Tags : | Cinematic | 6.43 MB

Description : Here is my first finished song. I hope you enjoy it!

I was planning on putting lyrics to it but quickly realized that singing isn't as easy as I had expected. It is somewhat of a metal song with a dance beat. I would appreciate any constructive criticism or opinions that you guys are willing to offer on it. Special thanks to Bilbozo and Rei4real for the guitar loops I used in it.

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  1. bmw2000uk
    bmw2000uk on Mon 21st Jun 2010 - 9 years ago


    I love this piece of music, reminds me of an action movie scenario.
    You given me some ideas now..


  2. HustleUnion
    HustleUnion on Sat 7th Nov 2009 - 10 years ago

    nice work very dark. i feel like i could be playing castlevania on the last level or something lol.

  3. Rtdabombnetwork
    Rtdabombnetwork on Sun 30th Aug 2009 - 10 years ago

    love the arrangment of composing @ that guitar don't stop 1

  4. ReignStorms
    ReignStorms on Mon 8th Sep 2008 - 11 years ago

    Wow. It starts out real slow and then "bam" hits you in the ear. Excellent mix. It sounds like it could be in a horror movie.

    Reply by RayKoefoed

    Thanks a lot peppermint. I am glad you liked it. It is a clear case of beginner's luck I think, this was my first track I finished and posted and has always been the one people seem to like the most.

  5. BKMack
    BKMack on Thu 28th Aug 2008 - 11 years ago

    One this site you find some amazing talent. Yours is definitely included in that description. I enjoyed this track from beginning to end. This track took me to that place I go when I listen to music. Thankx for the ride.

    Reply by RayKoefoed

    Thanks very much Bmack. That is a very kind compliment.

  6. Krook
    Krook on Tue 12th Aug 2008 - 11 years ago

    This is a great first track I am very impressed with your arrangment and production. Can not wait to hear what else you come up with.


    Reply by RayKoefoed

    Thanks very much Krook! I have a few more up, I still think most people like this one best though. Beginer's luck no doubt =)

  7. BKMack
    BKMack on Mon 4th Aug 2008 - 11 years ago

    If this is your first song I'd love to hear your next ten...And hopefully I will ... Talent for detail is evident ... I don't feel I am at a talent level where I can critique anyone about anything ...

    But if this track were mine ... I wouldn't change what you have but, I would add a hit and/or a 4 bar roll here and there to stretch it the track out

    Reply by RayKoefoed

    Thanks very much for the review Bmack. I think that is good advice and I agree. I do need to work on changing up drums a little, adding rolls and such.

  8. Zalg
    Zalg on Fri 18th Jul 2008 - 11 years ago

    Nice song, it has an evil sort of touch, good sound and loops. Out of 10, I'd give it an 8. Also--- did you make the majority of the loops? Because they sound awesome.
    Either way, it's about a hundred times better than my first song (and only, so far).

    Reply by RayKoefoed

    Thanks Zalg. I appreciate such a high rating on your scale. I pretty much expected my first posted song to be a humbling learning experience for me, so I am so glad people actually even like it. Yes, other then the 2 guitar loops from here that I used, I composed the rest.

  9. Matney
    Matney on Fri 18th Jul 2008 - 11 years ago

    Wow... This is awesome.

    Great sense of structure, great mix, too. The ONLY thing I'd do differently would be to bring the bass up a bit in the mix, and play lower notes (if that's an option to you).

    Keep up the good work. :)

    Reply by RayKoefoed

    Thank you for the review Matney.

    I am glad you said that about the bass, and I totaly agree. As I have been trying to teach myself to make decent sounding music, I would create a short sample and record it to CD and see how it sounded on a couple different stereos. It always seemed the bass was just overwhelming so I knew I should lower it below what I thought it should sound like, but in the end I realize that I have over compensated. Thank you for saying so, because I know I am not the only one that hears that now.

  10. rei4real
    rei4real on Thu 17th Jul 2008 - 11 years ago

    awesome, flawless, powerful ...
    I love this track!!!
    and I like the way you chopped my loop ... cool work ...
    thx a lot for doing this!!
    like slap said: great production ...
    and like esh said: nothing to change ...
    and I say: give us more of that ...

    peace, rei

    Reply by RayKoefoed

    Thank you Rei, for the very kind review and even more for the terrific loops!

    SLAPJOHNSON on Thu 17th Jul 2008 - 11 years ago

    Super arrangement. Great driving groove and smashing guitar.. Mix and production top draw... Cheers Slap...

    Reply by RayKoefoed

    Thank you very much Slap. You guys sure know how to make a fella feel comfortable posting songs. I am glad to have found this community.

  12. Jake_richards
    Jake_richards on Wed 16th Jul 2008 - 11 years ago

    Dam, I am impressed some of the best shit i heard from anyone here. Great job.

    Reply by RayKoefoed

    Wow! That is a very flattering compliment. Thank you very much Jake!

  13. RayMiX
    RayMiX on Wed 16th Jul 2008 - 11 years ago

    OHh its too hard its soo nice.. i like that.... u made a real great job here .,, rock on :P... cheers .. RayMiX

    Reply by RayKoefoed

    Thanks RayMix. I will do my best to Rock On. You Rock On as well, like you did with that zombie remix.

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