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16th Jul 2008 13:04 - 15 years ago
Description : Here is my first finished song. I hope you enjoy it!

I was planning on putting lyrics to it but quickly realized that singing isn't as easy as I had expected. It is somewhat of a metal song with a dance beat. I would appreciate any constructive criticism or opinions that you guys are willing to offer on it. Special thanks to Bilbozo and Rei4real for the guitar loops I used in it.

Comments (13)

If you have time take a listen and give RayKoefoed some feedback.

bmw2000uk
bmw2000uk 21st Jun 2010 10:20 - 14 years ago
Hi

I love this piece of music, reminds me of an action movie scenario.
You given me some ideas now..

Awesome....
HustleUnion
HustleUnion 7th Nov 2009 04:26 - 14 years ago
nice work very dark. i feel like i could be playing castlevania on the last level or something lol.
Rtdabombnetwork
Rtdabombnetwork 30th Aug 2009 18:30 - 14 years ago
love the arrangment of composing @ that guitar don't stop 1
ReignStorms
ReignStorms 8th Sep 2008 12:16 - 15 years ago
Wow. It starts out real slow and then "bam" hits you in the ear. Excellent mix. It sounds like it could be in a horror movie.
RayKoefoed
RayKoefoed replied Unknown
Thanks a lot peppermint. I am glad you liked it. It is a clear case of beginner's luck I think, this was my first track I finished and posted and has always been the one people seem to like the most.
BKMack
BKMack 28th Aug 2008 11:01 - 15 years ago
One this site you find some amazing talent. Yours is definitely included in that description. I enjoyed this track from beginning to end. This track took me to that place I go when I listen to music. Thankx for the ride.
RayKoefoed
RayKoefoed replied Unknown
Thanks very much Bmack. That is a very kind compliment.
Krook
Krook 12th Aug 2008 03:26 - 15 years ago
This is a great first track I am very impressed with your arrangment and production. Can not wait to hear what else you come up with.

Krook
RayKoefoed
RayKoefoed replied Unknown
Thanks very much Krook! I have a few more up, I still think most people like this one best though. Beginer's luck no doubt =)
BKMack
BKMack 4th Aug 2008 05:09 - 15 years ago
If this is your first song I'd love to hear your next ten...And hopefully I will ... Talent for detail is evident ... I don't feel I am at a talent level where I can critique anyone about anything ...

But if this track were mine ... I wouldn't change what you have but, I would add a hit and/or a 4 bar roll here and there to stretch it the track out
RayKoefoed
RayKoefoed replied Unknown
Thanks very much for the review Bmack. I think that is good advice and I agree. I do need to work on changing up drums a little, adding rolls and such.
Zalg
Zalg 18th Jul 2008 22:44 - 15 years ago
Nice song, it has an evil sort of touch, good sound and loops. Out of 10, I'd give it an 8. Also--- did you make the majority of the loops? Because they sound awesome.
Either way, it's about a hundred times better than my first song (and only, so far).
RayKoefoed
RayKoefoed replied Unknown
Thanks Zalg. I appreciate such a high rating on your scale. I pretty much expected my first posted song to be a humbling learning experience for me, so I am so glad people actually even like it. Yes, other then the 2 guitar loops from here that I used, I composed the rest.
Matney
Matney 18th Jul 2008 14:53 - 15 years ago
Wow... This is awesome.

Great sense of structure, great mix, too. The ONLY thing I'd do differently would be to bring the bass up a bit in the mix, and play lower notes (if that's an option to you).

Keep up the good work. :)
RayKoefoed
RayKoefoed replied Unknown
Thank you for the review Matney.

I am glad you said that about the bass, and I totaly agree. As I have been trying to teach myself to make decent sounding music, I would create a short sample and record it to CD and see how it sounded on a couple different stereos. It always seemed the bass was just overwhelming so I knew I should lower it below what I thought it should sound like, but in the end I realize that I have over compensated. Thank you for saying so, because I know I am not the only one that hears that now.
rei4real
rei4real 17th Jul 2008 13:05 - 15 years ago
awesome, flawless, powerful ...
I love this track!!!
and I like the way you chopped my loop ... cool work ...
thx a lot for doing this!!
like slap said: great production ...
and like esh said: nothing to change ...
and I say: give us more of that ...

peace, rei
RayKoefoed
RayKoefoed replied Unknown
Thank you Rei, for the very kind review and even more for the terrific loops!
SLAPJOHNSON
SLAPJOHNSON 17th Jul 2008 08:28 - 15 years ago
Super arrangement. Great driving groove and smashing guitar.. Mix and production top draw... Cheers Slap...
RayKoefoed
RayKoefoed replied Unknown
Thank you very much Slap. You guys sure know how to make a fella feel comfortable posting songs. I am glad to have found this community.
Jake_richards
Jake_richards 16th Jul 2008 14:22 - 15 years ago
Dam, I am impressed some of the best shit i heard from anyone here. Great job.
RayKoefoed
RayKoefoed replied Unknown
Wow! That is a very flattering compliment. Thank you very much Jake!
RayMiX
RayMiX 16th Jul 2008 14:11 - 15 years ago
OHh its too hard its soo nice.. i like that.... u made a real great job here .,, rock on :P... cheers .. RayMiX
RayKoefoed
RayKoefoed replied Unknown
Thanks RayMix. I will do my best to Rock On. You Rock On as well, like you did with that zombie remix.

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