666 22nd May 2014 14:55 - 12 years ago

Very nice, I like the way you play mandolin but the end is a little chopped off

deciBel replied 26th May 2014 - 12 years ago

Marko (oh!wacky me!)nice to see your comment,yesterday around the same time I was listening ''land of legonds'' your wonderfull track & U were in my mind & now I see U've commented at the same time for this trial of mine..
Many many thnx buddy for presence,attention & shared idea .
and an exclusive appreciations for attention & true & valuable criticism about ending ! yes , wacky me,the one who mistakes about friend's names too as U know ,has uploaded a wrong seq of the folder of this project,a prototype version in which I hadn't designed ending part(version before the last seq)...! & now while reading your comment , as usual I'm in mission & have no access to no track & no software even to correct this !haha!shame !
anyway many thnx for attention & good point U've mentioned about ending man.best wishes.___B

BrandonMichelle 21st May 2014 09:59 - 12 years ago

What shall I say. I am smiling from ear to ear actually really starting to laugh. You always seem to find a way to amaze me. Your musical talent has no end. I wish it was for download hmm? You play mandolin as if you were happy at the time. It shows through your playing. I have noticed in your music you are very good at letting the listener feel the emotion you are expressing at that time. If you are able to grab the attention of your listeners and make them feel your laughter, sadness, anger, frustration, pain, love etc. then you are one very amazing composer/musician.

Thank you for the big smile,
Brandon Michelle

deciBel replied 24th May 2014 - 12 years ago

many many thnx my Brandy for attention & the kind words.
....BrandY but to be honest & even if I believe your generous words about being an amazing musician , I should confess,whished I was amazing about something else ...
wished I was an amazing father instead ....
anyway kiss kiss BrandY for all your warm feedbaX ...take care ,bests.__B

theHumps 20th May 2014 13:25 - 12 years ago

Hi Benham! I think your mandolin playing was great. The strumming parts are nice. The picking was also excellent, especially the transition part with the effects around 1:40. I am surprised more people don't play one here on the loop,

I found it to be an easy instrument to play. I am not very good at playing it. What's that saying, "fake it till you make it"? hehe. I just found my book of mandolin chords. I only play the mando when I record, I hardly ever practice it.

Your mandolin sound cleanly played and in just the right places, it is such a beautiful sounding instrument. Keep playing my friend!

Wayne

deciBel replied 24th May 2014 - 12 years ago

Wayne many many thnx for attention,the kind words & all the encouragements. ....uuummm yes as U've mentioned there're not many mandolin players.particullary I think mandolin has a very nice sound & special character as a strumming instrument, buT I think the reason why we often don't find many mandolin players are its weak points about expressing suspended atmosphers,subjective impressions , & the lack of a strenght Bass sound which makes it to be usefull for some special & usually romantic concepts, it also needs a mentality with minor & melodic tendency for playing.
ofcourse these are my personal point of view & criticisms about mandolin & I don't know much about it .
for sure your probable reply can include some instructive points about mandolin ...& of course noone can't ignore its unique & beautY sound in its suitable place ...
anyway personally I enjoyed my first & last mandolin playing & your warm feedback made that exprience of mine including more pleasure...appreciations Wayne for patiency & presence & valuable shared idea.best wishes man.___B